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Penname: mscope [Contact]
Real name: sandra
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Lost and Found by gemmabobella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 774]
Summary:

Bella Swan is now a teacher at Forks High school. She's been gone for six years, and now she's back.  What old and new friends will she find? What happens when she is reunited with an old crush? A realistic look of life, love, and the pursuit of happiness. Is true love only found in fairytales? Find out!  Special thanks to Manyafandom for the Banner!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: No Word count: 216661
[Report This] Published: October 21, 2008 Updated: September 20, 2009


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Forks

Dear Gemma ~

     I finally made it thru your amazing story.  My heart breaks for your main characters but is also sings in the fact that they have found one another! 

I really like how you are letting the story play out revealing the angst little by little allowing the reader to absorb the complexity and depth of despair in each of the characters.  Thank you for this.

In Chapter 18 you wrote "I was seeing him through the rose colored glasses of new love....."  and that is exactly how I feel reading what is written so far.  As the angst of the story makes me cry the purity if the love makes my heart swell with the happiness that only love can bring.   The first kiss they shared in chapter 16 was so real, so beautiful.....

Chapter 22, :::sigh:::, yeah.  I wish Bella would have been ready, I was!   Thinking that the time was right there I was playing Neil Diamond in the background .... well Bella will know when she is ready.  I look forward to the moment but not for the smut content.  I have a feeling that when they are together for the first time to make love  that it will be gentle and it will be loving and it will be complete.  No pressure on the author, mind you, but from what I read so far I feel you'll make her first time so special! 

So I sit at the laptop with a somewhat foolish smirk debating on whether to delete or submit what I have written.  Ah, what the hell .... submit wins.    You update on Saturdays, huh?  Let's see today is Wednesday.......

Sandra



Author's Response: Submit is always a win!  I'll use this as an opportunity to thank all of you reviewers!  I encourage all of you to join us over on the forum.  You'll get teasers, and sometimes I slip up and reveal things which is fun.  We have good convos, and we're a fun bunch, so please stop by and say hi!  Yes, I do update on Saturdays ... at least I try to.  I've also started working on Edward's Story - Amazing Grace.  I'm going to wait a while to start posting those chapters here.  BUt if you really can't wait, the first chapter is up over at fanfiction.net.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Forks

Dear Gemma ~

     Thanx for the reply.  But I think I may need a beta for my reviews!  I had said:

"I look forward to the moment but not for the smut content."  It should have read "I look forward to the moment and not just for the smut content."  

I only clarify this because I think your "smut" scenes are very loving and beautiful. Does that make sense?

In any event I do follow my favorite stories on the forums.   Sometimes the posts are as much fun as the stories themselves!   I avoid posting because I always seem to get discombobulated  and things don't always come out like they should.  

Sandra

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Pop

Wow Gemma, always something to think about.....  

I would love nothing more that to give you a profound, insightful  meaningful review but I can't wrap my mind around Edward.  One minute I think I get him and the next it's like what the hale just happened.  But, like  a magnet, I am drawn in for more.  I want more .... now!  I did read your first chapter of Amazing Grace on ff.net and I have a feeling that whatever we don't understand this time around will be answered for us through EPOV.  I have purposely stayed away from the forum thread because it just confuses me more....too many thoughts and ideas to think about. 

I have really enjoyed this story and no matter how long it takes to tell I for one will anxiously await each new chapter!  Thank you so much for sharing this story with us. 

May you and yours have a blessed Holiday Season!

Sandra

 
Summary:

Edward's family hire Bella Swan to break the heartbreaker's heart in hopes to have him see the error of his womanizing ways. Bella realizes that they have a little too much in common and is having a little too much fun with this subject. EXB Lots of lemons later.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 43 Completed: Yes Word count: 322353
[Report This] Published: October 21, 2008 Updated: September 14, 2011


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: The Line

Only 3 chapters and already Edward has no idea what has hit him!  This story is going to be a great deal of fun to read!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Our Song

I was just at FF and read your newest chapter and realized I did not review ... so ...

I love this story.  I love this Edward despite the fact that he is a man whore.  Despite he could care less about women.  Despite he is a pig.  He is just so damn cute.  That and the fact that he is going to turn to mush ... if ... if Bella doesn't first.  I mean they are both players and they are both gettin played.  The whole story has been very entertaining and I am so glad I changed my mind and decided to read it!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Temptress Tuesday Part II

I can't help but giggle to myself and ask just who is getting the last laff here!  Both, Eand B, are in just a little deeper than ever before and it is so much fun!  Thank you so much for sharing this story with us.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Wanking Wednesday

So Edward how do you think dinner will go with your folks and your love?  I love that he is calling her that now.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Touchdown Thursday

What a predicament.  Was that as much fun to write as it was to read?

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Falling Friday

This was the best chapter yet!  I laughed - a lot - in the beginning.  I love that Edward is jealous.  Thank you for sharing some Edward history with us.  It gives a whole new depth to his character.  You have a great knack for "taming" Edward and making us fall in love with him!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Serious Sunday

Susan Blake?  Emmett Mccarty?  To find out after all these years that they were one anothers first was far too cute.

And the intervention ... wow.  I guess Jordan will be up and out of that chair in no time. I can not fathom how hard that would be.  Hopefully they will be able to pick up the pieces and move on.

Edward has certainly become a different man since this story began.  I can certainly see where everything is going to work out fine now.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: The Good

Enjoyed the chapter immensely.  So much fun!  And yes I did google the chair!  And yes I caught all of the "our" references and the toothbrush!  I pretty much roared when Bella called Alice a shrimp puff...that was funny.   This story has been so much fun.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: The Bad

Oh, Edward, NOOOOOOOO!  He can't leave her like this, he just can't.  She's too vulnerable right now.  What happened to the "My heart seems to be a few steps ahead of my head."?  Certainly his heart is not telling him to leave her.

::deep breath::  Okay.  It's under control.  Miss E their future is in your hands.  Uh, just how ugly is "The Ugly" going to get?

Keeping the faith.....Sandra

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: January 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: The Ugly

Okay, so this wasn't so ugly.  It wasn't exactly pretty with all the angst but it could have been a whole hell of a lot worse.  Well things are not very pretty for Daniel right now and his wife.  And not so good for Bella either in that she probably blames herself.  Well and for Edward either since he probably blames himself for leaving Bella.  Oh hell, it just got ugly ok <said with sarcasm!

Despite the fact that Edward had been a slug's sac in trying to distance himself from Bella he was there for her in the end.  Hopefully he will stay now.

Love.This.Chapter.

Sandra

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: February 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: I Need You

Great Chapter!  Loved the Rob Thomas part...both of my sons look like a younger Rob Thomas...people actually ask for thier autographs!

I actually felt bad for Edward when he realized there aren't many place he can go without girls knowing who he is...That is I felt bad when I finished laughing.  Reminds me of an old saying, "Life is like a jalapeno.  What you do today could bite your ass tomorrow."  Yes, Edward is fucked everywhere he goes!

Love this story - Thanx for sharing it with us!

Sandra

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: March 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Eye of the Storm

Loved the chapter!  Loved the ring!  Loved the panties and Thanksgiving dinner with Carlisle and Esme...laghed...a lot!  Loved the concert...loved him playing piano for her...he was sure jealous!  Felt really bad about the DVD that he found...really, really bad.  8o(  It's just that he was so very happy.  I have to trust that all will be well.

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: March 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: The Gala

I feel really bad for Bella.  No one should have to endure this type of treatment.  It's bad enough to be manhandled  but to act like nothing is wrong all day long and then to verbally humiliate her in front of family and friends was deplorable.  I will not defend his treatment of her.

On the other hand had Bella come clean this could have been avoided.  Edward must feel he had been humiliated by his family.  And worse than that the woman he loves.  He was ready for a lifelong commitment and must also feel betrayal.

What a fine mess this is.  Oh what a tangled web we weave, When first we practise to decieve!  Sir Walter Scott.

 

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: March 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Black

Finally finished catching up.  Right about now Edward has to know that Bella really loves him.  And Bella has to miss him too.  They need to sit down, have a nice long talk and reconnect a little slower. 

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: August 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: A Day in the Life of Dr. Swan

Edward has got to be thinking his woman has the best profession in the world!  Well part of the time anyway.

 
Loss by MuffNbutter Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

"I'll love you forever, no matter what," I always said.
"I know. Nothing can ever come between us and nothing will ever make us forget our love for each other. That's not a promise, Bella, that's a fact," he always replied.

They were born to be best friends, and born to love each other forever. But when tragedy strikes, will Bella remember that love will survive through all? Will she be able to learn how to live without the one who taught her how to love in the first place? Can love be found again, after it's  been ripped away so suddenly?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2325
[Report This] Published: October 23, 2008 Updated: October 24, 2008


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Loss

That happened to one of my best friends many years ago  so this story pretty much ripped my heart out.Thank you for being so true to Jacob.



Author's Response:

I'm so sorry that you can relate to the story, honey. But I also want to thank YOU for appreciating how I portrayed Jacob. Once again, I'm terribly sorry for your loss, and I'm not sure whether your saying that your friend had a loved one die on them (for which I'd hope that the friend in question found their own Edward Cullen ^.^) or if you mean your friend was killed via hit and run (for which I can say I relate as well... and let us eat ice cream in our pajamas together to bond/mourn over this), but either way, I feel for you, my dear.

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Loss

Response to Authors Note ~ I had just put a scoop of ice cream in the bowl and sat down to read my e-mail Is that like the Twilight Zone or what? 

He was killed by a drunk driver on his way home from the wedding rehearsal the night before the wedding 37 years ago.

Several years later she married, get this, the older brother of one of the BFF's in our circle of friends!  They were married 28 years when she died of a stroke in her sleep.

She was one of those that attracted Murphy's Law but no matter how bad she always bounced back and was an inspiration to everyone around her. She was one of those people that not only loved life, she lived life.  I lovingly remember her best as an angel on earth! 



Author's Response:

Lol! I got myself some ice cream, too! cheers to great minds thinking alike! *clinks ice cream spoon*

oh wow, that's sad. My story isn't quite as bad, just more like my best friend's cousin who I was closer to than most other people, and he was murdered in a hit and run. I still smile whenever I see a shopping cart, remembering how he had pushed me in one when we were messing around at the store and he knocked it over and i had the lines of the cart bruised into my skin for a week hahaha

But wow... I'm glad she found someone else, and that's so ironic! I think that it's a nice thing to have someone who was close to both you and the person you loved there for you later on in life. In a way it's like its less of a replacement because that person can appreciate and miss the lost loved one as well, AND you know that the loved one would approve because they were friends. So yeah. I'm happy that the situation worked out well, and that when she passed, it was peacefully, and she got to live her life to the fullest before that happened.

 
Summary:

A one-shot story about losing your love/soulmate.

Bella is alone, expecting Edward's child.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1624
[Report This] Published: October 26, 2008 Updated: October 29, 2008


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: October 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So beautiful.  So sad.  And tears of sorrow fill my thoughts.

 
Reenactment by mrscullen17 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary: After moving everything out of her childhood home to live with her boyfriend Edward, Bella gets to learn what he wants by her one weakness. *Lemon*
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3086
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2008 Updated: November 01, 2008


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So I'm listening to Clare de Lune in the background while I'm reading this all of a sudden I get an urge to listen to Phantom of the Opera while I type this review .... hmmm, wonder where that urge came from? 

Ah the wonder of Fan Fiction and u tube!

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen made Bella Swan’s life a living hell from age ten to twelve. Finally fed up with the torment and teasing, she moved to Phoenix. Now she’s seventeen, beautiful, and has a new sense of confidence. When her mother sends her back to Forks for her senior year, she is determined to shake things up.

NC-17 for sexuality, underage drinking, and language. OOC, just to be safe. Some canon pairings, some absolutely the opposite.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 55461
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2008 Updated: August 22, 2009


Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4:Texan Twangs and Salad Dressing

Absolutey love your twist on the whole hot girl/bad ass story.  I am Team Edward all the way but I do hope Bella is going to take Edward and Lauren down.  Jasper will be a good love interest for Bella. Unless, of course, Alice discovers she's not a lesbian afterall.  I am excited to read more! 

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: November 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Slow Dances and Awkward Glances

How can one not love this story?!   It is fun to watch Edward and James fight over Bella while she goes with Jasper!  Looking forward to Bella and Jasper at his house!

 
Reviewer: mscope Signed
Date: December 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Vinyl and Interruptions

So glad to have another chapter.  Idon't know I kinda like the idea of Bella and Jasper......Edward hasn't had enought time to fret!

If real life will co-operate we'd love more!

 




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