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Hold On by Todream Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 368]
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Jacob, an employee at the University of Forks, lives a simple life taking care of his disabled father and buddies on the rez.  Underneath his happy persona, he hides a history of personal loss and missed opportunities that could have changed his future.

Nessie, a privileged student, lives a life full of obligations and forced responsibilities.  With a father who can't relate to her and a mother who is never fully sober, she finds solace in the handsome Jacob who helps her out in her time of need.

From two different worlds, the two find each other despite the dire consequences that will ensue if their budding relationship continues.  Can his past and her sheltered life find a balance and make a love that lasts?  Can family secrets and missed opportunities make their love stronger or completely destroy it? 

All Human

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Claire, Jacob, Nessie, Paul, Quil, Renesmee
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Series: Imprint Me: The Jacob and Nessie Archives
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 202230
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2009 Updated: January 13, 2011


Reviewer: Jennrosee Signed
Date: January 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 Little Lion Man

Thank you for this story.

 
Summary: Feature

When Bella learns her “ability” is more than a quirk, she must work with new friends to thwart the corrupt organization looking to exploit their powers for personal gain.

All human.  Complete at Chapter 17. EPOV outtakes are being added weekly.

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Thanks Vampire Youth for the banner and blinkie!

 

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Thank you angelgirl664 for the banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 120526
[Report This] Published: March 08, 2010 Updated: August 10, 2011


Reviewer: Jennrosee Signed
Date: June 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

See, I totally I knew it! LOL!

 
Reviewer: Jennrosee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love stories like this! Great imagery. You must be from Florida...you know about the love bugs!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for giving this story a shot! Hope you're enjoying it!

 
Reviewer: Jennrosee Signed
Date: June 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Hmm, why do I have a feeling it doesn't have anything to do with the way  Edward was holding her shoulder ? :)

 
Wicked Games by hitchy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 817]
Summary:

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It has been more than five years since Renesmee was born.  She's 16 and craving independence from her overprotective family.  She moves to Alaska to attend school with Jake, after painstakinlgy convincing her parents (mainly Edward) that it's a good idea.  Things begin to develop between Jake and Nessie romantically, and she couldn't be more thrilled.

But what happens when a sudden and unexpected visitor casts a dark shadow over things?  The death of a loved one brings the ugly truth of the lethal and Wicked Game to light and no one is safe anymore... especially Renesmee. 

How hard will Jake and Nessie have to fight to be together? 

Mainly Jake & Renesmee's POV's, but has some Edward and Bella chapters as well.

NOTE:  This story is rated NC-17 for a reason.  Violence, sexual content, and dark themes.

 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Jacob, Leah, Nessie, Renesmee, Seth
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Series: Imprint Me: The Jacob and Nessie Archives
Chapters: 59 Completed: Yes Word count: 393510
[Report This] Published: June 21, 2010 Updated: May 17, 2011


Reviewer: Jennrosee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Yours & Mine

First time reviewer, but I just had to say that I think your buildup from the beginning of your story until this moment was awesome! Not too soon and just the perfect amount of tension. Have to go now. Must find me a Jake...



Author's Response:

Hello Jennrosee!  Thanks os much for taking the time to review! 

I'm so glad you enjoyed the build-up to the full lemon for these two.  I've always felt like the Jake I knew and loved from the Twilight saga would have wanted nothing short of 100% love, trust and commitment between the two fo them before they made love.  This was just my little theory about how it could possibly go...

I hope you do find your own Jake!  If not... you could always write yourself one.  WG Jake is as much for me as he is for Nessie, LOL!

Thanks so much for popping in to say hello!  I really do appreciate any and all feedback I receive from readers.  It's beyond helpful and rewarding in so many ways.

Thanks again,

~Hitchy

 
Reviewer: Jennrosee Signed
Date: May 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Epilogue - Part Two

I'm crying because it's over, and I'm crying because it's not over. Aaahhh! You really know how to leave us hanging. What a wonderful story this was!You'd definitely have readers if you wrote a sequel (hint, hint) :)



Author's Response:

*hands Jennrose a tissue*  Don't cry darlin'.  Look down below!

It's been an incredible journey. It seems like it's unanimous... everyone wants a sequel. I'm amazed with the positive response. Unless something in real life changes that prevents me from writing fan fiction altogether, I am definitely planning on writing a sequel for Sarah and Elijah, at the very least. If you're interested in reading it, please keep me on author alert, or keep an eye on my author's notes in other things that I'm writing either here or on fanfiction.net

Thank you so much.

~Hitchy

 
The First Time by Todream Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 145]
Summary:

Twenty years ago, Edward and Bella were married, and a heartbroken Jacob fled his home.  Shortly thereafter, the happy couple became parents to a beautiful baby girl and soon moved away from the place they had called home.  Jacob eventually returned back to La Push, vowing to never utter Bella's name or keep tabs on her life.

Now fast forward twenty years to the wedding of Seth Clearwater where Jacob is a groomsmen, and Mr. and Mrs. Edward Cullen are guests.  Jacob knows nothing of their arrival and flees the wedding after seeing Bella for the first time after all these years. He tries to escape to the comfort of his hotel room, trying to forget the pain that has found him again.

In another part of the hotel, a young Renesmee, who skipped the wedding altogether, has been wronged by the man she thought loved her.  She runs to find solace in the privacy of her hotel room, wanting to drown her sorrows in a warm bath.

But what happens when Jacob and Renesmee have a chance meeting on the hotel elevator? Will sparks fly? Read to find out...


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob
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Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 52634
[Report This] Published: August 31, 2010 Updated: May 13, 2011


Reviewer: Jennrosee Signed
Date: October 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 So Cruel

Love this! I don't think he's going to make it very far though!!

 
Imprinted by ginamr Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 37]
Summary:

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Nessie is fast approaching the seven year mark and despite his best attempts, Jacob is becoming more and more drawn to her. With Nessie’s stubborn nature, inherited from her mother, this can only end one way...or can it?


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Nessie, Paul, Quil, Renesmee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 10741
[Report This] Published: October 06, 2010 Updated: February 02, 2011


Reviewer: Jennrosee Signed
Date: December 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Rash Behavior and Its Consequences (Nessie and Jacob)

Oh, vampire hunters! That will be interesting. Tell Jake to stop being such a baby! :)

 
Lunar Phases by CarrieW Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 58]
Summary:

 

Lunar Phases

 

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For Renesmee Carlie Cullen, reaching maturity meant more than a defined physical completion.  Mental astuteness began at the moment of creation.  With her body finally catching up, it was imperative for her to advance to her next lunar phase.  Three unanswered questions were slowing progression to the peace she so desperately needed.  Who was she?  What could she do?  What was her purpose?  She needed to make a difficult choice between two appealing options.  Being a half-breed was never about even sides.  She wasn’t 50% vampire or 50% human.  Both were dueling for control.  Which would win? Her gift, while simplistic in nature, offered something more than the ability to give.  To explore, she would also need to learn how to take.  Was she strong enough to use it in reverse?  Please join Renesmee in a journey to self-realization, where finding amity means accepting fate and understanding that the light she holds inside herself not only shines brightly enough to free her but the entire world.  Will she disperse the darkness, or will it consume her?

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Chelsea, Demetri, Didyme, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Gianna, Heidi, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kachiri, Leah, Marcus, Mike, Nessie, Other Character, Paul, Quil, Renata, Renesmee, Rosalie, Sam, Senna, Seth, Zafrina
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Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 87482
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2010 Updated: January 13, 2011


Reviewer: Jennrosee Signed
Date: December 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Perspectives

Uh oh! I woinder who it could be. My first thought is Jake, but I shall not assume anything. Great story. Can't wait to see how everything turns out.



Author's Response:

:)  Thanks for reviewing!  Answers on the way soon!

 
Reviewer: Jennrosee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Temperature Fluctuations

Who want's simple stories anyway? As writers I think we write for ourselves and then hope that someone else enjoys our ideas as well. I really like this story. It's different!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!!!  I'm glad you're liking it so far.  More coming!  I appreciate you taking the time to leave feedback. :)

 
Lost Together by hitchy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 80]
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Seth travels to Alaska to help Jake and Nessie settle in to their new home when they move away to attend school together.  A trip to the local corner store brings him face to face with Olivia, who suddenly becomes the centre of his world.

Unfortunately, things are not as cut and dry as they seem.  Olivia has been hurt in the past, and is having trouble moving on with her life.  She's in need of a gentle soul to help her heal, and Seth is her guy. But what happens when he is called to duty as a wolf by Jake to protect Nessie from a vicious vampire stalker hell-bent on making Nessie his own?

This is the story of how two people with hearts of gold find a way to love each other, while lost in a world full of people and other beings that don’t know the meaning of the word. 

Please Note: This story contains a scene of date rape, and descriptions of other violent events. 

My beautiful banner was made by the very lovely and talented Readergoof.  She can do amazing things with a couple of simple pictures!

 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob, Leah, Nessie, Other Character, Seth
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Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 78056
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2011 Updated: September 25, 2011


Reviewer: Jennrosee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: My Blue

I just love watching Olivia progress through this. When you've been with someone who treated you in a certain way, it's hard to let yourself believe that the next person isn't going to treat you the same way. I can relate to her a bit. I'm sure other's can to. It's a difficult thing to overcome; I'm glad she is :)

 
Reviewer: Jennrosee Signed
Date: April 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Her

I'm thinking your Seth is going to be just as hot as your Jake ;)



Author's Response:

*smirks*  Seth is definetly a hot guy in my mind - but in a different way than Jake.  He's a bit more subtle, but that's just what Olivia needs.

Thank you!

~H

 
Reviewer: Jennrosee Signed
Date: April 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Sinking & Floating

Oh, I love Olivia and Seth together! I'm glad you're writing their story.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  These two were calling to me.  I felt the need to tell their love story, and I'm so glad that you're excited to see it too.

;-)

~Hitchy

 
Reviewer: Jennrosee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Yeah? Yeah.

Aww, there just so cute together :) Don't we all wish we would have waited when we find that person!



Author's Response:

They are sweet, that's for sure.  Yes, i think a lot of us would have waited had we know the right person was on their way... but in reality it hardly ever happens. 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.  I am so sorry that it's taken me so long to get back to you.  Real life has been absolutely nutty for me these last couple of months.  Beyond nutty actually... but that's besides the point.

I really do appreciate your feedback.  :-) 

Thanks again,

~Hitchy

 
Reviewer: Jennrosee Signed
Date: April 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: I Think I'm Ready

You know what's awesome? Even though I know much of what happens because of Wicked Games, I'm still so excited to read it here LOL! Yay, Olivia! Congrats on your nomination! You deserve it!



Author's Response:

Hi Jennrosee,

I'm so glad that knowing some of what has happened to them in advance doesn't ruin it for you.  As with any couple, no one knows everything that's happened to them in their private time.  We'll get to see their inner relationship in this fic, not just their outer one.

Sorry it took so long to respond!  Having computer and RL issues galore right now.

Thanks so much for taking the time to review!

~Hitchy

 
Reviewer: Jennrosee Signed
Date: June 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: So Do I

So do I! :) I know I 've said this before, but I reallly do love these two together. And I love your sweet Seth.



Author's Response:

Me too!  LOL!  Who wouldn't want to kiss this Seth?  I'm really happy to hear that you like the type of girl that I envision him with.  I always wonder whether or not people will like her, because she's a completely original character (and all mine, at that). 

I wish I could bottle up Seth and send him to you... but I guess another chapter from his POV will have to do instead ;-)

Thank you!

~Hitchy

 
Reviewer: Jennrosee Signed
Date: July 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Falling

I'm so happy she's letting her guard down and trusting him! Yay, Olivia! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm sorry that it has taken me so long to respond to your review, but since validation has been an issue from the start with this fic, I was considering pulling it off of this site. As it is, Chapter 9 validated last night after sitting in wait for almost a month. Hopefully chapter ten will be faster. I am so sorry for the wait.

Because timely validation continues to be a concern on this site, I will let you know that this fic is also on fanfiction.net (same name, same author). If you'd prefer to read them at a faster pace and don;t mind the lack of editing, please come visit over there! (I aim to post chapter 12 to that site this weekend).

I feel like taking my pompoms out for her sometimes.  She's really putting herself out there - all things considered.  I guess you could say that Seth has quite an effect on her, lol!

Thanks so much for your continued reading and support, even through the long break!

~Hitchy

 
Reviewer: Jennrosee Signed
Date: September 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: A Perfect Storm

Ooh, Olivia's getting bolder and Seth's getting all possessive now. Yay! It's actually nice to see a Seth that has more depth to him than just the usual happy-go-lucky way he's usually portrayed. That's hard to do with him; I know from experience. Great chapter! :)





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