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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

France 1830

After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But  when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 69901
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2010 Updated: August 26, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

excellant story and writting

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Very well written. I LOVE IT.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Looking forward to more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Looking forward to more. Okay, so Isabella and Marie are two different people?



Author's Response:

Maria is Isabella's cousin. Remember in the books how Jasper was turned by Maria? That character but not Hispanic like she is in the book. The name Maria has no play on Isabella's middle name. Maria, not Marie. It's confusing, I know but it will become clear. Trust me.    

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

I really love this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

This is an excellant story

 
Summary:

Isabella is a handmaid to Princess Jessica, Daughter of King Aro. When a knight from a neighboring kingdom wins his choice of bride, Sir Edward bypasses the princess and claims the handmaid instead. Isabella suddenly finds herself married to a man she does not know, and is tossed into the middle of political plots and scheming nobles. Her life is further turned upside down when she is unable to give her husband the one thing he must have.

"This is the hour of Forks' revenge. Volterra will fall to us for Aro's actions against your Queen, and no one – no one – who fights for Volterra will survive. We will not stop until every wall, every tower, every single structure in all of Volterra has been razed."

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes Word count: 229617
[Report This] Published: December 06, 2010 Updated: December 02, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Guardedly Celebrate

Love the story beyond words



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying it! :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Abruptly Change

A+++++++++++++++++

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Covertly Strike

I love this story (Heatherstwilight over at ff)



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!  :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Gracefully Endure

The writting and plot are amazing. However, with that said this is where I stop - which actually saddens me. You have done a great job with emotion. But I am E and B all the way. I just can't handle him being with someone else. It is your story and you should do what you want with it. I just reallly hate how Bella handled this like it was her duty...forget that!

 
The Dom next door by saritat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 89]
Summary:

 

Bella adored the older boy next door, Edward, never knowing he was or became a dom. Edward can't forget the subservient girl next door whom he cannot possibly have...


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 14789
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2010 Updated: January 10, 2013


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: From prologue to chapter 3

Great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: From chapter 4 to chapter 6

can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you kindly! :)) Keep reviewing!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: From chapter 4 to chapter 6

can't wait for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: From chapter 7 to chapter 9

can't wait for more

 
The Archer by Camilla Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 55]
Summary:

Centaur

 

Emerging Swan Award

Summary

No, this is not a vampire story, but supernatural all the same. It is the tale of a princess in peril and the mythical creature who saves her. They will love each other passionately but, as it is the case with other cross species mating, it will not be easy. The time? Oh, some 2,700 years ago.

Ἕλθε, Κύπρι,
Χπρυσίασιν ἐν κυλίκεσσιν ἄβραισ
συμμεμιγμένον θαλίαισι νέκταρ
     οἰνοχόεισα.

Come hither foam-born Cyprian goddess, come,
And in golden goblets pour richest nectar
All mixed in most ethereal perfection,
     Thus to delight us. (Sappho)

A reader asked if this is an Edward and Bella story. Of course it is. Only, he is not a vampire and they have Greek names with the same meaning...just saying

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 10015
[Report This] Published: December 18, 2010 Updated: January 15, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Prologue

Is this about E and B?



Author's Response:

Well, yes, Her name is Kallisté, which means Beautiful=Bella. Edward is a German name meaning defender, protector, you'll see what it becomes in Greek. Albeit he is a centaur in this story, you will find a comparable desperation (" I can't love you, I am an animal, a monster, etc etc). I hope I'll be faithful to the spirit of Twilight, in a very different setting...

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Alexios

Good writting and story



Author's Response:

So glad that you like it. Thank you!

 
Addicted by lizzylillyrose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 282]
Summary:

Banner - Addicted

Her life was uneventful until she met a stunning, mysterious, obsessive man with a monstrous hidden past. What happens when the past catches up with him and throws them both into the unknown?


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 262583
[Report This] Published: December 19, 2010 Updated: August 15, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Encounter

looking forward to more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Encounter

looking forward to more

 
Santa Baby by katiecave Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Christmas time in New York. What else could be more iconic, maybe a little love under the mistletoe? The gang all works at Cullen Department Store in NYC. Things are going well for Bella Swan until she starts getting mysterious gifts from her secret Santa. She wants to solve this mystery and everyone tries to figure out who Bella’s secret admirer is. However, will Bella still want to find out who her Santa is when she thinks she’s falling in love with someone else?

 

**ON HIATUS**


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 1531
[Report This] Published: December 20, 2010 Updated: January 08, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Music Box

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review :-)

 
From Afar by ange de l aube Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:


Edward is a reclusive College freshman. He holds back from making contact with the girl he believes could be his one true love because he doesn't think he's worthy of her affections. Fate intervenes, and they become friends during a biology class. Will he have the courage to tell her how he really feels or will he be stuck with admiring her from afar?


 


Banner made by me :)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 12867
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2010 Updated: December 29, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Love was right before my eyes (One-shot)

Great job

Loved the "what he was trying to get away" lol



Author's Response:

LOL... I thought that would be a nice comedic touch... Glad you enjoyed it...

 

Thanks for taking the time to read and review,

 

Happy New years!

 

Ange xxx

 
Summary:

In Texas 1930, young school girl Bella Swan meets the prestigious, hardworking and interesting farmhand, young Edward Cullen, who arrives one morning to work at the Swan residence. An attraction develops into a passionate courtship.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 757
[Report This] Published: December 22, 2010 Updated: January 14, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

looking forward to more

 
Through the Lens by marierouge84 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Bella is a popular photographer returning to college for her Masters. Edward is a passionate English Professor. Bella sees the world through her lens. Can Edward show her how much she is missing? How can he break through her defenses and what will he do when he finds out why she keeps everyone at a distance? Canon Pairings. *Warning*: Rated NC-17 for future reference of child abuse, lemons, and language.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 880
[Report This] Published: December 22, 2010 Updated: January 18, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

looking forward to more

 
Summary:

IvB Banner           

 (Amazing banner made by: TheseViolentDelights)

Isabella Swan learns that she's been traded like chattle by her own father. She's sent to England and married off to one Edward Cullen, asshole extraordinaire, but there's a reason for his temper problem and Bella's determined to break down his walls.

They told me on my eighteenth birthday, after Jacob had left. They told me that in a month I would be moving away, to live with a man a decade older, and run a household that I had never seen half the world away from home. I was given a blank manila envelope. It contained two pieces of paper; one was a contract, the other was a letter.

Mostly Bella POV, but other POV's are given periodically.

NC-17 for language, violence, and sexual themes in later chapters.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 19893
[Report This] Published: December 22, 2010 Updated: June 27, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

ready for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

A++

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

looking forward to more

I hope Bella wasn't in love with Jake - yuck

 




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