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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

In an alternate universe that picks up where Edward left in New Moon, Isabella is existing contentedly on the other side of the world. She has been changed despite all of Edward's precautions but he hasn't a clue. When fate steps in and brings the Cullens to Isabella, the changes in her wreak havoc in their hearts and on the rest of the vampire world.

AU, canon couples, rated for future lemons.

 

Big love to readergoof for the amazingly generous banner ♥.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Liam, Maggie, Other Character, Rosalie, Siobhan
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 22806
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2010 Updated: June 15, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Secrets & Lies/Ghosts of Lifetimes Past, Part i

loved it

great writting

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Haunting

dying for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Ghosts Of Lifetimes Past, pt. ii

badgers lol

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Power Struggles

I really LOVE this story

Great job

 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Hell Hath Not Seen Fury The Likes Of This Before

I think this is a fantastic story

Maybe I missed something though - when she said that Mike and Jessica might gossip and it would get back to Charlie...what was that about?

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: AMPF Sideshot - The Difference Between Love and Happiness

Okay, now I remember about the gossip and Mike and Jessica.

Excellant chapter as always

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Pavlovian Response

audition for Streetcar lol

 
Summary:

When Bella has a tragic accident, it turns her entire world upsidedown and forces Edward to come to terms with her change sooner than he'd hoped.  As Bella says goodbye to friends and family, the Cullens are faced with coming up with a plan to get Bella out of the hospital without drawing unwanted suspicion on their family. Not to mention they have to talk the Quileutes into allowing an exception to the decades old treaty. On top of everything else, Victoria threatens to turn the hospital in Seattle into a killing ground. Can the vampires and the wolves come to an agreement before the Volturi descend on the Olympic pennisula?


Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 60739
[Report This] Published: February 21, 2010 Updated: October 21, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Interlude: Jake's Epiphany

Too bad he couldn't have joined the Cullen  clan.



Author's Response:

There will be a little more news on Brad in the next chapter, though I'm sorry to say he doesn't end up as a part of their coven. Thank you for the review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Immediate Family

Your daughter is hurt and he is trying to push that mutt on her - yuck. Thank you for putting in the part about the forced kiss. That always bugged me in the story. For one, no means no. Also, what kind of father congrats someone for something like that.

 

 



Author's Response:

Yeah, that bugged me in the story too. Which is why I brought it up. He really is so clueless about how deep Edward and Bella's love goes and that is the main topic of this conversation. He'll come around, I promise. :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

OMG

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Whispered Comfort

Poor Bella

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Token of Love

Your doing great!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Ready, Too

This was a great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Something Wrong

Ready for more



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! More coming up as soon as I can. :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Climbing the Walls

LOVE IT as usual. A+++



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you very much...hehehe...sorry, Elvis festival is going on this weekend. I couldn't resist.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: At Peace

THis is very enjoyable



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Three Seconds Too Late

exciting!



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Interlude: Charlie's Determination

looking forward to the next chapter. Feel sorry for Charlie, but Bella - as always - should be changed lol.



Author's Response:

Thank you. :) Yeah, despite feeling deeply for Charlie, there is never a doubt that Bella should be changed. Just hate that everyone has to lie to him.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Something to Cling To

A+



Author's Response:

Where were you when I was in school? heheh...thanks for reviewing again.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Counting Down

excellant



Author's Response:

Awesome! :) Thanks, HC.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Euphoria

A+++



Author's Response:

Woohoo! :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Out of the Ashes (shabbyapple)

Good job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Rings and Things

Enjoyable story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Home

enjoyable story

 
Summary:

When the King turns his back on the Church in hopes of producing a legitamite male heir, Isabella is forced to chose between the Queen who has raised her and the man that she loves.

Rated NC-17 for Sexual Content


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 9835
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2010 Updated: March 07, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: My Lord Cullen -- One Shot

loved it

 




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