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Temptation Isle by bebe86 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Six couples, twelve singles, one island full of temptation. Edward & Bella are trying to reconnect, but will this holiday have the opposite effect? Can they really trust each other, or will it all just be too tempting? All the couples you know & love.AH

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 8433
[Report This] Published: September 15, 2010 Updated: November 15, 2010


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh Bebe what have you done?  Let me rephrase that, Oh Bebe what has Bella done?  Will this be a long 3 weeks?  I am almost afraid of what awaits.

Before I go I just have to ask.  Are Carlisle and Esme a part of the couples or are they a part of the island?  I can see where they might have been on board just to   observe the couples.  And then for guesses as to who are the singels ... Tanya, Lauren, Victoria, Leah, Jacob, Jane, James, Laurent, Demetri, Felix, Aro, Alex.  Okay so do I have one single right?  Do I have two singles right?  And so on down the line. 

Let the games begin.

Sandra

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Her boss fell for it.  lol.  And Edward is willing.  Even bigger lol.  Ya know this plan can make or break our couple.  Yes, it is true I am expecting an hea before it is all said and done, but, there is a lot of room for a very shaky journey.  She does not exactly like it when the girls look at him and the island will be conducive to just that.  Naturally it will work both ways however .....

On to the next chapter.  May as well find out who all will be there and what they are up against.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This sounds like a fun story to follow.  I look forward to how Edward perceives the idea.   Bust most of all I look forward to his journey to be all he can be.

 
Summary:

For Bella, it was love at first sight, and to this day, he still owns her heart. For Edward, he barely knew she existed until a chance encounter brings her into his life and into his heart. Life gets in the way and he breaks her heart. After children, marriages and 10 years have passed, can they find their way to each other again, or is it too late?  She knows she'll never love anyone the way she loves him, but can he ever envision a life with her in it?

**Rated for language and sexual content.**

Twilighted Senior Validation Beta: devilsgenie << She rocks!

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 110997
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2010 Updated: August 08, 2011


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 - Fall

What's with the J names?  James and Jacob both put a damper on my spirits in this chapter.

Yikes!  James knows where Bella lives and that Alice is with her.  That is downright creepy and I hope he goes down soon.

Jacob on the other hand is up to his old tricks trying to manipulate Bella.  The fact that he is going thru the children to do so makes my blood boil, and so not in a good way.  I love that Bella is parent enough for the both of them.  I really like what you have done with her!



Author's Response:

Jake can't seem to get over his immaturity and selfishness...he needs to grow up for sure!

James needs to be shot! LOL

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - You Save Me

All was well for Christmas.   Dinner with the McCarty's was good.  The children were happy.  Alice really seems to complete Bella's world.  And Bella was able to spend time with Edward afterall.  It was good.



Author's Response:

Bliss is making it's way into her life again huh?

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Hi!  I don't normally do this but I want you to know that I found your story this morning and plan to put it on alert after scanning the first several chapters and checking out your blog.  I will be leaving town in a couple of days for a month or so but I do plan to read and review when I get back.

Your writing is really very good and I can see myself getting caught up in this story.  See you in December!

Sandra



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Sandra! Hopefully I'll have a nice long "bath worthy" read for you when you return!  Have a great month! :)

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I have had this story on alert for awhile.  First I was out of town, then the holidays hit.  But I am back and ready to dive in. And excited too!

Sandra



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I hope you enjoy it!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - Let Me Let Go

Swoon.  I felt this way when I saw my to be husband after a very long time.  So yeah, I can feel Bella's butterflies.

Sandra



Author's Response:

Swoon!!!  :)

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - I Still

Oooh boy.  I can see where things can get, or rather will get, rough for our girl.  But you know what?  Sometimes ya just have to go for it and let the chips fall where they may. 

Sandra



Author's Response:

Very true!!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Semi-Charmed Life

Whoa.  She said she wanted to keep him locked up and she did do that.  

There is mention early in this chapter about her driving to his house during the week but he has to work so she does not go.  I am seeing a red flag here.  Is there someone he does not want Bella to see?  Just wonderin'.

 



Author's Response:

Wouldn't you??  lol  Stay tuned!!  lol

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - No Air

We don't have enough info to speculate at this time so that is out.  But Emmett, you know Rosalie's husband, is that Edward's friend?  Rosalie does not make a connection with the Edward in the picture but that doesn't necessarily mean the E's do not know one another.  Oh jeez, what if Edward comes to visit?  Now that is a whole new can of worms.  Of course I wonder if Edward will friend Bella too.  I am sure glad I have lots of chapters to read yet, lol.

Sandra



Author's Response:

So smart!!  :)

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - Call Your Name

Surprise?  I like surprises.  But alas and alack I do not see any surprises.  I was stunned that Edward is moving to San Diego so I am going to say yeah that he is friends with Rosalie's Emmett too. I can't help but wonder what direction things will go in if they are in the same town.  Will he bring his girlfriend of two years with him?  But will it really matter if she packs up and goes back home?  She really does need the closure if she has any chance of moving forward.

Sandra



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!!  Glad you're enjoying it!!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 - Bleeding Love

I see I was wrong and they are only going to Washington to visit.  That's what I get for reading and talking on the phone at the same time.  I am curious if Emmett has or will mention Edward to Rosalie as he did mention having friends.  Oh well if they are going they are going to see him anyway. I am glad Bella will have her friend with her this time.

Oh well will have to pick this back up in the morning.



Author's Response:

:)

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - Need You Now

Oh boy.  It's going to hit the fan now and the fan is on high speed.

Excuse me as I rush forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Haha!!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - I Will Possess Your Heart

I am so happy that they are finally able to speak about the break up.  Bella really needs this and it appears he does too. 

So if the girlfriend is not going to San Diego that means he is a free man so to speak.  When you factor in the chemistry that E/B still share I can't help but wonder where this will lead.



Author's Response:

Du, du, dunnnnn!!  ;)

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 - Didn't You Know?

This little trip down memory lane was humorous.  He knew exactly where her mind went and I am somewhat certain his was there too! 

Listening to his explanation at the pizza place really let us see that he does not have all the confidence in the world.  Things could have ended so differently had Bella not gotten married.  Makes me kind of wonder if Jake didn't move the marriage along a little too quickly while Bella was in such a fragile (for lack of a better word) state.  She definitely married him for the wrong reasons and now has 3 reasons to stay.  But, always the but, how can she stay with Jake in a blah marriage?



Author's Response:

Jake's a sneaky ass huh?  

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - What I'd Give

Holy Moly, she is going to lay it on the line isn't she?  Put the ball back in his court and let the chips fall where they may.

I, too, shed a few tears in this chapter.  Not for what was or what can't be, that is all neither here nor there.  No my tears were for the unresolved feeling in the here and now.  She is was no closer to closure after talking to Edward than she has been in the past.  And if he is being honest with himself neither is he.

The phone call from Jake shows just how dominating he can be.  It does confirm my suspicions that he used her more fragile state to manipulate her into marriage.  And he continues to use it to hold her to himl.  Thank goodness I finally see the light and won't feel so bad when she leaves him, lol.

Now if Bella can just reach Edward ....

Sandra



Author's Response:

She'll keep trying!  She can't let herself give up on love.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - Truth

I won't lie, I was disappointed when she did not send the email to Edward.  On the other hand I can understand where she was coming from.  Seeing him, talking to him did not allow for the closure she so desperately needs.  Laying her emotions on the line, baring her soul in written form is what she needed.  To send it at this time would have placed guilt on Edward.  That is not Bella's style, it is Jake's.  How could she do that to Edward?  Do I no longer want her to send the email to Edward?   Oh no.  I want her to send it to him.  I just want her to do it when the time is right for her.

I am so proud of Bella.  She is standing up to reclaim her life.  The conversation with Jake and his follow up email left me rooting for her.  Her talk with Charlie and his understanding make my heart smile.  She really is on the road to self discovery.

Sandra



Author's Response:

She's finally finding her identity again and it's making her a stronger person!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 - I Still Miss You

OMG!  I thought she decided not to send the Email.  Hmmm.  Guess I need to re-read that part. 

However, I can barely contain the excitement I feel for the kiss they just shared.  Are the ready to be together?   Gah, why do ask that of a woman that would have jumped the man right there in the open?  I do believe she should wait.



Author's Response:

HAHAHA!!  ;)

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - If I'm Not In Love With You

Bella is about to be a free woman.  *cue the jumping up and down*  Running into Edward at the mall.  *cue the jumping up and down*  The call from Alice.  Well I am not jumping up and down because of the circumstances but I am certainly happy she is coming to see Bella.  Won't be long and she will meet Jasper and that is a very good thing too.



Author's Response:

Go Bella!!!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - If You Only Knew

I sure hope to see the end of James soon.  He is one scary dude.  Good thing Emmett was there and Edward came to the rescue as well.  

I am super excited that Alice is about to meet her future.  Bella and Edward are inching forward in their relationship so all is well on that front.  Looking forward to the New Year's party.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading thru!  I will get the next chapter posted soon!!  xoxo

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - Give In To Me

Whew!  You had us going there for a minute with Victoria.  The fact that everyone tried so hard to keep Bella outside and away from Edward made it seem so much worse.  But all's well that ends well and I, for one, smile.



Author's Response:

I think in my mind, they didn't want her night to be ruined, while Edward tried to get rid of her.  Smile, smile, smile!!  Thank you!

 
The Best Summer Ever by dinx Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Best Summer Ever Banner

Thanks to Riley Calvin for making the awesome story banner! =)

Edward went in thinking it was going to be just like any other summer working at Camp Wannalayme, but it turned out to be anything but. Winner of two awards in the Camp Twilight contest. AU/AH


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4176
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2010 Updated: September 27, 2010


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi Dinx ~

Real life has been, well it's been and now I am catching up!  When I saw you had a one shot I had to read it and girl I N.E.V.E.R. read one shots.  I am glad I read this one.  I think I woke the hubs laughing with this one. 

Loved the names ... Morning Woods Forest, cabin names and of course Lake Wannalayme ... they were so perfect for six kids at camp.  I went to summer camp once and now I wonder just how much went on behind the scenes with our counselors.  I liked how they all came together to share a summer of love and fun.  But it was more than that.  It was a destined right of passage.  Having grown up on a small lake in a small town we all had that defining summer where we went from young and carefree to being grown up and in love.  I swear it was all in the water.

Sandra

Sandra



Author's Response:

Hiiiiii, bb! :D *Tackle hug* I’ve missed you. I hadn’t heard from you in forever and wondered where you went. L I hope all is well. Your reviews are always so sweet and well thought out. (I even mentioned you in my Under the Radar post in the section on reviews) It made me sad when they stopped coming. Real life does take precedence, though. I totally understand that. Believe me!

 

I’m so glad that you liked the o/s. It was something silly and I had fun writing it. It’s way different from my other story. I liked being able to break away to write some fluff.

 

It’s so great to hear from you. I hope you’ll be sticking around now. I really have missed you. The next chapter of ALBtY has also been uploaded and is waiting for validation, so it should post soon! You’ll have to let me know what you think. We’re in Edward’s head now. J

 

Hugs and Smooches!!!

 
The Meeting by Looby Luscious Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Photobucket

One cold, winter night, a barman witnesses two strangers meeting in the bar and wonders at their story.

As usual, my deepest thanks go to frozensoldier for the fabulous banner.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Carlisle, Esme
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1348
[Report This] Published: October 05, 2010 Updated: October 19, 2010


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Meeting (One shot)

I love that this was Carlisle and Esme.  I can't help but smirk and maybe a blush a bit as I think to myself that many things get better as we become older.

Sandra



Author's Response:

I always thought it would be a good thing to try myself - arranging a "first date" with my husband. Never got round to it though. Besides, he is such a rubbish actor, he couldn't role play if he tried!!! lol

 
From This Moment by jeniclaxton Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

"Um, hi.  My name is Bella.  I hate that they have joined our schools together to form a middle school."

"Hey.  My name is Edward.  Me too.  They should have waited until next year when we will be in high school." 

When Bella meeets Edward in junior high school, they instantly become friends.  Follow them through their lives as they go through heartbreaks, lost loves, friendships, and drama.  This is actually a true story for the most part.  Will end up being a military story FYI

Rating is just in case for future chapters. 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 10518
[Report This] Published: October 20, 2010 Updated: May 25, 2011


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Science Class

This is cute.  I like how you have captured the tween years in that, for the most part, kids are so unsure of themselves at that point.  Although I am sure had we been sitting at Emmett and Rosalie's table  it would have been different because Emmett is such a people person and knows no strangers.  The initial E/B meeting is quite smooth actually.  Alice sits with ?, Jasper maybe?  I am looking forward to the friendships that will be formed in this year.


Sandra

 




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