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Dear Mr. Masen by jendonna Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 746]
Summary:

"Error 434: Reprimanding an executive." Life changing or just stupid? Dear Mr. Masen: A story of unauthorized Internet usage, culinary delights and the goings-on at Cullen, Inc. AH, ExB.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 109238
[Report This] Published: November 17, 2010 Updated: September 14, 2011


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Yeah! So THERE, Mouth Breather! That Edward packs a mean gift!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Could they be any more adorable? I don't think so!

Can't wait for your update!

 
Summary:

Bella and Edward encounter a problem when visiting Renee in Florida.

Birthday fic written for SunKing.

Thanks to the lovely TwistedIn_ who made this banner for me.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6067
[Report This] Published: January 07, 2011 Updated: January 07, 2011


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: In The Heat Of The Night

The business in the car was hysterical! You really nailed all of those characters!

 
Summary:

Being a Knight of the Round Table is a great honor.  But in this story, things are not always what they seem.  Join your favorite Twilight characters as they discover lies, truths, deception, betrayals and love all in the court of Camelot.  Canon and non-canon couples.  Humans and witches, wizards, dragons, immortals, etc.  Various POVs.    


Categories: AU, Crossover Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Riley, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 4829
[Report This] Published: January 11, 2011 Updated: March 10, 2011


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very lovely story. I like that you put it first in Jacob's POV; that's kind of unusual in fandom. Thanks for writing!

Author's Response:

Hi nwalto!  Thanks for reading.  I hope to have chapter two up soon. 

 
Summary:

Edward was the one great "what-if" of Bella's life. Eight years after he left her  without a word, a crisis brings them face to face in an unexpected time and place.

A short-story written for the Fandom for Preemies Effort, 2010.

 

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Banner by TammyAZ!

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 41702
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2011 Updated: February 26, 2011


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Beautifully written. Plus, you can tell that you know your medical "stuff!"

Author's Response:

Ah, thanks.  I'm glad some of my education stayed with me.  ;-)

 
Summary:

Jasper drags Edward camping, but they both end up surprised by what comes out at night. Received honorable mention in the Slash Backslash 2.0 one-shot contest.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6607
[Report This] Published: January 30, 2011 Updated: February 14, 2011


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderful story! It was humorous and sensitively written, too! I've climbed that little mountain just west of Camden harbor, and you're right about the view! Even prettier in the summer with all the windjammers.

 
Bad Blood by LadyExcalibur Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 283]
Summary:

Edward Cullen was a man who liked order. He arranged his life into neat little segments, exercising rigid control in all areas of his existence. Then one day, all of it was brought tumbling down by one simple question.

 

The lovely banner is courtesy of Readergoof, and I think it is amazing! Thank you!

 

Bad Blood banner by Readergoof


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 52050
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2011 Updated: August 08, 2011


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is so beautifully written, and always full of surprises. I hope more readers will find it because it is well worthy of reading!

Author's Response:

I'm happy that anyone at all would want to read it, so I consider myself lucky right now!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

OK, I'm hooked. You're spinning out the backstory in such an expert way! Right now, I'm guessing that one of her parents was killed by his father. But I'm probably way off course. Thanks for sharing this with us!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is one of the most fascinating premises I've read on Twilighted. Very artfully crafted, as well. Looking forward to reading more!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This is so beautifully told. You've taken such care with your descriptions of what's going on inside him and what he observes. You're so true to the deep third POV, and I'm finding the story so engaging. Thanks so much for sharing it!

Author's Response:

Thank YOU for reading it. This Edward ended up being one of my favorites...just so sweet and vulnerable.

 
Summary:

The Night She Wore Black Banner (small)

 

Edward and Bella are a happily married couple with a great sex life, but they're both hiding a dark secret. When Bella pushes them over the edge into an intense new lifestle, will they embrace their new roles? Or will they be torn apart? AU/AH/OOC. BDSM/No abuse or slavery.

Bella x Edward

**WARNING: This story will contain themes and situations which may not be appropriate for all readers, including BDSM (Bondage, Dominace and Submission, Sadism and Masochism) graphic physical injury, and coarse or offensive language. Please consider how you might react to these themes and situations before you begin reading this story. Thank you.**

 

The Night She Wore Black Banner 2

 

Love and stuff to AngelGoddess1981 and Readergoof for the amazing banners! :)



Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 31290
[Report This] Published: March 25, 2011 Updated: May 20, 2011


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The love scene at the beginning was written very beautifully! I've read a few BDSM stories on the fandom and look forward to reading your take on it!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Mmmmm...way to go, Edward!

 
Summary:

 

Cimmerian Dawn

Thanks, yet again, to the wonderful frozensoldier for my banner.

Edward and his family are vampires who feed off the emotions of their human victims. Over time they have learnt to control their feeding so that they can live undetected. The arrival of a new student at Forks High School is the catalyst for a change that will shake them to the core.

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 31284
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2011 Updated: September 30, 2011


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Vision

Funny reference to the pea coat!

I'm a little confused re: what they feed on: is it emotions or blood or both?

Author's Response:

It's the emotions they need, but the power of them sends them into a bit of a frenzy and they bite. The blood isn't necessary for them to survive, but it heightens the experience. Maybe the idea isn't so strange to me, as I'm a very oral person and often have the urge to bite things!!! lol

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Emotion

Very interesting premise! I look forward to reading what you do with it!

 
The Breakers by les16 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 305]
Summary:

After spending 7 years in prison, Edward gets a new start in the fishing village of Corea, Maine. Can a little girl and her mom, Bella, see beyond his past and can they all find love again...or will the ocean swallow them whole?


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 290099
[Report This] Published: June 19, 2011 Updated: February 28, 2012


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was excited to read a story set in coastal Maine. You started it with a bang, and I look forward to reading more! Is Corea down east? It sure sounds COLD in your story!

 
Summary:

Someone Like You Banner

Edward Cullen travels back to Chicago to see his former lover, Isabella Swan, one last time on the eve of her wedding. O/S piece inspired by the Adele song, "Someone Like You." 

Alternate universe, all-human, canon pairs. 

Graphic sex, adult themes, some mild violence, a whole lotta angst, a sprinkling of fluff, and a slice of good old-fashioned lemony goodness. 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7273
[Report This] Published: January 28, 2012 Updated: February 12, 2012


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Someone Like You

Wow -- thanks for all the time you took writing this. I can read your passion in every word. I have to tell you that this Bella is a first class b*tch. I hope that Jake gives her the boot and that Edward figures out she's a harpy and not worth all the thought he's given her all these years. Although maybe they deserve each other. They are not nice people, are they?

 




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