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Never Again by superstarrh Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 508]
Summary:

Bella and Edward are reunited after breaking up five years ago.  Can Bella move beyond the pain he caused her to accept him into her life again or is the past too painful to overcome.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 64200
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2009 Updated: April 29, 2010


Reviewer: Melanie Carter Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: The Moment My Life Began

That's a really sweet memory! AWWW!

 
Summary:

Aro held his hand out to me once again and nodded to me that I should take it. "Perhaps something can be done, but first you must hand me some insight," he said softly.

Excerpt from chapter 15   

In medieval London Bella Swan is captured by Henry, a centuries old vampire. He changes her at the young age of 15 and they travel England, befriending more vampires along the way. But when she meets Emily, her world crumbles around her and the shards of Bella's broken life fall at the child's feet. And what trouble will the Volturi's intervention create?

The plague of the immortal children is still upon the world, that much is certain.

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 31684
[Report This] Published: April 28, 2009 Updated: January 12, 2010


Reviewer: Melanie Carter Signed
Date: April 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: The End

Well done, my dear! A lovely story - on to the next now! :D

Mel x



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

 
Reviewer: Melanie Carter Signed
Date: April 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Freedom in Perspective

Ha, good riddance! He didn't seem like a very nice guy and, if I'm honest, a little creepy...

Mel x



Author's Response:

Haha! Blimey! I have mixed feelings about Henry, he was a bad guy in many ways, and yes a little creepy as you say... but I can't get past that he actually took responsibility for Isabella. He took care of her, in his own way. Thank you for sharing your thoughts though, it's interesting to see what everyone else thinks. ) 

 
Reviewer: Melanie Carter Signed
Date: April 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Human Dream

Oooooh! Interesting!!

Mel x

Author's Response:

Melanie! Thank you so much, I hope it can hold your interest for a bit longer. ;P

 
Reviewer: Melanie Carter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: The Plague

Ahh, gotta love some good Volturi action! :D

Loving it so far :) Well done

Mel x



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! :) I'm glad you like it.

 
Fade by AdrienneRose Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 141]
Summary:

Edward - humanity or eternity?

Edward gains a chance at humanity when all Bella wants is to be immortal with him.

~*~*~*~*~

"It seems as though humans - at least a very private, elite group of humans - know about our existence and have been studying our kind for quite some time. They have come up with a way to fight against a vampire's inhuman strength."

"How?" I was sure I didn't want to know, but I asked Carlisle anyway.

"By making the vampire human again." 

Edward fades


Categories: Twilight, New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 36377
[Report This] Published: June 25, 2009 Updated: May 21, 2010


Reviewer: Melanie Carter Signed
Date: January 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Returning

Interesting start! I'm thoroughly intrigued! lol

Mel x

 
Summary:

My take on what happened at the Cullen house the day Edward bought a bed. Takes place during ECLIPSE.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 933
[Report This] Published: March 02, 2010 Updated: March 10, 2010


Reviewer: Melanie Carter Signed
Date: September 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 One-shot

I loved this!

It made me laugh so much - especially the last line!

So many one-shots you read are deep and thoughtful, I thought the light nature of this was perfect. I stumbled across this by accident, I really did, and it's made my evening.

Well done!

 
Summary:

A faceless lover destined to walk a lonely road. A broken wolf woven with fate to follow a set path. A cruel risk she doesn't have a choice but to take.

A tiny one shot about Embry Call. Very mild language & sexual references.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Embry
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1970
[Report This] Published: January 31, 2011 Updated: February 03, 2011


Reviewer: Melanie Carter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: I was no Imprint - One Shot

That was SO sweet! Came across this while looking for another fic and glad I stopped!

I really enjoyed it - such a difference to hear it from the 'one who was left behind'. In EC its always about how bad it was for Sam with Leah and Emily so it was really nice to hear it from a "nobody's" point of view. Although it was short, I felt so sorry for the poor girl - you captured the contrast between the love and subsequent desertion beautifully in such a short time.

It was so good - well done, you should be proud and definately write some more - you're good at it and I would definately be interested in reading more fics from you!

Mel x

 
Summary:

Bella and Edward have become very comfortable with their activities between the sheets. So comfortable, in fact, that one of them has considered the idea of trying something new...E/B AU/AH One-shot that I might make into a series.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2008
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2011 Updated: March 04, 2011


Reviewer: Melanie Carter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Theaters Can Be Fun *One-Shot*

Go, go, go! You better be writing that series already... :P

Mel x





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