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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Summary:

Edward&Bella

High school softball star Bella Swan’s life is immediately halted and turned upside-down when her father dies. In a blink of an eye, Bella is forced to leave the comfort of her hometown of Phoenix and everything else she has known to live with her estranged mother of six years and her new family in the small town of Forks, Washington. Though still in mourning over the death of her father, Bella decides to get back on her feet and find some sense of normality by going back to doing something her and her father had the best memories enjoying together--playing softball. But, Bella soon realizes that along with moving to small towns from big cities, there are consequences: No softball team.

When Bella decides not to take this news lying down, she soon finds herself in a world where she’s never been before.

The boys’ baseball team.

Oh, what green-eyed adventures wait for her there…

Many thanks to my best friend babymonsta for making my banner and who is also my Alpha before I turn in my chapters to the Beta. You are the Hayley Williams to my Paramore, love.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 53196
[Report This] Published: June 03, 2010 Updated: May 11, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Son of a Bitch

A++

 
Amends by edwards_girl_4_ever Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 267]
Summary:

A look at the time SM skipped over in between New Moon and Eclipse.  How did Bella get back to her pre-zombie normal?

 

Bella tells Edward how much he hurt her; the only problem is she tells him this in her sleep. What will Edward do to regain her trust and make this right? How did they overcome the hurt and pain he caused? What effect does this have on the Cullen family?  This is a strong Bella, who does eventually get angry with Edward and put him in his place. 

 

A big thank you goes out to FrozenSoldier who made this awesome banner!!!!!!!

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 34210
[Report This] Published: June 04, 2010 Updated: December 10, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Truth

good job



Author's Response:

 

 

 

Thank-you for reading and reviewing. 

I hope you like the rest of it.

~E

 

 
Summary:

The FBI's #1 special agent, Edward Cullen, hears the thoughts of those around him. The one exception is new recruit, Isabella Swan.

Can they control their feelings, and work as a team, in order to bring down the dark and dirty world hiding in Forks? Or will virtue give way to vice?

A taste of "Bond"ward from the Prologue:

He pulled his long, wool trench coat tighter around his body. It was so damned windy today and it cut through his clothes. It was hard to believe that only last week he was sunning himself on the beach in Miami.

He smiled, remembering how much he enjoyed the afternoon and midnight delights while there.

Damn, why couldn't all my assignments be in warm, tropical places where the women wore next to nothing?

He needed to find some sweet thing to warm him up. So he headed to the Farm, the FBI Training Center, hoping to find what he was craving.

Lethal to Virtue


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 96181
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2010 Updated: September 29, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

looking forward to more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16

such a great story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I really liked this. Please tell me she has never slept with Jake (yuck) and I will keep reading lol. I hate Jake and just can't do stories where they have been together together - yuck yuck yuck



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and review our story!!! Never going to happen with Jake.......Never!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Can't wait for more

Great story

Good job with the writting

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Edward...noooooooooooo!!!! Thinking with the other head!@

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

excellant job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

This is GREAT. Love the humor. Love that she has her v card. I don't love Jake - yuck yuck yuck. Looking forward to more.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I just love this story

Hate Jake - yuck!

Great writting

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Love it.

Edward is such a dog lol

I hope that is the last we see of Jacob

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

LOL air bags

I hate Jake

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: August 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Jake is such an ass

I just LOVE this story

Great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Excellant story

Fantastic job

Great writting

LOVE IT

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13, Part 1

Great story

Great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 14

A+++

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15

This is such a great story. Can't wait for the next update.

 
Summary:

"I could see the exact moment when Edward caught on to my intentions, and he stiffened, though from anger, surprise or lust I couldn’t be quite sure. Perhaps it was a combination of the three. Without really thinking about it, I snuck a quick glance at his crotch, and my eyes widened. Yup, lust definitely factored in there somewhere!"

Lemon Oneshot. Bella/Edward, rated NC-17 for language and sexual scenes


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2554
[Report This] Published: June 07, 2010 Updated: June 11, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Innocent? Really?

A+



Author's Response: :D Thank you!

 
Summary:

Bella moves to Forks, to avoid her newborn mother and the demented vampires who want her dead. Much to her surprise, she finds five of those very same creatures attending school with her.

Now she has to hide her knowledge and abilities from them, especially the very attractive Edward. But what happens when Renee exposes her secrets to the very people she's worked so hard to hide from? 


Categories: AU, Twilight Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 22668
[Report This] Published: June 08, 2010 Updated: September 18, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

A++++

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

So ready for more!!!

Great plot

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

EXCELLANT STORY

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great story!

 
Summary:

 

 

Edroar the Angry Lion, frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast?   AH/AU OOC 


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 104784
[Report This] Published: June 08, 2010 Updated: July 07, 2012


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Who Does That?

Great story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Plan A

love it



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading. I just submitted chapter 2 and I'm dying to hear what you think of it. Huge thanks for the review. It made me giddy. I really appreciate it.

xoxo

Kelly

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name ?

LOL

 

I just love this



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. It really is such a big part of the writing process for me. I'm submitting chapter 3 to be validated today. YAY! I can't wait to see what you think of it. Thanks again.

xoxo

Kelly

 




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