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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

One decision changed everyone's destiny. Will Edward be able to live with the consequences of his actions? Will he be able to forgive himself for the pain he has inflicted on the only person he has ever loved, and most importantly will she forgive him?

A story beginning with the cliff scene in New Moon and taking you on a journey through the dark side of fate. Where Edward and Bella's lives are both changed, but they react in completely different ways.

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Billy, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Chelsea, Demetri, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Paul, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 16007
[Report This] Published: December 16, 2009 Updated: April 06, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: Falling From Hope

Very good writting. Great start. My only question is I want to make sure this isn't a B and J story. I don't read those.



Author's Response:

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Thank you for the review! Don't worry! I am definitely team Edward, but Jacob is a part of the beginning of the story. Edward makes his appearance in a few chapters, but this story does have a completely different plot than the original. I don't want to give a lot away, but I am a sucker for a happy ending ;)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five: Bitter Emergence

LOVE IT



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review! New chapter should be up some time next week!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six: Ulterior Motives

CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE

NOT LIKING CHELSEA LOL



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I am so glad you are loving the story. There has to be some evil people...lol...Chesea just wants some love ;)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven: Costly Mistakes

GREAT CLIFFY



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Glad you are liking the story!

 
Summary:

Edward tries to relieve some stress prior to a very important job interview.  When he meets a lovely lady in the hotel bar, he assumes she's an escort... but is she?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 12984
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2009 Updated: January 20, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Desert Ice

DYING FOR MORE

LOL



Author's Response:

=D  I appreciate the feedback!  Glad you like it!  ha ha 

Working chapter 3 now...should be up soon!

Thanks for reading!

Karie

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Big Money

LOL

LOVE THIS

 
Solar Midnight by LaRosada Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 457]
Summary:

 

One of the key events that creates the epic nature of the Edward/Bella love story is the moment that Bella’s scent first hits Edward, and Edward somehow resists.

But what if Edward’s self control had kicked in just a moment too late? What if his proximity to Bella once his conscience reawakened was just too much, and he couldn’t restrain himself. What if he bit her, and Bella had a new life forced on her, before she had any desire to live for an eternity?

Before she had experienced Forks High School, made friends, and re-connected with Jacob. Before she knew what Edward was. And most importantly, before they fell in love.

What would Twilight look like then?

This is the story of the seemingly insignificant moment that changed everything…


Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 74511
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2009 Updated: October 16, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Confessions

good chapter

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Cullens

Looking forward to more.

In coma? Don't tell me that CHarlie and Renee wouldn't want to see her??

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Cullens

Looking forward to more.

In coma? Don't tell me that CHarlie and Renee wouldn't want to see her??

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Last Breath

A+++

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Last Breath

Great job



Author's Response:

Thank you! Thanks for both the review and the rating. I hope you enjoy the future chapters as well.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Thanks for both the review and the rating. I hope you enjoy the future chapters as well.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Last Sight

can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Invitations

I really like this story!!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Scary Stories

A+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

 
1912 by MovieMoments Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Our much loved Twilight characters take a voyage on the Ship of Dreams. Will all they find be water, or will love bloom.

All Human and a tad Out Of Character.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 3011
[Report This] Published: December 18, 2009 Updated: January 03, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is very good



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Summary:

"Many times when I woke during the night dreaming of my Bella, I’d find myself in front of the piano, caressing the keys with the tips of my fingers. The song for Bella was almost complete."


edwardbella


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 14794
[Report This] Published: December 19, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: 02

ready for the next chapter

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 01

love this

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: 03

good job

 
Summary:

Throughout the Twilight saga, Bella often has dreams that provide an insight into the present or a glimpse into the future.  What if she had dreamed of Edward, long before they ever met?

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Bella Swan moves to Forks during her sophomore year in high school, and becomes involved with Mike Newton.  Things are growing more intense between them, but Bella is reluctant to take the next step.  Why?  Because Bella is in love with a beautiful and mysterious man that she has been dreaming of since her childhood.

Bella must choose -- should she cling to a dream, or should she learn to accept what is right in front of her?  And how will her choice be affected when a strange, new family moves to town and suddenly she is face to face with the man of her dreams?


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 2823
[Report This] Published: December 20, 2009 Updated: January 08, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like this. Poor Mike but oh well, it is Edward afterall.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

keep it coming



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm going to try to submit Chapter 3 either today or tomorrow so it should be up soon!

 
Summary:

 

Catherine Dashwood is dragged to Forks by her grandparents unwillingly and thinks this is hell. She becomes friends with Bella Swan and both girls seek comfort in each other, as they cope with high school dramas, break ups, revenge seeking vampires, werewolves and a hell of a trip to Italy.

A crossover between Twilight and Harry Potter

Please read and review! I'd love to know what you think!

Rated NC-17 for later chapters.

Warning: later chapters will contain unsuitable material for readers below 18.


Categories: New Moon, Crossover Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Billy, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Chelsea, Demetri, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Felix, Gianna, Heidi, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Marcus, Mike
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 8542
[Report This] Published: December 20, 2009 Updated: December 02, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - New Arrivals

Okay, interested where this will go. Just making sure that E is not going to fall for someone else - I don't read those types of stories - so let me know!



Author's Response:

Don't worry about it...it's definitely not in my plans. =)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Memories

Looking forward to more and to see what is going on. Good writting/



Author's Response:

Yay! Thanks! =)

 
Summary:

This is my own twisted version of the Twilight story, much less PG-13 than the original version by Stephanie Meyer. As the story continues, a few of my own characters are added in for some spice and excitement. Edward is darker, possessive and a bit on the violent side (although the gentleman is still evident - don't worry).

 


Categories: Twilight Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 13582
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2009 Updated: March 12, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: The Curse

I can't wait until the next chapter

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome Home Bella

SO DYING FOR MORE/.////NEED AN UPDATE SOON

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Biology

so love this

 

but he needs to knock if off with the "bitch"

 




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