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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Work of Art by abstractway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1290]
Summary:

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Brilliant young artist Edward Masen is celebrated in the art world, but is the notoriety and trappings of fame also destroying him? When feisty Bella Swan knocks him off his pedestal, he realizes that she alone has the power to heal him.  In the lust filled world of art-whores and predators, will their passion for art, and ultimately each other, have the potential to change both of their lives?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes Word count: 299074
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2010 Updated: April 09, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Well, How Did I Get Here?

Fantastic as always (it's me Heather)



Author's Response:

You are so sweet Heather....I hope you know how much I appreciate you!

By the way, I read your comment on The Misaprehension of Bella Swan, and it's true we aren't all going to like the same stories. The one thing I will say is that after the first 2-3 chapters of crude (but hot) sex the whole story changes and the characters really develop....if you ever feel like giving it another try.

warm regards,

Ruth

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8-Move Along

Great, fantastic, excellant,,,,,,a Monet in the making



Author's Response:

Hey hc4metal:

A Monet in the making....there is no finer compliment!

Thanks so much,

abstract way

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 On Gossamer Wings

great job as always

 
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Date: May 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10-Down Dog

What can I say, yet another A++++++++++++++

 
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Date: June 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Stolen Memories

You get another one of my A+++++++++++++++++++++++'s

 
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Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 My Shiny Penny

You get a choice  ... an A+ or an excellant - or both I guess



Author's Response:

Thanks Heather!

Eclipse in less than a week....yeah!!!!!

xoxo

Ruth

 
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Date: July 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21-Taking Flight

A+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++=

 
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Date: September 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 Ragged Edges

So, is James going to go all stalker on her

 
Summary:

On Bella's first day of school, Edward finds himself completely consumed by her scent. Everything about her sings to him. The La Tua Cantante connection is much than different canon.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 9847
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2010 Updated: April 29, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like it

 
Piece of Cake by eclipsedawn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Bella Swan thinks she has her whole life figured out, but what happens when everything in Bella's life is turned upside down? With a new neighbor, admirer, and some healthy competition, Bella quickly learns that life is not exactly a piece of cake.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4134
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2010 Updated: May 01, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Grayscale

I like this. Please tell me though she doesn't get it on with Jacob ...I just can't stand him when they are romantic.

 
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Carlisle is very overprotective of his baby girl Bella. Edward falls in love with Bella at first sight and won't take no for an answer. What is Bella to do in these circumstances? AH/AU extremely OOC for everyone, rated M for dark themes, voilence, explicit language, lemons, and a very dark twisted Edward with many issues. You have been warned.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 15261
[Report This] Published: April 09, 2010 Updated: January 02, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

looking forward to more

 
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Date: May 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I am going to give this a shot as it is really good. I just can't imagine Edward being bad so.....

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

The writting is excellant. I will try for awhile, I know there is a warning in the summary - its just hard to imagine Edward as violent.  I am just so pro Edward I don't know. But like I said, excellent writting.

 
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Date: May 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I like it. I just hope in the end he can get it together. In real life no, as he hit a woman and he would be out the door so fast. But in fantasy land of course I want the HEA.

 
Waking Up Alone by IssaBissa Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 33]
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A short but sweet tale of what might have happened had the wolves waited until Laurent broke the treaty.

"Searing pain flowed through my body as Laurent ripped into my neck. So much for painless. But an odd thing happened, just as the pain started, Laurent threw me to the ground while looking off into the distance with what my pain seared brain could only make out to be shock and fear spread across his face. "


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella
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Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 7341
[Report This] Published: April 09, 2010 Updated: May 21, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Meal Interrupted

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! :-D

 
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Edward struggles to come to grips with his new life in Forks and a father he’s just met for the first time. He's unfamiliar with the easy going lifestyle he's been thrust into with the sudden death of his mom and step-father. Gone are the strict rules filled with harsh discipline and constant demands for perfection on the piano.

He finds a reason to fight his past demons when he meets a dark haired beauty that captures his heart. But then, his whole world is in jeopardy when a stalker threatens Bella and tries to destroy everything Edward now holds dear. LEMONS


"Our being is subject to all the chances of life." Katherine Anne Porter


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 54930
[Report This] Published: April 09, 2010 Updated: December 29, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Home

Excellant - please tell me you will finish it (so many stories are started, never to be heard again around chapter 8).

Great writting

 
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Date: May 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

The ending was INTENSE.

Aro - creepy, yuck....they are so dumb for not telling but hey gotta have angst lol

Great writting

 
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Date: May 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Your doing a great job with this story

love it

 
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Date: May 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

A really great story

 
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Date: June 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I really love this story. You do a great job with depressing me LOL = writting emotions. Great writting.

 
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Date: July 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

A+

 
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Date: July 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Very touching. I work with abused kids and see first hand what abusive assholes do to them. I blame Victoria as well. A true mother protects at all costs. It is just as much her fault for his rotten childhood.

 
Summary:

Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family? AU/AH/OOC/adult language and lemons ensue!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 131791
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2010 Updated: July 06, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Darkness

I am interested in the story. I work for CPS so am a little critical of how they are portrayed. Trust me, unless u work in the field you have no idea the crap we see everyday - five year olds being pimped out by their parents, kids not fed in three days, kids with their hair pulled out by the roots - so please be kind.



Author's Response: I have worked a lot with CPS/DFS, too. It is very unfortunate what happens sometimes and the system is so overwhelmed that it makes it difficult for all the claims to get addressed. I know how hard you work, and I promise this story will focus more on Bella's and Emmett's history (and ExB future). Thanks for taking the time to review! I love to hear from you!

 
Summary:

Bella is really really busy, so to find a date she tries internet dating. Since Edward wouldn't be considered a smooth operator, he's turned to the internet as well. Will the internet give them what they both want? AH/AU

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 22123
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2010 Updated: October 02, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You had me until Jake. I just can't do stories where she has slept with him lol - I am a sap that way. Nothing wrong with the writing or idea - just Jake!



Author's Response:

I swear it's an E/B story. Every girl is allowed to make a mistake!

 
Summary:

 

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Bella Swan has spent a lifetime putting everyone else's needs before her own. Could a chance encounter with a mysterious stranger begin to change all of that?

Warning: Some dark scenes and subject matter at times, will try to post warnings on each necessary chapter.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 172047
[Report This] Published: April 11, 2010 Updated: March 16, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Skin

Well, that was a suprising ending to this chapter lol



Author's Response:

And wouldn't you just pay money to be in her shoes??? I sure would!

 




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