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Unglued by Powered by 23 Kicks Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

Unglued

"Help me, Bella," he gasped. She had to be hurting. "Help me to be gentle with you."

~the honeymoon scene, Edward's pov 

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3431
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2009 Updated: January 12, 2009


Reviewer: Lunar Butterflies Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Unglued

That was pretty good. I liked it. Keep up the good work.

 
Summary:

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There is real life, then there's Real Life.

 

We all know that Rob and Kristen belong together. So what happens when that finally happens, just years down the road? Enter Ever After . . .

 

A series of one-shots, that are tied together by the moments that make up a couple's life together. Add a few 'sex-haired' babies and some Twilight friends for fun.

 

Rated NC-17 because you just never know when the lemon muse will show up.

 

A new series from  jakeward and the shrew.

 

*stories will not be necessarily be in chronological order. Cause that's how we roll. :)

 

 


Categories: Other Characters: Kellan Lutz, Kristen Stewart, Other Character, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: Ever After . . ., The Robsten Files
Chapters: 27 Completed: No Word count: 118030
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2009 Updated: March 21, 2013


Reviewer: Lunar Butterflies Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Covert Ops

I found that hilarious and cute. Continue with the good work.

 
Summary:

The first of several 'alternate takes' on chapters from the stories of The White Rabbit series, this one-shot is a stand-alone that can be read without knowing any other story in the series, simply keeping this in mind:  taking place during New Moon, Alice and Jasper are off in Mississippi to try and learn more about her mortal life.  This is what chapter 15 of Down The Rabbit Hole could have been, if I'd been working with an NC-17 and indulged my desire to write a lemon.


In other words, this is a one-shot of pure smut.  Alice and Jasper demonstrate why they love having a shower to themselves.


So sit back, get cozy, and prepare to envy Alice as much as I do.  A litle helping of smut does a reader good!


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Eternal Hope Contributor


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: The White Rabbit series, Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4689
[Report This] Published: June 14, 2009 Updated: July 07, 2009


Reviewer: Lunar Butterflies Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

I thought that was kind of cute when she talked about the shoe collection. I like this. Good work; keep it up. 

 
For Now and Forever by ChissyMay Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

 

an intimate night between Alice and Jasper seen through Jasper’s eyes.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 2941
[Report This] Published: July 25, 2009 Updated: August 17, 2009


Reviewer: Lunar Butterflies Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really liked this. I thought it was nice.

 
Summary:

A few weeks before Bella and Edward's wedding, something terrible happens in the state of Washington.  Can the Cullens protect Bella and her father from the living dead?

Rated NC-17 for Graphic violence and language.

Carlisle, zombies


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Other Character, Rosalie, Seth, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 54019
[Report This] Published: July 26, 2009 Updated: June 11, 2011


Reviewer: Lunar Butterflies Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

This is really interesting. I like it!

 
Reviewer: Lunar Butterflies Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I like this a lot. I can't believe that happened. I honestly hope that Bella is able to change into a vampire, especially given everything that's happened. I hope you can update quickly. I would really like to see what happens.

 
Reviewer: Lunar Butterflies Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Nicee update. Very interesting.

 
Reviewer: Lunar Butterflies Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oh wow. I'm glad that she was able to change, but I didn't see that coming. I wonder if that (Zombie blood) will have any affect on her.

 
Summary:

Two strangers, two computers.... one night.

Lonely ER doc Edward Cullen goes online one night to relieve some tension, never expecting to find what was awaiting him. AH/possibly some OOC. Rated NC-17 for a reason.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 132766
[Report This] Published: August 24, 2009 Updated: May 08, 2011


Reviewer: Lunar Butterflies Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Unknown

This looks like it could really interesting. I want to check it out some more.

 
Reviewer: Lunar Butterflies Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Need

This is incredible. I love it. I must admit; it's pretty hot. I find myself shocked to even say that. Haha. Definately keep up the good work.

 
Summary:

Ashley has some reservations about her wedding night with Jackson. Can he make her feel better about her lack of experience?

"It was unbelievably sexy. Maybe there was something to this vampire thing after all."


Categories: Other Characters: Ashley Greene, Jackson Rathbone
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3444
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2009 Updated: December 14, 2009


Reviewer: Lunar Butterflies Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was really nice and sweet. I liked it a lot.



Author's Response:

Great! Thanks for reading!

 
Summary:

Twenty-five year old obsessive compulsive Bella Swan agrees, rather reluctantly, to seek therapy for her habits as well as her sporadic bouts of depression after her father welcomes her into his home in Forks when her problems become too much for her mother to handle. But will her sudden attraction to a greasy, dirty, car mechanic intensify her already obvious phobias or will he be able to break down the barriers she has formed around herself?

 

Black Coffee and Eggs Over Easy


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 72862
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2009 Updated: December 14, 2010


Reviewer: Lunar Butterflies Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Even Trainwreck

This is really good. I think you depict her condition well. I think this could be really interesting. Keep up the good work.

 
With Feathers by Subtlynice Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive

So many years, so many miles they’d travelled together, and yet, that smile was still the same. Those golden eyes had never changed. His girl had never ceased to surprise him in the most delightful ways.

 

Hope is the thing with feathers, that perches on the soul.  Five times Jasper Whitlock felt hope.  Five canon missing moments, exploring Jasper's character.  Jasper/Alice.  Written for flute_genevive.


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Edward, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5167
[Report This] Published: January 11, 2010 Updated: January 20, 2010


Reviewer: Lunar Butterflies Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: With Feathers

I liked this. It was really nice. 



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

 
Summary:

When Laundry isn't a Chore by Jenny Cullen


Jasper spies on a virtual stranger one day in the laundry room of their apartment building.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1989
[Report This] Published: April 17, 2010 Updated: April 17, 2010


Reviewer: Lunar Butterflies Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow. That was.....different. I liked it though. I kind of had a feeling the machine was going to be empty at the very end. Nice work. 



Author's Response:

Hehehe  Thank you.  :)

 
Reign of Love by jakeward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

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     How I wish I'd spoken up

    Or we'd be carried

       In the reign of love. ~ Coldplay

 

A small R/K oneshot.


Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: The Robsten Files
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4353
[Report This] Published: May 22, 2010 Updated: May 22, 2010


Reviewer: Lunar Butterflies Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Reign of Love

That was sweet.

 
Smutiversity by Smutsisters Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 101]
Summary:

What's a girl to do when she writes fanfic where the smut isn't so much sizzling hot, as embarassingly warm? She goes to Smutiversity. SwedenSara enrolls on a course “Sex in fiction: how to write, and what to avoid” and gets much more education than she bargained for, two new friends, and a red-hot teacher who bears a striking resemblance to a young, British actor, known for his portrayal of a brooding vampire...

Enjoy Smutiversity!

In the beginning we were three, and now our big sis has retired - she's doing God-stuff - but we still love her!

This is a collaboration between SwedenSara and Netracullen. We are the Smut Sisters!

Check out the Twilighted thread FangMom created for our little smut baby: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=46&t=11347


Categories: Crackfic Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 50164
[Report This] Published: June 14, 2010 Updated: April 01, 2011


Reviewer: Lunar Butterflies Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Working out the kink

That ending made me laugh. Hahaha. Good work. I'm really enjoying this. Again, I may even learn something.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoy! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

/Sara xox

 
Reviewer: Lunar Butterflies Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Read it. Out loud.

This actually seems really good. I can't wait to read more. I may even learn something about writing myself.

 
Reviewer: Lunar Butterflies Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: The Rise of Emmeline

Another really good update. I like the way this is going. It's really good. 

 
Summary:

Jasper loves Alice, without question.  But he cannot understand why Alice loves Bella. 


Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1155
[Report This] Published: June 28, 2010 Updated: July 23, 2010


Reviewer: Lunar Butterflies Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Why

This was good. I liked it a lot. I think you got their personalities down really well. 

 
Just Us by the shrew Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 44]
Summary:

 

 

 

A late night in Budapest.  Robsten moment.  Kristen POV.

You gotta love Budapest. It's the gift that keeps on giving. ;-)

Disclaimer: THIS IS FICTION.

I just want to pretend they are this happy. :)

 


Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: The Robsten Files
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1507
[Report This] Published: August 22, 2010 Updated: August 22, 2010


Reviewer: Lunar Butterflies Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Just Us - one shot

That was sweet.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  It felt sweet when writing it.  Thanks for reading and for leaving a comment. :)

 
Smut Monday by TheSmutPeddler Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 223]
Summary:

A little bit of smut to start the week off right. 

If you would like to participate, please sign up here: http://bit.ly/wwqZes


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn, Post-Breaking Dawn, AU, AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 88833
[Report This] Published: August 23, 2010 Updated: April 11, 2011


Reviewer: Lunar Butterflies Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Applied Chemistry by Demosthenes

That was interesting. I thought it was kind of funny too. 

 
Summary:

Edward can't stand that Bella has to sacrifice so much to marry him and become a vampire.

He is determined to find a way to give her everything she never knew she always wanted.

 

Who Says You Can't Have It All


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 75958
[Report This] Published: September 19, 2010 Updated: March 30, 2012


Reviewer: Lunar Butterflies Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

This is really interesting.

 
Imprinted by ginamr Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 37]
Summary:

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Nessie is fast approaching the seven year mark and despite his best attempts, Jacob is becoming more and more drawn to her. With Nessie’s stubborn nature, inherited from her mother, this can only end one way...or can it?


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Nessie, Paul, Quil, Renesmee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 10741
[Report This] Published: October 06, 2010 Updated: February 02, 2011


Reviewer: Lunar Butterflies Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: A Different Perspective (Nessie)

I think this is really good. I really like it. Keep up the good work.

 
The Witching Hour by wytchwmn75 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Wiccan cousins Bella, Alice, and Rose have sensed a dark force moving into Forks. Will they defeat it before it's too late? And how will the mysterious Cullen brothers help them?

Banner by annamorphos

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Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 20966
[Report This] Published: October 14, 2010 Updated: April 10, 2011


Reviewer: Lunar Butterflies Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 RxEm POV

This was interesting. I liked it. It was a good twist on the original story.

 
While You Were Sleeping by mmsa Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 80]
Summary:

Bella pretends to be the fiancee of a man in a coma in order to keep seeing him in the hospital. What happens when he comes out of it? What will she do when his brother suspects she's lying? AH, E/B

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 44836
[Report This] Published: October 31, 2010 Updated: October 01, 2011


Reviewer: Lunar Butterflies Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Misunderstandings

This seems like it could be really good, I just would suggest not making it complete carbon copy of what you based this story off of. Good luck.

 




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