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Summary:  Scarred by events in her past, Bella relies heavily on her best friend and roommate, Jasper. When Jasper falls in love with a girl named Alice, Bella is excited for him but can’t help but wonder – where will she fit in? Her answer partially arrives in the form of Alice's older brother, Edward, but as their friendship grows, Bella comes to realize that she may be too broken to give Edward everything he needs. Canon pairings, AH/AU
This contains explicit content, elements which may be offensive to some, and dark themes. It is intended for a mature audience.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No
Word count: 256064
[Report This] Published: February 21, 2009 Updated: March 09, 2010
Reviewer: punchanella Signed
Date: June 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Alice
I've been following your story since the beginning and have it saved as a favorite but this is my first time reviewing (sorry, I'm a bad person). Just wanted to show you some love and let you know I am totally enjoying this story and the way things are unfolding. Bella has to be the first one to make a move with the kiss and she needs to do it SOON!!! I'm dying over here waiting on updates and kisses!!!
Also, keep the internal monologues coming they are freaking hilarious!! :-) Loved how Edward regressed to a twelve year old girl. . .tee hee.
You Rock!
Reviewer: punchanella Signed
Date: June 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Some Lovely Glorious Nothing
Almost went blind reading this on my iPhone but it was so worth it! Yay! They kiss- finally! And in the rain no less, how classic! I can't wait to see what's next for these two!
Love, love, love Rose's response to Jane: "I don't think so, bitch. That one's mine." ha ha!
Even though the basis of Bella's backstory is very dark/serious you've found a way to weave the heavy stuff with humor, a little fluff, and romance. The gaming stuff is way over my head but I even like that aspect.
Great writing. Keep it coming! I anxiously await the next chapter!
Summary: 
Bella takes a vacation to Hilton Head Island in South Carolina to meet Alice's new boyfriend, Jasper. Rosalie and Emmett come along, too, just in case Bella didn't feel like enough of a fifth wheel. With Jasper's roommate out of town, Bella has his nice big bed all to herself. Until Edward comes home in the middle of the night...
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes
Word count: 163211
[Report This] Published: March 01, 2009 Updated: December 21, 2011
Reviewer: punchanella Signed
Date: April 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
Okay, I'm confused. . .is this a new chapter? This seems awfully familiar. . are we on chapter 29 or 30? It was great to re-read but I was really excited for a new chapter! Author's Response: Author's Response:
I'm so sorry-- I finished a new outtake for Something Stupid and accidentally added it as a chapter to Never Sleep. Then it accidentally got validated that way and that's why you got the notification. I deleted it from NS and posted it to SS, but I couldn't do anything about the notifications.
I'm working hard on the next chapter of Never Sleep but it will probably be Thursday before I can post it. Sorry!!!
Paige
Summary: Living on the streets is hard for Bella Swan but not as hard as putting up with Edward Cullen when he drags her into his world of sex, drugs and rock’n’roll. She needs a lucky break and he needs an image make-over. Will they be able to help each other out before they kill each other?
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes
Word count: 343376
[Report This] Published: May 14, 2009 Updated: August 20, 2010
Reviewer: punchanella Signed
Date: May 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: SNL & The Spanish Inquisition
(forgive me if this posts twice, thought I hit the submit button but something must have gone wrong) Okay, I have been OBSESSED with Twilighted.net since January and I log on DAILY for updates and new stories. However this is the first time I've ever posted a review. I almost passed on this story because of the title and I'm glad I gave it a chance because it is FREAKING AWESOME!! You are very clever and the story is well written not to mention HILARIOUS. I'm adding it to my faves. Thanks so much for the frequent posts. You Rock!!
Reviewer: punchanella Signed
Date: July 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Unspoken Truths
NO, NO, NO. . . I wanted fluffy bunnies and rainbows throughout the rest of the story. . .I am TERRIFIED to read what's coming next! Haven't they both been through enough! How about whoever is lurking in the lobby goes up to the room and gets their ass kicked and thrown over the balcony?
Man, this was EXTREMELY hard to read. . .if it wasn't for Alice's comic relief at the end I seriously wouldn't have recovered. I might have to skip out on the next chapter. . . . .aw, who am I kidding I wanna know what's gonna happen to bad to not take a peek.
I hope the angst-squared doesn't last long and that no one is violated against their will. . .
Summary: Edward is a 27-year-old alcoholic/addict struggling with his recovery. Bella is a 23-year-old who's moved back home after college. This fic chronicles how they meet, fall in love, and struggle with the complexities of their relationship. Not nearly as maudlin as it sounds (I hope).
Rated NC-17 for graphic (and sometimes non-romantic) sex, drug and alcohol use and abuse, profane language, and brief (very brief) suicidal ideation (although NO suicide attempts). No sexual assault, no cutting.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes
Word count: 183053
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2009 Updated: August 22, 2010
Reviewer: punchanella Signed
Date: December 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Brilliant story! I love your writing style. I look forward to this journey and just HOPE Edward doesn't have some sort of relapse. :-( He was in pretty bad shape before and I just hope being with Bella is incentive enough to keep his shit together!
Anxiously awaiting the next chapter. . .
BTW- You should thank Feathers_mmm for recc'ing your fic at the end of her story, Edward Wallbanger. She's such an awesome writer I figured she wouldn't steer me wrong with this story and she didn't! Keep up the good work!
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