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All of Me by flibbins Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3595]
Summary:

Bella lives to serve her Master. It can be tedious at times, titillating at others, but always, her world revolves around his. Come take a peek at the trials and triumphs in the life of a 24/7 consensual slave and find what happens when outside forces threaten to expose her lifestyle.

 

All of Me

 

Please note that this story contains graphic language, graphic sexual situations and is only intended for a mature audience. The BDSM relationship described herein is entirely consensual, but may be offensive to some readers. Read with caution. OOC, AU/AH


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: All of Me: The Series
Chapters: 25 Completed: No Word count: 109463
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2009 Updated: June 29, 2010


Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

great chapter! update soon!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: December 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

great chapter! i cant wait for the next one!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: December 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

great c hapter! update soon!!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: December 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

great chapter! update soon!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

great chpateR! update soon!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great chapter! update soon!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: January 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

great chapter!!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: February 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

great chapter!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: February 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

update soon!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: April 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

great chapter! update soon!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: April 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

great chapter! update soon!!!!!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: June 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

great chapter! update soon!

 
The Family by Almis Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 194]
Summary:

They have everything they ever dreamed of: a great house, vast amounts of money, everything said money can buy, a family that they adore and adores them, people who would do absolutely anything for them - whether they want to or not - and the shared desire to be the most feared and powerful family in their town and the towns surrounding it.

 

Their name is Cullen, crime is their business and family is their life.

 

There’s just one problem: when you’re at the top, there’s always someone who’d like to knock you down.

 

Welcome to their world; make yourself at home.

 

The Family Banner

 

We all must applauded JayJayHale for making the fabulous banner.

 

Rated for the over use of the ‘F’ word and many other words that can be referred to by initial. Also there happens to be quite a lot of violence and references to things little children should not know about. Oh yeah, let’s not forget the vast amount of law-breaking.

 

*The Family is temporarily on hold, I do hope to continue with it at some point, but I have no free time to do so at the moment. I'm very sorry about this.*


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 43008
[Report This] Published: September 02, 2009 Updated: June 08, 2010


Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: September 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Blood and Ice-Cream

aww that was such a cute chapter!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: September 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - An Errand

great chapter again! update soon please!



Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you are enjoying it so far.

Alice.x

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: October 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Dinner Guests

bella cracks me up
! great chaper!



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Alice.x

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: October 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - A Debt Repaid

great chapter! update soon!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Screams and Silence

great chapter!!! i really hope the baby is okay! update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'll post chapter six as soon as I can.

Alice.x

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - A Newborn Cullen

great chapter! update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you.

I've started on the next chapter, it's taking shape pretty quickly so you shouldn't have to wait too long.

Alice.x

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: November 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - The In-Laws

great chapter! udpate soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Alice.x

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Family Forger

great chapter! udpate soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Alice.x

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: December 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Crawley Debt

ouchhh. great chapter!! cant wait for the next update!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: January 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Family Friends

great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you.

There is a slight problem though, my computer is broken with all my files on it. It is getting fixed, but it won't be returned to me until the twenty-nineth at the least, so there will be a delay with getting the next chapter up. I'm sorry about this, I will write and post the next one as soon as I can.

Alice.x

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: February 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - A Mother's Wrath

great chapter! update soon!

 
Summary:

Could she bear to live out eternity knowing the one person she had trusted above all else had never actually cared for her? No, she didn’t think so… Fifty years later, Edward, Rosalie, and Emmett are captured by the Volturi. Guess who’s there to greet them?


AN:


Ok, so I know I haven’t updated in forever, (my sincerest apologies), but I’ve had the worst case of writer’s block and I have just been going through kind of a rough time in my life, and am just now starting to get over it. I know that’s not an original excuse, but it’s the truth. To top it off, I wasn’t sure of the direction this story was headed in, but now I think I have a pretty good idea. I just need to take some time to write it. So I promise that I’m not giving up, but it’s going to take a bit of time before anything new is posted. I haven’t even completely finished the first chapter. I’m sorry! But here’s a teaser from the prologue of the new version to hopefully make it up to you! (Or at least tide you over.)


~*~

“They have finally sent in their spies.”


Gasps and hisses sounded from the small grouping behind him, tensed and preparing to attack.


“Patience, my friends. We have a plan, remember?”


“Who is it, master?” a female guard asked, an almost resigned tone contradicting her questioning phrase.


He hesitated for only a moment, trying and failing to find a way to avoid this question. There was simply no other way. She was a key part of the plan. Finally, with a sigh, he answered, “Edward, Emmett, and Rosalie Cullen.”


Something twisted in her gut, but she had been anticipating this. Of course it was bound to happen. That was just the way things worked out for her, and she had long ago accepted that. So there was no outward reaction to his words; only a simple nod.


“Edward, as in the mind reader?” the first guard wondered. Aro’s confirmation caused another hiss to rise up from amongst the guard.


“We must proceed with great caution.” He turned to face his followers. They had anticipated the rebellion’s every possible move and had prepared intensely for them all. He turned to face the female guard who had spoken. “You know what to do.”





 


~*~


It’s not the final draft, but I felt you all deserved a sneak peek! I'll be posting the new version as a new story, and once it's up I'll probably delete this one. I want to have a big chunk of the new version written before I post it, so it'll be a while. Sorry! But good things do take time. And a big thank you to anyone who hasn’t given up on me! You’re patience will be rewarded, I promise!


~Jazz~


 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 20107
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2009 Updated: January 02, 2010


Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: November 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: The Only Question Now Is How Long

great chapter! where did bella go?!? update soon!!



Author's Response:

You'll have to stay tuned to find out. Thanks for the review!

~Jazz~

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: January 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: By The End of The Night Imma Have You Drunk and Throwin Up

great chapter! update soon!



Author's Response:

I'll try! Thanks for reviewing!

~Jazz~

 




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