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Penname: mscope [Contact]
Real name: sandra
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Member Since: May 18, 2008
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Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: June 3 - June 6, 2008

Oh limona, how could one not love this story?  The building feelings between Bella and Edward is written beautifully.  I can't help but smile that inevitable has been set in motion and even Emmett is going to be able to stop it.    



Author's Response:

Thanks, mscope. :)

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: June 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: June 7 - June 13, 2008

mscope waves to limona whilst jumping up and down - I'm here!  Reading anything you write! 

I love the changes we are seeing in Edward.  Bella is really under his skin now and I do not believe he will ever be able to let her go!  Love that she trusts him so intensely and he is there for her.

And Bella.  Cheez Louise.  I still don't now how you are ever going to get her out of this, witness protection or not.  Naturally I have every faith in you to do so.  The suspense is one of the things that I enjoy so much about this story.

Welcome back limona!

Sandra



Author's Response:

Sandra-- thanks so much for being a longtime follower. I really appreciate your support!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: July 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: June 14 - June 20, 2008

Oh limona, it never matters to me how long it takes to get a new chapter ... it simply matters that we get them.

I actually had tears in my eyes when Edward held the baby.  I am sooooo sappy like that and it was written so very beautifully.

Now this Jenks guy has me just a little bit worried.  Good guy?  Bad guy?  I really, really want him to be a good guy.

Can Esme get any more loveable than she was in this chapter?  I mean giving Bella pointers and everything is this chapter.  I found myself giggling a time or two. 

Yeah, yeah I know lots of other great stuff happened...the dance, the date, the convo with Jake...but thoughts of all that kinda flew out the window.

When Edward and Bella declared their love.  They were a couple of horn dogs in the beginning but when he said he loved her at the end ... well i may be typing this with some kind of silly girl crush grin as my heart flutters.

EXCELLENT CHAPTER!

Sandra

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: June 20 - June 24, 2008

Limona ~

Sometimes I forget how truly wonderful a story is. 

Edwards admission of love to Bella really brought out the girly giggles from me.  And I was so happy to see him relaxed with Emmett.  I gave a sigh of relief with the whole looking ahead strategy that he is working on.  

The whole thing was excellent.  Thank you for coming back and finishing this.

Sandra



Author's Response:

Thank you for sticking with this story.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: August 1 - September 4, 2008

Why did Mr. Jenks give me the willies when he was questioning Rose.  And what kind of questions did he ask?   If he is Volturi trained he knows what he is looking for.

Edward is going to take her being gone very hard.  She has so thoroughly become a part of the family that they will all take it hard.   But the saddest thing is she is out there on her own with no one to help her.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: September 4 - December 13, 2008

And the plot thickens.

I really hope Bella has managed to stay low to the ground.  Edward misses her so much and would be devastated should anything happen to her.  It warmed my heart to read his thoughts of his love for her. 

Laurent? Laurent?  I will need to go back and re-read what info we may have on him.  I do hope Edward has convinced Jessica to hush on the Bella/Marie line of thought.

If Bella and the Cullen family were not in danger at this time I would laugh at what Alice may have heard.  Not that it is a laughing matter.  However I would rather deal with the powers that be than Alice when she is on a mission.

Gotta love this story .....

Sandra

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: September 4 - December 23, 2008

Ooooh Limona the brass tacks are starting to fall.  Bella's life on the run has been pretty bumpy not to mention intense.  My heart was pounding when Mr. Jenks cornered her but all is well that ends well.  And again I thought the man at the laundromat was from the Voltori.  Imagine the sigh of relief at computers everywhere when it turned out to be Edward.   Hopefully his eyes will not suffer permanent damage.  I will say this for Bella she is one strong woman to endure as she has.

So Aro is her grandfather?!!!  You have no idea how much I do not want to believe that.

The important thing now is that she is with Edward and he will keep her safe.

Sandra

 

 
Staged Beauty by rhea12 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 236]
Summary:

 

Bella is an out of work actress living in New York City, when an audition comes along that could change everything. Does she have what it takes to impress noted Broadway Director Edward Cullen? And even if she does, will his biggest secret keep her from success in her career, or worse, in love? How is it possible for real love to form out of a fantasy?

AU Human, Canon Pairings, An ExB story

*The entire story is based on my favorite quote from Shakepeare's Venus and Adonis

Thank you RedRose15 for the AMAZING banner! And thank you Shakespeare for all your inspiration!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Quil, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 48558
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2008 Updated: April 04, 2009


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: The Worst Day

I like it!  She's going to get the job isn't she?  And Rosalie will get a job as well?  Oh do tell us more!

 
Summary:

After graudating college, best friends Bella, Rosalie and Alice decide to spend a few months down in Florida with Rosalie's brother Edward and his roommates.  Can Bella finally get over what happened in the past and  accept it?  Or will she find it even harder than before to over come her feelings?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 13437
[Report This] Published: September 18, 2008 Updated: September 22, 2008


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Stay the same

Meat Loaf - Paradise By the Dashboard Light!!!!!   If I hadn't payed attention to the story before that it certainly had my attention after that!

I liked that you've hooked our favorite couple up  so early in the story.   

Looking forward to the rest of the visit!

 
Summary:

What happens in Vegas, stays in Vegas. Right? But sometimes, it's just the beginning of something special and you find what you never knew you were looking for. AU/AH, Canon pairings.

Blame it on the Cuervo Banner


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 74977
[Report This] Published: September 19, 2008 Updated: November 07, 2009


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

This story should be fun!  Tanya is nice?!!!!  And Mike is gay?!!!!  Already the surprises!  Looking forward to more!  I'll see you on the threads with a true story idea that you might have fun with!

Author's Response: lol.  I certainly hope I don't disappoint you with the fun-meter.  I'll be trying.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

What a fun chapter!  Edward certainly took the wind out of Mike's sails!

Author's Response: Yeah...and just wait until the next time they meet.  lol!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

This was one of those AAAAW chapters.  Jasper is ever the perfect gentleman!  Loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you.  I'm glad Bethaboo and I weren't the only ones who had the Awww moment.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

This story is so much fun to read!  Edward and Bella are so good together in yur story that I don't want a good Tanya at home waiting for him.  Soooo, they've discussed Vegas weddings ..... we should be nearing the great event.  

As usual, I sit with a smirk on my face as the few wheels turn in my head contemplating what will come.  And I wait patiently!



Author's Response: Yep; the wedding will be in chapter seven.  :D

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Oh, wow, this is a lucky day indeed.....all my favorites are updating!

I love this story!  It's fun and it makes me think!  

The getting to know you relationship between Edward and Bella seems to be quite smooth.  And what's this? They are about to crash a party, whoa?!  They will probably be married before the rest of the gang get there to stop it.

OME!  When is that next chapter?!



Author's Response: Aww, thank you for reading.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  I just hope the next chapter (which will be posted when it's through with the beta read) lives up to expectations.  :)  And if not...well, it has smut and that's always yummy.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Oh Holy Night!  I never expected that Rose and Emmett would get married in Vegas too!  What a wonderful surprise.  Is their marriage for real?  It is isn't it?  So here I sit at the computer with a huge grin, a huge sigh and totally happy with the turn of events. 

Now about Edward and Bella?  Alice and Jasper?  Will they get married as well?  Will they have the others in attendance?  I do love this story!

Thank You So Much for sharing your gift of story telling with us.  May you and yours be blessed with all that is wonderful not only during this Holiday Season but through the coming year as well!

Sandra



Author's Response:

Yes, their marriage is for real.  We'll find out how it happened in one of the upcoming chapters.  I'm not sure which one at this point, but it'll happen.

Edward and Bella are already married and we'll find out how they deal with it in the rest of the story.  As for Alice and Jasper tying the knot?  We'll just have to wait and see.

Thank you for reading and Happy Holidays to you, as well.  :D

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Oh Cal, as much as I would rather your real life not stand in the way of this story I understand.  I am willing to wait as long as necessary for each chapter.  This is a wonderful story and I am just thankful you have chosen to share it with us.

I thought it was very cute that Alice noticed Rosalie's wedding ring first.  Hmmm, how will she react when she sees Bella's?!!!

Bella's eaction when she woke up - holy guacamole!  And Edward too!

So will they see one another at breakfast if they go to the buffet?  How very awkward will that be?  I'm really curious as to how Edward is going to explain this to Tanya.  And how are Rose and Emmett going to be when they are together with their friends and family. So many complications, so many questions, so much fun!

I've read an awful lot of fanfiction over the last 6 months but nothing like this.  I don't know that I've ever felt so much anxiety for the characters before and it makes me laugh to admit that!  With that said....take care of real life, take time to enjoy what you can, and write if and when you have time.  Lovin this story - a lot!

Sandra



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you for saying that.  I felt bad for not writing more sooner, but I really couldn't help it.  The days I did have to write, nothing would come out.  I think I was trying to force it a bit too much.  Thank you for understanding that RL can be a pain.

I know just how Alice will react, I just hope I can do the scene I see in my head justice on the page.

I already have the answers to your questions and issues locked in my head and definitely plan to answer them in due time.  :)

Thank you for reading; I hope to have the next chapter out soon.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

So why is a small part of me disappointed?  I'm pretty anxious to see where the Bella/Edward story is going to go.  I know it is not going to be so easy.   Rose and Emmett are not going to be easy either but their situation is fun.  Well fun for the reader anyway!  

Oh Cal, I love this story!

Sandra



Author's Response:

I'm sorry you're disappointed, but I can promise that the end payoff will make up for it.  :)

Thanks for reading!  I'll update as soon as I can.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

O.M.G., Cal, I am so very sorry for the last review I made....more like horrified!  It began something llike Why do a feel disappointed?.  I obviously did not re-read my review because that did not ask the question as it was intended.

We know that Bella and Edward had discussed the whole fake wedding journey.  The fac that they plan to "put an end" to it comes as no surprise.  The little girl in me, the one that loves fairytales, wanted them towakeup the next morning and be inlove and shout it from the rooftops.  But where would the fun of that be.  Besides I am not ready for the story to be over yet!

Rosalie and Emmett area little different.  They have clashed from the very beginning.  I have laughed so much with their antics and was so excited when they got married.  I just want them to be as excited about the marriage as I am ... I do not want them to feel as they have made a mistake.

In any event I do apologize for how that must have sounded.  In no way am I disappointed in the story ... I love the story!

Sandra



Author's Response:

As I said before, you have absolutely no reason to apologize.  I understood exactly what you meant and, if I came off upset, I didn't mean to.  I know just what it's like when reading a story.  You hope that something specific will happen and, even though you know it probably won't go exactly as you imagined, you still hope and end up a little disappointed when it doesn't go as you had planned yourself.  I think it's human nature for that to happen.  lol.  There was no upset on my end, I assure you.  I'm more upset when people ask stupid questions they'd have the answers to if they actually read and retained the information in the chapters (I shouldn't have to put in the story "Bella and I really got married though I'm currently drunk and think I'm getting fake married."  Talk about fouling up the story).  Feel free to always speak your mind to me.  I'd like to think I'm very understanding.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: March 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Poor Bella, first finding that "Hot Bitch" is Edward's father then feeling like a home wrecker.  I was glad that Edward was the voice of reason on both counts.  

Of course, secretly, I don't want them to feel they have made a mistake.  I know, where's the fun in that!  At least the others don't know ..... yet.

Love this story!

Sandra



Author's Response:

Bella has a bit of a tendency to overreact.  Then again, most in her situation would.  lol.

Thanks for reading!  I'll update again as soon as I can.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: April 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Cal, you never have to explain real life.  Period.

Rose and Mike are fun in this chapter.  I'm not certain that Emmett knows what he's gotten himself into with this girl.  The rest of their story should be fun to see who tames who.  Jasper and Alice are so cute.  They did not get married, yet, and seem to be very attuned to one another.  The more I see of this Mike the more I lke him.  He is a bit of a drama queen.  And Bella and Edward.  I am very sad for them.  I know you told us there will be an HEA it's just the gettin there that hurts.

Take Care and Live Life Large ~

Sandra

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Good Luck controlling those emotions Edward! 

I laughed so hard at Rose and Mike...or should I say Kenny and Dolly.  Yes, I had to listen to the songs...It's like a law or something.  But when Bella got up and sang not only was I impressed that not only was she good but there is pretty much no question as to Edward's reaction.  Naturally I squeed.

The whole chapter was just so much fun.   Emmett's reaction to Rosalie was classic.  And the Dick's Last Resort thing really made me laugh.  Trust me your establishment was nothing like the one in San Antonio anyway.

I am curious as to where you are going with Alice and Jasper.  I can see a wedding.  And of course there has to be planning.  Bella and Tanya will have to cross paths.  So will Tanya see the B/E chemestry herself?  Hmmm.  But I am getting ahead of myself aren't I?

As always thank you for sharing.  It truly is one of my favorites.

Sandra

 

 

 
Hindsight by elizabeth18 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 481]
Summary:

When Bella's roommate Alice tells her that her brother Edward is coming to stay with them she is not exactly thrilled.  In fact, she wants nothing to do with him.  Can Edward change her mind?  Or is the past too powerful?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 52590
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2008 Updated: July 11, 2009


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Rehashing Barcelona

Are we going to get more Bella/Edward history?  She said he was responsible for 3 bad relationships and stood her up for prom - what an ass!  I like this story ... I like the interaction and dialogue between Bella and Edward.  I also like your Alice.  Look forward to more!

Author's Response:

Yes, there will be more of their history revealed but it will be done gradually.  I don't want to reveal everything at once :-)

Thanks for reviewing!  I'm glad you're enjoying this! 

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Too Much Charles Shaw

Someones just a little too jealous!  Thanks for updating so soon ... Now I want another chapter!  Seriously, take your time, I have a feeling each chapter will be worth waitiung for!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

I really appreciate it! 

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Whether writing a full blown lemon or a lime - makes no difference.  I thought what you wrote was beautiful and realistic and I loved it! 

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Crossing The Line

Oh Alice don't make him leave.  They can work it out.  Edward's POV at the end of the chapter made me sad for him.  

I loved the whole interaction between Bella and Alex.  When she checked to see if she still had her panties on I laughed so hard I woke the cat and the dog.  

Edward's jealousy during breakfast was pretty amusing as well.  Then it went and got all sad and stuff. 

Now here's the deal, Edward's too old to sleep with a dorm full of freshmen now so if he is going to have a girlfriend  can her name be Sandra.  I'm getting tired of Tanya having all the fun.  Oh what I wouldn't give to get in that man's pants even if it is only fictional.  And one more thing "Sandra" doesn't want to be a bitch maybe she can understand that he stil love's Bella and won't be used but she is willing to help him win Bella's heart again - you know, kinda like a female Alex.  

Seriously, I really like this story and look forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I am glad that you like the story.  That makes me very happy :-)

And just for you, yes, if Edward finds someone to distract him I will be sure her name is Sandra :-) 

 




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