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Choice by MandaPanda0905 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 82]
Summary:

AU AH. Bella and Edward have been happily married for a few years, but when Bella's past shows up, will their marriage survive?

Beautiful banner made by WillBeAWriterSomeday. 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 21370
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2008 Updated: January 25, 2009


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: A Day at the Mall

And what, praytell, will Edward think of the dress?

An update soon maybe?!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chaos

Guess it's a good thing that Bella dd not ask Edward to come in for awhile!  How long will Jake

Loved the dancing, loved the kiss!  Am so ready for the falling in love to commence, although, I guess it has already begun!

 

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Lilies

Lillies - how beautiful!  I am so in love with yor Edward.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Who To Pick?

And Jacob is gone.  Time for a new journey to begin! 

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Graduation

Great chapter!  So happy for Emmett and Rosalie.  And so happy for Bella and Edward.  Already looking forward to the next!

 
Summary:

If anyone asked me, years later, who my best friend from high school was, I would have responded instantly, with absolute certainty, that her name was Isabella Marie Swan.


 


Not everyone in the Twilight Saga lived forever…


One-shot. Angela P.O.V. on her life in Forks. Angela Weber sees Bella Cullen just one more time.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Angela
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2920
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2008 Updated: October 02, 2008


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: A Walk in the Lifetime of Angela Weber

When you say "...practically identical to a planned chapter in my own book..." are you saying what I think your saying?  What I hope your saying?  That truly is my biggest wish for you, that you will go on to be the great author we all know you can be!

Loved this story!  Angela was always quiet and observant.  She truly was the favorite human for many of us.  Her character was so pure of heart.  I was ecstatic that you would have the Cullen family return for her wedding even for just a few minutes outside at the reception.  And strange as it would seem for her to see them there she asked no questions, generated no buzz just genuinely welcomed them for the few minutes she had them with her.  I love that this parallels life in that true friends, if need be, can be together in total silence in comfort and simply be happy to be in one anothers presence.  (I hope that made sense!)

Well, just a couple more before I turn in!



Author's Response:

Well... yes, that's the plan, if I ever get published, or even finish the book in the first place!  I've started, but it's hard work, especially since I'm still in college, and I've got another four years of uni left  once I'm done there.  But yes, once I finished this story, I was reading it through, and I noticed many parallels with the epilogue I have planned!

Background characters like Angela have always intrigued me, and after reading Stephenie's chapters of Midnight Sun, my respect for Angela increased so much that I felt compelled to give her the ending I knew she deserved. x

 
Summary:

Jasper Hale has been telling people that Bella's his girlfriend for years. What happens when she moves to Forks? Rated for seriously naughty stuff, so please be warned!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 11848
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2008 Updated: November 17, 2008


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Mercy

Gotta love your bad girl Bella.  She's definitely going to keep him on the edge and either make him or break him.  Wonder what the school sluts think of her or will think of her and she whips his bad ass further and further?  Will Jasper everfind Edward  in her tree?  The wink was so damn funny .... I can't  believe he didn't  fall out of the tree again! 

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - Jealousy

::GiggleGiggleGiggle::  Poor Edward is not going to know what hit him!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - Rebel

At the mere mention that you do not own Billy Idol I fell in love you not for the story but for Billy Idol!  So here I am randomly playing his songs on UTube as I read and I'm already listening to Rebel Yell when you menton it in your story!  Twilight Zone time......

Love your Bella.  I can't help but wonder if she'll remain so confident throuhout the story.  If she does Edward just doesn't stand much of a chance against her.   We know that Jasper has no real claim on Bella but I am looking forward to him coming back into the mix and the three of them together and how Edward will react now that he's had a private moment with her.

This story really is great fun to read!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 
Summary:

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A small shout out to WillBeAWriterSomeday for the amazing banner!

 

What if Edward left Bella again, after returning from Volterra? What if thirty years later he returns to Italy, in hopes the Volturi will end his existence this time? But what if Bella's among there coven and she's one of them?

Rated NC-17 for future chapters, will have a few different POV's but mostly Bella & Edward

GOOD NEWS!!! Tigress5cubs has honored me by taking on my story and being my beta. I love you...you are my saviour.

Twilightzoner has also honored me by becoming apart of my team for this story. Thank you dear. I love your work and all your advice.

 

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 12422
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2008 Updated: April 07, 2009


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Ok, so this story came up on the home page, so now looks like I'll be following another story!  I like that Bella is a vampire and she and Edward have a lot of catching up to do.  I just hope she hasn't found another significant other.  On to the next chapter!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Uh-oh....I just noticed this has not been updated since November 27th...sorry!



Author's Response:

I am still working on the story, had some personal issues over the holidays but am back on the wagon and hope to have updates on a regular basis. I hope you will give it a chance.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Prologue

In that case, yes, I will!  Thank you for responding.

 
Resident Geek by cdunbar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 700]
Summary:

Geeky Edward thinks he has absolutely no shot with the popular, beautiful Bella. Is he right, or will she be one of the many girls who thinks geeks make for better lovers? M for language, sexuality and some underage drinking. A little OOC… okay, a lot OOC.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Geekward and Nerdella
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 71582
[Report This] Published: September 28, 2008 Updated: December 08, 2009


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

How wonderfully fun this story is going to be.  I love that Bella made th 1st move to speak to him at the party.  Did Emmett see that?  This story will indeed have a happy ending.  I'm glad you brought it over to Twilighted .... I rarely get over to ff.net any more.  Thank you!

Author's Response: You're welcome! :)

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So I sit here with a cheesey ass grin on my face and chuckle and I am in love with this Edward!  He is so adorable and so cute and so sweet and so innocent and so ..........................

Don't get me wrong I do love all characters Edward.  But so many of the college student Edwards are manwhores that sleep around, blah, blay, blah ......... Geekward is just so endearing and I am truly enjoying spending time with him! 

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This Edward is way too much fun to read!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I love this Edward more with each chapter.  He's so cute and naive and I just want to hug him. 

"Oh. My. God.  She was on my bed.  She was lying on my bed."  When I read this I had to make sure I wasn't reading Midnight Desire.  That was just so cute, so endearing.

Ben could have helped out a bit with some pointers about dinner.  I'm really excited for the next chapter but I am waiting patiently.   As always tend to real life first.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Welcome home with another chapter!  Poor Edward with his insecurities.  I wanted so badly for him to kiss Bella.  My husband asked what was wrong, apparently he looked up and I was slightly nodding my head toward the screen during that part.  He said it was as if I was willing the computer to do something.  Go figure.

Thank you for not abandoning your stories.  Take as much time as you need to live real life.



Author's Response: LOL I do the same thing when I'm silenting willing one of the characters I'm reading about to do something. That's so freakin' awesome.

 
Meet the Parents by marve Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 92]
Summary:

Another one in More of That Ladders Crap. 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme
Challenges:
Series: More of that Ladders Crap
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 3259
[Report This] Published: September 28, 2008 Updated: October 06, 2008


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Gotta love your Edward!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Marve, that was absolutely sweet!

 
Stranded by jackbauer Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1213]
Summary:

Stranded in a strange town by stormy weather, Bella is befriended by Edward, a gorgeous man with a mysterious past. While she’s immediately attracted to him, she quickly discovers that the rest of the town doesn’t share her affections for the bronze-haired one, so she sets out to prove to them, and to Edward, that he’s anything but a monster.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 108250
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2008 Updated: November 28, 2008


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Warnings

Poor Edward, seems like he can't catch a break.  I am enjoying this story.  Anxious to find out what did happen though for people to hate him so.  I do hate to see him so alone.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 The Second Thing

I like the vacation idea.  They'll spend some great time together and really connect.  Will Emmett and Rosalie come to visit?

 
Summary:

Marve's Edward meets Wish_girl's Bella in high school. Hilarity and hijinks ensue.

 

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Categories: AU-Human, Crackfic Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 88732
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2008 Updated: December 14, 2008


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Laid

Ladies - you are truly wonderful!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Why Can't I

Ah ladies .... each of you are brilliant on you're own but together you are, you are, oh, double brilliant! 

The humor of you story is priceless.  All can I say is ... It's all about the laughter, ladies, all about the laughter!

 "Fuck Smoky the bear." "The woods can just burn the hell down."

When we left  chapter 4 the ball was in Bella's court, chapter 5 in Edaward's.  Next?  

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Push It

Wow, I'm a little speechless. 

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Sing For Absolution

Ladies ~ You have the power to take us up to the laughter rafters then bring us down to the depths of despair with your writing.  And now it's up to you to  make the douchebag  Bella's bitch.  

Love this story, love your Bella, love Doucheward, love you ladies!

 




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