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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.
Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!
I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.
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Summary: What if Edward wasn't strong enough to resist the temptation of Bella's blood, the first time they met? What if, instead of leaving, he changed his mind and went to her house to kill her?
What if Alice got to them in time to stop him, but not in time to keep Bella human?
Rated NC-17 for probable violence and smut in later chapters. I'm pretty sure it will end up E/B, but might take a long while to get there.
Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No
Word count: 97229
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2009 Updated: February 16, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Monster
Great story. Hopefully in the end she and Edward will be together. Update soon. Great writting.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Teething Problems
Love it. Update soon. Hopefully they will be together! The world isn't right when they aren't!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Debt
Such a great story - update soon!!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Homecoming
LOVE IT
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Besieged
Great story.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Temptation
Great chapter. Edward needs to let his victorian repression go!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Proposal, Engagement, Union
Great chapter
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Tabula Rasa
UPDATE SOON!@
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed 
Date: August 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Unveiled
Good chapter. Hope Bella eases up a bit on Edward...he was just worried.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: August 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discord
hope the cabin if filled with LEMONS
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Together
great job
glad to see the update
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Preparations
can't wait for more
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Countdown
GREAT JOB
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Coupling
CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE
Summary: What if Edward and Bella acted like regular seventeen year olds? With all the passion, lust, and curiosity that comes with being a teenager. Would Edward be able to keep both monsters in check? And will there be other more disturbing consequences to his lack of control besides just giving in? Can their new love handle anything?
A somewhat OOC re-telling of Twilight (with a few small plot changes) until Port Angeles, AU after that. Canon Pairings, Alternating POVs of Edward and Bella, Rated NC-17 for violence, language, a little alcohol/drug use, sexual acts and assault. If those topics offend you, please do not read.
Beautiful banner by: AchelleDenaliCullen
Categories: Twilight, New Moon Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Ben, Billy, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Collin, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Felix, Garrett, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Lauren, Laurent, Leah, Liam, Marcus, Mike, Phil, Quil, Renata, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Siobhan, Tanya, Tyler, Victoria, Vladimir, Zafrina
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No
Word count: 82752
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2009 Updated: March 11, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Aural Stimulation
I really like it. Can't wait for more! Author's Response: Keep reading! Next chapter will be out soon!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - First Taste
Bella is very funny in this one.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Nocturnal Emissions
Love this chapter.
Luckily, being humiliated and looking at my brother has caused my erection to cease. HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Perchance To Dream
Erections cause mild retardation. LOL@
This story is great. Horny Edward is soooooooooooo funny!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Flirting With Disaster
No, I just want to get to know her better.
Sure...
LOL!
Love the story
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Hot n' Cold
Love the story so much. Great writting. Thank you for updating so fast!!!! Your great.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Free Falling
Suddenly, as if God hates me, the skies part, allowing a deluge of rain to pour on us. Fucking Forks! LOL - I laughed out loud. What lousy timing.
I LOVE THIS STORY!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Damsel in Distress
Thank you for updating so fast. I can't tell you how much I love this story. As I said before, horny Edward is too funny!!!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Impending Doom
So love this story
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Spanish Inquisition
Great story. Who cares if he has a heart beat!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - A Heartbeat Away
to even out my useless breasts. I mean breaths = lol
Emmet is so funny
Great story. I like seeing a Edward that isn't so uptight. As I have told you before, a horny Edward is so funny!
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