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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

Edward Masen has lived the life of a nomadic vampire, travelling with James and Victoria since he awoke as an immortal. His ability to read minds has had the unusual side effect of making him a vampire with a conscience. Despite the ridicule from his coven mates, he's confident he's making the best of his existence and doing what's morally right... until he stumbles upon a brown-eyed girl reading in a meadow in Forks. As he attempts to befriend her and learns more about the sleepy town of Forks, Edward finds there's a lot more to being a vampire than he ever thought possible.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, James, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes Word count: 276627
[Report This] Published: April 22, 2010 Updated: June 26, 2012


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Enchanted

Dying for the next chapter

 

A++



Author's Response:

Expect it within the week, it's almost complete :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Competitive

perfect as always

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Panic

love the story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Panic

love the story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Confrontational

Great story..one of my favorites

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Suspicion

Such a great job!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Blindsided

Reading a book...she can read lol

This is a fantastic first chapter

Great writting

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Optimistic

Can't wait for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Surprise

Excellant. I really am enjoying the story.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Distraction

Very sweet

Great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Delusion

Excellant

Love a jealous Edward lol



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Confusion

This is really a great story



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Disconcert

This reallly is a fanastic story. I look forward to the next update.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Conflict

This is very enjoyable

Good writting



Author's Response:

Thank you, I try :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Apprehension

love the story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Mortify

This is a great story! Great writting.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you think my writing works. I get lots of comments on plot, but not as many on style, so it's nice to hear ;)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Jealousy

This is one of my favorite stories. Great job.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Anxious

excellant story

Bree deserved to be eaten for being so stupid



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying :)

Poor Bree, what's she ever do to you? :P

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Frantic

I really love this story. You have done a great job. Great plot. Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks :) Next chapter is partly done, so it shouldn't be too long :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Threatened

love it

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Playful

love the story

great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Uncontrollable

Excellant story



Author's Response:

Thanks :) Glad to hear you're enjoying it :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Scrutinized

LOVE IT AS ALWAYS

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Delight

A+++++++++++++++++++++++++

 
A Twisted Tale by miralin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 128]
Summary:

 

A dark force who tries to claim what she believes she owns... a man who must face his worst fears... two people who must learn to trust each other in order to survive…. It's up to Bella to protect Edward from a vicious stalker threatening to make his life a living hell; an assignment that turns out to be a little more than she bargained for. A complicated situation that becomes even more ticklish when old sparks fly between the agent and her protégé.

Warning:  Contains references to sexual exploitation (nonconsensual photography)

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 61111
[Report This] Published: April 26, 2010 Updated: November 24, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: #101 - I see you

THIS IS FANTASTIC



Author's Response:

Yay, my very first review here at twilighted. Thank you!

 




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