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Penname: mscope [ Contact]
Real name: sandra
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Member Since: May 18, 2008
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Summary: What's the farthest thing from The Cleavers? The Cullens. How will Bella fair being a human, in a house full of vampires, with a past that might come back to bite her? 
Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Word count: 49288
[Report This] Published: May 25, 2008 Updated: January 02, 2009
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: July 08, 2008
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
So Ding, Dong the witch is gone -- for now anyway. I really like this story with Bella already a part of it.
Author's Response: For now, yes. I cant promise i won't bring her back...it was to much fun. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: August 02, 2008
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
"In My Life", a Beatles song, is from the Rubber Soul album in 1965. This album was considered by many to be the turning point for this amazing group of musicians. It was at this time that they left the top 40 hit parade behind and began their journey to change the world of rock and roll. I find it very interesting and somewhat profound that you would choose this song for Edward to make a declaration of sorts with Bella, like the tide is turning. Did you intend this? Rather ironic, huh?!
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: August 02, 2008
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Eenie, Meenie, Miney, Mo, Rocky Horror Picture Show...... *Stops reading ~ switches over to UTube ~ sings and sways while watching Rocky Intro ~ Rises from chair in front of computer ~ Dances the Time Warp ~ Returns to seat - Resumes story* Thank you for a great story and fun walk down a path of my past!
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: August 02, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wow! I did not see that coming! I sure hope you will update soon!
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: August 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
SLINKY DOO! I love the humor of this story. Emmett and Jasper really are the perfect brothers.
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 06, 2008
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Ah, finally! Love this story!
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 22, 2011
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
When I began reading fanfiction I had no idea I could get an update notice so I kept a journal of all the stories I was reading and what chapter had updated. Somewhere along to the line I stopped keeping the list of stories. Imagine my surprise when I found it yeaterday. I was so excited to see that Follow You Into the Dark had been completed! So I have finished. As I read I couldn't help but laugh and the more I read the more I remembered how I laughed as the story was being written,
Thank you so much for sharing this story with us. I enjoyed these last three chapter as much as I did the rest of the story when I read it 2 1/2 years ago.
Sandra
Summary: "This is what his love did to her. Just when it all seemed remotely possible—normal, even—something happened to make it all too much. Too good. As the small, cruel voice in her head began to say, 'Too good to be true,' she felt a pair of now-familiar arms envelop her." This fluffy little one-shot takes place during Bella and Edward's visit to see Renee. I'm not sure if it can/should be categorized as AU. Disclaimer: I do not own Twilight, but I do own a grey scarf.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Renee
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 3015
[Report This] Published: May 25, 2008 Updated: May 29, 2008
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: June 19, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Intertwined
What a wonderful piece of fluff! Ah, destiny!!!!
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2008 Updated: May 28, 2008
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: June 16, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Thunder
You are one of my favorite authors in this genre. You capture the characters so well and I look forward to your insight. I hope you will continue to write on this board!
Author's Response: Thanks- you always give me such nice reviews! And luckily, I'm about to grant your wish! I've got two more stories already written, both 1000 words, one from Jacob's point of view, the other from Carlisle's. They should be posted very soon. Again, thank you. I love reviews. They're my brand of heroin. ;)
Summary:  Alice and Rosalie decide to take Bella to Vegas for a bachelorette party against her will. The boys feeling leftout, decide to get themselves into a little trouble too. 1st fanfict I wrote many moons ago... f
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Word count: 38331
[Report This] Published: May 29, 2008 Updated: May 30, 2008
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: June 01, 2008
Title: Chapter 19: The Gift the Keeps on Giving..
Your vampire gift is that of humor. "One of these days I'll get my self respect back......." That is one of the funniest lines I have ever read. It took 4 days but I have finally finished everything you have written on this site and one other. Your one liners are the absoluite best. I'm not sure I will be able to read the more dramatic stories again. Thank you for sharing with us!
Summary: AU, all human. Edward and Emmett are attorneys in Carlisle's law firm, Cullen Law Offices, PSC. They have had really bad luck trying to find a paralegal to work with, and finally take matters into their own hands and call a temp agency. Alice and Rose run a temp to hire agency and recommend their friend Bella for the position when Emmett calls. Bella is a recent graduate and is having a hard time finding a position because of her lack of experience.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 46395
[Report This] Published: May 30, 2008 Updated: May 21, 2009
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: June 15, 2008
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Denial
More*More*More* I'm going to enjoy watching this one play out!
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: July 05, 2008
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I really like this story ..... alot! Will they still steal away after 30 minutes?!!! I love the whole Bella/Edward chemistry. It's going to be fun to watch the sparks fly when they realize they are there to meet each other. What will be Alice and Emmett's reaction? Will Jasper and Rosalie wonder what the hell is going on? This is going to be alot of fun! Is there anything I can do to help get the next chapter up, like tomarrow? Jeez - Louise, I love the au-human category. Of course I'll take Edward any way I can get him!
Summary: Edward Cullen, just finished his senior year in highschool, decides to spend his summer vacation in Phoenix, Arizona. He's not expecting much - all he wants is to get away from the gossiping residents of Forks. He's certainly not expecting the beautiful girl next door. But can he trust her? After he's already been hurt once? And how much can three little months really change? AU All Human. Canon pairings. 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No
Word count: 30394
[Report This] Published: June 01, 2008 Updated: February 21, 2009
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: June 13, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
This one story has real potential! Hope you don't make us wait too long for more!
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: August 17, 2008
Title: Chapter 9: Inevitable
this story has everything that i have come to enjoy in the au-human genre of twilight stories. I have faith in yur ability to bring bella and edward together. In the meantime i enjoy their journey thru your eyes. Emmett and Rosalie and Alice and Jasper are providing a fun sense of comedy.
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 06, 2008
Title: Chapter 10: Decision
Hmmmmm....Roasalie's? Definately looking for to the next update! Really like this story ... a lot!
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 09, 2008
Title: Chapter 11: Like a Morning Fog
Silly Edward.....His youth and lack of maturity certainly came thru in this chapter.....poor kid! Edward is so unsure of himself right now. And Bella, that child has no idea what is going thru Edward's mind. I'm wondering who the pregnancy test belongs to - Rose maybe?
Summary: A vignette about Emmett McCarty, his life from a human to a vampire and how he struggles with the most deadly of sins: envy. 
Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Emmett
Challenges: Series: The Seven Deadly Sins
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2946
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2008 Updated: June 09, 2008
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: June 16, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Beautifully written! It shows a deeper aspect of the love Emmett and Rosalie share. I do like your original concept and hope you will complete thi idea. Thank you for sharing! Author's Response: Thankyou very much for your review. I've just broken up from school for the summer, so I might consider continuing the 'Sin Series' once I've written a bit more of my chapter fic.
Summary: After watching Bella at a salon, Edward decides to wash Bella's hair for her. Squeaky clean hair, slightly dirty Edward.
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1288
[Report This] Published: June 08, 2008 Updated: June 08, 2008
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: June 18, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Sometimes the tender moments like this are the best!
Summary: Edward’s out hunting. Alice is on her way over to see Bella, but leaves a cryptic message ordering Bella to stay inside the house. Alice’s visions can spot danger before it happens…and of course, Bella always does what she’s told. Doesn’t she?
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes
Word count: 74273
[Report This] Published: June 09, 2008 Updated: August 29, 2008
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: July 05, 2008
Title: Chapter 8: All my fault
The more you write, the more enthralled I become with your story. I'm hooked!
Summary: 
Four years after Edward left Bella in the forest; Bella is finally moving forward with her life but it is someone from her past that helps her truly heal and obtain the future that she was always meant to have.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 51 Completed: Yes
Word count: 167857
[Report This] Published: June 11, 2008 Updated: August 14, 2009
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: June 18, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
OMG! This is going to be so good!
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: June 19, 2008
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
This is excellent! Already I anxiously await the next chapter. Please make it soon!
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: June 29, 2008
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Oh no, it did not just end right there! This is a real good story and I look forward to more! Please update soon!
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: July 08, 2008
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I am so glad Bella sat and talked with Jasper. Ironically as I was winding down with this chapter "Moody Blues - Lovely to See You" came on. A bit unnerving but appropriate that as I reading the last few lines I'm hearing .....Lovely to see you again my friend walk along with me to the next bend Gave me the chills!
Summary: Bella and Edward break the news to Charlie and Renee of their engagement. I wrote this a while back, and it ended up paralleling part of Chapter 1 of Breaking Dawn. Here's how I saw it happening 8-) A one-shot in Bella's voice.
Categories: AU, Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward, Renee
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2576
[Report This] Published: June 11, 2008 Updated: June 11, 2008
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: June 14, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Verbal Engagement
Your story is well written and I liked the approach you took in dealing with each parent.
Author's Response: Thanks! Different from SM, but hopefully fun, none the less! Thanks for reading and reviewing! blondie
Summary: The conversation between Rosalie and Edward regarding Bella's 'suicide' has tainted intentions. "It is fighting dirty, and Rosalie Hale is nothing if not clean."
Categories: New Moon Characters: Edward, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1297
[Report This] Published: June 11, 2008 Updated: July 03, 2008
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: July 05, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: And All the Men and Women Merely Players
I like that this is an original POV of the relationship between Edward/Rosalie. It definitely shows her darker side. I don't necessarily like it in that it takes from the "fairy tale" that I love so much, BUT, it certainly gives me something to think about!
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