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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Entering Twilight by BugRehsom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 141]
Summary:

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Think 'The Starter Wife' meets 'The Wizard of Oz', only instead of ending up in Munchkinland, she awakens to discover she is now a character in her favorite story.

Caroline Dawson is having trouble coming to terms with her divorce, her husband's pregnant new girlfriend, and the loss of her once perfect love... Christmas is right around the corner, and she decides to spend this first holiday sans-husband alone on the beach in Cancun. During a layover in Chicago, Caro reads Twilight for the first time and is quickly enraptured by it.

But after a near death experience, Caro awakens to find herself trapped amidst the drama that is Forks. Is it a dream, a mental breakdown? What changes will her presence bring to Forks? How will she use her knowledge of the books to change the story? And should she even try?


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 45039
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2009 Updated: December 31, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: 7. Powwow on the Rez

Happy for the update. Keep up the good work. Your friend, Heather

 
Breathless by Dahlia Raynes Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

What if Bella had jumped off the cliff with Jacob in New Moon? What if Alice hadn't seen a thing? What if Edward had checked on Bella but never re-entered her life? Would she have survived or would the pain have spun out of control?

This is my version of what would have happened.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 5992
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2009 Updated: January 29, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Red Sky

good start

please tell me this is an E and  B tale

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

looking forward to more

glad to here it is a E and B tale

 
A Betting Man by mybluesky Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2593]
Summary:

A Betting Man 

Now Complete!

Just two weeks before her best friend's wedding Bella gets dumped by boyfriend James when she refuses to give him what he wants. The next night she discovers he's made a bet with gorgeous pal Edward Cullen that he can't bed her. She brilliantly decides to string Edward along for a few weeks...and subsequently land herself a hot date for the wedding. Things soon get very interesting...

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 166948
[Report This] Published: December 08, 2009 Updated: September 13, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

MYBLUE you messed up, you referenced me as HeathersTwilight  at the start of this(that is me at Fan Fic). I am HC4METAL here. Some friend, forgetting your friends name LOL. I guess I can forgive you and not bring out the handcuffs.

As always, great writting. Love the story. Keep up the good work and looking forward to reviewing the next chapter!!!!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

PLEASE, DON'T LET HIM BE ABLE TO GET IT UP WITH LAUREN / HE CAN BE LIMPWARD

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG I LOVE THIS

I AM HOOKED

DYING FOR AN UPDATE



Author's Response:

thank you much!

-mybluesky

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am dying for more. I just love this!



Author's Response:

Thanks, darling!

-mybluesky

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

so love it

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I just love this story. Dying for an update.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I REALLY DO LOVE THIS STORY



Author's Response:

Thanks!

-mybluesky

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Love this beyond words

So funny

Great writting

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Such a great job ( it's Heather ) - I rate you here and at ff

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Another great chapter (hey, it's Heather).Anyway, dying to know what the bet win consisted of.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

This needs to be an IFIC (hey, it's me- Heather)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

NEEDS TO BE AN IFIC

LOVE U,

HEATHER

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES ON THE BOARD

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Hello my friend, yes, it is me the "prolific one".

Another great job. Love the story. Everytime it updates Michelle does the happy dance.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

One of the best stories ever

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Had fun skyping the other day with you and Michelle. Dying for the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Great job my friend. Didn't Michelle tell you no cat on Skype the other day lol. I thought of her at that part. I was so dying for the end of this chapter (as I knew what was coming) I so wanted to cheat and go to see how you did it...but I was good and read all of it first. Great job! Great writting.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Great job my friend!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

My dear friend, A++++++++++++++ as always.

 

(You have been reviewed by the mighty prolific one)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

This one really needs to be a IFIC production

 
Whisper by twilifed113 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 191]
Summary:

Edward Cullen fell in love with Isabella the moment he saw her. But Isabella’s frightening past keeps her from even imagining romance. However, she has no choice but to accept his marriage proposal after her guardian and beloved friend passes away, leaving her with nothing to her name but a box of letters and photographs.

Yet, those letters and photos are the catalyst to the unveiling of a mystery in Bella’s family that will consume them. Somehow, their true love for each other can only be discovered as Edward saves her from her own haunting past.  




AU-H, Romantic Suspence

thanks m81170 for the spectacular banner!

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Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 47383
[Report This] Published: December 09, 2009 Updated: February 18, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Nightmares

BEAUTIFUL STORY

I FEEL FOR EDWARD

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Poison

I really love this story. But I am kinda scared. Please tell me she will wake up and smell the Edward - realize she loves him. Please tell me she doesn't fall in love with someone else!



Author's Response: Thank you =) To ease your fears, Bella will not fall in love with someone else.

 




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