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Real name: Megan
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Seducing Ms Swan by Rialle Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3033]
Summary:

 

AU Post-New Moon.

Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or will old ties get in the way?

Edward is convinced that getting Bella back is just a matter of 'persuasion', but Bella isn't prepared to be that cooperative. What's more, she's in the grip of a dark secret which threatens to prevent her from loving ever again.

Bella Swan is slipping under...

ALSO POSTED ON FANFICTION.NET


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 124383
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: Myheart Signed
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Ghosts

awwww. that about sums it up.

 
Reviewer: Myheart Signed
Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: An Ending

um wow. uncool. :( I totallllly get the need for character development though. It would have been such a cliched happily ever after if it was like "i forgive you-let's get married!"

 
Reviewer: Myheart Signed
Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: An Ending

um wow. uncool. :( I totallllly get the need for character development though. It would have been such a cliched happily ever after if it was like "i forgive you-let's get married!"

 
Who Am I? by Mystic_Ice24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 259]
Summary:

**OFFICIALLY ON HIATUS AS THE AUTHORS RE-GROUP AND FIGURE OUT WHERE ON EARTH THE CHARACTERS ARE DEMANDING TO BE SENT**

 

Co-authored with OrangeBlossom

Shattered by life, living one hardship after another, Isabella Swan doesn't let a soul in. How can she after all she's suffered? Will one accidental knock down give her a life she deserves to have? The love she needs?

NC-17 for safety.Warning: References to abuse, both sexual and physical.

Usual pairings. Thanks to MrsC for the wonderful Banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 52214
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2008 Updated: July 26, 2010


Reviewer: Myheart Signed
Date: May 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Kitchen Break Downs

WOW. No, really.

 
Reviewer: Myheart Signed
Date: December 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Rosalie....?

UPDATE SOOONNNNEEEEEEEER!

 
Lost and Found by gemmabobella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 775]
Summary:

Bella Swan is now a teacher at Forks High school. She's been gone for six years, and now she's back.  What old and new friends will she find? What happens when she is reunited with an old crush? A realistic look of life, love, and the pursuit of happiness. Is true love only found in fairytales? Find out!  Special thanks to Manyafandom for the Banner!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: No Word count: 216661
[Report This] Published: October 20, 2008 Updated: September 19, 2009


Reviewer: Myheart Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Silver and Gold

Um...so I really like this story and all, but there is one thing you need to fix. You mispelled quileute. I might not have spelled it right either, so don't feel bad. :) I never have done a spelling tip before, so sorry if it sounds mean or anything.

 
Reviewer: Myheart Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Thick and Thin

I'm so excited!!!!!!! I love this story. The way you portray Edward is hauntingly beautiful. I enjoy how you show the ups and downs of any relationship. It's very realistic.

 
Reviewer: Myheart Signed
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - That Feeling (Twilighted Beta - vjgm)

OMG THE ANGST! It's beautiful. I could feel my heart seizing up as i read it. FAbulous. Let me go read that part where she walks in on Lauren and Edward and see if it's still as good....

 

Nope. BETTER.

 

:)

 
Reviewer: Myheart Signed
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Shattered (twilighted beta - vjgm)

The angst! I will miss it when this part's over. I wish she told Alice what happened so she could be P-Oed at Edward for just  litttttle. I'm so strange. :P

good job! i was there with bella the whole time!

 
Reviewer: Myheart Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Eclipse (twilighted beta - vjgm)

OMG if he dies i will be very very very very sad. I have been with this story from like chapter five and have grown very attached. DON'T DO THIS TO MEEEEEEEE.

 

If you have to though, from one writer to another, I totally get it. :)

Form reader to writer- DON'T DO IT! :)

 
Reviewer: Myheart Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Eclipse (twilighted beta - vjgm)

OMG if he dies i will be very very very very sad. I have been with this story from like chapter five and have grown very attached. DON'T DO THIS TO MEEEEEEEE.

 

If you have to though, from one writer to another, I totally get it. :)

Form reader to writer- DON'T DO IT! :)

 
Reviewer: Myheart Signed
Date: September 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Ever After (twilighted beta - vjgm)

WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! GO GEMMA!!!!! 

How's it feel t finish a story? huh? huh? Isn't it FABULOUS??

Good for you girl! Give yourself a BIIIIIG pat on the back. 

Fabulous story by the way. I laughed and cried, and almost died at multiple cliffhanger points. But I stayed with you from Chapter five and we're still alive... Thank God. 

Meheh. How'd you like my review/poem thingie? :)

 
Reviewer: Myheart Signed
Date: September 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Ever After (twilighted beta - vjgm)

WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! GO GEMMA!!!!! 

How's it feel t finish a story? huh? huh? Isn't it FABULOUS??

Good for you girl! Give yourself a BIIIIIG pat on the back. 

Fabulous story by the way. I laughed and cried, and almost died at multiple cliffhanger points. But I stayed with you from Chapter five and we're still alive... Thank God. 

Meheh. How'd you like my review/poem thingie? :)

 
Summary:

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What if in the beginning Edward lied to everyone about being in love with Bella? What if originally it actually was all about Bella's scent? And what would happen then if accidentally, much against his will, Edward kind of sort of fell head over heels in love with this not-so-dull human girl?

This is an AU of the Twilight Saga using an entirely different plot as to how, why, and when Edward and Bella fell in love. It offers a different explanation for what was so special about Bella Swan, why Edward vigilantly enforced those physical boundaries, why there's tension between the Cullens and the wolves, and why Edward behaved the way he did not only with Bella but with his family. Expect romance, mystery, angst, and humor. Dark Edward.

Canon Pairings, No BxExJ, OOC.

This story is rated NC-17 because of occasional naughty language, violence (or implied violence) against humans, vampires, werewolves, animals, insects, minding-their-own-business-pajamas, entities, books, coffee tables, leather recliners, bridges, sword ferns, shrubs, rocks, and worst of all....trees. It is also rated NC-17 due to excessive snarkiness by Edward, references to underage drinking, practical jokes and/or enthusiastic tormenting of secondary characters particularly Mike Newton, Jacob Black, and Charles Swan. It also is rated NC-17 due to sexual content.

 Thanks to Mizra for the banners.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Lauren, Leah, Other Character, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 74 Completed: Yes Word count: 1085631
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: May 31, 2011


Reviewer: Myheart Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 8 - Heart of Darkness - Part Sixteen - Can't a Century Old Vampire be a Moral Degenerate in Peace?

I'm a writer like you and I just wanted to say I could never think ofmplots like yours. I mean, wow.

Author's Response:

Hi there My heart! Thanks so much for your review! And PM me with a link to your writing. I'd love to read it. I do worry at times that I've made the plot too complex, so for me this is a challenge. Since it's my first fanfiction and fictional story ever I'm learning as I go along. I look at the first few chapters and cringe. In CC I wanted to answer some of the questions I felt weren't addressed in the Twilight Saga; but I didn't want to just rewrite that story. Plenty of others have done it far better than I ever could. So for me the challenge is to come up with a plot that has some of the same building blocks but twist it in a way that is unique. The readers have a template in mind and that, to me, is the tricky part because I've gone off the reservation. Edward is not going to fall for her like they would expect him to. I think. But he will fall nevertheless. Hard. And I'm having a blast writing about the process. Thanks again, for your review. You made my day. :) Books

 
Summary:

 

 

"In a moment’s time, I’d be his, entirely. The one thing I’d wanted more than anything itself. The pain, the pleasure- it was worth it knowing I’d be able to claim to be his…at long last.

 

"The silence in the room was deafening. The intimacy of this moment made the world hold its breath in anticipation. Time ceased to exist; the only fathomable concepts were Edward and me."

For all of us who read Breaking Dawn, closed the back cover and said; "Yeah...not what I expected..."

This is my version, my ending of the Twilight Saga. In short, it's purpose is to show how Edward and Bella meet the trials and tribulations of being newlyweds, Bella being a newborn as well as other things life has to offer. It's meant to highlight their love, devotion, the strengthening of their bond as well as how they grow together emotionally and physically.

Rated NC-17 for Mature themes, language and adult and sexual content.

WARNING: quite a few lemons here ;]

 

ON HIATUS!! LOOK FOR MY NEWEST WORK AND THE FOCUS OF MY ATTENTION, "Love Story" !!


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Phil, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: The Beginning
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 132794
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: November 15, 2009


Reviewer: Myheart Signed
Date: October 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6- Mrs. Edward Cullen: Part I

OH THE ANGST! I have come back to this story time and time again, specifically for this and the next two or three chapters. I always read this when I want the angst. Just to let you know, I looked for DAYS the second time I wanted to read it- no exagerration. I am giving in and putting it on my favorites, seeing as I now have my own Twilighted account.

Seriously though, I LOVE these next fews scenes.

 
Snowed In by eclipsedawn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5321]
Summary: Bella travels to Alaska to vacation in the cabin Alice loaned her. What happens when Bella finds out she is not the only person staying in the cabin?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 88293
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2008 Updated: January 01, 2010


Reviewer: Myheart Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Sweat

What the freak???? Don't just leave off there! What were you thinking crazy?

I'm betting on Alice or Jacob. :-)

 
Summary:

 

stories/2326/images/gonebanner.jpgWhat if the wolf pack hadn't interrupted Laurent before he bit Bella?  This is the story of Bella being changed despite Edward leaving her to prevent it from happening.

Rated for later chapters.  Just like in New Moon, Edward will make an appearance eventually!

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 71429
[Report This] Published: December 09, 2008 Updated: November 24, 2009


Reviewer: Myheart Signed
Date: November 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Together, Forever

Whoooo! Great ending! And I am sooo impressed with you. Two very large stories done woithin a few months of each other and both of them are great. Very, very good job. Kudos to you :)

 
Summary:

Bella Swan changed her life and ideals for a guy . . . who then dumped her in the middle of a mall. Even if she's happier now and her life is back on track, she still needs to realize that the past is the past.

Enter Edward Cullen, devastatingly handsome and hopelessly in love with Bella after knowing her for only a short time. Can he prove to Bella that she's not the type who should be loved and left? Can he help her get over her past and put her self doubts behind her?

 Rated M for later chapters.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 95381
[Report This] Published: December 16, 2008 Updated: February 03, 2013


Reviewer: Myheart Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 16, 2009 Title: Love Me or Leave Me

I'm not reviewing for the suprise... I just wanted to say that this is great! I like it a bunch but I kind of wish there was more conflict.

Author's Response:

i'm glad you like it! there will be some more conflict in the future. that's one thing that i've felt that i haven't had enough of, and i'm still developing the story in my crazy head. lol.  so do you not want me to send you the extra outtake or did you just mean it wasn't the only reason you were reviewing? haha.  thanks for reading & reviewing!  :)

 
Summary:

AU. Based off the events in the beginning of New Moon. Edward did not tell the truth when he left Bella in the woods five years ago. Struggling to make a life without him, Bella finds herself still alone in an entirely different forest. But what happens if they are accidentally reunited? What was the lie that Edward told?  What will Bella do when she finds out?  Rated NC-17 for language and sexual situations


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 119106
[Report This] Published: December 18, 2008 Updated: December 28, 2010


Reviewer: Myheart Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Misty Mountain Hop

I hope you know that you were the first story I read on here and for awhile, the only. The way you write so eloquently takes my breath away.
I came here, to twilighted that is, a long while ago. It has been a long time since you updated, so tsk tsk. I eagerly await the next one, however far into the future it may be.
On a lighter, more my age tone, let me say that This is the bomb! I love love love this story, so write more N.O.W.!!!!!!!!
;)

 
Reviewer: Myheart Signed
Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Prometheus

w

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w.

 

Period.

 
Reviewer: Myheart Signed
Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Prometheus

w

o

w.

 

Period.

 
For Eternity by MonksMama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1118]
Summary:

150 years after Edward leaves and 149 years after Bella's death, Jasper stumbles into a newly published fiction that isn't fiction at all. Who is Eve? Who are the Guardians? What are the concequences?

"May 17, 2153

Dearest Reader,

Come, pull up a chair and sit by me. Locked in these pages you will find my story, my memory, my secrets, my heart, my life, my death, some things that came after and everything in between.

Can I trust you with it?

It is truly fantastic and not for the faint-hearted. Not for the realist, not for the cynic, no never for the cynic, only the pure hearted will find purchase here. Lend me your ear, your open mind and heart and I will pull you to a myth you dare not dream of, a myth you unknowingly live every day.

Tell me dearest, do you believe in Angels? Not as Dogma, not as testament to whichever religion bears your faith, not fairies with wings and halos. Can you believe in the beings of light, of strength and power that govern here on earth, the beings that hold all things in order, beings that guard your humanity?

Perhaps Angels is the wrong word, a word they would see with distaste. So we shall call them what they are in essence, the guardians. Do you believe?  Can you believe in the mythical? If you cannot, this is no place for you. I’ll give you a moment to ponder this. Please do not tread lightly upon my  request.

As I have learned all too harshly, prepared or not, one can never go back. " 

 Told in varying POV, with excerpts from the book Storm.

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 92469
[Report This] Published: December 26, 2008 Updated: November 14, 2011


Reviewer: Myheart Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Torch

okay. I've spent like two hours reading it and then there's no more? Sniffle sniffle.
Really though it is truly good. You have a gift and I suggest you keep on utilizing it. The grammer the good the plot is great so your story is wonderful make no mistake. And that was a tribute to your little limricks which always make me laugh. Yeah I know there are no commas in here meaning awful grammar but I'm being lazy. After all it is a Sunday.
Good luck!

 
The List by Laura Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13645]
Summary:

Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...

Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.

Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010


Reviewer: Myheart Signed
Date: August 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

WOW. Best transformation scene I've read. :)

You're killlin me girl! I've been checking my email EVERY day (a feat that has never happened before) and low and behold, today at school I get not one but SIX emails telling me you've updated. 

 

UPDATEEEEE! The suspense is killing me hahha. 

 
Reviewer: Myheart Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

OMG HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!! I hope you know I am so addicted to this story that I drop EVERY SINGLE THING and read it the second I get the e-mail saying that it updates. I will miss this story so incredibly much now that it's over. 

Aren't there still some things on Bella's List though? :)

 
Summary:

This is a companion story to Lost and Found.  Lost and Found is Bella’s POV, and this story is Edward’s POV as they both struggle to learn what it means to find love and happiness.  Follow Edward as he struggles to deal with his past, and learn to live again.  Will Bella be what he needs to heal and learn to love again?  

 

Amazing Grace Banner


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 56193
[Report This] Published: January 02, 2009 Updated: April 23, 2010


Reviewer: Myheart Signed
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

hey! its been months and you've left us hanging. please please please update!



Author's Response:

I know, and I'm sorry.  Give me one more month, maybe two, and I promise regular updates will resume!

 




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