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Pen Pals by wmr1601 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 767]
Summary: Feature

 

Bella and Edward have been pen pals (the traditional kind, pen and paper stuff) for over a decade, but they never met for reasons even they didn’t know. After fourteen years of “courting through the postal service” and not realizing it, Bella gets engaged to Emmett, a fellow lawyer at the prestigious firm of Ateara, Call, and Uley. They move fast, and a wedding is set for a mere four months after they get engaged. Bella invites Edward to the wedding, wanting to finally meet her longtime friend, and when things go sour the night of the rehearsal dinner, Bella, in her shock, ends up in Edward’s arms. And this is all just the tip of the iceberg for these two…

Rated NC-17 for mature sexual content. Little to no bad language.

*banner by enchanted-mind*


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes Word count: 239223
[Report This] Published: September 21, 2010 Updated: August 27, 2011


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: A New Boyfriend

Wow, kids, that was fast. From colleagues to allmost lovers in just a few hours? Yikes!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Ateara, Call, and Uley

Ooo -- neat that you "stepped up" their interaction by adding IM. Much more "immediate!" Looking forward to what you do with the Emmett situation ...

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Letters

This is an interesting and sweet story idea that I hadn't read of before. Your writing flows beautifully, too!

 
Summary:

Bella longs to be loved by Edward in every way before she is changed. Edward has agreed to try. On the verge of marriage and forever together, Bella wants to explore their physical love. Will Edward let her?

Set at the beginning of Breaking Dawn.

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Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 23067
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2010 Updated: December 01, 2010


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Part I

Wow - from almost no contact at all right thru the Big O for Bella! Way to go, Edward!

 
Summary:

 

A dark and twisted tale about how vampires deal with the never-ending boredom of eternity. Written for the Countdown to Halloween II.

WARNING:  CONTAINS EXPLICIT VIOLENCE SOME MIGHT FIND DISTURBING.

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5276
[Report This] Published: October 22, 2010 Updated: November 14, 2010


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, that was grisly and altogether wonderful! I was surprised it was Bella doing the killing at first -- great setup!

 
Enough by diamondheart Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

 Can love really overcome all obstacles? A fireside tale of tragic decisions, enduring love & unyielding fate. Who can say where truth ends and legend begins?

My entry for the After Your Heart Stops Beating Contest on ffn, hosted by Wordslinger and Twi Charmed:

http://www.fanfiction.net/~afteryourheartstopsbeating

...and I WON!! Both the Popular Vote AND the Judges' Pick!

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Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4877
[Report This] Published: November 06, 2010 Updated: December 14, 2010


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Enough

Beautifully written and told; sounded just like a Quilute legend!

Author's Response:

The "legend" format just got ahold of me & wouldn't let go...thanks for reading <><3

 
Summary:

"When stating our vows, we hadn't believed '…until death do us part' would come into play..." O/S

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4467
[Report This] Published: November 06, 2010 Updated: November 14, 2010


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Till Death Do Us Part

This is a beautiful story and I'm amazed that you've written it at only 18 years of age! There are lots of free resources online for those who aspire to write professionally. If it's your thing, check it out!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! =D

 
Dear Mr. Masen by jendonna Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 746]
Summary:

"Error 434: Reprimanding an executive." Life changing or just stupid? Dear Mr. Masen: A story of unauthorized Internet usage, culinary delights and the goings-on at Cullen, Inc. AH, ExB.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 109238
[Report This] Published: November 17, 2010 Updated: September 14, 2011


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

This is the wittiest, most intelligent B&E dialog I've ever read in fan fiction. You have a gift!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is hysterical! Very pithy!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Very, very funny! I want them to meet face to face, and yet I don't, since all this email mayhem will/may cease!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

BRILLIANT!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

What a wonderful build-up to their actual meet. Plus it's great that she isn't at her best and he still thinks she's lovely. This is my new favorite ff!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Beautiful, touching, witty. I love it!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Yeah! So THERE, Mouth Breather! That Edward packs a mean gift!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Could they be any more adorable? I don't think so!

Can't wait for your update!

 
Summary:

Bella and Edward encounter a problem when visiting Renee in Florida.

Birthday fic written for SunKing.

Thanks to the lovely TwistedIn_ who made this banner for me.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6067
[Report This] Published: January 07, 2011 Updated: January 07, 2011


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: In The Heat Of The Night

The business in the car was hysterical! You really nailed all of those characters!

 
Summary:

Being a Knight of the Round Table is a great honor.  But in this story, things are not always what they seem.  Join your favorite Twilight characters as they discover lies, truths, deception, betrayals and love all in the court of Camelot.  Canon and non-canon couples.  Humans and witches, wizards, dragons, immortals, etc.  Various POVs.    


Categories: AU, Crossover Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Riley, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 4829
[Report This] Published: January 11, 2011 Updated: March 10, 2011


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very lovely story. I like that you put it first in Jacob's POV; that's kind of unusual in fandom. Thanks for writing!

Author's Response:

Hi nwalto!  Thanks for reading.  I hope to have chapter two up soon. 

 
Summary:

Edward was the one great "what-if" of Bella's life. Eight years after he left her  without a word, a crisis brings them face to face in an unexpected time and place.

A short-story written for the Fandom for Preemies Effort, 2010.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 41702
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2011 Updated: February 26, 2011


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Beautifully written. Plus, you can tell that you know your medical "stuff!"

Author's Response:

Ah, thanks.  I'm glad some of my education stayed with me.  ;-)

 
Summary:

Jasper drags Edward camping, but they both end up surprised by what comes out at night. Received honorable mention in the Slash Backslash 2.0 one-shot contest.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6607
[Report This] Published: January 30, 2011 Updated: February 14, 2011


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderful story! It was humorous and sensitively written, too! I've climbed that little mountain just west of Camden harbor, and you're right about the view! Even prettier in the summer with all the windjammers.

 
Bad Blood by LadyExcalibur Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 282]
Summary:

Edward Cullen was a man who liked order. He arranged his life into neat little segments, exercising rigid control in all areas of his existence. Then one day, all of it was brought tumbling down by one simple question.

 

The lovely banner is courtesy of Readergoof, and I think it is amazing! Thank you!

 

Bad Blood banner by Readergoof


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 52050
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2011 Updated: August 08, 2011


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is so beautifully written, and always full of surprises. I hope more readers will find it because it is well worthy of reading!

Author's Response:

I'm happy that anyone at all would want to read it, so I consider myself lucky right now!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

OK, I'm hooked. You're spinning out the backstory in such an expert way! Right now, I'm guessing that one of her parents was killed by his father. But I'm probably way off course. Thanks for sharing this with us!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is one of the most fascinating premises I've read on Twilighted. Very artfully crafted, as well. Looking forward to reading more!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This is so beautifully told. You've taken such care with your descriptions of what's going on inside him and what he observes. You're so true to the deep third POV, and I'm finding the story so engaging. Thanks so much for sharing it!

Author's Response:

Thank YOU for reading it. This Edward ended up being one of my favorites...just so sweet and vulnerable.

 
Summary:

The Night She Wore Black Banner (small)

 

Edward and Bella are a happily married couple with a great sex life, but they're both hiding a dark secret. When Bella pushes them over the edge into an intense new lifestle, will they embrace their new roles? Or will they be torn apart? AU/AH/OOC. BDSM/No abuse or slavery.

Bella x Edward

**WARNING: This story will contain themes and situations which may not be appropriate for all readers, including BDSM (Bondage, Dominace and Submission, Sadism and Masochism) graphic physical injury, and coarse or offensive language. Please consider how you might react to these themes and situations before you begin reading this story. Thank you.**

 

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Love and stuff to AngelGoddess1981 and Readergoof for the amazing banners! :)



Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 31290
[Report This] Published: March 25, 2011 Updated: May 20, 2011


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The love scene at the beginning was written very beautifully! I've read a few BDSM stories on the fandom and look forward to reading your take on it!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Mmmmm...way to go, Edward!

 




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