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Penname: katie8196 [Contact]
Real name: kate
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Member Since: February 28, 2009
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Summary:

 

The Volturi took over the government 15 years ago. It's time to take back what's rightfully theirs. It's time to stop the injustices of cruel old men. It's time for revenge - there will be blood.    

 

Charlie's red eyes rose to meet mine. "I want them dead; every last one of them. When I'm through, there should be no Volturi left on this godforsaken earth. I don't care what it takes, I just want them dead."


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 43169
[Report This] Published: March 01, 2009 Updated: March 23, 2011


Reviewer: katie8196 Signed
Date: March 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Edward

I love this story!

I am a huge fan of losing myself for a little mental vacation from my everyday life in Fanfiction.  I have to say, this one stands out from all of the rest! 

If ths story progresses the way it has been, it could easily stand on its own, outside of fanfic.

Thank you and keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it and think it could actually stand on its own. Thank you for reviewing, I mean it!

 
Reviewer: katie8196 Signed
Date: March 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Jasper

I want a Jasper



Author's Response:

I'm selfish; I want an Edward, Jasper, and an Emmett!

 
Reviewer: katie8196 Signed
Date: October 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Bella

I'll make you a deal, I will review EVERY chapter, and I am talking thoughful stuff not just your run of the mill "Yea Edward" crap, IF you update once every 3 weeks.....

How is that for compromise...I am not even asking weekly here....I have to keep re-reading to get back in the swing of things.  I feel like I know your story better then my ABC's now ; )

Here goes:

First, I like that Bella is weary of Edward.  I enjoy that she isn't some dumb blind lovesick goofball.  Is she clearly affected, sure but damn,m she has a right to be.

Second, I really hope Rose ended that boitch.  I am tired of her.  Victoria chaps me.  I like Alice, but then again, I feel like I always like her.  Edward is a head case but he IS Edward so I guess that fits! 

I love your writing, I love this story, PLEASE keep it up.  You have a great story line here and I would hate to see it go to waste.

THanks for the update, now go live your life, have fun, enjoy your new digs and get back to me in 3 weeks and I will review again....I PROMISE...

If for some reason you can;t make it back to me in 3 weeks, well, I'm pathetic, I'll still be reading, just not contratually obligated to review (but I will anyway cause I can't give you crap when I have never posted a story here myself!)  

Great Job!



Author's Response:

Haha, I'll do my best! Thank you so much for your review; I greatly enjoyed it. :D

 
Summary:

A bored Bella in biology writes in her "collection of random thoughts, poetry, short stories, etc." A bored Edward stumbles upon it and leaves an anonymous comment. The result? A curious correspondence between Mr. Popular and the Queen of Sarcasm...

 Hello there! How's your day been? Is the weather nice? Okay, I'll shut up now...oh, and is there anyone out there in need of a banner? I'd be happy to make one, so yah...let me know :)

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I looked down at my page and froze. Green pen. I never wrote in green pen. But there they were, foreign green words written neatly in the space underneath my messy scawls from yesterday; glaring up at me as if they were daring me to read them. Curiosity overtook my dysfunctional brain as I read the message...

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 30484
[Report This] Published: March 09, 2009 Updated: December 13, 2009


Reviewer: katie8196 Signed
Date: April 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Surprises

Ugh...what is it!

I can't wait for the next update!  I am still with you...eagerly anticipating the next update.

 
Summary:

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Fate and Death are intricately interwoven. The thread of all our lives are held delicately by these two shadowed figures. What happens when Isabella Swan and Edward Masen's threads take centre stage in Fate's gnarled hands? Will their thread weave a beautiful story or will they fall to her jaggered shears?  


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 11394
[Report This] Published: May 30, 2009 Updated: April 07, 2010


Reviewer: katie8196 Signed
Date: July 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Introducing Death

So cool!  I love it!

Keep it up!

 
Reviewer: katie8196 Signed
Date: July 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: A Stitch In Time...

I love the affect death has on all humans. 

So creative!

 
Reviewer: katie8196 Signed
Date: July 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3:Knit Once,Loop Twice

I love that Alice introduced them!  I don't want to wait for the next update!

If I whine a lot can I get it now!!

Great job and thanks!

 
Summary:

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With medical bills, school bills, not to mention rent, piling up, Bella looks for a way to dig herself out of debt.  Rose tells her about a new business she’s gotten into.  Bella tries her hand at the business, and ends up paired with Dr. Edward Cullen.  But can she separate business and pleasure?

 

Here's a link to the thread.  We'd love to hear your thoughts! http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=5822


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 43549
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2009 Updated: March 21, 2010


Reviewer: katie8196 Signed
Date: February 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Blackmail is such a dirty word...

OK, I am so hooked on this! 

Great story idea!  I love it and am on pins and needles waiting on the next chapter! 

Great job! 

 





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