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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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If Only I Could by velvetpen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Near the time of World War II, human history diverged from what we know of the Twilight world. The Volturi were forced to step in to prevent destruction of the planet and created a treaty with the human race. Now, vampire and human co-exist and vampires take submissive human Companions to both drink from and share more seductive experiences. Bella Swan has just been chosen by Edward Cullen to be his Companion. Canon pairings.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 1230
[Report This] Published: February 13, 2010 Updated: February 26, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I reallly like it. Great plot. Please tell me she didn't sleep with Jake - blah

 
Summary:

One night I awoke to find his side of the bed empty. I can only describe what happened next to be one of the best nights of my life.

 

Smut, pure and simple. Features a lot of dirty talk.

 

AU-AH, OOC, NC-17 for explicit adult sexual situations and language.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4510
[Report This] Published: February 13, 2010 Updated: February 16, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Just Thinking - One Shot

perfect



Author's Response: Thanks, sweets! And also, thank you for reading and reviewing!

 
Summary:

It's You've Got Mail meets Pillow Talk meets...eh, you get the picture. It's the usual ABG yuks and lemons. Manwhoreward v. Straightlacedella. Love/Hate/Love/Banter/Sex. RATED NC-17 COS WHY ELSE DO YOU READ FIC, HONESTLY? AH, CANON PAIRINGS


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 29 Completed: No Word count: 174756
[Report This] Published: February 14, 2010 Updated: September 16, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay, LOVE THIS

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

love the humor

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I just love this story. Great humor. Great writting.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love this story beyond words

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Such a perfect story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Totally love this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

This is such a great story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

This is one of my favorite stories

Great humor

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Fantastic story

 
Summary:

Edward is back in Forks, but something is very wrong. He's not the same as he used to be. "I feel like a savage, Bella. I'm trapped inside a body I can't control." ExB: lemons. dark/mature themes. vampires. OOC. "That's right, sweetheart. Scream my name."


Categories: New Moon Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 2699
[Report This] Published: February 14, 2010 Updated: February 25, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Forever

I liked it....just tell me it will have a happy E and B ending

 
Summary:

A player, skillful in getting what they want and that's one thing and one thing only.

A player hater, someone with a strong dislike against players.

Enter Bella Swan and stage right, Edward Cullen.

Will Bella be a victim in a player's game or can she change the game by changing the player?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 4213
[Report This] Published: February 15, 2010 Updated: April 03, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Surprise!

Well, I have always hated Jacob...



Author's Response:

I'm with you there.

Edward has part of my heart.  The other part belongs to my honey.  They just have to share.

Thank you for taking the time to send some love.

The next chapter is under reconstruction.

XOXO

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Ice Cream and Movies

Can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you for always leaving some love.!

I appreciate the time you take to always leave some love.

The next chapter is under reconstruction.

XOXO

 
Summary:

Bella's first encounter with Edward instantly leads to a mutual dislike. She is the new girl in town that has attracted more than one admirer and he's the boy who usually gets what he wants. So how will one evade when the other is set to conquer? AH

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Banner made by the amazing ms_ambrosia


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 85062
[Report This] Published: February 15, 2010 Updated: February 01, 2012


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

excellant

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOVE IT



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

great chapter

dying for more



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you are enjoying it. :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

yuck Jacob

Great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love this story

 
Barely Breathing by romanysue Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Bella and Edward meet at High School - it doesn't go well. Can they move past the hostility, shyness and deep issues? Can they find a future together?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 9201
[Report This] Published: February 15, 2010 Updated: April 26, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked this. However, I think u should take out the part that she slept with Jake (yuck).



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing. The story is complete, I'm just waiting on each chapter being validated by the Twilighted beta and I'll post each new chapter as quick as possible.

I hear you on Jake...I may have dry heaved a little while writing that part as I'm Edward/Bella all the way, but it made sense in the context of this story as these are two messed up teens.

It's a pretty angsty story but I wouldn't steer you wrong.....

 

 

 
Summary:

 

 

When put in a group on a photography class project, three very different girls come to realize there’s more to life than themselves after heading to Annapolis Maryland, home of the United States Naval Academy.   When these girls bump into three midshipmen, each of whom have question why they are attending the academy, it comes to affect them all.

 

 All Human OCC Cannon Pairings

 

thanks mintkiss for the amazing banner


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 9286
[Report This] Published: February 15, 2010 Updated: August 10, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: The River

GREAT JOB AGAIN

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

good start

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: You Had Me From Hello

A+

 
Summary:

An unexpected discovery reveals that Edward lied when he left Bella.  Now, Bella is determined to find a way to contact him, and in the process she learns more than she ever knew about Edward Cullen.

An Edward and Bella love story.

Thank you Mothlights for the fantastic banner!!


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 178682
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2010 Updated: November 12, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: And So It Begins

I am hooked on this!



Author's Response:

Wow!  That's great.  Thanks for letting me know.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Sentimental Vampire (angelicwish)

Excellant

 




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