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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

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Bella Swan witnesses a crime and is unwillingly and unexpectedly thrown in to the world of The Mob.

What happens when things quickly spiral out of control and before long she meets the boss, Mr. Masen?

Will Bella stick with her instincts? Will she fight or flight?

AH/ Mobward :)

Rated NC-17 for the obvious reasons.

Thanks to MissTwilightSweden for the amazing banner :)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 25035
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2010 Updated: June 15, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is really good



Author's Response:

Hi :)

Thank you so much for your review, I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

The next chapter will be up soon so hopefully you wont have to wait too long for it :)

Thanks again xoxo

 

 
Summary:

 

When nine-year-old Bella Swan first stepped foot in South Shore Elementary she was a thoughtful bookworm, with hopes of one day finding forever with Mr. Right. Now 23 year old Bella Swan, is slightly isolated, full of drive and hates mistakes when it comes to men. She has a budding career in real estate and one problem she's waited six years to take care of, her virginity. 

Tired of waiting for the right guy, and ready to let go and have some fun she calls upon childhood friend Edward Cullen to help her. Edward, passionate, and dedicated to those he cares about is utterly hopeless when it comes to deciding what to do with the rest of his life. He's also a bit of a pushover when it comes to things concerning a certain Isabella Swan...

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 609
[Report This] Published: March 17, 2010 Updated: April 02, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

can't wait for more

 
Summary:

This is Bella Swan’s Story. 

If it were to be published, book store owners would find trouble in categorizing it.  Why?  For it contains heartbreak, sorrow and pain but also the sorts of romance and mythical creatures you would expect to find in a fiction book. 

What happens if everything you thought was real, turns out to be a lie?

If your reason for being vanished into thin air?

The love of your life abandoned you in this cruel, lonely world?

Bella Swan had plenty of time to perfect her façade of normalcy.  Inside, however, she is numb and void of emotion.  The depression, sorrow, self-loathing and guilt have evaporated, leaving her a shell.

The memories haven’t though.  The memories can’t ever be forgotten.

I assume if you have made it this far then you are able to cope with Bella Swan’s story, but I leave you with a final warning: don’t expect a happily ever after.

This story follows Bella's journey as she attempts to start her life again.  Little does she know that in doing so, she is destroying the soul Edward tried so hard to protect.  Will Edward return to pick up the pieces?

Rated NC-17 only for underage drug use.  BxE

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 13201
[Report This] Published: March 19, 2010 Updated: August 01, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two - A Better Tomorrow

great job - you can feel her pain

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The End of the Beginning

I think it is very good. I can handle most things, but with her doing reckless things please tell me she doesn't sleep with anyone else ( I would rather know now so I can stop reading instead of going out for a few chapters - not to be rude I just have a very sensitive spot for B and E lol - I am a sap. I can handle her doing the drugs and other stupid stuff though.).

 
Lost in the Woods by msqt76us Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

While hiking Edward stumbles upon a strange sight; a girl huddled against a tree. They're far from the hiking trails and she looks as though she's been crouched there for some time. The girl, Bella Swan, doesn't want to talk about her experience in the woods but the pieces are falling into place. From there the quest to learn the secrets of this beautiful, haunted girl begins.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 1497
[Report This] Published: March 21, 2010 Updated: April 02, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thank you! So am I...

:-)

 
Songlines by sandyk199 Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 32]
Summary:

The days are meaningless and the years are endless for Edward Cullen and his family. Enduring college yet again, Edward is jolted from the tedium by a unique scent, but will he be able to deny his true nature to protect the ones he loves?  Little does he know that his discovery will change his life in ways he never imagined.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 21995
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2010 Updated: May 20, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

looking forward to more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I really like this. Good writting.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Excellant writting

Going into my favorites



Author's Response:

Hello and thanks so much! i'm glad you're enjoying it, and there's plenty more to follow ...

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Another great chapter.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

JUST FANTASTIC

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - WhyNot

A+

 
My Never by AMayes Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

Edward Cullen is a known troublemaker from the wrong side of the tracks. The object of his secret affections, Isabella Swan, is a girl far out of his grasp. One afternoon a smile changes everything...

My Never


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 9182
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2010 Updated: May 12, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like this

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Excellant

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

GREAT JOB

 
Summary:

Edward always said that he didn’t want to damn Bella’s soul, but what if it was already damned?  Bella’s lived in Forks her whole life, and when the Cullens arrive, it’s a very different girl that they are faced with.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 7527
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2010 Updated: April 18, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Family with Golden Eyes

I am glad I gave this a try. Love your humor and the plot. I laughed at what she told Edward about undressing him lol. Keep it up!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: The Girl with the Red Eyes

THIS IS GREAT

 
Summary:

 

 

 

 

There are said to be monsters living in Los Angeles county. Some will steal your money, others your heart, then there are those that want your soul.

They come in many forms and Bella Swan believes she knows about all of them with the exception of one, but that is about to change with a chance meeting, or is it chance at all?

Stolen away to the darkest recesses of Hollywood, Bella will question everything she has known as she faces a new type of monster.

Can she escape, or will she fall victim to a lethal vampire?


--Genre--

Suspense/Horror/Angst

 

--Warnings--

Violence

Adult situations (sexual content)

Language

Dark themes

(no rape scenes and/or cutting!)

 

 

--Additional--

OOC/AU/Vamp & Human/"Darkward"


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Felix, James, Jasper, Leah, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria, Zafrina
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 41955
[Report This] Published: March 24, 2010 Updated: July 31, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Wrong Prince

keep it coming

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: A Tragic Tale of Red Riding Hood

Please tell me Jake will die a painful death!

love the story

 
Closed by Amelie Gray Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Banner by reachingasifall

Banner by reachingasifall 

Cover art by jewelsbyers

Cover art by jewelsbyers

 

Bella is a post-traumatic agoraphobic, which means in fancy shrink talk that she doesn't want to go outside. For the past few years, she's spent her days within the same four walls, haunted by her own memories and a new family she never wanted.

Then, the Pratts move into town, and everything changes.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 6787
[Report This] Published: March 26, 2010 Updated: August 12, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

interesting start



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: 1: Ho Ho Hum

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

 
Summary:

The Cullen Campaign

Edward Cullen and Isabella Swan both have parents who are major political leaders on Capitol Hill. Problem: their families are political enemies. What happens when Democrat!Edward and Republican!Bella bump into each other at Union Station in Washington D.C.?

OVER 3000 REVIEWS AT FFN!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 26155
[Report This] Published: March 29, 2010 Updated: September 11, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Leaving the District

Good start

Good writting



Author's Response:

Thanks hc4metal! I appreciate the awesome rating :)

 
Welcome Home by rash12 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 133]
Summary:

Bella Swan moves to Forks, Washington. About to start a new job as a teacher at the local high school, she rents an old house that’s surprisingly cheap but she’s about to find out it’s cheap for a reason.

Thanks to ZEE_21 for the banner!!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 15972
[Report This] Published: March 29, 2010 Updated: June 09, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I am really hooked on this

Great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

great start

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Love this

Love Master of Puppets as well!



Author's Response:

Yeahy!! I went to a Metallica concert in March so it was on my mind

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I really am enjoying this



Author's Response:

thanks!

 




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