Your donations help keep this site running,
thank you very much for the support!
Penname: hc4metal [Contact]
Real name:
Status: Member
Member Since: February 28, 2009
Website:
Beta-reader:

I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


[Report This]
 
 
Reviews by hc4metal
 
Whisper by twilifed113 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 191]
Summary:

Edward Cullen fell in love with Isabella the moment he saw her. But Isabella’s frightening past keeps her from even imagining romance. However, she has no choice but to accept his marriage proposal after her guardian and beloved friend passes away, leaving her with nothing to her name but a box of letters and photographs.

Yet, those letters and photos are the catalyst to the unveiling of a mystery in Bella’s family that will consume them. Somehow, their true love for each other can only be discovered as Edward saves her from her own haunting past.  




AU-H, Romantic Suspence

thanks m81170 for the spectacular banner!

http://i517.photobucket.com/albums/u335/togaonion/jules%20fan%20fic%20stuff/emo4.jpg

http://i517.photobucket.com/albums/u335/togaonion/jules%20fan%20fic%20stuff/6ns85wii.jpg


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 47383
[Report This] Published: December 09, 2009 Updated: February 18, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Hope

SUCH WONDERFUL WRITTING



Author's Response:

that warms my heart, thank you <3

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Secrets

Love the story beyond words

 
Fallen Angel by Chrisstars1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

In this New Moon AU Bella never jumped and to Bella’s detriment Edward never returned. Jacob was left to pick up the pieces and he too failed. Though broken but stronger than ever Bella has created a new life out of the ashes of her old rejections and tragedies.  How will Izzy, the new Bella, handle the return of a ghost from her past? Has Edward learned from his mistakes with the discovery of his soul or is he out of luck?

 

 

 

BEWARE! F-bombs and other glorious shenanigans abound. Don’t forget a healthy helping of angst. Cannon couples and a bit OOC


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 26837
[Report This] Published: December 11, 2009 Updated: March 11, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Awakenings/ Who the "nuggets" is Ian?

Well, the writting was very good. However, since she slept with the mutt I just can't read anymore.  Nothing against the story- my opinion is people should write what they want. I just don't read stories that aren't E and B (that includes her not sleeping with Jake).



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. We totally respect your point of view.  Please continue reading there will be NO MORE Jacob/Bella sexy times.

This is an Edward/Bella story but he did leave her and she tried to make a life for herself.

 
Summary:

 

**My Second FanFic ever written**

 

Bella has been unhappy with her life for the last 6yrs. Can she find the happiness she craves and deserves after leaving it all behind her?

 

She thought so...

 

Until Edward's past comes back to haunt them...

 

Rated M for extreme language, adult situations, and graphic sex. AU/AH/BxE, AxJas, RxEm. Some non-canon couples as well.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 97860
[Report This] Published: December 11, 2009 Updated: July 16, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Done

I really liked it. Jake is such a loser. I hope she goes out and has fun. HOWEVER, don't let her sleep with E  right away. A pet peeve of mine is when they just meet, five seconds later boink, and then fall in love - rolling eyes. I think stories are much better with a build up.



Author's Response:

I am SOOO glad you liked the first chapter! I hope the future chapters agree with you too! **bites nails nervously**

Thanks for R & R!!

xoxo

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is a member of one of Chicago's most elite families, spending his time among the city's upper crust. When his grandmother dies, Edward begins to think on his own mortality, leading him to discover a life he'd never known.  He is joined on his journey by his four closest friends and a stranger with a blue scarf.

SaS is the story of Edward and Bella, but it's also a story of friendship, heartbreak, tragedy, and romance. I'm going to do my best to flesh out all my characters and show the deep connections they have to one another. Because of this, not every chapter will have Edward and Bella or even Edward or Bella. Some chapters will be just Alice, or Rosalie and Jasper, or Edward and Emmett.

The title Smokestacks and Skyscrapers is taken from an anthology of Chicago writing edited by David Starkey and Richard Guzman.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 21402
[Report This] Published: December 12, 2009 Updated: February 25, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Division Street

I LIKE HOW JACOB TOLD HER OFF. HOWEVER, BEING A JACOB HATER I WILL BE FINE IF HE IS EATEN BY A PACK OF WOLVES.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chicago

EXCELLANT WRITTING AND START



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Born in a Book Shop

I like the story..but I hope jake is out of the picture soon. I know u said you won't kill him, but I would give you extra points if you did!



Author's Response:

Don't worry, Jake's not around forever.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Souls in Motion

poor Rose

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: The Precipice

looking forward to the next chapter

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Baseball Fever

Jake is always such a loser - I can't stand him. She needs to dump him!

Great story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Native Son

I like the story...even though I love how J handled Rose, I still will always hate him. He needs to stay in Forks.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it! :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: The Right to Grief

love this story



Author's Response:

I'm so glad!  :)

 
Beyond the Lens by magan bagan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Written for SSAA. Edward is a high profile, photographer. He does his job and he does it well. Bella is a couture model, one of the best. A series of misunderstandings and egos change both of their worlds. Can they both see what is beyond the lens?    


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 5956
[Report This] Published: December 12, 2009 Updated: December 12, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Les premières impressions ne sont pas toujours correctes

dying for more

 
Summary:

Bella never jumped, Edward never returned - but Victoria did. Not even the intervention of the wolf-pack can stop her from attacking Bella. Now entering her first year of college, Bella has some major decisions to make about her life.

 

The Ugly Ducking


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Edward, Jane
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 43094
[Report This] Published: December 13, 2009 Updated: October 29, 2013


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Decisions

I really love this story. Your doing a great job.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Conversations

I ACTUALLY LIKE JACOB IN THIS - SO IT SHOWS YOU ARE A GOOD WRITER LOL AS I USUALLY DISLIKE HIM. I LIKE HOW YOU MAKE THEIR RELATIONSHIP JUST FRIENDS AND THAT THERE IS HUMOR.

GREAT WRITTING. I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Beginnings

dying for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Acquaintances

YOU HAVE DONE A GREAT JOB AND I CNA'T WAIT FOR MORE

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Discoveries

I just love this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Developments

I really do love this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Meetings

can't wait for more

 
Summary:

Once their lives were intertwined and stuck together with superglue, but now Edward and Bella are a million years apart. Bella, a highly successful author, lacks the inspiration to begin her second novel. Edward, a resident doctor, suffers a nervous breakdown from the stress and heartbreak his job brings. Through a strange twist of fate, they are brought together again and are given the change to gain what they have been subconsciously searching for all along and to overcome their fears... if things go according to plan.

 

 

 (Banner made by the lovely, talented m81170)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Kate, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 38516
[Report This] Published: December 13, 2009 Updated: October 05, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Lightbulb Moments

I LIKE IT...ESPECIALLY THE HERPES LOL..LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE



Author's Response:

Haha. Thanks guys. I never expected to actually get reviews!!

I'm on holidays at the moment (Christmas etc) but will be back in the new year.

Happy Holidays :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Designed by Fate

ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER



Author's Response:

Thankyou so much :) There's more to come.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Freedom

CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE

 
Taking by KayleeSwan Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

In 1903 Isabella Swan was born.  In 1919 she was reborn, as a vampire.  Unfortunately for her her sire was Aro Volturi.  Ten years she would pass in Volterra mearly existing.  Then, one day she began taking back her life and everything changed.


Categories: AU Characters: Aro
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 4030
[Report This] Published: December 13, 2009 Updated: February 19, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Taking Life

I love it

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Taking Freedom

LOVE THE STORY

 




Share/Save/Bookmark


© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.