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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Wear Sunscreen by Bedazzled1918 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Edward and Bella, alone on a tropical Island...with lotion!  Need I say more?  Served straight up, with a hint of lemon.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 4203
[Report This] Published: September 27, 2010 Updated: November 03, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

love it

 
Summary:

After being dragged to a baseball game by her best friend, Bella Swan meets handsome first baseman, Edward Cullen with the help of a rogue foul ball. There's something about him that she can't put out of her head, and apparently neither can he.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 16412
[Report This] Published: September 27, 2010 Updated: November 20, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

dying here...update soon

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

LOVE IT

He trembled at the word ball lol. Glad Jake is a dog.

I am glad Angela told her not to be stupid



Author's Response:

I love Jake this way...he's so...silent. :D  Best ever!

Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

love the story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

good job as always

 
La Vita Sospesa by Jenny Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 93]
Summary:

La Vita Sospesa by Jenny Cullen


What if the result of Bella jumping from the cliff in New Moon hadn't turned out like it did in the book?  What if Alice hadn't seen Edward's decision to visit the Volturi when he heard about Bella jumping?  This story deals with the consequences of those actions.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 16791
[Report This] Published: September 28, 2010 Updated: June 02, 2012


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Resolution

I like the story. Jake is still an ass.



Author's Response:

roflmao  Thanks.  ;)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Joy

Loved it...well whats not to love about a naked Edward



Author's Response:

Hehehehe!  :D

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Evolution

Good job



Author's Response:

Thank you.  :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Tranquility

I am glad he is open about the change!



Author's Response:

Of course!  ;)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Acceptance

Time to change her



Author's Response:

Hehehehe  You may be right.  :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Determination

ready for more



Author's Response:

Hehehehe  Tomorrow!  ;)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Desolation

Tell me you aren't going to kill Edward off



Author's Response:

Would I do that??  I'm a total HEA girl!  Have a little faith!  :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Passion

A+++



Author's Response:

Thank you.  :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Hope

Well, she could have told them!  That would be frustrating.



Author's Response:

LOL  Sorry.  ;)  She's not allowed. lol

 
Summary:

"Please, you're a street musician. Don't tell me acting as my boyfriend for a few weeks isn't an improvement to THAT. I'll pay you!" I hate this guy but I need a boyfriend to get my mom off my back and...he kinda brought this on himself.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 7955
[Report This] Published: September 30, 2010 Updated: November 20, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: REC Chapter 1

I really like this. Good plot. Good writting. Please tell me you will finish it (so many stories stop at about chapter 5 never to be heard from again).



Author's Response:

I promise you I will finish this story. I really love it and even if I don't get any reviews at all I promise you I will write it because it's fun to write :) and thanks a lot for the encouraging words

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I really love this story. Great writting. I am very excited about this one. Now, get to updating!



Author's Response:

aww thanks soo much! I will keep updating regularly..well I promise I will try my very best!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

love it



Author's Response:

Thank you. I really appreciate the review :-)))

 
Summary:

 

Edward is a geeky comic book writer who has been secretly in love with his over-protective best friend Bella for years. He's too shy to admit his feelings, so he secretly starts writing a comic book inspired by Bella called 'Solar Eclipse.' 

 

After an embarrassing incident, Edward is forced to reveal his love for Bella to his friends. While Bella spends the summer before senior year with her mother, Edward, at the behest of Alice and Rosalie, goes through an extreme makeover.

 

Will Edward learn that unlike beauty, geeky isn't skin deep, it's the core of who he is? Will Bella finally see the love that has been in front of her for the last 8 years of her life.

 

Solar Eclipse

 

Story is B/E with canon pairings (B/J are only in flashbacks.)

 

This story is rated NC-17 for a reason, for crude language,future lemons, vampire violence, and bullying. Themes are Romance/Humor/Awkwardness.Story will alternate from EPOV to BPOV

 

Edward Cullen: Confessions of a Love Sick Geek was rec'd by Fictionators

 

http://www.fictionators.com/pwn-of-the-week/pwns-of-the-week-102110/

 

rec       

 

Thanks to Rason for the super-swell Blinkie, and to Evenstar for the Banner, Solar Eclipse Comic Cover by ME!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Geekward and Nerdella, SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 39509
[Report This] Published: October 02, 2010 Updated: January 01, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: October 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: *~ Just Friends ~*

you had me until she lost her v card to Jake.

 
Summary:

When Bella's tumultuous relationship with Jacob ends when she's sixteen, she finds that Edward has been there for her all along. She'll discover that falling and love isn't the end of the story, but in fact just the beginning.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jessica, Mike, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 14741
[Report This] Published: October 04, 2010 Updated: May 17, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: 1. The Short History of Bella and Jacob

Please tell me she never slept with Jake



Author's Response:

no. nonono.

 
Losing Faith by twilifed113 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 366]
Summary:

Bella's marriage is crumbling.  He's never home, he barely speaks to her... they haven't had sex in over a month.  It isn't until Bella's life is put in danger when she accidentally becomes involved in a crime that Edward reveals the truth... He's been working for the FBI.  Now he must lug a furious and untrusting Bella across the country in a hilarious and utterly unromantic road-trip.  Can Edward keep them both safe when she's been losing faith in him for years?

 

http://i747.photobucket.com/albums/xx117/Twilifed113/losingfaith4.jpg

Thanks Frozensoldier (below) and evenstar (above) for the completely awesome banners! 

http://i747.photobucket.com/albums/xx117/Twilifed113/LosingFaith2.jpg


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 30897
[Report This] Published: October 04, 2010 Updated: February 06, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: He Cheated

GOOD JOB

LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: He Wanted Faith

great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: He Explained

A+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: He Wasn't Home

GREAT STORY
GREAT JOB
LOVE IT

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: He Turned Thirty

I just love this story

Great job

 




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