Reviewer: katie8196 Signed
October 05, 2009
Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Bella
I'll make you a deal, I will review EVERY chapter, and I am talking thoughful stuff not just your run of the mill "Yea Edward" crap, IF you update once every 3 weeks.....
How is that for compromise...I am not even asking weekly here....I have to keep re-reading to get back in the swing of things. I feel like I know your story better then my ABC's now ; )
First, I like that Bella is weary of Edward. I enjoy that she isn't some dumb blind lovesick goofball. Is she clearly affected, sure but damn,m she has a right to be.
Second, I really hope Rose ended that boitch. I am tired of her. Victoria chaps me. I like Alice, but then again, I feel like I always like her. Edward is a head case but he IS Edward so I guess that fits!
I love your writing, I love this story, PLEASE keep it up. You have a great story line here and I would hate to see it go to waste.
THanks for the update, now go live your life, have fun, enjoy your new digs and get back to me in 3 weeks and I will review again....I PROMISE...
If for some reason you can;t make it back to me in 3 weeks, well, I'm pathetic, I'll still be reading, just not contratually obligated to review (but I will anyway cause I can't give you crap when I have never posted a story here myself!)
Great Job!Author's Response:
Haha, I'll do my best! Thank you so much for your review; I greatly enjoyed it. :D