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Penname: mscope [Contact]
Real name: sandra
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Summary:

One Christmas, Alice and Rosalie invite Bella to join them and their boyfriends on a vacation at Lake Tahoe.  Little does Bella know that Emmett and Jasper have cajoled Edward into going along as well.  Will it be a Christmas to Remember or a Christmas they both wish to forget?

Rating due to Emmett's and Rosalie's foul language and lemons.

Part II (Fool Me Once, Fool Me Twice) has started.  I cannot disclose the summary because it may give away the ending to the first part.

christmas


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 44210
[Report This] Published: December 19, 2008 Updated: January 18, 2011


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: We Played and Joked

Ah, Edward, Bella no sense in fighting fate.

Sooner or later our love fated friends will have to concede that the Pixie Chick is right.  In the meantime I am enjoying this fluffy story immensely!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: We Skied the Slopes (Sort of)

When Bella snuggled herself into bed with Alice and Jasper I began laughing and I'm still laughing.  But I really like how they are liking each other and wondering how the other feels.

FanFiction is so much fun and I enjoy all genres but I have to tell you, it's the fluffy stories that truly capture my heart.  Happy and fluffy make for a great escape!

Sandra

 
Summary:

This is a one shot companion piece for My Sacrifice.  This is from Charlie's POV and covers the time Bella and Edward visit Forks during Fall Break.  It does include the fishing trip Charlie and Edward took.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2522
[Report This] Published: December 24, 2008 Updated: December 24, 2008


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: A Father's Sacrifice One Shot

How fun to read was that!  Loved that Charlie let Edward know that he has guns and would be able to hide the body...still laughing!   The best though was Edwards reaction and telling Charlie how much he loved Bella and wants to marry her.  I haven't read "My Sacrifice" yet....this just pushed it a little higher on the "to read" list!



Author's Response:

It was a blast to write.  I think Charlie's speech about his guns and hiding his body was my favorite part.  I got all teary writing Edward's feelings.  I'm glad this pushed "My Sacrifice" higher on your "to read" list.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 
Summary:

"Carlisle, I'm 103 years old. Do you really think I need to be getting the sex talk from you?"


Categories: Twilight Characters: Carlisle, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1554
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2009 Updated: January 15, 2009


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Talk

I saw your little story click thingy on one of the threads and with the click of a button read your little one shot.  With a smile and giggle and frequent nod as I read I could see both sides of the conversations.  But more than the topic of discussion, I liked the moment between Edward and Carlisle.  Thank you for sharing this with us.

Sandra



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks! So glad you liked it!

 
Summary:

Ever since she can remember, Bella Swan has spent Christmas with the Cullens. Ever since she can remember, Christmas has been full of strange Edward-related complications that remain unresolved year after year. Last Christmas, it seemed like their strange affair had finally ended. Bella is keen to resolve her "relationship" and move on with life. But will her feelings remain the same, especially after she finds out that Edward has a new introduction to make?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 60805
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2009 Updated: August 26, 2009


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: prologue

You've got my attention!  Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Yes, just read your response on FF.net :) Glad you're enjoying it.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: prologue

OMG!  I had started this story on ff a while back and somehow it fell off alert and well just imagine my joy to find it over here at Twilighted!

So she finally tells him she loves him!  I generally hate Tanya in the stories!  I was non too pleased with Tanya here either, but, but she had a hand in bringing Edward and Bella together so hey I'm glad she was here to help.

And it looks like the Cullen Clan and Bella will get their Merry Christmas after all!

Sandra



Author's Response:

yes i remember... i wondered where you went ;)

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: March 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

It is said, Good things come to those that wait.  Will things ever work out for our favorite couple?   lol.

 
Summary:

 

Edward loves Bella, but he's the 'best friend.'

Will he ever get over his insecurities that he feels about telling her how much he loves her?
Or will he just be the best friend for the rest of his life?
Rated for later chapters, and Cannon pairings later on.
EXB fic.

AH very OOC.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 11216
[Report This] Published: January 14, 2009 Updated: July 22, 2009


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: March 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So she does want to be with Edward. How sad.  Will you bring them together?



Author's Response:

yes, I will.

Thanks for the review~

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: March 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Is it safe to say Bella looks pissed because she saw the girl leave?  So sweet that she heard him in her sleep.  Too bad she doesn't know ... yet.



Author's Response:

ah, I hadn't thought of that... Maybe.

:D i know... =/.

thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: March 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh crap James is back in the picture.  Does that mean we will see Tanya as well?



Author's Response:

Yes it does. :P

Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: March 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I hope he is not too drunk to remember this.   Or apologize so profusely that she thinks he is sorry it happened.

And I'm glad James has been arrested.  Will we see more of him?

 



Author's Response:

He still remembers. Oh, that could be a possibility too.

Yes, we will.

Thanks for reading :) and thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: March 12, 2009 Title: I Love My Best Friend

These two need to sit down and have a serious talk.  I guess it's a given we will see more of Tanya now.  Are we sure the child is Edward's?

It's quite clever how you answer the question from the previous chapter only to leave us with a new question.  I also like that the chapters are short and to the point makes reading a whole lot simpler!



Author's Response:

They do, don't they. Possibly, or we won't see tanya at all.

XD thanks!

and thanks for the review!

 
Summary:

Bella Swan always thought she hated Edward Cullen, until she spends an afternoon with him that changes her mind. After that fateful outing their relationship blooms and she falls for him. When they spend a night together and he leaves without a word, can Bella ever mend her broken heart and prove to Edward that she doesn't need him? 

 

Warning! slightly OOC, It's a B/E story-usual pairings but there is some B/OC too, and rated NC-17 for crude language, underage drinking/smoking and smut in later chapters.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 28027
[Report This] Published: January 14, 2009 Updated: February 26, 2009


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6-The Great Cullen Caper.

Ah, to be young and in love for the 1st time again ::sigh::!  I'm getting pretty excited for Jasper's entrance.  Alice is not going to know what hit her?  Or will it be the other way around!  

I am enjoying this story immensely.  Thank you for sharing it with us!

Sandra



Author's Response:

:)

A bit of both... actually.

thank you.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Wake Me Up When It's Over.

I kinda like this - you get rid of Jake and Tanya at the same time!  I know that Bella can handle herself where Jake is concerned.  But will Edward be able to stay clear of Tanya in this story?  I know, I'm jumping the gun.  And dammit I was not even going to start another story!



Author's Response:

*grining* Hmmm... we will just have to see.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- What I Least Expected

Oh no, Tanya doesn't even plan on being at that sleep over does she?  Things went very well for Edward and Bella as they sat talking.  It seem that the guy has a thuing for our fair maiden.  The cards aren't bvery well stacked in his favor though ... what with Emmett and Rose and Alice.  I still can't shake the bad feeling I have about Tanya!  You know, you could prove me wrong!



Author's Response:

oh...you don't know the half of the cards being stacked against him...poor guy.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Wake Me Up When It's Over.

In response to your response ~ I have a feeling you're not going to prove me wrong where Tanya is concerned!  You're evil!  Evil is good, I like evil!  I am so read for this!



Author's Response:

Oh. :D Hehe... well, I would like to say that my characters have layers (most of them anyway). Everyone (and I do mean everyone) is redeemable. Thank you for considering me evil though... I'll take it  :D

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-Hook, Line and Sinker.

I'm finally catching up after 7 days of power following and ice storm.  I had forgotten how much I like this story. 

Well Tanya played with fire and got burned.  She was lucky that Bella took her back in.   Then had the nerve to talk to Bella about Edward's "the talk"?  All I can say is se is not very good BFF material.  I sure hope she doesn't plan on making a play for Edward in the future.

Emmett really surprised me that he is okay with his sister dating Edward.  Of course it is to his benefit - with it in the open he is better able to keep and eye on things.  Is Alice going to meet Jasper any time soon?  Looking forward to the dance!  

Love what you've done with each of the characters.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

In a few chapters we have a once in this story change of POV and we get an Emmett POV... lets just say he sees... a lot

And I am so glad someone noticed the lack of Jasper! And yes he is coming but it's still about oh... 7 chapters away. As soon as I get chapter 6 back I'll post it and I am working on 7 now. Jasper has an entrance and what an entrance it is :D

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7-Place Your Bets.

Erm, not that I'm anxious or anything, but I'm getting as excited for Jaspers arrival as Alice.  Maybe he'll be at the Halloween party? ;o)

The talk between Bella and Emmett in the beginning of the chapter made be laugh.  I mean what is a big brother for?  He spoke so candidly wth her.  My big brother would have ripped the guys arms off, no we never had those talks!  I also laughed later when he gave her the box of condoms.  But I have to ask ~ does Edward have an std?  Is that why he won't let them go to first base?  Back in chapter 2 Bella mentions this to Jacob regarding Tanya.  So I' thinkin maybe Edward got something there?  Am I grasping at straws here? 

Loved that Edward called and asked to take Bella to school and that they are a regular couple now.  Loved 20 questions.  And when he told her she should  listen to Alice I even had the urge to write Mrs. Bella Cullen in the margins of my notebook - with glitter gel pens I might add.  And to share the moose story, hell I think I am in love with your Edward myself!  Later  when he did say he loved her - Be.Still.My.Heart.!  

Ah the days of young love!

Sandra

 



Author's Response:

Um... Lets just say Jasper will appear in chapter 12. He already has quite the entrance IF I do say so myself.

And I will say this, NO Edward does not have an STD although you know I think Emmett was trying to imply that stuff. LOL His reason for not sleeping with her is partially selfish actually. He's been threatened with something... (Aww damn said to much)

And I so love my Edward as well. Totes love him, he's awesome, I go through periods of really wanting to smack my Bella upside the head though.

:) thanks for reviewing.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Wake Me Up When It's Over.

Thank You for responding to the std question.....Whew!  I put that question in there and removed it several times before submitting the review.   That is the last time I read between the lines of anything Emmett says! 

Sandra



Author's Response:

Yes...Except for chapter 10... srsly Emmett is the stuff in that Chapter. :D he's got his A game in that one.

 
Summary:

It was a moment of deliciously impaired judgment.

Bella thought she would never see her one-night stand again.

She was wrong.

E/B AH


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 57020
[Report This] Published: January 15, 2009 Updated: July 15, 2010


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: You Dirty Little Mink

I don't think I'll ever be able to use a coat check again!  So wild. so out of character for each of them.  And I have a feeling out of character for the story as well!  Was Bella also jilted?  O.M.G. did Tanya leave Edward for Bella's ex?  Is that why she would seek Edward?  Or was it random?  Bella's behavior really has my imagination in overdrive!

Even though we are left with more questions than answers I love how you can tell a complete chapter in so few words.  And just like that ::snaps fingers:: the patient wait  for the next chapter begins.

Sandra



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Lots is explained in the next chapter.....and some revelations come in further ones.  It should be up soon, so you will not have to be patient for much longer :-)

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: I've Got You Under My Skin

Poor Bella!  What was Edward thinking!  Actually I feel bad for him as well.   The proposal there at the dinner was a pretty desperate measure.  At least he sent the text of apology, but I don't know, that could have been like adding slat to a wound.  And why does Tanya have to be so damn nice! 

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: There Is No Such Thing As a Prince Charming

Oh wow, poor Bella.  And Edward feels bad but how in the hell will he be able to fix this?  And it is even worse now after the run in with Jake!



Author's Response:

To be honest, this is a situation that can never really be "fixed".  What they can do, though, is come to an understanding and live with that.  Both Bella and Edward are pretty messed up in this story, so I don't really think that the perfect fix is in their reach.  Still, though, they will get their happy ending.  I promise :-)

Make sure to check out the forum for next chapter's teaser!

Thanks for the review!!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Three Strikes

NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A day late and a dollar short.  She can't be leaving, she just can't.  What ever will Edward do?  How will he get past this?  What if he is so distressed and gets into surgery and removes the wrong body part?  Will he be able to find her?  Will she stay in town? 

I'm really glad that Jake is out of Bella's life and I hope it will stay that way.  And it kind of sucks that your Tanya seems to be a genuinely good person.  But that break up was inevitable regardless of whether Edward and Bella get together right away or not.

Will Tanya run into Bella anytime in the near future?  Will she be the one to explain the broken engagement?   Will Tanya have a hand in getting Edward and Bella back together? 

Questions!  You've given us another great chapter and all I have to give you are questions!  However, the more I read of this story the more I like it!

Sandra

 

 

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: You really are messed up, you know that?

"That isn't a hospital."  "It sounds like one."  That was really, really funny!  *  I am so glad he found her and I hope she doesn't wait.  *  Great Chapter!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Bible Thumping Whore

Yes it was short   ~  short and sweet!  I was just happy that he could not stay away!

And never apologize for real life!

Sandra

 

 




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