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Real name: sandra
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Member Since: May 18, 2008

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Blood is Thicker by katmom Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]

What if Edward didn't skip blood typing that day in Biology class? AU




Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 8985
[Report This] Published: November 05, 2011 Updated: February 15, 2012

Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 and Epilogue

A true mate bond.  Do you have any idea how happy I was to read those words.  And although I loved LJ's story mate bonds make me happier. :).

This was a joy to read.  Thank You for sharing it with us.

Author's Response:

Thank YOU, mrscope!  HEA makes me pretty happy, too!

And I LOVED LJ's OUNtY, too.  CRIED like a baby, but loved it...LOL

AND when I wrote that bit "a true mate bond"...she laughed at ME!!!! LOLOLOL


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

As luck would have it the Quileute tribe is unable to track Bella's demise.  And with Sam the only werewolf what chance would they have had?

I felt bad for Edward in that he had to listen to the service and everyone's thoughts.  But Charlie's words were the worst.  To be the cause of so much anguish has to be tough.

Emmett's words of "Don't let her break you in half, bro."  made me think of Rosalie at first.  Then I laughed at myself as I remembered a "newborns" strength.  Hopefully it is because she is happy to see him.

Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hoh Boy!  As the story started I was all smiling and following the convo thinking how cute.  Biology class with blood typing came and, yes, I expected Mike to take her to the nurse.  But for Edward to offer and then run for the hills my heart began to race and I found the mouse curser moving at such a rapid pace I damn near fell out of my chair from dizziness.

What to do, what to do now that he has her so far away.  At this point he can kill her or turn her.  Bella tells him she wants this but she has no time to process.  This is a whole new ball game as we witness the bite.  I ponder and hope like hell that Rose is not going to kill him.  And for the record I am going to go with dead-ish.

You by Little Miss Mionie Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]

Bella's summer after "the incident" isn't like the others. She's broken her mother's heart, she's haunted by a man's foolishness, and the clouds are crying. And then, there's Edward.

A Summerboy outtake for F4SAA.

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Phil, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1980
[Report This] Published: January 01, 2012 Updated: January 02, 2012

Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: You

I love the E/B relationship in this story and how he wants to protect her.  And sitting at the piano as he tries to teach her to play?  Loved that part.



Edward Cullen is a musician who's been away from the town of Forks for over 10 years. When he returns, he runs into an ex-lover, Bella Swan, who he spends an evening catching up- will he try to rekindle the flame? Inspired by Dan Fogelberg's 80's hit "Same Old Lang Syne"  AH/AU – Rated M



Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3067
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2012 Updated: January 12, 2012

Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: A Toast to Innocence

A beautiful story filled with angst.  Oh what could have been.  And I cry.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Aww, sorry it made you cry!

I hope to continue this story in the future, I would really like to .. I don't feel their story is done yet :)


Celebrity, Deconstructed BannerEdward Masen and Bella Swan, high school sweethearts who married young, have their lives turned upside down when Edward is “discovered”. Celebrity, tragedy, alcohol and excess dissolve what seems to be indestructible… or does it? Can love rise above fame and indulgence? Or does Hollywood truly alter what is good in a man?




Romance, angst, humor, lemons.




NC-17 for language, lemons, rape, and various abuses.





Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 58046
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2012 Updated: June 01, 2016

Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG!  The angst bar has been set high but I am ready.  Looking forward to this one.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're taking on the challenge, sweet! I promise it'll be a good one :). Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ah, but I must reply to your response, lol. 

I absolutley understand the "if it was your mother" concept.  My sister and I alternated leaving our homes in one state to go care for our mother with Alzheimers 700 miles away for the last two years of her life.  Three months on, three months off and I would do it again without a thought.  She was with me when I entered this world and I was with her the last day of her life.  I found great comfort in being there for her and my father.

Angst, you say?!!!  AmoreBella, I was born to be an angst h00r.  I can't explain it but I love it and seek tales of woe.  Surprises?!!!  What I like so much about Celbrity, Deconstructed is I can't fit it into a mold.   I couldn't possibly give up on the story.  After all someone has to be around to make sure Edward and Bella find their way back to one another.  Besides it is my duty as a reader to let others know about the story.  I have added it to the cheat fic list at ADF (I did that right away).  I will remove it from that list when I get a better grasp of which list it should be on, lol.

In any event I am excited for this journey and look forward to each and every update.

Author's Response:

Your story about your mother brought tears to my eyes, sweetheart. It was so kind of you and your sister to do that for both of your parents in their time of need. I'm glad you can relate to Bella in that regard.


*chuckles* You're an angst hoor? Well, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. More and more angst to come, my friend. I'm floored by your comments, love. Seriously, they're making me smile like I've just gotten a personal email from Rob Pattinson. (Minus jumping up and down and the squealing) Please, share away, lol.


Hopefully *crosses fingers* there will be an update on Friday, which I think you'll like as well ;)

Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

My first thought is Bella is hiding a sonogram but that was sqaushed early on.  Then I thought maybe something for school?  Hell I have no idea, lol.  Nor do I have any idea what is going on with Renee but I sure look forward to your telling us.  Will she have to leave and go take care of her mom?

Edward and Bella seem to be so close and in love right now.  Why do I get the feeling that is going to change?

Author's Response: Hmm... lots of possibilities here, though none of them are exactly right ;) You'll find out shortly what happens with Renee. If your mother was in the same situation, what would you do? Don't write off our lovebirds quite yet, they may have some surprises for you. *sigh* I hate writing angst, but its going to be an angsty story... don't give up hope is all that I ask. :) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, love!

Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

He is quite smitten with Bella at first sight.  So I am going to take your A/N to heart and wonder about his line of love.  Guess I will be wondering about that til it is explained, lol.  A role maybe?  Okay, faith.  I can have faith.

Author's Response: I promise I'll make the ride worth it, lol. Thank you for taking a chance, for reading and reviewing!


A Twilight fairy tale.

Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1653
[Report This] Published: February 04, 2012 Updated: February 07, 2012

Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon a Time (one shot)

Looby ~

'Tis truly a fairytale that ends ever so happily!


Author's Response:

Hey there, Sandra! Hope all is well with you :)

Glad you enjoyed it. Hopefully it will help me to really get on with my main story now!!!



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