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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Wild Thing by strangegreen Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 186]
Summary: Feature

Bella seriously needs a break from Alice and wedding planning, and all that entails, so Edward packs her up and takes her camping in the wilds of Montana.  Hilarity may ensue!

 

Canon pairings.  Canon compliant plot. 


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 21466
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: June 01, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Itsy Bitsy

I Really like this story - so cute. Update soon.



Author's Response:

Will do ;)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: How To Own A Lake

Great story



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: What Dreams May Come

"Oh, were you in the mood for a snack?" That was funny

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Clouds on the Horizon

I so love this story. What a cliffy! I can't wait to see who is out there. I do hope Edward changes Bella.

 
Summary:

What if Bella had went back to Phoenix after Edward left her? What if Laurent had found her and Jake and the other wolves weren’t around to protect her? My version of New Moon. Picks up after Edward and the rest of the Cullens leave Forks.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Laurent, Phil, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 9647
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2009 Updated: September 15, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Depths of Despair

love it update soon

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Unwanted Visions

Love it. MUST update sooN!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Decisions

I so love this story.

I see from the description Tanya is going to be in it. Is she going to be still hot after Edward? I can't stand Tanya~



Author's Response:

lol, I dont like Tanya either, I know how you feel.  And in my story she's not going to be so annoying.  If you read SM's description of Tanya and how she acts in Midnight Sun, she's not really such a bad person, she's just in 'like' with Edward.  And I cant blame her! Thanks for the review!!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Try and Catch me Now

I like this story a lot. Please update soon. How about a EPOV???

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Homecoming

so glad you updated

love the story

 
Summary:

SPOILERS!: I wanted to explore what would happen if Rosalie could ever be happy. She said what she wanted more than anything was a child. What if she could have that child? What if Carlisle could take an egg from Rosalie and a sperm from Emmett and create life? Would anyone become a surrogate for her? What would the child be?

I am currently writing this story (I'm in college so I'm cut short of free time), so be patient with me and it will all be up soon! This is my first fanfiction story, please review it :) Thanks!

Because this story will deal with mature themes I've rated it R.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 547
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2009 Updated: April 19, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Thoughts

I like it. I think it would be great for Rose to have a baby

 
Summary:

Bella's elevator ride with a gorgeous stranger becomes charged when the lift breaks down.  Things become more complicated when she discovers the stranger is her to-be boss, Edward Cullen.

ESS

Thanks to katmom for the great banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 73337
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: January 01, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I REALLY ENJOYED IT

 

MAYBE YOU SHOULD DO A EPILOGUE - 25 YEARS LATER - YOU KNOW, STILL HAVING GREAT SEX, 2.5 KIDS, AND SO ON.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I SOOOOOOOOOO LOVE THIS



Author's Response:

Yay, I'm glad you do!

Thanks for the review and rating!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I love this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

love the story



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I'm happy you like it!

Please vote for me at the Mystic Awards under Sexiest Story.  Voting is open now!

http://themysticawards.com.webs/vote.htm

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

THIS WAS ONE OF THE MOST PERFECT ENDINGS I HAVE EVER READ

IT SHOULD BE AN IFIC

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

love the story

 
Seraphim by FallenFlowers Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Bella meets a stunning new transfer student named Edward; good-looking, tall, smart... aloof. He requests to sit next to her, and says his name is Angel...

Could he really be one?

OOC


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 7439
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: October 30, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1: Angel

You have my interest



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: 3

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Seraphim has ended XD Chapter 3 was the last chapter, sadly. I might write a little follow-up but that's about it! Thanks for reading!

 
Summary:

“This is wrong!” I screamed aloud causing a cacophony of squawks as the nearby birds scattered in every direction, startled by my sudden angry outburst. My monster ignored my pleas as my limbs pushed faster than they ever have before. I was headed back to Forks. Back home. Back to my love. Back to Bella...."

Edward can no longer wait after he left Bella. He's coming back whether it is a conscious act or not. But can he bring himself to confront her and beg for forgiveness? Or will he merely stalk from the shadows? Oh the delicious calamity!

BxE, EPOV, Vampward!

Companion story to my one-shot Lace. This story is dedicated to the wonderful author addicttwilight2 and the loyal readers who demanded it.

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 952
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: April 21, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Insatiable Want

I so want them back together. Great writting.



Author's Response:

Me as well. Please keep reading!

 
Fractured Hearts by cfmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2406]
Summary:

We've all turned the pages on the four blank months in New Moon. Edward left Bella in the woods and told her didn't want her anymore; his arrogance expected that she would just move on with her life. What he never expected was that she wouldn't be able to move on any more than he would. An angry Bella is something he couldn't fathom. What he didn't take into account is that Bella believes that true love is worth fighting for, and she's going to fight to keep Edward and her family. The Cullen abandonment hurt her deeply, but she's turned that pain into rage. What will happen when Bella decides to let them know she's not willing to let them walk away and leave her behind? How will they handle one mere human girl that's extremely pissed off, and willing to do whatever takes to bring them back? The saying "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" has never rang more true. Bella's angry and on the warpath. Not even a clan of vampires will be able to stop her.

Fractured Hearts

"My heart may have fractured when he left me, but I adamantly refuse to let it shatter. I'm stronger than that, and I'm ready to get nasty. This is going to be a side your family has never seen out of me. I hope you're prepared, because when I'm done taking your stupid, arrogant brother down a few notches, I'm coming after you. Yes, you heard me correctly. You may be small, fast, and graceful, but I'm filled with enough rage at this point to go vampire on your pixie, ballerina ass!"  ~Bella - Chapter 2: Voicemails

Special Thanks to achelle131 for the amazing banner!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Quil, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: The Dirty, Horny Girls Chronicles
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 225614
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Confessions

A+++++++++++++



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I appreciate it and I'm thrilled you liked it. =)

~Lisa

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Martyr

I really like it. My heart aches when they are apart from each other!



Author's Response:

Thanks! My heart aches a lot when it comes to the stupid mistakes they make in their relationship. Still, I love some serious angst in my reading. In this story, however, I'm trying to keep the angst at a minimum as I believe SM provided plenty to go around.

Thanks for reading, and reviewing. I appreciate it.

~Lisa

 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Voicemails

I really like it. Some of the VM's made me cry. I think now it is time for her to track Edward down instead of leaving more VM's.

Great writting. I really am enjoyinig it.



Author's Response:

Thanks. Bella's pain is not easy for me to write, but at least she has started moving past it. She's not quite ready to track Edward down yet - but she has let me know that she has other plans for punishing him before seeing him face to face again.

I never realized Bella could fight dirty like this - she's surprised me.

Thanks for reading and leaving a review. Reviews are my brand of heroin. ;)

~Lisa

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Mistletoe and Message Panty Payback

Are the cookies decent lol



Author's Response:

Hahahahaha - Well, with Alice you can just never be sure what her idea of decent is. ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it so much and hope you a fantastic holiday season.

~Lisa

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Pendulum

Great writting. I agree, I hate it when they are apart



Author's Response:

Yeah, it's really hard for me to write because I love Edward and Bella together so much. Really though, in the upcoming chapters the apart time will be good. Alice and Bella have kept me laughing and crying all evening. It's been an emotional whirlwind.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I cherish each one.

Much love,

~Lisa

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Thin Red Line

I think she has a right to be angry, but I don't want her to stay that way for long. I reallly like the story.



Author's Response:

I agree she can't stay angry for very long. First, Bella never could hold a grudge. Second, she's really just wanting to make a point.

Let's say she exacts her revenge in unexpected ways. ;)

I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for reading and the review.

Much love,

~Lisa

 




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