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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.
Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!
I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.
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Summary: Bella has come to terms with Edward's absence and struggles with her newfound anger. Stronger, confident- will Bella be able to reconcile with Edward as a new threat stalks Forks and all she loves?
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 56374
[Report This] Published: December 19, 2009 Updated: February 12, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed 
Date: January 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I really like it. You can feel her emotions. I just hope she doesn't get so self destrustive that she screws up and sleeps with someone. I think Edward needs to see what he did and needs to understand she just isn't going running back to him.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 (angelicwish)
dying for more
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I am not a fan of Jake either - yuk
Love the story
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I really enjoyed this chapter. The discussion regarding his clothing cracked me up.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE
HOPE IT DOES HAVE A HAPPY ENDING
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I REALLY HATE JAKE..TELL ME IT ISN'T GOING THERE
GOOD WRITTING
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I AM GLAD THAT YOU BELIEVE IN E AND B B/C I LIKE THIS STORY AND JUST CAN'T DO B AND J (YUK)
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: February 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
So sad. Edward needs to make amends now and put Lauren in her place.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: February 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
GOOD, I WAS GOING TO POST AGAIN ABOUT I HOPE LAUREN GETS HERS LOL. I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT YOUR EVIL MIND HAS IN STORE.
LOVE THE STORY
GREAT WRITTING
Summary: This is my own twisted version of the Twilight story, much less PG-13 than the original version by Stephanie Meyer. As the story continues, a few of my own characters are added in for some spice and excitement. Edward is darker, possessive and a bit on the violent side (although the gentleman is still evident - don't worry).
Categories: Twilight Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Word count: 13582
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2009 Updated: March 12, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: The Curse
I can't wait until the next chapter
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Welcome Home Bella
SO DYING FOR MORE/.////NEED AN UPDATE SOON
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: February 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Biology
so love this
but he needs to knock if off with the "bitch"
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: March 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: La Push Beach
Loved it. Jacob needs to imprint on a milkbone. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: March 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: The Hunt
I like this story a lot.
When will E learn the easiest route is to change her lol
Jacob - yuck
Possessive E is funny
Summary: Living in the small town of Forks, Bella Swan has a normal life, boyfriend, and best friend. Everything starts to change when people mysteriously disappear. What is happening to them? Why does she have the feeling that someone is watching her? AU/OOC Dark Cullens.
Banner by MarianneNorthmanCullen
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Word count: 59810
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2009 Updated: April 01, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Dreaming
REALLY LIKE THIS
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: March 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Explaining
CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'll be submitting the next chapter today, so hopefully it will be up soon!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Missing
I am so into this. I love darkward. Author's Response: YAY! I'm glad you like it. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Watching
quit your day job and keep updating...everyday Author's Response: Wow thanks! I'll try to update as soon as possible! I already submitted the next chapter to be validated.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Meeting
I LOVE IT AND CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE Author's Response: THANKS! and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Knowing
I LOVE THIS STORY
I DO WANT IT TO BE A LOVE STORY....DARK.,...BUT A LOVE STORY LOL Author's Response: Thanks! I don't think you will be disappointed! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Believing
OMG I LOVE THIS
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Discovering
great job with this
Feel free to kill Jacob Author's Response: Thank you! and I'm guessing you're not a fan of Jacob. lol. Don't worry, no one is safe in this story.
However, I have no immediate plans to bring him into the story. It's more about the Cullens, what they are doing in Forks, what's going to happen with Bella and Jasper, etc etc.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Luring
I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE Author's Response: haha thanks, I just sent in the next chapter so hopefully it will be validated soon! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: February 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Introducing
LOVE THIS BEYOND WORDS Author's Response: haha I always love your reviews. they are short and to the point! Thanks for reviewing!
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