Your donations help keep this site running,
thank you very much for the support!
Penname: hc4metal [Contact]
Real name:
Status: Member
Member Since: February 28, 2009
Website:
Beta-reader:

I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


[Report This]
 
 
Reviews by hc4metal
 
Hearts On Fire by elizabethmac Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 48]
Summary:

Bella is working as a part-time bartender while completing her studies.  Edward is a new probabtionary firefighter who works out of headquarters right across the street.  When these two meet, fires will ignite, but will their love thrive or be consumed in the flames?  Lots of fluff, angst, and lemons galore!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 32667
[Report This] Published: June 02, 2010 Updated: June 05, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I really like this - very sweet

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

It might have been a short chapter but it was a very good one!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

a perfect 10

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I hope James gets what is coming to him

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Well, it ws good for me!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

great job as always

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

lol

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

ready for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

ready for more

 
Metro Mornings by ebc2010 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 89]
Summary:


Banner courtesy of the lovely kjxn


Bella Swan works in Washington DC as the deputy communications director for Carlisle Cullen, senator from Washington State. Bella is assigned to a special project, which apparently involves Carlisle’s arrogant son, Edward. In working with Edward, Bella learns to see through appearances in a world where nothing is as it seems and trust a virtual stranger with her life.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jessica, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 20940
[Report This] Published: June 03, 2010 Updated: June 25, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This is a very enjoyable story!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

love the story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

GREAT JOB!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Okay, love it. I hate Jake!!! Looking forward to more/



Author's Response:

Thank you! I dislike Jake, too - my best friend is totally "Team Jacob" so I thought she'd get a kick out of this :) Thanks for reading - and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

It would work for me LOL. Feel free to eventually kill Jake off - hate that mutt.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

A+

I would stay with him LOL

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I think it is good to give build up. Nothing worse than a story where they meet and within five seconds are doing the deed and then are madly in love (rolling eyes) - all by chapter 3.

Enjoying this story



Author's Response:

Excellent - that was my thought exactly. I typically stop after Chapter 3 when that happens :) Glad you like it - it's been hella fun to write!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This is an excellant story

Great job and writting

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

looking forward to more

 
Summary:

Edward&Bella

High school softball star Bella Swan’s life is immediately halted and turned upside-down when her father dies. In a blink of an eye, Bella is forced to leave the comfort of her hometown of Phoenix and everything else she has known to live with her estranged mother of six years and her new family in the small town of Forks, Washington. Though still in mourning over the death of her father, Bella decides to get back on her feet and find some sense of normality by going back to doing something her and her father had the best memories enjoying together--playing softball. But, Bella soon realizes that along with moving to small towns from big cities, there are consequences: No softball team.

When Bella decides not to take this news lying down, she soon finds herself in a world where she’s never been before.

The boys’ baseball team.

Oh, what green-eyed adventures wait for her there…

Many thanks to my best friend babymonsta for making my banner and who is also my Alpha before I turn in my chapters to the Beta. You are the Hayley Williams to my Paramore, love.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 53196
[Report This] Published: June 03, 2010 Updated: May 11, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Mourning Sickness

Looking forward to more. My cousin (female) was actually on a boys baseball team. She was a pitcher and some of the boys would cry when she struck them out LOL.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Bella's Bubble

great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: You Could Be Right, Mr. Presumptuous

Good job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Worth a Thousand Words & Pitches

I really like this story!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Bella Got a Touchdown

Forgot to review this chapter - love it

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Tumbles & Near-Rumbles

excellant

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Son of a Bitch

A++

 




Share/Save/Bookmark


© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.