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Penname: nwalto [Contact]
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Member Since: February 28, 2009

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Cimmerian Dawn

Thanks, yet again, to the wonderful frozensoldier for my banner.

Edward and his family are vampires who feed off the emotions of their human victims. Over time they have learnt to control their feeding so that they can live undetected. The arrival of a new student at Forks High School is the catalyst for a change that will shake them to the core.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 31284
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2011 Updated: September 30, 2011

Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Vision

Funny reference to the pea coat!

I'm a little confused re: what they feed on: is it emotions or blood or both?

Author's Response:

It's the emotions they need, but the power of them sends them into a bit of a frenzy and they bite. The blood isn't necessary for them to survive, but it heightens the experience. Maybe the idea isn't so strange to me, as I'm a very oral person and often have the urge to bite things!!! lol

Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Emotion

Very interesting premise! I look forward to reading what you do with it!

The Breakers by les16 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 305]

After spending 7 years in prison, Edward gets a new start in the fishing village of Corea, Maine. Can a little girl and her mom, Bella, see beyond his past and can they all find love again...or will the ocean swallow them whole?

Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 290099
[Report This] Published: June 19, 2011 Updated: February 28, 2012

Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was excited to read a story set in coastal Maine. You started it with a bang, and I look forward to reading more! Is Corea down east? It sure sounds COLD in your story!


Someone Like You Banner

Edward Cullen travels back to Chicago to see his former lover, Isabella Swan, one last time on the eve of her wedding. O/S piece inspired by the Adele song, "Someone Like You." 

Alternate universe, all-human, canon pairs. 

Graphic sex, adult themes, some mild violence, a whole lotta angst, a sprinkling of fluff, and a slice of good old-fashioned lemony goodness. 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7273
[Report This] Published: January 28, 2012 Updated: February 13, 2012

Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Someone Like You

Wow -- thanks for all the time you took writing this. I can read your passion in every word. I have to tell you that this Bella is a first class b*tch. I hope that Jake gives her the boot and that Edward figures out she's a harpy and not worth all the thought he's given her all these years. Although maybe they deserve each other. They are not nice people, are they?



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