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Forgettable by Belindella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1628]
Summary:


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 166930
[Report This] Published: March 03, 2010 Updated: March 24, 2011


Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Forgettable

great chapter!!! update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks, sweet! I'm getting it to you ASAP. :)

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: April 04, 2010 Title: Forgettable

i wonder what happened with mike! great chapter!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: April 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: You're Gonna Kiss Me

great chapter!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: May 11, 2010 Title: Forgettable

great chapter! update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you, sweet! More on it's way soon. :-) Belinda. xx

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: April 04, 2010 Title: Forgettable

great chapter!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: April 04, 2010 Title: Forgettable

great chapter!! i cant wait for the next update!!!!



Author's Response:

You're such a sweetheart for reviewing each chapter! Thank you so much, and I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Belinda. xx

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: April 08, 2010 Title: Forgettable

great chapter!! update soon!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, sweet! Shouldn't be long. :) Belinda. xx

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: April 18, 2010 Title: Forgettable

great chapter! update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks, sweet! Next one will be up after the 21st. :D Belinda. xx

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: May 09, 2010 Title: Forgettable

update soon!



Author's Response:

I'll be submitting it in a day or two so that it's up ASAP. :)

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: May 14, 2010 Title: Forgettable

i wonder what the condition is! update soon!



Author's Response:

I won't leave you hanging long, I promise! Thanks for reviewing! Belinda. xx

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: May 18, 2010 Title: Forgettable

great chapter! update soooon!



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks sweetie! I'm submitting as soon as I'm done with the review replies. :D Belinda. xx

“I said, No, not at all,” he told me, yelling loudly as if I was deaf, but I’d forgotten the question he was answering. Then, he leaned in closer, lowering his voice. “I’ve got the best seat in the house.”

 

“Oh.” I smiled at him, biting my lip. It sounded as if Edward was flirting with me!

 

I looked around excitedly and noticed Alice observing us. Damn, I hated the feeling that everything I did with him was being scrutinized now, so I glared at her a bit to give her the hint.

 

She grimaced and mouthed, “Sorry” before standing and talking to Rosalie.

 

“Okay!” Rose shouted. “We’re going dancing. You coming, guys?” She looked between Edward and me.

 

“Ummmm, no thanks,” I said, as Edward shook his head no.

 

She rolled her eyes as Alice stepped toward me and leaned forward, her mouth near my ear. In a low voice she said, “I forgot to tell you that I think Edward feels the same way about you.”

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: May 27, 2010 Title: Forgettable

great chapter! update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks again, sweet! Enjoy your teaser. :-) Belinda.

The backs of my fingers smoothed over the soft, slight plump of her cheek and she closed her eyes, leaning toward them. "Bella," I murmured. "You deserve so much more than… You're pretty drunk. You don't want to do anything for the first time like that."

 

She looked at me and frowned, begging me with her eyes – I could see her easily in the dim light now that my vision had adjusted. "It's not my first time," she confessed, her breathing becoming heavier.

 

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: June 03, 2010 Title: Forgettable

great chapter!! i cant wait for the next update!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, for reviewing again! So glad you liked it! Belinda. xx

I remember last night now. – B

 

I held my breath, my teeth now clamping on my lip painfully as I hit send.

 

Do you? – E

 

Yes. – B

 

What do you remember? – E

 

Ugh! Did he want me to actually say it? That seemed too… ugh!

 

Us… couch… fingers… *blush* – B 

 

I was definitely blushing! My whole face was burning hot.

 

Are you okay? – E

 

Very – B

 

Oh, thank god! I really want to talk to you alone. – E

 

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: June 22, 2010 Title: Forgettable

great chapter!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it! :-)

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: June 30, 2010 Title: Forgettable

great chapter!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: July 09, 2010 Title: Forgettable

great chapter! update soon!

 
Major Misconduct by m7707 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2058]
Summary:

Edward - hot high school hockey player. Bella - shy high school student. They've admired each other from afar, so what happens when they finally meet? Are they strong enough to handle a threat from his past? No good deed goes unpunished...

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 153840
[Report This] Published: March 03, 2010 Updated: July 17, 2010


Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: May 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Slow Whistle

great chapter! update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you - next chapter up on Tuesday!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Save

great chapter!! update soon!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Next chapter up on Saturday.

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: May 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Screen

bella is so funny! good for her! update soon!!!!



Author's Response:

So glad you liked - thank you!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: May 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Score

great chapter! update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you - next update on Tuesday!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: May 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Long Bomb

great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: May 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: The Point

great chapter! update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Next chapter up this weekend.

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: May 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Stick Handling

great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed!

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: April 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11:Power Play

great chapter! update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Next chapter up on Tuesday.

 
Reviewer: xtwilight3 Signed
Date: May 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Dropping The Gloves

great chapter! udpate soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Next one up on Saturday.

 




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