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Summary:

Edward Cullen was horny, and wanted a fuck. And he would get it by all means. But what happens when a mysterious brown-eyed girl comes along? Will he still have the same mindset as before? Or will she change his life forever?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 13434
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2009 Updated: January 07, 2010


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The New Girl

Starting to sound like it'll be fun to read. Please update soon!

Author's Response:

I'll try!

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

 
Summary:

For a limited time only:  Lessons in the Art of Seduction for the Supernatural! Bella and the girls own a sex store. What happens when Bella gets tricked into giving Edward sex lessons? AU-Canon Couples.  OOC, Smut, Bad language.


Categories: AU, Crackfic Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 5694
[Report This] Published: April 12, 2009 Updated: April 26, 2009


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Grand Opening

Funny and original. Looking forward to reading more as you write it!

 
Summary:

Edward leaves Bella, much like the beginning of 'New Moon', however, this time, they are all human and there is quite the twist.  Why did Edward leave Bella?  And what secret is Bella keeping when he leaves?

Can they make a nightmare turn into a dream?

THANKS TO EMERALD_ROSALIE FOR THE ABOVE BANNER AND ATHENALOVE FOR THE BELOW.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes Word count: 155064
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: August 05, 2010


Reviewer: nwalto Signed
Date: December 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 52: Epilogue the First - Pink Tutus and Blue Velvet

How beautiful! One year was the perfect amount of time! I can't imagine a more-HEA than this one!

Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it! 

 

Happy New Year!

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed
Date: November 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46 - Equals

That's one smart Dad. Really well written and 100% in character. Well done!

Author's Response:

Charlie is such an amazing guy!  I'm really glad you think I got him right.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

OK - I've been reading with great interest for weeks, and now FINALLY am compelled to write. PLEASE have the baby be OK, and of course Bella, too. Otherwise I can't imagine how they cut put Humpty Dumpty together again ... Please update soon. We're dying, here!

Author's Response:

I promise, no harm will befall our wee Cullen!  Just try and have faith!

Thank you for the review!!!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

Aaaaarrrggghhh! Please... need update ...

Author's Response:

LOL!  I submitted it last night.  Thank you for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

Oh, thank you so much. But really, we CANNOT wait for the B&E reunion ...

Author's Response: They will meet again in chapter 23, but it may nor be what you expect. Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

I've been desperate for the resolution of this story, but think you did absolutely the right thing with this chapter. What a fantastic way to bring the families together.

But NOW -- pu-leeze bring Bella back from the brink of death. We're dying out here!

Author's Response:

The resolution is a ways off yet, but it will come!  You will have news of Bella in the next chapter!

Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

I love your story and your writing is so sensitive and beautiful. I kind of have my fingers crossed that you won't feel the need to track through every supporting character's reactions to things. Maybe you could save those for "out-takes" later on or something. It's been 20+ chapters (I think) with Bella in medical crisis, and iyour readers' emotions are getting raw! Please pull B&E back together (with her conscious) soon! Love ya!

Author's Response: No, you will only get each scene from one POV. It will move forward. Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32 - Classics

EXACTLY! Terrific, completely in canon reasoning and conversation. Plus so much fun to read!

But (as usual), I'm impatient for the BIG REVEAL! Love this so much!

Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

THANK YOU for bringing her out of the coma -- you're right, we've been impatient for the BIG REUNION!

I know it's been your approach, but we'd be SO GRATEFUL if you would wait only a few chapters for the BIG ONE. So Angela's next, and Charlie probably after that, but PLEASE (begging you here), make it E after that ... not Alice+Jasper, not Esme, etc. You'll of course want to write us about all of their reactions and reunions, but LATER, please!!!
(Do you sense the desperation here?)

Love the story and your wonderful writing!

Author's Response:

I will give you this - their first sight of each other, and it is a TOUGH scene - is chapter 41.

There are a few things that have to happen first.  And she needs to work up to Edward.  But trust me, I've already written it and it's worth it.

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44 - Fight

Looks like Edward was hiding under the bed when the brains were passed out in that family! Great advice from everyone!

Author's Response:

Aw, poor Daddyward.  Remember, he's a terrified, guilt-ridden teenager.  I think a lot of boys would be having a hard time figuring this one out....

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49 - The Vase

Simply lovely. Beautifully crafted, and utterly believable with the way you have painted these characters all these months.

Thank you so very much!

Author's Response:

Wow, I am so grateful for your comments!

 

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50 - My Forever

Utterly wonderful. Thanks for ending it so poignantly, so softly, with so much hope. And thanks so much for the many hours you've spent dreaming this story and committing it to words. If you every aspire to be published, I pray you will be!

Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  I am honoured that you think that I could actually publish.  Thank you.

 

Have a wonderful holiday!

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Summary: Feature

AU version of the "New Moon" reunion scene. Bella is not quite as quick to accept Edward's explanation for his actions in leaving her.

 
Banner credit goes to addicttwilight2, who is the most awesome person on the planet!!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 45075
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2009 Updated: June 30, 2009


Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Awakening

Good for her! You really nailed it re: what any rational person would have done!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much -- glad you think so!! :)

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Seeing Through You

You go, girl!

 
The Monster and I by someone Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 483]
Summary:

A darker romance. Searching for balance and trust, Edward and Bella negotiate a tangled web of sex, blood, secrets, kink, and demons from the past. NOT CANON-STYLE VAMPIRES. Very, very AU. Much lemons, violence, and dark and dominant Edward. 

PLEASE BE WARNED that I intend this to be an unapologetically smut-tastic fic with some S&M and D/s-ish lemons in later chapters.  

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 50402
[Report This] Published: April 22, 2009 Updated: January 21, 2011


Reviewer: nwalto Signed
Date: May 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Cold and Hot

oooooooo - THAT was interesting! Looking forward to MORE!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed
Date: May 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Revelations and Invitations

Oh, ho, ho! So THAT's where this is going. You naughty girl! I'll keep reading, don't worry!

Author's Response:

*Hangs head*  Yes, I should probably be punished ;p  Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed
Date: May 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: You Just Might Get It

It's about time someone released the monster! What a guilty pleasure!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Mr. Darcy and Mr. Hyde

Very interesting and original. Also a little scary -- thanks for that!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much! 

 
The Hunter by kaybebaby Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 688]
Summary:

When Catherine Hardwicke hires a young, unknown actor to play the lead in her new vampire movie "Twilight," Kristen Stewart is convinced from the start that something is not quite right about him. The team laughs off her bizarre theories - but what if she is right? What if the actor playing Edward Cullen is just pretending to be Robert Pattinson? What if the true identity of this man is not that of a young aspiring actor from London, but something completely different - an ancient Transylvanian vampire on the prowl for revenge and blood?


Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Peter Facinelli, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 102578
[Report This] Published: April 28, 2009 Updated: December 08, 2009


Reviewer: nwalto Signed
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Poor Kristen. She IS better off without him, though. At least now he has found peace. Thanks so much for your wonderful story!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is REALLY interesting. And so well written. It had ME squirming, I'll tell you!

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow, this is really compelling! A totally new take on so many aspects of the Twi Universe! How fun to think of Rob himself as the villain!

Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your encouragement!! Am flattered you enjoy this story! Thanks for taking the time to review - much appreciated. x

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

A fascinating and original story. One of my faves on the site!

Author's Response:

Hi nwalto,

thank you for your lovely comments - that's very flattering to hear! I hope you will continue to enjoy my story - keep in touch! :) x

 
Reviewer: nwalto Signed
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Thanks for explaining why you took this route. While part of me wanted a HEA, most of me understands that the guy was tortured, and that wouldn't change if he turned Bella and/or just lived out his life with her. Staking him provides his own HEA. So way to go for your courage!

Please don't make her get back with her old BF, though. He was pathetic (how you wrote him, anyway). Maybe she'll take a second look at Taylor ;-)

 




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