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Vegas, Baby! by jslack0816 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3188]
Summary:

Bella takes a trip to Vegas with her roommates Alice and Rosalie. After one wild night, Bella's life is turned upside down. A marriage certificate, a pregnancy, and a best friend in ICU send Bella and her friends into a whirlwind of emotions. Canon pairings and future LEMONS!

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Much thanks to readergoof and annamorphos (respectively) for the awesome banners!  Also, to Project Team Beta for taking this story on!  You all are the best!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 32 Completed: No Word count: 206944
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2009 Updated: December 01, 2011


Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: August 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Busted

great chapter! update soon!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: November 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Welcome to New York

great chapter! update soon!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: February 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Grand Gestures

great chapter!

 
Absolution by Nessarie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 53]
Summary:

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Absolution [noun] - The setting free from guilt, sin, or penalty.

 

Bella has lost the will to live without Edward, and she makes a drastic decision that becomes the catalyst behind a series of thrilling and terrifying events that will cause both hers and Edward's world as they know it to be turned on end.

In the midst of all of this, can they find it within themselves to absolve their mistakes and maybe become more than they ever thought they could be?


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Laurent, Leah, Paul, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 49763
[Report This] Published: June 13, 2009 Updated: April 25, 2010


Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Part I: Bella's PoV

great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

~Ness

 
Just Breathe by KLJ1843 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 196]
Summary:

Bella is a teen just trying to live her life. Only one problem, her mother's abusive husband cant seem to leave her alone. Will new kids that arrive in Forks be able to help her deal with her troubling past?

Deals with underage drinking, drug use, thoughts of suicide, and abuse. If you don't like the angst, don't read it.

WARNING: THIS STORY CONTAINS ADULT THEMES RELATED TO VIOLENCE AGAINST WOMEN.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, James
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 58664
[Report This] Published: June 13, 2009 Updated: March 17, 2010


Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

poor bella! great chapter!

 
Summary:

 

Edward and Jasper are best friends and the sexiest guys at Forks High. They get what and who they want whenever they want it. When clumsy Bella arrives at Forks High and brings something new to the table, Edward and Jasper find they must work together to get what they desire. Some OOC, especially for some characters, but not so much for others. Rated NC-17 for very mature themes and can we say lemons?! later. Takes place during the same time as Twilight.

Collaboration between VoluptuousVamp and Puppymama0909.

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Thanks to readergoof for the amazing banner.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 26571
[Report This] Published: June 15, 2009 Updated: September 08, 2009


Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: July 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 0: And So It Starts (Q)

this was a really good first chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  We really appriciate the review and hope you will continue reading!

 

Pole dances,

   Pups

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: July 15, 2009 Title: Sometime Around Midnight

great chapter!! i cant wait for te next update!! update soon please!



Author's Response:

thanks!   Ther will be an update sometime in the next few days....but until then?  V will be sending out previews and I am working on a little something special for y'all. 

 

Pole dances,

   Pups

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: August 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: You Know That She's Watching

great chapter! update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks we will.   :-)

 

pole dances and panty flashes,

   Pups

 
Pieces of Me by Merrisol Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 115]
Summary:

 

 

Leaving family secrets behind, Bella moves to New York City and, with moral support from Alice, blossoms into an independent, powerful business woman. Enter Edward, the prodigal boss's son, who expects to take his rightful place in the family business. A competition ensues between Edward and Bella; meanwhile the office girls band together to dish out some revenge of their own on the womanizing Edward. Secrets and lemony goodness in the future.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 22139
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2009 Updated: September 28, 2009


Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: August 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: A Fresh Start

great chapter!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: August 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Settled

wow im really surprised at bella! hah great chapter!

 
Summary:

This is the companion piece to my first fan fic story Serendipity.  It's Edward's side of the story as he comes face to face with Bella after his family moved from Forks twelve years ago, leaving Bella alone to deal with the death of her parents.  They're all grown up, and Eddie-boy finds himself in quite the predicament in the beginning.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Phil, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 67881
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2009 Updated: August 15, 2009


Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: June 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Party

awh edward is so cute!!!



Author's Response:

I know, right?!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: June 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Last Day

i love edward! hes so cute! update soon please! i cant wait for the next chapter!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: June 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Tiffany's & Tanya

awh i love edward he is so cute! great chapter!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: June 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Surprise/Good-bye

edward is so funny! update soon!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: July 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Realization

aww!! poor edward! hes crying!! i feel so bad for him!! update soon please!

 
Summary:

 

THIS STORY HAS BEEN PUT ON HIATUS. At least until september-october 2010. I am getting married in august and it's hard to plan a wedding and write at the same time. I applaud those who can do that. I am NOT giving up on this story and I WILL finish it. Eventually. Thanks for understanding.

After Edward left in New Moon, Bella changed. She changed everything about herself in hopes of forgetting him. She graduated and moved down to California. The one place she knew she would never see the Cullens. 4 years later, she is now known as Elle Swan, a successful interior designer. What happens when she is sent somewhere else for her job?

 

Thank you to heatherdawnc for the banner!

Favorite review so far:

Ahh... so good!! A perfect mix with fluff and reality, you're soo good at writing that I gets envious *envious sigh*.

Have I told you how good this story and idea really is. There are many different stories where Bella changes her personality drastically after Edward left. And of all those stories I have been reading I think you are the one that has captured Bella's personalty best. Many of the stories have changed Bella that much that if she wasn't namned Bella you shouldn't know it was her, but you, even if you see the big changes, you can find the Bella how she was shy, sweet and madly in love with Edward four years ago. With another words - I think you are the one that have captured Bellas character best.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 69614
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009


Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: July 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great chapter!! i cant wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: July 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

i wonder if they know that its bella! or if theyre just pretending. maybe alice had a vision or something? im surprised that bella didnt break down or anything! great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks hun! You're on the right track, but I'm not gonna give anything away, you just have to wait and see!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: July 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

great chapter! im glad that edward knows who elle is! and rosalie actually smiled at her! i wonder why she doesnt hate her anymore! update soon!



Author's Response:

Hehe thanks! Your question will be answered in upcoming chapters! Thanks for your review!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: July 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

thanks for updating again and not waiting until thursday!



Author's Response:

Hahaha, you're very welcome. I'm assuming you enjoyed the chapter? Thanks for the review!

 
Continuance by punchanella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 818]
Summary:

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Edward Cullen is a hot shot associate in the D.A.'s office.  Bella Swan is at the top of her game as a defense attorney for the most prestigious law firm in Seattle.  In the courtroom they are arch rivals but outside the halls of justice they are wildly attracted to each other.  Will they give into their desires or will arrogance and stubborness keep them apart?

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banners inspired by msrebarose- thanks so much!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Mike
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 91100
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2009 Updated: October 05, 2009


Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: July 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Shaken not Stirred

great chapter!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: July 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Come. . .on over

great chapter!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: July 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3- The Morning After pt. 1 RE-POSTED

yay!!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: July 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4- The Morning After pt. 2

i feel so bad for edward!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: July 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6- Legal Eagles

great chapter!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: July 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7- Reasonable Intentions

there is going to be so much drama when they have to go to court!

 




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