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Penname: mscope [ Contact]
Real name: sandra
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Summary: Bella, a shy, loving young woman joins the Peace Corps in an attempt to help as much as she can. She is assigned to work with a partner in establishing a medical clinic in rural Uganda. In a land of upheaval, poverty and despair, can love prevail?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Word count: 38226
[Report This] Published: August 20, 2008 Updated: February 28, 2009
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Another stellar chapter and with the aid of google I was able to see waterfalls and caves. What a wonderful experience...what a wonderful world. But the rats ... necessary in the scheme of life but I am far too girly to handle things ike that rationally!
But the kiss .... be.still.my.heart. .... that I dealt with very rationally! I was beginning to wonder if it was going to happen in this chapter or not and to happen in the water like that. What a happy girly moment.
Looking very much forward to the Cullens family visit during the Christmas holiday.
Tam, we can't thank you enough for sharing this wonderful story with us. Whether it is updated tomarrow, next week, next month is neither here no there. A story with this beauty is timeless.
Sandra
Summary: Edward was left heartbroken and six years later, he still can't get over her. What happens when fate intervenes and forces the very thing that broke him back into his life?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Word count: 12464
[Report This] Published: August 20, 2008 Updated: September 17, 2008
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 09, 2008
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Noooooooooo! I don't want it to end here! I am finally catching up on stories on this site and I love this story! I know it's going to get worse before it gets better but I'm here fore the duration. Please don't heitate to have Alice take out the trash again! Love the story and love the quotes!
Author's Response: Alice is totally gonna be takin out some garbage soon...
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 17, 2008
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
My heart breaks for Edward and Bella. I don't want her to go back to Jake - No, no, no! You're killin' me here! OME, I love this story! Patiently waiting for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Summary: AU/AH Bella has just started an exciting new nursing job at Virginia Mason hospital. The only problem? She's hot for boss.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Athenodora
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Word count: 22667
[Report This] Published: August 20, 2008 Updated: August 30, 2008
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 14, 2008
Title: Chapter 8: LAX
I think I speak for many when I say I hope you finish this story. Our favorite couple sure were sex starved. There were a couple of times my husband came to check on me because I was laughing so hard. And Emmett's embarrassment was epic!
Summary: Isabella is shipped off to Forks by her parents. Can her cousin and his friends get her to drop her tough exterior and reveal the sweet girl underneath?
Thanks to MrsC for the Banner!!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Word count: 15348
[Report This] Published: August 21, 2008 Updated: January 06, 2009
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
This Bella is so much fun! I look forward to the developing relationship with her and Edward.
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 30, 2008
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Hell, I'd be swearing like a sailor to get those kisses!
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 15, 2008
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Wow! First of all, I really like the that you use POV's for so many characters in each chapter. Looks like "Isabella" is going to grow into her own in this story. It should be fun to watch her blossom with the love and support that her new family and friends will provide. Please say you will be updating soon!
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 25, 2008
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I'd be cussing a whole lot more if they meant kisses from Edward!
Summary: It's a tough life being a music student, juggling lessons, practice, rehearsals, lectures as well as navigating through the social hierarchy. Bella Swan, a gifted cellist, is given the opportunity to attend the prestigious Manhattan School of Music. But it seems that she gets more than she bargained for when she meets the stunningly sexy piano major Edward Cullen. When the rivalries heat up, and the competitive claws come up, musically and romantically, can Bella come out in the top of her class and win the love of her life?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Word count: 29117
[Report This] Published: August 23, 2008 Updated: December 07, 2008
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 13, 2008
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
What a wonderful story and wonderful music references as well! Your Edward and Bella have a special magic that are linking them. I really like what you have written so far and hope to read more soon!
Author's Response: thank you :)
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 19, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Edwards Interlude was fun to read! Bella never stood a chance to his charms or maybe it's the other way around! I am very happy he's not with Tanya but why do I feel there is more drama to come there? I had to laugh that he paid Alice not to go to the museum - that was great! Also read chapter 5. As always Emmett is the perfect fun filled big brother. Loved your music choices - thru the magic of utube one has the option to listen and read which always helps!
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 17, 2008
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
I likw the spirit that is shown in your Bella. Now just let her win! Jake at 14 andvery hormonal was quite funny! Edward's love and caring for Bella warms my heart. Ever the gentlman. I look forward to thier relationshipas it progresses. I have enjoyed this story and have to say this chapter was wonderful!
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 07, 2008
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
You're back! I have truly missed this story but absolutely understand the whole Real Life thing. I'm perfectly happy to take what we can get whenever we can get it! Your Tanya is a real piece of work and the scary thing is that I have actually known a few people like that in my lifetime! That being said, I don't duppose we've seen the last of her. I like how Edward and Bella are getting closer and he is so protective of her ::sigh::! I dontt think it gets a whole lot better than that! Author's Response: Awww..thanks for being so understanding! Yeah, I've met way too many musicians like that, so what Tanya is based on is very real, unfortunately. But thank you for reading :D
Summary: Bella is recovering from a broken engagement and is trying to start a new life. Who will help her move on? AU, all human, usual ships.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes
Word count: 59902
[Report This] Published: August 23, 2008 Updated: May 31, 2010
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 10, 2008
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Closer To The Prize
I'm probably laughing too much to give a review. The Bella/Tyler/Jessica triangle is worthy of the Jerry Springer Show. And having completed the first 4 chapter I have to ask, where is Bella going to poop? With all the stories filled with angst, wonderful that they may be, I am glad to have another story on the lighter side. Author's Response: I'm glad to have made you laugh. I can write angst, but I have enough of it in my own life that I don't need to dream it up for Bella and Edward. I honestly don't know how or where she's going to poop. It's a 'widely known fact' that fictional characters don't have those issues, but honestly when I read the book about vamps with super-hearing and super-smell and Bella spends nights with them, I seriously thought, "how does she allow herself to poop there??"
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 12, 2008
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: You Make Me Break Out
This story becomes more fun with each new chapter! Both Edward and Bella are going to be in trouble! I laughed at the cleaning he did to impress her. Sure hope he gets to take his shirt off in the next chapter.
Author's Response: I had to put his OCD to good use! Something might happen to his shirt soon...
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 23, 2008
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Fragile Things
What a wonderful chapter! I'm not generally a fan of nice Tanya but I really like your Tanya. So glad that Edward went to Bella in the end. This is such a fun story.
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Everlong
Looks like Alice and Tanya won a $100.00 each for the proposal bet! Great chapter! I'm glad that Edward proved to be an experienced enough lover when Bella was so nervous in that she "didn't know what to do". Most of all I'm glad that he made love to her, raw sex is great but the first time should be gentle and loving and thank you for giving her that.
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: April 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: Nursing Patience
21 days and then you put Edward into a tux? A little on the evil side don't you think?! Actually the chapter was pretty funny. I really laughed when Rosalie was explaining the Cullen men in a tux. Next chapter should be pretty explosive, huh? Author's Response: I've been practicing my evil laugh over the last few days. I can't imagine movie Edward or Carlisle in an actual tux. I mean, I can, but it creates a certain amount of fail in my ability to breathe.
Summary: She was the dorky newspaper editor. He was the athlete that the female population at Forks High was in love with. An AU Bella/Edward Story.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Word count: 12074
[Report This] Published: August 23, 2008 Updated: December 18, 2008
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 22, 2008
Title: Chapter 2: Thinking of You
This story is so sweet! I like how Edward is a jock and so very sweet. Looking forward to more.
Summary: 
For True Edward Fans. An in-depth, accurate portrayal of the heart, mind, and soul of the beloved Edward Cullen as he deals with the complex themes and events taking place during Eclipse. RATED T FOR TEEN, ALTHOUGH CHAPTER 8 CONTAINS SENSUALITY. CANON. EPOV.
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 64609
[Report This] Published: August 24, 2008 Updated: November 07, 2008
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: August 29, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Theme from Chapter 1 - Ultimatum
You've truly captured Edwards ability to overthink every little detail! But what I like most is his firm conviction to never give up. I am so glad that you have chosen to share this with us. It is beautifully written and fun to read!
Summary: After an emotional two week romance, Edward and Bella are finally together and enjoying their life and work at Cullen Institute for the Arts. What happens when someone wants to shake up their fairy tale romance? Can Bella have complete faith in Edward? Sequel to Lullabies Go On!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes
Word count: 30507
[Report This] Published: August 25, 2008 Updated: May 05, 2009
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 23, 2008
Title: Chapter 8: The One With The Dress
Noooooooooooo, you can't end these 8 chapters like this! I love this story! I had to giggle when Emmett and Jasper gave Edward advice. The thing with Tanya is somewhat creepy - she's not going to take no for an answer is she. Already looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 07, 2008
Title: Chapter 9: The One With The Lesson
Oh, boohoo for Tanya, NOT! I thought they did a great job of putting her in her place and foiling her attempt to seduce Edward .... at least this time. I was also very happy with the way you handled the spat between Edward and Bella, having them make up so soon. Great Story!
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 26, 2008
Title: Chapter 10: The One With The Brahms
Sooner or later Tanya has to give up, right?!!! I really like how Edward reassures Bella often and does his best to keep Tanya at bay.
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 09, 2008
Title: Chapter 11: The One With The Easy Mac
Does Bella have allergies? Did Tanya give her something to bring on a reaction? She will be alright, right? At least she called Edward when she could not breathe ... she could have called Alice or Rosalie. Please help them to resolve their issues Bella needs to spends some time with her man. If Bella is sick and has to stay away from work Tanya will certainly take advantage of the situation and we all know what she is capable of. P.S. Love the story!
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 16, 2008
Title: Chapter 12: The One With The ER
I am so happy thy are back together. Now looking forward to how he will handle Tanya. I have faith that Bella's recital will fo well! And speaking of recitals ... Good Luck With Yours!
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 25, 2008
Title: Chapter 13: The One With The Confrontation
I love the beautiful innocense of this story. Your Edward and Bella truly complete one another.
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