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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.
Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!
I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.
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Summary:
Bella transfers to the University of Washington and lives in a dorm with the Twilight usuals. The incredibly beautiful guy with the coppery-bronze hair is such a jerk when their lives first collide, but they cannot ignore the fact that they are drawn to each other. However, Bella has a boyfriend back home and Edward doesn't plan to get involved. A terrible experience has made him reluctant to form any attachments. But sometimes you find what you didn't even know you were looking for.
A little angst and lots of romance. Humor with a nosy Emmett, Rose, Jasper and Alice. Add a potential stalker. Top it all off with undeniable sexual tension and eventually some very hot sexy-times. BPOV and EPOV
Drooltastic banner by the lovely ZEE_21.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 73 Completed: Yes
Word count: 511466
[Report This] Published: March 07, 2010 Updated: July 10, 2011
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed 
Date: April 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Reorganizing
Jake always ruins everything lol Author's Response: It's Jake's job in life to ruin everything. He's just doing his job. If there were no Jake, all these fanfics would all be really short stories, novellas, or poems. :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: You Call That Dancing?
I really like this story. Hate Jake....hopefully she didn't let the mutt paw on her back in Forks. Author's Response: Glad you are liking the story. Glad you are hating onn Jake. I am on Team Throw-Jacob-In-A-Ditch. I'm not sure what went on behind closed doors. You'll have to wait and see what these characters divulge.
Up next: Rescuward and Bella at the Cullen/Hale table at the Welcome Back dance.
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: One Step Forward
Jake really ruins everything aughh. He needs a nice milk bone to imprint on.
Love the story. Author's Response: Jake. Jaerke. Jaerk. Jerk. See how that works? It's a logical progression. It almost sounds like you'd like to imprint a shoe right on Jake's face. So, yes, Jake is the cause of much turmoil. For us readers (and writers--he just wouldn't leave me and my story alone---damn!)
Thanks for the Storylove.
Check out my new and lovely banner. I had nothing to do with it, because I'm inept, but I'm still happy as a clam.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
-bannerday
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Restless Night
Too bad about her and Jake - yuck will always hate him
good story Author's Response: I know. Jake sucks. Always will. Glad you're liking the story. Thanks for being such a loyal reviewer.
-bannerday
Summary: 
Isabella Marian Navarre, otherwise known as Maid Marian is engaged to marry the next King of England, but has other plans for herself. She longs for freedom and the free agency to choose her future, so she runs away with the help of her friend and companion Alice. On the way to their new life, they are nearly attacked in Sherwood Forrest, but Robin Hood's Merry Men save them and take them back to their little village to care for them. The things Bella learns shape her into one of the greatest Queens and leaders of her time and the things she teaches help to form a new world for the people of her country.
Categories: AU-Human, Crossover Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Word count: 8361
[Report This] Published: March 10, 2010 Updated: April 21, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: March 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I really like this. Author's Response: Thank you!
Summary: NO BABY, just newborn Bella dealing with the highs and lows of being a vampire and the youngest member of the Cullen family, with the help of her new parents and siblings. Unlike in Breaking Dawn, Bella won’t have an easy time of it. She will struggle with various aspects of being a newborn and is also dealing with being in a committed relationship for the first time, with all the give, take, and compromise that relationships require.
Stephenie Meyer hinted at the difficulties that newborns face in the books, but never took Bella down that road. I will.
Sequel to Captive, but I am told it is not necessary to read that story in order to follow this one. Each chapter stands alone (no cliffies!) but builds on the previous chapter to form a cohesive story (at least that is the plan), detailing Bella’s evolution from volatile newborn to stable vampire.
Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Word count: 44380
[Report This] Published: March 11, 2010 Updated: May 30, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
good job Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
looking forward to more
Summary: 
Amore Vietato - Forbidden Love. That's what 18 year old Bella Swan found when she moved to the small town of Forks, Washington.
Dating a century old vampire and best friends with a werewolf, Bella is thrust into a supernatural world where all the stories she thought were fiction turn out to be reality.
A momentary lapse of control by Edward leaves Bella with broken bones and all alone. So begins her fall from grace. Until she awakes to find a different vampire in her room. One who warns her that danger is searching for her.
With the help of a rogue vampire, can Bella find the Cullens in time to do what she was born to do - fulfill her destiny and destroy the Volturi?
Story is rated NC-17 for adult language, brief and mild drug abuse and perhaps a few lemons! All canon pairings and slightly OOC.
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Marcus, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 50826
[Report This] Published: March 11, 2010 Updated: September 22, 2011
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: March 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Far From Home
Please continue! Author's Response: I was going to update only once every week or so, but I feel that people can't really get a good idea of a story based on only one chapter...so I'm gonna go ahead and give you all a bonus chapter this week! I will submit in later this morning :-) Chapter 2 is where we met...THE CULLENS!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: March 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Monster
ready for more Author's Response: LOL. On it's way...I can't spoil you guys!!! I have 8 chapters completed, but I'm not happy with Chapter 8 and want to rewrite it...but we'll get there...stick with me!!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Contradiction
loved it
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Blackbird
Great job with this
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Love/Hate Heartbreak
good job
Summary: 
Thanks to Mkystich for the amazing banner!
Bella meets Edward while she is a pre-kindergartener, and Edward becomes her best friend. When Bella’s life is in danger, Edward is forced to leave to prevent her death. As Bella grows older, Edward is forgotten.
A new family moves to Forks at the start of Bella’s senior year and changes Bella’s life forever. What the mind forgets, the heart will always remember.
Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Word count: 69283
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2010 Updated: December 20, 2011
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: March 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Change of Plans
I really liked this. I hope you will continue - I only say that as so many people start and then around chapter 8 never to be heard from again LOL.
Good writting.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Forgotten
Another 10
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Right Where It Belongs
A++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Author's Response: :)
Thank you!!!!!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Am I Missing
great job with this and can't wait for more
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: This Dance
Very cute story.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Protège Moi
Well, it was good for me! Author's Response: Yay!!!! I had a friend tell me I owed her a pack of cigs after that... *doing happy dance* I might have squeed, just a little...
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Death and Destruction
great job
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: September 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: All My Senses
A++++ Author's Response: Thank you!!!!
:) :) :) :)
Summary: The NM-AU you’ve never read before! Edward breaks up with Bella, but he doesn’t leave town. Alice has seen that in order for Bella to move on, she must see him move on. Will they ever find their way back together?
Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Edward, Emily, Jacob, Leah, Sam, Seth, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes
Word count: 33324
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2010 Updated: November 22, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: August 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: "She's a girl, you're a boy"
I really think people should have disclaimers if they are going to have E or B have sex or get together with someone else(even if just for a bit). Good writting, but I can't do this - only E and B for me. Sorry, thats it for me here. Author's Response: I'm sorry the story took you somewhere you didn't want to go. I understand what you're saying about a disclaimer, but it doesn't seem right to inform people ahead of time on what a chapter or story contains. Ideally the story will carry the reader along. But the chapter did open with the statement that they had gone further than either of them ever expected, so that was a hint. I have lots of other Edward/Bella stories so if you like my writing and you want them together you can try those.
Summary: What if you met the love of your life as a child? Would he ever admit his love of you as a woman? Would you ever let him go?
Plot: Orphaned at 8, Bella Swan is placed in the care of her godmother, Esme Cullen. Heiress to Cullen Swan Enterprises, Bella grows up hero worshipping 17 year old joint heir, pseudo step brother and self appointed guardian Edward.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 43324
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2010 Updated: July 23, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7:Evade
This really has become one of my favorite stories. Great job and writting. Keep it up!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Frozen
please tell me it will be a happ e and b story!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Prologue
breaking my heart here
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Warmth
love it
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