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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is a member of one of Chicago's most elite families, spending his time among the city's upper crust. When his grandmother dies, Edward begins to think on his own mortality, leading him to discover a life he'd never known.  He is joined on his journey by his four closest friends and a stranger with a blue scarf.

SaS is the story of Edward and Bella, but it's also a story of friendship, heartbreak, tragedy, and romance. I'm going to do my best to flesh out all my characters and show the deep connections they have to one another. Because of this, not every chapter will have Edward and Bella or even Edward or Bella. Some chapters will be just Alice, or Rosalie and Jasper, or Edward and Emmett.

The title Smokestacks and Skyscrapers is taken from an anthology of Chicago writing edited by David Starkey and Richard Guzman.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 21402
[Report This] Published: December 12, 2009 Updated: February 26, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Native Son

I like the story...even though I love how J handled Rose, I still will always hate him. He needs to stay in Forks.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it! :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: The Right to Grief

love this story



Author's Response:

I'm so glad!  :)

 
Beyond the Lens by magan bagan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Written for SSAA. Edward is a high profile, photographer. He does his job and he does it well. Bella is a couture model, one of the best. A series of misunderstandings and egos change both of their worlds. Can they both see what is beyond the lens?    


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 5956
[Report This] Published: December 13, 2009 Updated: December 13, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Les premières impressions ne sont pas toujours correctes

dying for more

 
Summary:

Bella never jumped, Edward never returned - but Victoria did. Not even the intervention of the wolf-pack can stop her from attacking Bella. Now entering her first year of college, Bella has some major decisions to make about her life.

 

The Ugly Ducking


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Edward, Jane
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 43094
[Report This] Published: December 13, 2009 Updated: October 29, 2013


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Decisions

I really love this story. Your doing a great job.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Conversations

I ACTUALLY LIKE JACOB IN THIS - SO IT SHOWS YOU ARE A GOOD WRITER LOL AS I USUALLY DISLIKE HIM. I LIKE HOW YOU MAKE THEIR RELATIONSHIP JUST FRIENDS AND THAT THERE IS HUMOR.

GREAT WRITTING. I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Beginnings

dying for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Acquaintances

YOU HAVE DONE A GREAT JOB AND I CNA'T WAIT FOR MORE

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Discoveries

I just love this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Developments

I really do love this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Meetings

can't wait for more

 
Summary:

Once their lives were intertwined and stuck together with superglue, but now Edward and Bella are a million years apart. Bella, a highly successful author, lacks the inspiration to begin her second novel. Edward, a resident doctor, suffers a nervous breakdown from the stress and heartbreak his job brings. Through a strange twist of fate, they are brought together again and are given the change to gain what they have been subconsciously searching for all along and to overcome their fears... if things go according to plan.

 

 

 (Banner made by the lovely, talented m81170)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Kate, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 38516
[Report This] Published: December 14, 2009 Updated: October 05, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Lightbulb Moments

I LIKE IT...ESPECIALLY THE HERPES LOL..LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE



Author's Response:

Haha. Thanks guys. I never expected to actually get reviews!!

I'm on holidays at the moment (Christmas etc) but will be back in the new year.

Happy Holidays :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Designed by Fate

ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER



Author's Response:

Thankyou so much :) There's more to come.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Freedom

CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE

 
Taking by KayleeSwan Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

In 1903 Isabella Swan was born.  In 1919 she was reborn, as a vampire.  Unfortunately for her her sire was Aro Volturi.  Ten years she would pass in Volterra mearly existing.  Then, one day she began taking back her life and everything changed.


Categories: AU Characters: Aro
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 4030
[Report This] Published: December 14, 2009 Updated: February 19, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Taking Life

I love it

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Taking Freedom

LOVE THE STORY

 
Summary:

 

Isabella Swan was enjoying a delightful trip to Europe with her best friend Alice Brandon. But a phone call puts her back on a road she had tried to forget for four years. AU/Human, OOC.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 5378
[Report This] Published: December 14, 2009 Updated: February 03, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Oh-la-la!

looking forward to more

please tell me you are e and b all the way...after the angst of course lol

 
Summary:

To see what I have seen, see what I see…” The words flowed like honey from his lips, and in just as brief of a breath, he was gone. The bell above the Record store’s door chimed and Bella saw the flash of bronze fly past the window. “He’s a Cullen, Bella. You can never…”

 

Banner made by RainerNight.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 29187
[Report This] Published: December 14, 2009 Updated: March 05, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Scene One

dyiing for more

hope you continue it



Author's Response:

dont die.

O_O

 
Killing Death by Echo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 155]
Summary:

Meet Edward, serial killer.

At only seventeen years old, he has already grown to be a killer. When a detective catches wind of his doings he will stop at nothing to destroy whoever threatens his freedom, as well as the man that made him who he is now. Enter Bella, innocent bystander.When she witnesses Edward kill, she naturally runs screaming. Can the two find love in death?

WARNING: Dark Themes. Graphic descriptions of mutilated corpses.

Banners by Deviants of the Dark!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 19379
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2009 Updated: June 27, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I know I shouldn't like this lol but I do

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Such a trainwreck lol. I know I shouldn't like this LOL. Feel free to kill Jacob.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Such a trainwreck lol. I know I shouldn't like this LOL. Feel free to kill Jacob.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

good start

I hate Jacob though so will hope Edward gets him lol



Author's Response:

Well, I guess we will have to wait. Bella does have a thing for the odler men.... *grins evily*

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I shouldn't like this...but do. Please, please kill Jacob!!!! I will give you extra points LOL



Author's Response:

=] lol I will see what I can do!  Thank you for the review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Chapter four should be up tomorrow! =]  thanks for dropping the review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I KNOW I SHOULDN'T LIKE THIS BUT JUST CAN'T HELP IT



Author's Response:

^_^  well thank you! I am glad you like it!

Sadly, the updates won't be so fast anymore =[  my doctor says all the constant typing is agravating my fracute and it isn't healing right because of it. But I promise to still get something up at least once a week! Maybe if I pace myself I can actually turn out longer chaters... =]

thanks for the reveiw!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Well, I wouldn't mind Jacob getting killed off



Author's Response:

=] lol  ouch! Thank you for dropping me a review, they make my broken wrist feel slightly better! =]

 




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