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Penname: mscope [Contact]
Real name: sandra
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Snowed In by eclipsedawn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5322]
Summary: Bella travels to Alaska to vacation in the cabin Alice loaned her. What happens when Bella finds out she is not the only person staying in the cabin?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 88293
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2008 Updated: January 02, 2010


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Bella's Turn Part I

What a fun chapter.  Take charge Bella was fun.  She may have started in the drivers seat but she didn't end up there or maybe she did, right?  

I'm starting to feel a little bit of heart fail coming on.  Oh no!  What about when their lives return to normal after having been snowed in?  Hell I'd had so much fun reading about the snowed inadventure that I hadn't thought that far ahead.  ::grimace::  We readers are putting our faith in you....no pressure of course!  But we have faith in you!

Sandra

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: March 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Punishments and Salads

I pressed the button so I sure as hell hope I am going to find out what is in the room that they just opened. 

Bella, Bella,Bella he likes you too girl.  Stop worrying about that and just enjoy your time with Edward.

When Bella was chanting to herself  "Edward's going to punish me.  Edward's going to punish me."  I was expecting TZ's monster from Midnight Desire to show up jumping up and down "Punish her!  Punish Her!" 

This chapter was wonderful....start to finish.

Sandra

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: May 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Sweat

I'd have never guessed a sauna.   Will Edward ever get to tell her?  It has to happen sooner or later and Bella will be so happy.

Yes, and who is at the door.  If it were family you'd think they's come on in so my guess is Jacob.

 

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: June 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Sweat

I would have to say it is Jacob.  And poor Edward is not having much luck proclaiming his love for our dear sweet Bella.  Poor guy may want to write her a letter.  Will the family be showing up anytime soon? 

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Reunion

Yeah, that's what I'd like to know..."What's that doing up there?"  Actually, I'd like to know what's "that" exactly?!!!

I've been gone for a while so coming home to 4 chapters has been really great!  So much has happened and now Bella is in Seattle with Edward and they are moved in together and, hey, why wouldn't a girl be excited about that?  Just know that I for one am elated about the turn of events and look forward to more.

Sandra

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Finally

So she is there and they are together.  This was a wonderfully happy last chapter.  Now for the epilogue!

 
Can't Let Go by madeleinejade Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 589]
Summary:

Bella ruins her friendship with Edward by confessing her feelings to him which he doesn't return. She goes back to Arizona for college but returns to Washington after graduation due to Charlie's illness. Can she and Edward be friends again?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 112590
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2008 Updated: March 24, 2009


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Who's Your Daddy?

So I read your first 8 chaper tonight and Imust say this story is very entertaining.

I love that your Alice is a wedding planner - I have always felt that would be the perfect job for her.  Love Hal - gay guys make the best girl friends.  Your Bella and Edward have hooked up rather early in the story which I find unusual .... but great!

It appears that you update often for which I am thankful as I look very much forward to more!  Thank you for sharing your story with us!



Author's Response: hi.  thanks for reading and reviewing.  i'm glad you are enjoying the story.  now, i don't usually post 8 chapters in one week.  that's insane.  i actually already had these written and posted on fanfiction.net and thought i'd post it here as well.  the story here is all caught up now to fanfiction.net so i will be updating about once a week sometimes twice.  just wanted to let you know that.  i do have another story complete on my fanfic account called saving me.  it has original characters as well but they play a more central role, and i'm told they work really well with the regular gang so you can check that out if you have time.  thanks again for reading.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: More Issues with More

Just so you know I went to ff and added you to my  favorite authors list!

This was a rather evil cliffie to leave us with but all a part of the fun!  

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Different is Good/I'll Buy That Cow

Silly grin on my face :::sigh:::!  Does is get any better than a naked marriage proposal?  Thank you for this story of great fluff.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Doing It Right

Yes, do count me in on the group aww!  And Hal is such a drama queen can't help but love him.  Great chapter of fluff!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Fantasy

This chapter was absolutley great!  The whole Uranus thing was so Emmettlike.  Bella and her costume was pretty damn funny.  Loved when Edward went to the bedroom witing for Bella.  I'd have felt bad for him but was laughing too hard.  Thank you for this very fun chapter!

Sandra

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Cookie Throw Down

These last two chapters have been so much fun to read.  Love the new apartment.  Love the trip to Florida.  Love Thanksgiving dinner.  Laughed at Emmett's cookies. A lot!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Pretty Woman

Edward is the perfect man ~ whether it be nursing Bella when she is sick and stopping mid fantasy to tend to her comfortably. 

I laughed a lot at Emmett in this chapter.  Rosalie's pregnancy should provide a fair amount of fun to the story.   

And I love Milton!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Eyes on the Prize

Best of Luck with your testing!

Edward in a loin cloth...::Sigh::!  And so the perfect song is ......?!!!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: March 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: CHA-CHING!

I laughed, loudly and for a long time, when I read that Alice wsaved Jasper and Edward's hair.  I'm still laughing.

 

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: March 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Mr. and Mrs. Cullen

With a smile and a sigh I say goodbye to this story.  Loved the characters and the antics throughout.  How can you not love a story that ends with a wedding?!!

And as we await the bonus let me take the time to Thank You for sharing your story with us.

Sandra

 



Author's Response:

mscope/sandra, thanks so much for being such a loyal reader and reviewer.  i appreciated all your feedback.  i'm happy you enjoyed the story. i really loved writing it.  stay tuned for the epilogue, and see my other responses to some of these reviews to see what's coming up next if you're interested.  thanks again!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: March 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue: Beginnings

Love EmJ.  Love that Edward and Bella will be trying too!

Of course The Daily Grind will be accepted!   It's a lot easier to say goodbye to the "old" when you know the new is coming.  Looking forward to it too!

 

 

 
Summary:

A sweet fluffy and slightly lemon like one shot based on the song by Tim McGraw called Don't Take the Girl.  Warning Lemon and you may need a tissue or two.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Song Based One Shots
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2607
[Report This] Published: December 04, 2008 Updated: December 04, 2008


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

O.M.E.!  That was one of the most beautiful things I've ever read.  I am so happy the ending was happy.  Thank you so much for sharing it!

 
Speed Dating 101 by elizabeth18 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 19]
Summary: When Bella goes Speed Dating, she gets more than she bargained for.  E/B AH
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1806
[Report This] Published: December 09, 2008 Updated: December 10, 2008


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What an adorable, fun piece of fluff amid the angst.  Thank you so much for sharing this!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

 

 
Summary:

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Inspired by Taylor Swift's 'You Belong With Me'.

Bella has been Edward's best friend since third grade. Now it's senior year, and nothing [not even his girlfriend Tanya, or the creeper James, or even her own insecurities] is going to stop Bella from making Edward see that he belongs with her.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 53887
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2008 Updated: July 04, 2010


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Bleachers

1st of all, all i'm sayin is this story has done just fine without jacob so far....unless of course tanya needs a new boyfriend.

so bella takes edward home after the game.  i'm surprised he did not go with his "girlfriend".  you told us how they (e/b) shared their first kiss....with they be each others "first" as well?  if that is so i imagine the set up for heartbreak will be pretty bad.  i'm looking forward to following this story as our characters grow.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Weak

Wow, will Tanya be in the picture much longer?   This could get very angsty!  Please be gentle with Bella. 

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Big World

"If I'm a butthead, then you're a poop face."  Possibly the funniest line in fan fiction history!  Love the pieces of their history you give us.

But why the Hale is Tanya still around?  It's not that your Tanya is evil or anything it's just that she's in the way of my HEA!   It's just that Edward is sending so many mixed signals and I am having trouble following them.  I just want him to take a stand and let Bella know how he really feels.  What did Edward say to Charlie?

Looking forward to more ... I have such a soft spot for the stories in which Edward and Bella have known one another all their lives.  Great chapter btw!

 

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Stupid Girl

I think someone wants to be Bella's boyfriend and I don't mean Tyler, even though he'd also like that position.  I believe they are both afraid of losing the other if their true feelings are known.   That each one would would rather keep the other in their life even as just a friend rather than risk losing the friend that they love so very much. 

Tanya is one very conniving girl.  She knows she is losing Edward and she knows that his heart lies with Bella.  She can't talk to Bella with others around so she takes advantage of Bella being alone.  She's very nice to her, plays the best friend card and procedes to apologize for acting all jealous and everything.  Poor Bella is not in Tanya's league of game playing and is falling for it and accepts the apology.  Looks like the only thing she bought at the mall was line of crap and more heartache.

I was so very happy that Edward was there to comfort here at the end of the chapter but I have a feeling that Bella is going to push Edward away and he'll go back to Tanya ... playing right into the web of the spider.   Oh, Bella, nooooooo.....  Of course, another senario would be that in comforting Bella things get carried away and they go too far and Bella becomes pregnant and she goes away to have the baby.....  Oh, Bella, no.......  I'm afraid each of my thoughts leave Bella in a very heartbreaking situation. 

On the other hand it is possible to turn it all around and create an hea and I refuse to believe anything different!

Sandra

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: The Other Woman

Wow, it's been a while since I've been Bella's age but my heart goes out to her ... and Edward too.

James is being a sleazy slug.  But what was he going to tell Bella?  Was he going to tell her that Tanya and Edward were together like stronger than ever and make Bella fell all sad and stuff?  Or was he going to say that Tanya and Edward were over and she (Bella) is responsible?

I get the feeling Edward harbors the same feeling as Bella and is afraid of ruining their best friend status and losing her all together.  Sooner or later one has to admit to the other their true feelings.  If Bella would just tell him how she feels at this moment I am sure Tanya would no longer be a factor. 

The hopeless romantic in me is pulling for them to find their way to one another.  I really like how you are telling their story.

Sandra

 
Summary:

One Christmas, Alice and Rosalie invite Bella to join them and their boyfriends on a vacation at Lake Tahoe.  Little does Bella know that Emmett and Jasper have cajoled Edward into going along as well.  Will it be a Christmas to Remember or a Christmas they both wish to forget?

Rating due to Emmett's and Rosalie's foul language and lemons.

Part II (Fool Me Once, Fool Me Twice) has started.  I cannot disclose the summary because it may give away the ending to the first part.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 44210
[Report This] Published: December 19, 2008 Updated: January 18, 2011


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: A Christmas to Remember

Aha, so the two scamps failed to tell Edward that he, too, would have a roommate.   I am somewhat certain that Bella is none to happy about this initially!  All other rooms at the lodge are no doubt full? 

Looking forward to more.....this should be fun!

 




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