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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.
Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!
I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.
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Summary: What if you met the love of your life as a child? Would he ever admit his love of you as a woman? Would you ever let him go?
Plot: Orphaned at 8, Bella Swan is placed in the care of her godmother, Esme Cullen. Heiress to Cullen Swan Enterprises, Bella grows up hero worshipping 17 year old joint heir, pseudo step brother and self appointed guardian Edward.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 43324
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2010 Updated: July 23, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed 
Date: April 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4:Heat
keep up the good work
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4:Heat
A++++++++++++++++++++
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Flicker
I really love this story A+++++++++++++++++++++++++
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Turn
I really really really really love this story. Your killing me with the angst, but love it.
Summary: Bella’s life has been on hold the past few years, dealing with her mom’s medical issues and getting her bakery Sweet Treats up and running. Until she meets her mom’s new surgeon. Can Dr Cullen bring Bella back to life?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Word count: 21347
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2010 Updated: April 18, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I think the writting is good. I just think that things are moving way to fast - just my opinion. Build up always is the best. Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review & your opinion. I really do appreciate it. I hope you keep reading. Here is a snapshot into the next chapter.
Edward led Bella to a bench nestled in between two potted trees. “Bella, I really like you. I’d love nothing more than to continue to get to know you. I think we could be great friends.”
“Friends, um, yeah, that would be lovely.” Bella’s gaze fell to her lap as she mentally cursed herself for thinking he might have possibly wanted something more than friendship.
“Yeah, friends… for now anyway.” Edward grinned.
Thanks again,
*Eifeltwr*
Summary: 
Bella Swan witnesses a crime and is unwillingly and unexpectedly thrown in to the world of The Mob.
What happens when things quickly spiral out of control and before long she meets the boss, Mr. Masen?
Will Bella stick with her instincts? Will she fight or flight?
AH/ Mobward :)
Rated NC-17 for the obvious reasons.
Thanks to MissTwilightSweden for the amazing banner :)
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Word count: 25035
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2010 Updated: June 15, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
keep it coming
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
keep it coming
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: March 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
LOVE IT Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review :) It means a lot.
I'm glad you like it and hope you continue to do so.
Thanks again xoxo
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
This is really good Author's Response: Hi :)
Thank you so much for your review, I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
The next chapter will be up soon so hopefully you wont have to wait too long for it :)
Thanks again xoxo
Summary:
When nine-year-old Bella Swan first stepped foot in South Shore Elementary she was a thoughtful bookworm, with hopes of one day finding forever with Mr. Right. Now 23 year old Bella Swan, is slightly isolated, full of drive and hates mistakes when it comes to men. She has a budding career in real estate and one problem she's waited six years to take care of, her virginity.
Tired of waiting for the right guy, and ready to let go and have some fun she calls upon childhood friend Edward Cullen to help her. Edward, passionate, and dedicated to those he cares about is utterly hopeless when it comes to deciding what to do with the rest of his life. He's also a bit of a pushover when it comes to things concerning a certain Isabella Swan...
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Word count: 609
[Report This] Published: March 17, 2010 Updated: April 02, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
can't wait for more
Summary: 
This is Bella Swan’s Story.
If it were to be published, book store owners would find trouble in categorizing it. Why? For it contains heartbreak, sorrow and pain but also the sorts of romance and mythical creatures you would expect to find in a fiction book.
What happens if everything you thought was real, turns out to be a lie?
If your reason for being vanished into thin air?
The love of your life abandoned you in this cruel, lonely world?
Bella Swan had plenty of time to perfect her façade of normalcy. Inside, however, she is numb and void of emotion. The depression, sorrow, self-loathing and guilt have evaporated, leaving her a shell.
The memories haven’t though. The memories can’t ever be forgotten.
I assume if you have made it this far then you are able to cope with Bella Swan’s story, but I leave you with a final warning: don’t expect a happily ever after.
This story follows Bella's journey as she attempts to start her life again. Little does she know that in doing so, she is destroying the soul Edward tried so hard to protect. Will Edward return to pick up the pieces?
Rated NC-17 only for underage drug use. BxE
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Word count: 13201
[Report This] Published: March 19, 2010 Updated: August 01, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two - A Better Tomorrow
great job - you can feel her pain
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: The End of the Beginning
I think it is very good. I can handle most things, but with her doing reckless things please tell me she doesn't sleep with anyone else ( I would rather know now so I can stop reading instead of going out for a few chapters - not to be rude I just have a very sensitive spot for B and E lol - I am a sap. I can handle her doing the drugs and other stupid stuff though.).
Summary: While hiking Edward stumbles upon a strange sight; a girl huddled against a tree. They're far from the hiking trails and she looks as though she's been crouched there for some time. The girl, Bella Swan, doesn't want to talk about her experience in the woods but the pieces are falling into place. From there the quest to learn the secrets of this beautiful, haunted girl begins.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Word count: 1497
[Report This] Published: March 21, 2010 Updated: April 02, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
looking forward to more Author's Response: Thank you! So am I...
:-)
Summary: The days are meaningless and the years are endless for Edward Cullen and his family. Enduring college yet again, Edward is jolted from the tedium by a unique scent, but will he be able to deny his true nature to protect the ones he loves? Little does he know that his discovery will change his life in ways he never imagined.
Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Word count: 21995
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2010 Updated: May 20, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
looking forward to more
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I really like this. Good writting.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Excellant writting
Going into my favorites Author's Response: Hello and thanks so much! i'm glad you're enjoying it, and there's plenty more to follow ...
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Another great chapter.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
JUST FANTASTIC
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - WhyNot
A+
Summary: Edward Cullen is a known troublemaker from the wrong side of the tracks. The object of his secret affections, Isabella Swan, is a girl far out of his grasp. One afternoon a smile changes everything...
Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Word count: 9182
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2010 Updated: May 12, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: March 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I really like this
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Excellant
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
GREAT JOB
Summary: Edward always said that he didn’t want to damn Bella’s soul, but what if it was already damned? Bella’s lived in Forks her whole life, and when the Cullens arrive, it’s a very different girl that they are faced with.
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Word count: 7527
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2010 Updated: April 18, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: The Family with Golden Eyes
I am glad I gave this a try. Love your humor and the plot. I laughed at what she told Edward about undressing him lol. Keep it up!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: The Girl with the Red Eyes
THIS IS GREAT
Summary: 
There are said to be monsters living in Los Angeles county. Some will steal your money, others your heart, then there are those that want your soul.
They come in many forms and Bella Swan believes she knows about all of them with the exception of one, but that is about to change with a chance meeting, or is it chance at all?
Stolen away to the darkest recesses of Hollywood, Bella will question everything she has known as she faces a new type of monster.
Can she escape, or will she fall victim to a lethal vampire?
--Genre--
Suspense/Horror/Angst
--Warnings--
Violence
Adult situations (sexual content)
Language
Dark themes
(no rape scenes and/or cutting!)
--Additional--
OOC/AU/Vamp & Human/"Darkward"
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Felix, James, Jasper, Leah, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria, Zafrina
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Word count: 41955
[Report This] Published: March 24, 2010 Updated: July 31, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: The Wrong Prince
keep it coming
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