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Penname: mscope [ Contact]
Real name: sandra
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[Report This] Published: September 29, 2008 Updated: December 14, 2008
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 22, 2008
Title: Chapter 13: Love Lockdown
I love this story and I want to join your cult. But I don't want to have sell books at the airport, ok?
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 24, 2008
Title: Chapter 14: Writing To Reach You
You two art really pretty good at the angsty stuff. Please forgive me though I did chuckle a couple of times. The story is just so damn much fun to read.
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 27, 2008
Title: Chapter 15: How Can I Tell You?
Would you say that the no sex resolve has come to an end? No pun intended, of course.
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 10, 2008
Title: Chapter 18: Asleep
Fucking Amazing!
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 13, 2008
Title: Chapter 19: Trust
Dear wish_girl and marve~ I like this chapter. Alot. I always like the chapters. I had a Leave it to Beaver moment when Edward called to "Mr. Swan" in his best I'm a good boy voice. Edward sounded an awful lot like Eddie Haskell but I got over it. But did you know that there are no girls in the group Sisters of Mercy? I mean shouldn't they be called Brothers of Mercy or Men of Mercy? As I said earlier ... I really liked this chapter. Things were so smooth. Bella was all happy and in love and Edward admitted he'd lost himself to a girl. So why did Alice have to bring up the broom closet and Jasper? That wasn't very nice. Until Next Time ~ one of your many readers
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 27, 2008
Title: Chapter 23: You Look So Fine
Oh, ladies, what a wonderful piece of fluff! He truely does love her!
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 01, 2008
Title: Chapter 24: A Chain Of Flowers
Wow, ladies.....Next chapter gets happier, right? Maybe the one after that? But the angst is beautiful because be really loves her.
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 02, 2008
Title: Chapter 25: Lost
Ladies you write so well together it is seamless. If he holds her long enough will she believe? Will he learn to believe? Your angst is truly beautiful.
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 10, 2008
Title: Chapter 27: Tremble for My Beloved
Oh. ladies, absolutely beautiful!
Summary: Bella Swan is a successful editor at The New York Times, and her life is only getting better. But when she gets stuck in an elevator during a summer blackout with a mysterious stanger, everything gets complicated.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 60019
[Report This] Published: September 30, 2008 Updated: April 13, 2009
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 07, 2008
Title: Chapter 5: Shorty Got Low
NO! I do not want it to be over. With just 5 chapters I'm hooked! This is a great start and can't wait to read more! You are very descriptive! I really like the girls apartment with the huge closet. Like Angela alot. Mike is still a weenie boy. Bella and Edward in the elevator - wonderful! Alice dancing with Jasper - hot! Tanya - not so hot! Looking forward to Rosalie and Emmett. But my absolute favorite was in chapter 5 "..... we were a puzzle who had room for more pieces, but would never be separate." "We led different lives but we were inseperable." That whole little paragraph was so very, very true and it really touched my heart. If I have learned nothing else in life I have learned that girls need girlfriends. It is a part of who we are. Enough sappiness! Wow, I'm sorry someone tried to steal your story. Out of curiosity I looked the author up on FF.net. No wonder they wanted your story! (Laughter!) And I am certainly glad you continued with it!
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 6: Loud Noises and Explanations
Thank you for the wonderfully long update. I don't know when Rose has had such bad luck! Now for Edward and Bella to begin work together. And for the couples to meet up. This truly is a fun story with so much possibility!
Summary: Edward and Bella have phobias that prevented them from losing their virginity until their mid twenties. They just want to get the life hurdle out of the way. Together.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Word count: 4008
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2008 Updated: October 05, 2008
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 04, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Edward Monk
This is really funny and I'm not talkin' little teehees! I can't wait to meet Bella! Will Emmett be there for that one as well.
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 06, 2008
Title: Chapter 2: Bella Hughes
Is this as much fun to write as it is to read? I actually met a man like your Edward. He used to shop in our store and had to be allowed to ring up his own purchases! He was nice enough just strange. It some how seems funnier to see it in written form!
Summary: Edward Cullen is your average high school geek, the complete opposite from the popular Bella Swan and her friends Alice and Rosalie. Will Bella become the down-to-earth girl she had once been after Edward decides to change?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Geekward and Nerdella
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes
Word count: 63344
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2008 Updated: December 18, 2008
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 03, 2008
Title: Chapter 6: Revolution and Resolution
The guys are going to become hot, very, very hot aren't they?!
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 03, 2008
Title: Chapter 3: A New Alliance
Wow, this is an Edward I haven't seen yet! I have a feeling he and Jasper are going to become better friends and somehow end up wooing the girls! This story should be fun, at least I hope it will be!
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 05, 2008
Title: Chapter 10: Not Believing Just Quite Yet
Ah, the changes. People will be surprised when the new school year begins! Love this story!
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 26, 2008
Title: Chapter 12: Relentless, Vengeful, and Absolutely Wonderful
I've said it before, I'll say it again - Can't wait for the kids at school to see the new and improved hotties! But please tell me our good looking geeks are going to become a little less whiney.
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 30, 2008
Title: Chapter 14: A New Addiction
I'd have thought the whole senior class would be abuzz about the "2 new, hot guys". Anticipation! It should prove to be quite entertaining when Bella realizes the hot guy is Edward! Rally looking forward to that. And for Alice too when she discovers the new and improved Jasper.
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 02, 2008
Title: Chapter 16: The Love of Juliet
Oooooh, she has found him! She does not associate him with the nerd he was last year does she? So Bella and Alice will be looking at the yearbook tonight and see Edward is one and the same. This is really a fun story to read!
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 02, 2008
Title: Chapter 17: Revenge and Respect
Ooooooooh, paybacks a bitch! I have a feeling that Edwards and Bella will be hooking up sooner than he thinks! And Jasper and Alice will too! Loving this story!
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 08, 2008
Title: Chapter 19: False Impressions
I really like that Rose and Edward spent some time together and have become friends. Actually I really like this story. Every chapter is like a gift filled with a suprise.
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 08, 2008
Title: Chapter 21: The Reality of Dreams
WOW! That dream sequence was outstanding!
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 12, 2008
Title: Chapter 22: The Surrealism of Dreams
Edward is gaining more and more confidence and growing into his own. The transformation has been amazing. "I've never been perfect / But neither have you" .... that whole dream sequence was awesome. Looking very much forward to the next time Bella and Edward are together.
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 15, 2008
Title: Chapter 23: Life Ends Without You
So here we have Bella that is at the top of the teenage food chain thru her association with Rosalie and Alice and Edward was at the the bottom. A major makeover comes Edwards way and now he is no longer buried, which I find extremely endearing btw. So now the two have come to an equal footing so to speak and are going to grow together. I love it - I love that Edward and Jasper are coming out of their shells and I love that Bella and company are not as shallow as I thought when the story began. I am still trying to get a handle on Emmett though without going back to reread the story ... although I have a feeling that will be resolved as the story progresses. Emmett with Edward and Jasper reminds me of the song, Reach Out In The Darkness... "I knew a man that I did not care for and then one day this man gave me a call. We sat and talked about things on our mind and now this man he is a friend of mine." ...I can see Emmett, Edward and Jasper becoming friends.
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 17, 2008
Title: Chapter 24: Love and Infatuation
Who couldn't love this Edward? ::sigh:: And now he is falling in love too. I love that you give him more and more confidence with each new chapter.
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