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Penname: mscope [Contact]
Real name: sandra
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Attitude by Mystic_Ice24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 205]
Summary:

Isabella is shipped off to Forks by her parents.  Can her cousin and his friends get her to drop her tough exterior and reveal the sweet girl underneath?

Thanks to MrsC for the Banner!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 15348
[Report This] Published: August 21, 2008 Updated: January 06, 2009


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'd be cussing a whole lot more if they meant kisses from Edward! 

 
Summary:

It's a tough life being a music student, juggling lessons, practice, rehearsals, lectures as well as navigating through the social hierarchy.  Bella Swan, a gifted cellist, is given the opportunity to attend the prestigious Manhattan School of Music.  But it seems that she gets more than she bargained for when she meets the stunningly sexy piano major Edward Cullen.  When the rivalries heat up, and the competitive claws come up, musically and romantically, can Bella come out in the top of her class and win the love of her life?    


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 29117
[Report This] Published: August 23, 2008 Updated: December 07, 2008


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

What a wonderful story and wonderful music references as well!  Your Edward and Bella have a special magic that are linking them.  I really like what you have written so far and hope to read more soon!

Author's Response: thank you :)

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Edwards Interlude was fun to read!  Bella never stood a chance to his charms or maybe it's the other way around!  I am very happy he's not with Tanya but why do I feel there is more drama to come there? I had to laugh that he paid Alice not to go to the museum - that was great!

Also read chapter 5.   As always Emmett is the perfect fun filled big brother.  Loved your music choices - thru the magic of utube one has the option to listen and read which always helps!  

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

I likw the spirit that is shown in your Bella.  Now just let her win!

Jake at 14 andvery hormonal was quite funny!

Edward's love and caring for Bella warms my heart.  Ever the gentlman.  I look forward to thier relationshipas it progresses.

I have enjoyed this story and  have to say this chapter was wonderful!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

You're back!  I have truly missed this story but absolutely understand the whole Real Life thing.  I'm perfectly happy to take what we can get whenever we can get it!

Your Tanya is a real piece of work and the scary thing is that I have actually known a few people like that in my lifetime!  That being said, I don't duppose we've seen the last of her.

I like how Edward and Bella are getting closer and he is so protective of her ::sigh::!  I dontt think it gets a whole lot better than that!

 



Author's Response:

Awww..thanks for being so understanding! 

Yeah, I've met way too many musicians like that, so what Tanya is based on is very real, unfortunately. 

But thank you for reading :D

 

 
Collide by EClovesME Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

She was the dorky newspaper editor. He was the athlete that the female population at Forks High was in love with. An AU Bella/Edward Story.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 12074
[Report This] Published: August 23, 2008 Updated: December 18, 2008


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Thinking of You

This story is so sweet!  I like how Edward is a jock and so very sweet.  Looking forward to more.

 
Summary:

For True Edward Fans. An in-depth, accurate portrayal of the heart, mind, and soul of the beloved Edward Cullen as he deals with the complex themes and events taking place during Eclipse. RATED T FOR TEEN, ALTHOUGH CHAPTER 8 CONTAINS SENSUALITY. CANON. EPOV.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 64609
[Report This] Published: August 24, 2008 Updated: November 08, 2008


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: August 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Theme from Chapter 1 - Ultimatum

You've truly captured Edwards ability to overthink every little detail!  But what I like most is his firm conviction to never give up.  I am so glad that you have chosen to share this with us.  It is beautifully written and fun to read!

 
Summary: After an emotional two week romance, Edward and Bella are finally together and enjoying their life and work at Cullen Institute for the Arts. What happens when someone wants to shake up their fairy tale romance? Can Bella have complete faith in Edward? Sequel to Lullabies Go On!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 30507
[Report This] Published: August 25, 2008 Updated: May 06, 2009


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: The One With The Dress

Noooooooooooo, you can't end these 8 chapters like this!  I love this story!  I had to giggle when Emmett and Jasper gave Edward advice. The thing with Tanya is somewhat creepy - she's not going to take no for an answer is she.  Already looking forward to the next  chapter!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: The One With The Lesson

Oh, boohoo for Tanya, NOT!  I thought they did a great job of putting her in her place and foiling her attempt to seduce Edward .... at least this time.

I was also very happy with the way you handled the spat between Edward and Bella, having them make up so soon.

Great Story!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: The One With The Brahms

Sooner or later Tanya has to give up, right?!!!   I really like how Edward reassures Bella often and does his best to keep Tanya at bay.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: The One With The Easy Mac

Does Bella have allergies?  Did Tanya give her something to bring on a reaction?  She will be alright, right?   At least she called Edward when she could not breathe ... she could have called Alice or Rosalie.  Please help them to resolve their issues Bella needs to spends some time with her man.  If Bella is sick and has to stay away from work Tanya will certainly take advantage of the situation and we all know what she is capable of.

P.S. Love the story! 

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: The One With The ER

I am so happy thy are back together.  Now looking forward to how he will handle Tanya.  I have faith that Bella's recital will fo well!

And speaking of recitals ... Good Luck With Yours!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: The One With The Confrontation

I love the beautiful innocense of this story.  Your Edward and Bella truly complete one another.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: The One With The Question

I have missed the absolute purity of this story.  It has always made me smile.  Well Tanya never made me smile except when she was thrown out her ear but the rest has made me smile. 

And YES!  Bella says yes!

Sandra

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: May 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: The One Down The Road

Loved this story from start to finish!  And if you ever find yourself writing about this Edward and Bella again I'll be right here reading! 

Thank you for sharing!

Sandra

 
Summary:

Now, I love every single one of the Twilight characters, especially angsty, overprotective Edward, but let's face it - sometimes they can go overboard. This is a parody of the characters' personalities.

 


Categories: Eclipse, Crackfic Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 6030
[Report This] Published: August 26, 2008 Updated: September 19, 2008


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

There will never be a dull moment as long as you are around!  Your funny is genius!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: March 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I ran across this earlier .  Girl I have missed your wonderful wit.  Hope all is well with you.  As always thanx for the humor.

Sandra

 
Summary:

Three very different women, with one thing in common, must deal with life, love and betrayal.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Angela, Bella, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 71422
[Report This] Published: August 30, 2008 Updated: February 16, 2009


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: August 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Hallmark Holiday

I am going to need to strap myself in for this one aren't I?

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: September 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Stood Up

OMFE!  Do I like Tanya? No.  Did I just now want to be Tanya? YESSSSSSSSSS!

Author's Response:

lol! 

I love Tanya... she is a kick to write.

Are you Tanya-envy? 

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Dante's Ultimatum

Wow!  Did not see that one coming! Secrets, secrets!

Author's Response: yes... secrets keep you guessing!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Slumber Party

I've been a cheating bastard!  I've never respected womentr the way I should!  I fully planned to wine you and dine you, use you and move on!  But there's something different about you!  You're special!  I love you!  .....  Oh he's good, he's very good.  He is such a scoundrel! 

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Damn Him!

Oh, hell yes!  Hittin the fan now!

Author's Response: LOL! The fan is set on high speed...

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- Confrontation

Oh, MoB, how will Angela get past this?  One secret down, how many more to go?  Great chapter! 

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13-Assume Nothing

Dear Heartbroken1,

     Do you have any idea how excited I've been for this chapter?  The moment I saw the update notice I went to you tube to begin the Phantom of the Opera songs....that music is, hmmmm ........  Ok enough of that.

     Honey, all I can say is your girl is one strong willed girl.  Nothing like the voice of Antonio Banderas to remove my resolve and reduce me to a writhing puddle of ...... no, no I won't go there.

     Anthony made reference to Tanya's part time live in lover and I was somewhat surprised when he referred to the "neighbor".  Certainly he doesn't think anything is going on there.....?

     A death?   Who's death?  The child?  Angela?  Both?  Someone else?   It's going to be my death soon with all these secrets!

Beware the the Phantom of the Opera ~ Sandra 

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - My Mistake

Dear Forks ~

O.M.E. and the plot thickens!  It surprised me when Tanya asked herself "Was she the only other wife or were there more?".  I was proud of her that she talked with Dante about it and is at least trying to return the money.  

But ...... why do I feel that the stuff that hits the fan now is not going to be pretty?  I don't expect an answer, you know, secrets and all.   I'll just go to the forums and lurk about "listening" to the speculation while awaiting an update.  

Before I go ... There is a lot to be said for your Tanya.  She is not a bad person.  She is as much a victim as the others in this story.  And she's likable enough, not BFF material, but likable.   I have to tell ya, Forks, I am really impressed - for what it's worth, of all the ff's I've read  this is my favorite Tanya.

Sandra



Author's Response: Yes, the plot thickens- It is getting really nasty outside... Tanya is awesome... I really loved your review- so many just don't get her... I am so happy you like my version of Tanya so well... THANKS!

 




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