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Summary:

Not everything makes sense to us at first, but sometimes, the paradoxes in life are exactly what we never knew we needed. When Jasper and Edward and thrown together, into a dorm room no less, who are they to deny the twisted logic of fate?

Life is about to get a whole hell of a lot more interesting.

AH/Slash.

 

Thanks to Blueskyshymoon-olgameisterfunk for the banner, and S.Meadows for the blinkie!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 179659
[Report This] Published: October 03, 2009 Updated: September 21, 2011


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Edward & "the Incident"

Never read a story on the thread this beautifully written about a man's discovery of his true self. It's very sensitively done and not at all exploitative.

Author's Response:

Wow. Thanks! This was a lovely review. :)

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Edward & the Eyebrow Scar

It's really lovely the way you're letting their relationship unfold. Very beautifully and sensitively written.

Author's Response:

Why, thank you. This was a lovely review. :)

 
Summary:

Entry for "Les Femmes Noires" Challenge

Post-Breaking Dawn. EPOV. One-Shot.

"We have tomorrow, and the next day, and the next..."

The consequences of forever.

 

 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 12517
[Report This] Published: October 05, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2009


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Valediction

Ummm...I guess I don't understand. Are they finally together to DIE together? Beautifully written, but VERY confusing. I'll read others' comments and hope they will cast some light. Thanks for writing it!

 
Second Chances by lislar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 742]
Summary:

 

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Thank you to m81170 for the gorgeous banner! 

 

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 I love my new banner, made by itsanewday!  Thank you!

Renee is a mess and constantly on the move, dragging fifteen year old Bella around with her from one dump to another.  Her life takes a turn for the worst and Bella is sent to Forks to live with the father she never knew existed.  Charlie enrolls Bella into a support group to help her deal with her past.  The support group doesn’t just change her life, but her intense attraction to her mysterious doctor and their subsequent relationship indelibly shapes the course of her future.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: No Word count: 198415
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2009 Updated: March 12, 2012


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: An Ending and a Beginning

What a tragic life she's led so far. Poor Bella! Beautifully written!

 
Summary:

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Fates Colliding..

Bella Cullen has been alone for over a century, sure she'd never find her soul mate. What will happen once she meets him...but he's a 17-year-old human boy, and her singer? Will she give in to fate; will he continue loving her once he finds out what she is?

This story will be told from both points of view (POV). It will start off more or less similar to Twilight, but soon it will start heading into a different, lemony, intense direction.

Lemons will be upcoming, but have patience ;)

I reply to all my reviews and appreciate and cherish every single one of them.

This story is also on fanfiction.net of course. Come visit.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5434147/1/Also, you can find it in http://myvampfiction.net
http://myvampfiction.com/dungeon/viewstory.php?sid=175&warning=5

Follow me on Twitter http://twitter.com/runsatdawn and LJ http://runsatdawn.livejournal.com/ for teasers, updates, etc.


Outfits

Bella, Chapter 3, the hated outfit- http://www.polyvore.com/bellas_outfit_chapter/set?id=14300641
Bella, Chapter 4, Stalkerella- http://www.polyvore.com/bella_stalker/set?id=14462026


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 14473
[Report This] Published: October 15, 2009 Updated: December 03, 2009


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Green Eyes

This is a fun twist I hadn't read before. Looking forward to reading more. Thanks for writing it! (P.S. You do know that it's Masen, not Mansen, right? Mansen sounds a little too much like Charles Manson. Ugh.)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for pointing that out...ouch that was embarassing...

 
Summary:

Bella Swan would like to think she truly hates Edward Cullen. In fact, that's exactly what makes sex with him so damn good.

Rated a hard NC17 for one long lemon. COMPLETE. AH, AU, E/B.

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Enjoy:)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 42784
[Report This] Published: October 15, 2009 Updated: November 29, 2009


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: The List

Novel idea, and really well written. Looking forward to more!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed
Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: The Present

Really nice lead up to the BIG REVEAL in the next chapter (I think?)

 
Summary:

Bella is trapped in a loveless marriage with Edward Cullen - a man she hardly knows. When his father dies, Edward uproots them from their life in New York City and moves into his father's now-empty house in the heart of Colorado. Amidst the desolate, beautiful landscape Bella begins to realize that perhaps there is more to her cold, apathetic husband  than she thought.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 41782
[Report This] Published: October 16, 2009 Updated: January 31, 2010


Reviewer: nwalto Signed
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: The Storm

Oh my goodness, please end the agony! When are they going to be honest with each other? What is the secret pain he holds so close? Aaaarrrggghhh! :-)

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed
Date: January 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: The Box

OK, I thought that maybe with the blood and all, he was going to turn out to be a vamp ... but I guess that's not it.

This is so well written that I'm going to continue to look forward to updates, even though I can't understand at all where this is going ... ;-)

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed
Date: January 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Night

Oh she is so very lonely. I have no idea why he is so cold, remote and cruel. I hope you've come up with a suitable explanation! ;-)

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Welcome

Oh, my heart aches for the poor girl. This is so beautifully written.

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Dinner

This is painfully interesting. I can't stop reading it ... :-)

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Visit

I was hoping this would happen. Thanks for giving her a friend. Maybe A&J can help B&E overcome their boatload of issues. Beautiful and sensitively written!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: The Driveway

This is so well written, but almost painful to read, if you know what I mean. I was in a verbally and emotionally abusive marriage for 22 years, and it was just this crazy-making. I do hope that your insights into this behavior aren't from first-person knowledge. If they are, know that my thoughts are with you.

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed
Date: January 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Mother

You're a wonderful writer, but this is getting flat-out painful. I feel so desperately sorry for both of them. I'd like to send Bella some money so she could just leave him and start over. Could we start a little fund drive? No kidding...

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed
Date: January 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: The Fight

Still utterly painful to read. LIke picking at a scab until it hurts and bleeds. You DO have a lot of loyal readers. PLEASE help us and resolve this thing. Please?

 
Summary:

Bella is put into a position that she didn't expect to be in
foryears to come. How will the two men she loves the most handle the news?
"Contest entry for "I love 80's music" Contest"


Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7081
[Report This] Published: November 03, 2009 Updated: November 03, 2009


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Papa Don't Preach (One-Shot)

I've never read anything with this theme on Twilighted. You handled it beautifully.

 
Summary:

Bella and Edward are "buddies" and while Bella wants more, Edward pulls away every time she tries to make things more official.  Then one evening, she meets a tall, dark, handsome man out in a club, and he promises her everything she always wanted.  Will Bella take it, even if it's not with the person she thought it would be with?  And what will Edward do when his friend is suddenly no longer available?

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 36646
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2009 Updated: February 11, 2010


Reviewer: nwalto Signed
Date: December 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Ch 5: Conversations and Promises

Just found this story today. I hope you'll take it in the direction that she tells Edward to get lost and/or that she agrees to keep seeing him only without the sex part. He's got it too easy right now and that ticks me off. She's being used, big time!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed
Date: January 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Ch 9: History Repeats...

Thanks for updating so quickly!

Glad to see that (maybe) Bella's getting some backbone, but I'll believe it when you write it! ;-)

Sorry, still think that Edward's an a**. He has no business in a sexual relationship with Bella when he's lieing to her. And of course Tanya, being such a lowlife, probably got pregnant by someone else.

I'm going to stick by you since you're working so hard at this (and thanks for that), but I can't conjure up any love and affection for anyone but Alice and Jake... :-(

Author's Response:

Bella's backbone is coming, next chapter I believe...it's hard to change when you've been letting eveyrone walk all over you for so long!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed
Date: December 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Ch 6: New Beginnings?

I really appreciate your updating before Christmas, but am REALLY confused. Edward sounds like a totally different guy than the one you painted all the previous chapters. And when was he in Maine? Why would he visit Charlie if he and Bella weren't in a relationship?

Lucy, you got some 'xplaining to do! :-)

Author's Response:

Go back to chapter 2 (Unwanted memories)...Edward and Bella visited Charlie while they were dating, before things turned bad.

 

And isn't that how the world works -- people look one way from one person's perspective, and yet may be very different?  You'll just have to see...

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Ch 7: First Date

It's nice to meet a decent Jake in fan fiction! She probably won't end up with him (most readers like E&B, I know) but please don't break his heart!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed
Date: December 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Ch 8: Reflections and Surprises

I appreciate all your hard work in writing this, but I still think that this Edward is a class A a**hole. And Bella is still acting like a doormat. Jake needs to step up to the plate, and fast!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Ch 10: Ready for More

THANK YOU! I'm so proud of Bella! And Edward's bonkers if he doesn't ask for a paternity test. If he can't do it now, he needs to do it right after Junior is born. Tanya's a manipulative b**ch!

 
A Betting Man by mybluesky Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2594]
Summary:

A Betting Man 

Now Complete!

Just two weeks before her best friend's wedding Bella gets dumped by boyfriend James when she refuses to give him what he wants. The next night she discovers he's made a bet with gorgeous pal Edward Cullen that he can't bed her. She brilliantly decides to string Edward along for a few weeks...and subsequently land herself a hot date for the wedding. Things soon get very interesting...

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 166948
[Report This] Published: December 08, 2009 Updated: September 13, 2010


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

You're doing a great job on this. LIke how you've brought Emmett in to give her inside info. looking forward to reading more!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Love that you've gotten Alice involved. It will ramp up the tension!

 




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