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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.
Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!
I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.
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Summary: Bella and Edward are "buddies" and while Bella wants more, Edward pulls away every time she tries to make things more official. Then one evening, she meets a tall, dark, handsome man out in a club, and he promises her everything she always wanted. Will Bella take it, even if it's not with the person she thought it would be with? And what will Edward do when his friend is suddenly no longer available?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Word count: 36646
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2009 Updated: February 11, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed 
Date: December 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Ch 4: Olympia
I JUST HOPE SHE DOESN'T SLEEP WITH HIM.
WANT EDWARD TO SQUIRM.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: December 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Ch 6: New Beginnings?
Love this story and can't wait for more...waiting here....still waiting...
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: December 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Ch 7: First Date
please tell me this will have a happy e and b ending
I like it but only read e and b
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: December 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Ch 8: Reflections and Surprises
1. I would have slapped Edward regarding the getting in your pants statement
2. please don't tell me he is doing Tanya or somone else
3. Please tell me this will be a happy E and B story in the end
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: December 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Ch 8: Reflections and Surprises
1. I would have slapped Edward regarding the getting in your pants statement
2. please don't tell me he is doing Tanya or somone else
3. Please tell me this will be a happy E and B story in the end
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Ch 10: Ready for More
YOUR KILLING ME
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Ch 11: New Spaces
dying for more
Jake has to go
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Ch 12: New Places
I love the story. Hope Jake is gone for good.....I actually feel sorry for him which is a new emotion for me lol. But it will always be e and b for me.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: It all comes crashing down...
I THINK THE BABY SHOULD END UP BEING JACOBS LOL
I HOPE SHE DOESN'T FALL INTO BED WITH JAKE B/C SHE IS CRUSHED.
SHE HAS EVERY RIGHT TO BE MAD. HE BETTER START BUYING SOME EXPENSIVE GIFTS.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Apologies
PLEASE, DON'T LET IT BE EDWARDS BABY
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: The Future Beckons
T AND M DESERVE EACH OTHER
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: February 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Ch 17: Moving Forward
GREAT CHAPTER
Summary:
Ascension of the Morning Star is a novel-length work that offers an alternative to Breaking Dawn. The work is represented in two books, Evening Star and Morning Star. Each book will appear as a separate story on this site. This is Part I.
In Part I: Evening Star, we find Bella and Edward preparing for their marriage. From engagement to wedding night the whirlwind of 55 planning days is a roller coaster of emotion, intrigue,and surprises for everyone. Exploring sexuality & intimacy, will Edward be ready? As the big day draws nearer, everyone realizes this is a good-bye, but not everyone realizes how true that is...
The facets of their transition to marriage are much the same as other young couples, however, they are not like any other young couples and they face a specific set of challenges on their way to the altar. Their journey will force the Cullen family to confront the demons of their hearts and rediscover their connection to humanity they thought to be lost forever. Even the humans find compelling forces of change in their lives because of this one strange human. A young woman's presence has altered the destiny of those she loves.
Post Eclipse, AU, Cannon Characters and Relationships. Mature for sexual situations.
The story of Ascension of the Morning Star continues with Part II. A major shift in tone, action, and impact from Part I. Hang on to your hats. It is a thunderbolt from the begining and rarely lets up. Whereas Part I is light and laughter, Part II is darkness and tears.
When Bella's transformation is not a dream come true, the future is anything but assured, yet, one thing is clear. By her existence, she will rock the foundations of both the human and mythical worlds. Although there are bright signs of possibility in unexpected places, but the question is simply this: Would you follow your destiny if you knew it would cost you your eternal life?
What if Bella isn't the only one changed by her choice to follow her Destiny?
Canon characters and relationships explored in greater detail. Contains family relationships, humor, mature situations, sensual exploration, action, and inference; horror, angst, hurt, gore, limited violence, loss, mystery, psychic phenomenon, and mythic/religious references.
Many opportunites to discuss the themes of this story...Come join the thread!
http://twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=33&t=8085
Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No
Word count: 297219
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2009 Updated: April 13, 2011
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: December 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: June 19: The Meadow
great start Author's Response: Thanks for being an early adopter and reading this fresh out of the box! I hope it is indeed a good start and that you will come back to see how it goes... Thanks for writing.
RL
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: June 29: "May I have a moment..."
Such a great chapter Author's Response: Thanks for your encouragement...wait till you see the next couple! They are doosies! Come back!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: July 1: Dare To Be Human
great writting
enjoying the story Author's Response: Thank you for writing and for your praise. I hope you will come back to see what is in store for our friends in Forks.
Summary: Edward isn't fast enough to save Bella in Port Angeles. When faced with her death as the alternative, he decides to force her into a vampiric eternity. How will Bella handle being thrown into a new existence? Can the journey lead her to find herself, her mate....and her spine?
WARNING: This story contains scenes that involve violence against women and rape.
Categories: Twilight Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Word count: 10181
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2009 Updated: January 22, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: December 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
all sex offenders need to die before they go straight to hell
intense start Author's Response: Yep, I agree the punishment should be beyond severe. For this story, it had to happen to set things in motion. I really appreciate the review. Thanks!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: December 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I really like this. Please don't let her have been raped. Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter 4 will talk a little more about what exactly happened, I think you'll be pleased!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: December 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Great job
Poor Edward Author's Response: Thanks!
Poor Edward, indeed. Unfortunately, he has a hard road to run down if he wants to be with Bella. : ( It's sad to write but things will find a way to work themselves out, hopefully! Thanks for the review, I appreciate it!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
my heart is breaking for them
love the story Author's Response: Aww! Maybe it can begin to heal with the next chapter! Things will get heavier for Bella but Edward will find some relief! Hope you enjoy! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
This is a beautiful story...you can feel the emotions Author's Response: Thank you! I can't stress how much I mean that. It's always hard for me to judge if I'm putting enough emtion into it, if it will come across the way I'm intending. Thanks for letting me know, so far, it's working.
I really appreciate it!
Summary: Every night she goes about her business ignorant to the man who watches her from her window. She doesn't understand what is coming. She couldn't know the horrors he would subject her to in the name of fascination. E/B, DARK.
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Word count: 15979
[Report This] Published: November 30, 2009 Updated: February 09, 2010
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: November 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Watching
dying for more Author's Response: Hi, never fear: I have through chapter 5 completed, so the updates should be fairly prompt. Thank you so much for reading!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: December 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE Author's Response: Thanks!!!! It makes me very happy you are hooked!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
DYING FOR AN UPDATE.....DYING HERE Author's Response: ;) Just sent chapter 4 off to be validated. Don't panic!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I LOVE DARWARD
HOPE IT TURNS INTO A LOVE STORY Author's Response: Here's where I want to share spoilers because I'm excited, but I will resist! Glad you are enjoying my version of dark Edward!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: January 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I love it but hope darward mellows in a bit...after the angst of course Author's Response: Hmmm, we will see. Thanks for reading!!
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