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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.
Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!
I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.
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Summary: Bella Swan moves to Forks, Washington. About to start a new job as a teacher at the local high school, she rents an old house that’s surprisingly cheap but she’s about to find out it’s cheap for a reason.
Thanks to ZEE_21 for the banner!!!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Word count: 15972
[Report This] Published: March 29, 2010 Updated: June 09, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed 
Date: May 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
Your doing a great job with this. I am really enjoying it. Author's Response: thanks for reading!!!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
THIS IS SO AWESOME (can't believe I used that word lol). FANTASTIC! Author's Response: hehehhe...thanks for reading!!!!!
Summary: Bella Swan is set to get married to Jacob Black. What happens when she leaves him before the wedding and disappears? When Bella shows up in her Childhood town, she meets a mysterious man, Edward with a shady past. But Bella has her own worries. Jacob is on the hunt for her. He doesn't care what he has to do to track her down, he will find her. Bella becomes smitten with this mysterious man...but he is hiding a terrible secret. One that is based on Complacent lies.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Word count: 3695
[Report This] Published: March 29, 2010 Updated: April 19, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Gone With The Wind
I would leave Jake too....well, that is b/c I hate him lol
Good start
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Home Sweet Home
keep it coming
Summary:
Best friends Bella, Rosalie, and Alice are in a club when Bella spots the extremely gorgeous Edward Cullen, who takes no notice of her at all. What happens when Alice and Rosalie help Bella receive Edward’s attention? Will it be love at first sight, or will Edward be disappointed by what he sees?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Word count: 7038
[Report This] Published: March 29, 2010 Updated: August 26, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
lol regarding Tanya. I really like this story. Author's Response: Thank you! And trust me, I love douchy Eddie too. ;]
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Forgot - I will be pimping this out to my friends. I love assward stories - I want to see Bella bring him to his knees lol.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Get with updating! LOL. Can't wait for more ( still think it would be fun if you made her had her v-card. I know u discussed it in the first chapter, maybe Mike or Tyler (can't remember) didn't do it right LOL and she still has it. Your story - just thinking a innocent Bella would make for some great humor when she is trying to seduce the seducer). Author's Response: On it! ;]
Yes, actually, I have a plan in motion. Your first review gave me an idea for a good plot twist and you're on track. Thanks for the suggestion! I'll mention you when I introduce the twist. :)
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I really like this. I can tell it has the potential for a great story and plot. I do have one suggestion (don't worry I am not expecting anything lol) - I would actually make her a virgin in the story. A virgin seducer lol - there could be a lot of comedy in that. Also, if Edward is a man ho and she has her v card....that could be very interesting and make for some funny situations. Author's Response: Thank you! And that actually is a good point, it would be an interesting little addition to their relationship. We shall see how I can fit that in then. :]
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: August 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I still think you should make her a virgin - either she was drunk and Mike confesses they never did it, or he just didn't have it in him to get the job done. I think it would be funny for her to be a V and then down the road Edward having to deal with that.
I like the story. Glad to see the update. Author's Response: Wow it's litterally like you read my mind. I had a story line in mind with this last chapter, but it would've ended up being 50 pages long. So in the upcoming chapters we'll see this twist come up and Mike will definitely reappear in the story. ;]
Thank you so much for the input!
Summary: Bella's back hurts, can her new roommate Edward, the chiropractor help her? Will they behave?
Or are they naughty to the bone?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes
Word count: 37531
[Report This] Published: March 30, 2010 Updated: September 02, 2011
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: October 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Good job
Ignore bad reviews. Your right, if someone isn't happy then move along. I do it w/o leaving a review.
This is a very good story.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
can't wait Author's Response: LOL
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Okay love it already Author's Response: Aww thank you! I'm soo glad I got twilighted to accept it.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
keep it coming Author's Response: LOL, for you hun I most definetly will.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
lol
love this story Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Well, that was good for me Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I think his friend needs to straighten everything out
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
A+
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
very enjoyable Author's Response: Thank you =D
[Report This] Published: April 01, 2010 Updated: April 26, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Dying here...great job Author's Response: Okay, don't forget to breathe! ;)
I'm so glad to hear that you're enjoying the story. The next chapter is ready to go, so it should be up soon. Thanks for the positive feedback!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Good start Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks for the great rating. I really appreciate it!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
wow Author's Response: Thanks for the positive rating! I really appreciate it. I'm glad I could make you say 'wow' too!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Talk about a bad day! Really good story. Author's Response: Yep, this is not one of Edward's better days! I'm glad that you're enjoying the story, and I really appreciate both your rating and your review. You're wonderful!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
good job Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you'll enjoy the final few chapters, too.
Summary: 
A TNGUS side-shot for the Haiti relief charity drive. It's the first chapter of TNGUS in EPOV. Rated R for dirty, naughty thoughts. AH, E/B.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2391
[Report This] Published: April 01, 2010 Updated: April 02, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I hope an IFIC is done with this tale. LOVE IT.
Summary: EDITED, REVISED, AND IMPROVED!!!
Same great chapters, just better! Everything is the same except all the silly typos and mistakes have been corrected!
When the Volturi arrived in Texas to put a stop to the warring vampire armies, Bella was only able to escape with her life by the skin of her teeth. Her search for a better life was not successful. When the Cullens find her many years later alone and seemingly unconscious can they help her to find the peace she once sought or is she damaged beyond repair?
Big Thanks to vampireyouth for the banner!
And thanks to the lovely Delicious Dreamer for this one!
AU
Mentions of dark themes and violence.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 41 Completed: Yes
Word count: 159056
[Report This] Published: April 04, 2010 Updated: December 26, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Great start Author's Response: Thanks!
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