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Penname: mscope [Contact]
Real name: sandra
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Summary:

Edward's family hire Bella Swan to break the heartbreaker's heart in hopes to have him see the error of his womanizing ways. Bella realizes that they have a little too much in common and is having a little too much fun with this subject. EXB Lots of lemons later.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 43 Completed: Yes Word count: 322353
[Report This] Published: October 21, 2008 Updated: September 13, 2011


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Wanking Wednesday

So Edward how do you think dinner will go with your folks and your love?  I love that he is calling her that now.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Touchdown Thursday

What a predicament.  Was that as much fun to write as it was to read?

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Falling Friday

This was the best chapter yet!  I laughed - a lot - in the beginning.  I love that Edward is jealous.  Thank you for sharing some Edward history with us.  It gives a whole new depth to his character.  You have a great knack for "taming" Edward and making us fall in love with him!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Serious Sunday

Susan Blake?  Emmett Mccarty?  To find out after all these years that they were one anothers first was far too cute.

And the intervention ... wow.  I guess Jordan will be up and out of that chair in no time. I can not fathom how hard that would be.  Hopefully they will be able to pick up the pieces and move on.

Edward has certainly become a different man since this story began.  I can certainly see where everything is going to work out fine now.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: The Good

Enjoyed the chapter immensely.  So much fun!  And yes I did google the chair!  And yes I caught all of the "our" references and the toothbrush!  I pretty much roared when Bella called Alice a shrimp puff...that was funny.   This story has been so much fun.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: The Bad

Oh, Edward, NOOOOOOOO!  He can't leave her like this, he just can't.  She's too vulnerable right now.  What happened to the "My heart seems to be a few steps ahead of my head."?  Certainly his heart is not telling him to leave her.

::deep breath::  Okay.  It's under control.  Miss E their future is in your hands.  Uh, just how ugly is "The Ugly" going to get?

Keeping the faith.....Sandra

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: The Ugly

Okay, so this wasn't so ugly.  It wasn't exactly pretty with all the angst but it could have been a whole hell of a lot worse.  Well things are not very pretty for Daniel right now and his wife.  And not so good for Bella either in that she probably blames herself.  Well and for Edward either since he probably blames himself for leaving Bella.  Oh hell, it just got ugly ok <said with sarcasm!

Despite the fact that Edward had been a slug's sac in trying to distance himself from Bella he was there for her in the end.  Hopefully he will stay now.

Love.This.Chapter.

Sandra

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: I Need You

Great Chapter!  Loved the Rob Thomas part...both of my sons look like a younger Rob Thomas...people actually ask for thier autographs!

I actually felt bad for Edward when he realized there aren't many place he can go without girls knowing who he is...That is I felt bad when I finished laughing.  Reminds me of an old saying, "Life is like a jalapeno.  What you do today could bite your ass tomorrow."  Yes, Edward is fucked everywhere he goes!

Love this story - Thanx for sharing it with us!

Sandra

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: March 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Eye of the Storm

Loved the chapter!  Loved the ring!  Loved the panties and Thanksgiving dinner with Carlisle and Esme...laghed...a lot!  Loved the concert...loved him playing piano for her...he was sure jealous!  Felt really bad about the DVD that he found...really, really bad.  8o(  It's just that he was so very happy.  I have to trust that all will be well.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: March 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: The Gala

I feel really bad for Bella.  No one should have to endure this type of treatment.  It's bad enough to be manhandled  but to act like nothing is wrong all day long and then to verbally humiliate her in front of family and friends was deplorable.  I will not defend his treatment of her.

On the other hand had Bella come clean this could have been avoided.  Edward must feel he had been humiliated by his family.  And worse than that the woman he loves.  He was ready for a lifelong commitment and must also feel betrayal.

What a fine mess this is.  Oh what a tangled web we weave, When first we practise to decieve!  Sir Walter Scott.

 

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: March 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Black

Finally finished catching up.  Right about now Edward has to know that Bella really loves him.  And Bella has to miss him too.  They need to sit down, have a nice long talk and reconnect a little slower. 

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: August 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: A Day in the Life of Dr. Swan

Edward has got to be thinking his woman has the best profession in the world!  Well part of the time anyway.

 
Loss by MuffNbutter Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

"I'll love you forever, no matter what," I always said.
"I know. Nothing can ever come between us and nothing will ever make us forget our love for each other. That's not a promise, Bella, that's a fact," he always replied.

They were born to be best friends, and born to love each other forever. But when tragedy strikes, will Bella remember that love will survive through all? Will she be able to learn how to live without the one who taught her how to love in the first place? Can love be found again, after it's  been ripped away so suddenly?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2325
[Report This] Published: October 23, 2008 Updated: October 24, 2008


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Loss

That happened to one of my best friends many years ago  so this story pretty much ripped my heart out.Thank you for being so true to Jacob.



Author's Response:

I'm so sorry that you can relate to the story, honey. But I also want to thank YOU for appreciating how I portrayed Jacob. Once again, I'm terribly sorry for your loss, and I'm not sure whether your saying that your friend had a loved one die on them (for which I'd hope that the friend in question found their own Edward Cullen ^.^) or if you mean your friend was killed via hit and run (for which I can say I relate as well... and let us eat ice cream in our pajamas together to bond/mourn over this), but either way, I feel for you, my dear.

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Loss

Response to Authors Note ~ I had just put a scoop of ice cream in the bowl and sat down to read my e-mail Is that like the Twilight Zone or what? 

He was killed by a drunk driver on his way home from the wedding rehearsal the night before the wedding 37 years ago.

Several years later she married, get this, the older brother of one of the BFF's in our circle of friends!  They were married 28 years when she died of a stroke in her sleep.

She was one of those that attracted Murphy's Law but no matter how bad she always bounced back and was an inspiration to everyone around her. She was one of those people that not only loved life, she lived life.  I lovingly remember her best as an angel on earth! 



Author's Response:

Lol! I got myself some ice cream, too! cheers to great minds thinking alike! *clinks ice cream spoon*

oh wow, that's sad. My story isn't quite as bad, just more like my best friend's cousin who I was closer to than most other people, and he was murdered in a hit and run. I still smile whenever I see a shopping cart, remembering how he had pushed me in one when we were messing around at the store and he knocked it over and i had the lines of the cart bruised into my skin for a week hahaha

But wow... I'm glad she found someone else, and that's so ironic! I think that it's a nice thing to have someone who was close to both you and the person you loved there for you later on in life. In a way it's like its less of a replacement because that person can appreciate and miss the lost loved one as well, AND you know that the loved one would approve because they were friends. So yeah. I'm happy that the situation worked out well, and that when she passed, it was peacefully, and she got to live her life to the fullest before that happened.

 
Never Again by kARLOTITA09 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

My entry for the "DIRTY TALKING EDWARD CONTEST" over at ff.net

Edward learns that Bella doesn't want him to hold back, can he really let go and let Bella see every side of him? Please R&R!! :D


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5522
[Report This] Published: October 25, 2008 Updated: October 26, 2008


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Never Again

"I love you to angel."  That last line was the perfect end to this story!

Author's Response:

Thank you for noticing that!!!:D!

I wanted to convey that just like Edward thought of Bella as his angel, Bella thought the exact same thing about him! :D with some good sexing too :P!!

im glad you liked it :D 

 
Summary:

A one-shot story about losing your love/soulmate.

Bella is alone, expecting Edward's child.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1624
[Report This] Published: October 26, 2008 Updated: October 29, 2008


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So beautiful.  So sad.  And tears of sorrow fill my thoughts.

 
Reenactment by mrscullen17 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary: After moving everything out of her childhood home to live with her boyfriend Edward, Bella gets to learn what he wants by her one weakness. *Lemon*
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3086
[Report This] Published: October 27, 2008 Updated: October 31, 2008


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So I'm listening to Clare de Lune in the background while I'm reading this all of a sudden I get an urge to listen to Phantom of the Opera while I type this review .... hmmm, wonder where that urge came from? 

Ah the wonder of Fan Fiction and u tube!

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen made Bella Swan’s life a living hell from age ten to twelve. Finally fed up with the torment and teasing, she moved to Phoenix. Now she’s seventeen, beautiful, and has a new sense of confidence. When her mother sends her back to Forks for her senior year, she is determined to shake things up.

NC-17 for sexuality, underage drinking, and language. OOC, just to be safe. Some canon pairings, some absolutely the opposite.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 55461
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2008 Updated: August 21, 2009


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Five Years Ago to the Present

What a fun story this will be.  I can hardly contain myself to take the time to review rather than plunge into the next chapter!  The look on Edward's  face should be classical.  I hope Lauren ... well I don't want to be that mean but I hope she thinks to herself, "I am so screwed!"  I really liked Jasper though.  He seemed to be really nice trying to stop Edward like he did.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: James and Close Encounters of the Sexy Kind

So, do we go to school in the next chapter?  Can't wait to see Edward's face!  James seems nice enough.  And Alice is a lesbian?!!!!  I'd have thought she and Jasper would have been a couple.  And Angela too?!  This story is filled with surprises and I love them all!!!!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4:Texan Twangs and Salad Dressing

Absolutey love your twist on the whole hot girl/bad ass story.  I am Team Edward all the way but I do hope Bella is going to take Edward and Lauren down.  Jasper will be a good love interest for Bella. Unless, of course, Alice discovers she's not a lesbian afterall.  I am excited to read more! 

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Confrontations and Conversations

I am team Edward all the way but I absolutely love what you are doing in ths story!  Sometimes the player needs to be played.  It's good for the moral of all others!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Slow Dances and Awkward Glances

How can one not love this story?!   It is fun to watch Edward and James fight over Bella while she goes with Jasper!  Looking forward to Bella and Jasper at his house!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Vinyl and Interruptions

So glad to have another chapter.  Idon't know I kinda like the idea of Bella and Jasper......Edward hasn't had enought time to fret!

If real life will co-operate we'd love more!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing

I'm sorry I can't stop laughing at your Edward!  What a dumb fuck!  I've actually known guys like that.  I really do look forward to his "redemption".   This story is so much fun to read.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Laughing Games and Melodrama

Loved this chapter!  Loved Bellas words to describe Maria.  Loved Edwards reaction.  Loved Jaspers diplomacy and tact and kindness.  All that goodness is going to comeback and bite him in the ass!

Looking forward to the next chapter, patiently of course.  Always worth the wait!

Sandra

 




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