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Penname: Swisha [ Contact]
Real name: Trisha
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Member Since: November 09, 2010
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It has been more than five years since Renesmee was born. She's 16 and craving independence from her overprotective family. She moves to Alaska to attend school with Jake, after painstakinlgy convincing her parents (mainly Edward) that it's a good idea. Things begin to develop between Jake and Nessie romantically, and she couldn't be more thrilled.
But what happens when a sudden and unexpected visitor casts a dark shadow over things? The death of a loved one brings the ugly truth of the lethal and Wicked Game to light and no one is safe anymore... especially Renesmee.
How hard will Jake and Nessie have to fight to be together?
Mainly Jake & Renesmee's POV's, but has some Edward and Bella chapters as well.
NOTE: This story is rated NC-17 for a reason. Violence, sexual content, and dark themes.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Jacob, Leah, Nessie, Renesmee, Seth
Challenges: Series: Imprint Me: The Jacob and Nessie Archives
Chapters: 59 Completed: Yes
Word count: 393510
[Report This] Published: June 21, 2010 Updated: May 17, 2011
Reviewer: Swisha Signed    
Date: January 26, 2011
Title: Chapter 49: Better Days
awe the picnic was so sweet of Nessie.
I totally understand Pauls reasoning, but I agree with Jake when he said Paul should have learned with Nessie... so he can just shut his pie hole.
looking foward to the "Bike ride" Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the picnic. I try hard to work moments into this fic where people can see why Nessie is the perfect match for Jake, and not just that he is perfect for her. I find that a lot of fan fictions don't focus on that when it comes to imprinting, but the way I understood it, the pair of people are supposed to be perfect for each other... so this is my way of trying to show why he needs her as much as she needs him.
LOL @ Paul 'shutting his pie hole'! I'll deliver the mesage! But if you don't hear from me for a while, it's probably because he lost his temper with me after I tell him that ;-)
Thank you!
~HItchy
Reviewer: Swisha Signed    
Date: January 17, 2011
Title: Chapter 48: Invincible
as always can't wait for next chapter...
:)
Author's Response: Thank you!
~H
Reviewer: Swisha Signed    
Date: January 17, 2011
Title: Chapter 47: Love Under Will
Hot and steamy.. :) Author's Response: Why thank you! The though of combining smut with bikes just does things to me... lol! Glad to hear it worked for you too!
~Hitchy
Reviewer: Swisha Signed    
Date: November 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 40: One Hundred Forty Seven Hours
wow just wow.
what a great emotional chapter..
poor jake is on auto pilot trying to find her.
I loved how Leah kicked Jakes butt in to gear.. go Leah!
Stay strong Nessie
Author's Response: Autopilot is a great way to describe how Jake is functioning right now! I'm surprised I didn't think of the term myself.
I love Leah. She was the best person to put Jake in his place. Jake needed his butt kicked - hard.
Nessie will fight the PoD with everything she's got. She's a strong young woman who was raised to fight for what she believes is right.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
~Hitchy
Reviewer: Swisha Signed
Date: November 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 41: Servatis a Maleficum
what an intense chapter.
so is this another nightmare of nessie's comming true?
I just hope that her dreams of jacob rescuing her come true :)
hold on nessie...
can't wait for the next chapter Author's Response: Thank you, and yes, this is the third nightmare coming true. She is definitely having precognitive dreams.
The next chapter will be submitted for validation today, and hopefully be up before the weekend.
Thanks so much!
~Hitchy
Reviewer: Swisha Signed    
Date: November 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 39: Snow White Queen
I'm barely hanging on here..
eager to find out what happens next. Author's Response: Hang in there Swisha, it's a bit of a bumpy ride.
I'm so glad to hear that you're liking it.
The next chapter should be up by the end of the week.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
~Hitchy
Reviewer: Swisha Signed    
Date: December 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 42: Acknowledgement
oh my goodness, I was tearing up for jake.. oh the pain he is going through please make it stop i can't take it anymore..
How the heck does conner fit in to POD's plan?...
where did POD get Jacob's shirt..
you can't leave me hanging like this.. i'm freaking out here
so many thoughts and emotions i can't take it.. Author's Response: I'm thrilled to hear that you were emotionally invested in this chapter. It was a bit of a bear to write. Edward's POV's in this story nearly kill me every time. He's always so emo...
Connor is a surprise twist that it seems a lot of readers didn't expect. We'll definetly learn about the extent of his involvement once all is said and done.
Thanks so much for reading and for your enthusiastic review. As promised, here is your teaser for the next chapter. ~ Hitchy
Teaser Chapter 43 – Secrets, Lies & Sacrifice
JPOV
I heard Edward sigh deeply and then quietly agree before filling the vamps in on my impromptu plan, and then make amendments for Bella, Kate’s and his gifts. Bella was to hang back from the crowd and stay out of sight, trying to shield each of the vamps, and me – and therefore my pack – while Kate would be in the front lines with Emmett, Rosalie and Garrett as our first line of defence. Carlisle and Esme would join them, but Carlisle was to stay out of danger as much as possible in case we needed his services after finding her.
I looked over at Edward and caught his eye, now nearly black with determination to find his daughter and the desire to maim or kill whoever had taken her. I’m sure mine echoed the same sentiments, but louder. We nodded and then ordered our respective groups to begin spreading out, stalking forward quickly.
I’m coming, baby, I whispered to myself, as if she could hear me, just hold on – I’m almost there.
Reviewer: Swisha Signed    
Date: December 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 43: Secrets, Lies & Sacrifice
I dont even have the word to describe here... you have me stumbling to find them.
I just want to tell you how freaking amazing you are.. I was so involved in everything that was going on, i could just picture/feel everything. you have a gift.
oh not sure if your going to but I would love a nessie pov when shes drinking jakes blood..
DON'T KILL JACOB Author's Response: I'm thrilled that you felt it. I cried while writing it (twice) and shepeppy, my first run beta, cried while reading it the first time too. I get so involved in this... I often wonder if readers are doing the same.
Thank you so much for your compliments! They really do make this all worth while.
We will get some Nessie POV about the blood drinking... but it might not be quite how you expect it... ... ...
As for Jake... next update is in roughly one week. Hope to see you then!
~Hitchy
Reviewer: Swisha Signed    
Date: December 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 44: Penitence
oh no poor Nessie has to relive the sick POD's torture through her dreams. I am glad that Edward got to see the strength of Nessie through her eyes and the love for Jacob that finally took down the evil. oh the pain Edward was in it was hard to not get emotional.
poor Jasper could not take the intensty of the thirst.
I am so glad that Nessie was the one that stopped drinking from Jacob she is truly one strong woman..
I love the love that Leah has for Nessie really heartfelt
as always cannot wait for next chapter.. Author's Response: I;m glad that you noticed Leah's contribution to Nessie's recovery. I didn't play it up a lot on the chapter, but she really helped them save her life that day too. Leah really does care a lot for Nessie.
Thank you, and Happy Holidays to you!
~Hitchy
Reviewer: Swisha Signed    
Date: December 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 45: Recovery
I love the song choice for this chapter it fits perfectly.. best way to describe the way the feel..
I love how you wrote this chapter.. Amazing as always
so are the children in Bella's vision Nessies??
Author's Response: Isn't that song the best? I love that I was able to use it in the fic. I modeled the second half of the chapter after it. I'm glad you liked it.
As for the kids.... we'll see!
Thank you!
~Hitchy
Reviewer: Swisha Signed    
Date: December 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 46: Past, Present & Future
oh my my my i cried soo hard with the letter that Edward wrote Jacob.
yay Nessie and Jacob are getting maried.. cannot wait.
oh and i will be looking for you fic with seth and olivia :) Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed Edward's letter. It was one of my favourite parts to write. I hope I did him justice with it.
And yes, they're getting married! I love planning weddings, so this is getting kind of fun for me, lol!
Seth and Olivia's fic should be coming around sometime in February (I hope).
Thank you!
~Hitchy
Summary:
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Three years after Breaking Dawn, a new chapter begins....
A new vampire arrives in Forks and the wolves get an unexpected surprise when Seth befriends her. As things start to unfold, a turn of events catches the attention of the Volturi summoning their return to Forks.
The Cullens and the wolves must once again decide if they will team up and face death in order to protect and defend the ones they love.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Aro, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Heidi, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jared, Leah, Marcus, Nessie, Other Character, Paul, Quil, Renata, Renesmee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes
Word count: 108447
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2010 Updated: December 18, 2010
Reviewer: Swisha Signed    
Date: January 06, 2011
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
what a great story. I loved it
great job :)
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