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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

Once their lives were intertwined and stuck together with superglue, but now Edward and Bella are a million years apart. Bella, a highly successful author, lacks the inspiration to begin her second novel. Edward, a resident doctor, suffers a nervous breakdown from the stress and heartbreak his job brings. Through a strange twist of fate, they are brought together again and are given the change to gain what they have been subconsciously searching for all along and to overcome their fears... if things go according to plan.

 

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Kate, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 38516
[Report This] Published: December 14, 2009 Updated: October 05, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Designed by Fate

ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER



Author's Response:

Thankyou so much :) There's more to come.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Freedom

CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE

 
Taking by KayleeSwan Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

In 1903 Isabella Swan was born.  In 1919 she was reborn, as a vampire.  Unfortunately for her her sire was Aro Volturi.  Ten years she would pass in Volterra mearly existing.  Then, one day she began taking back her life and everything changed.


Categories: AU Characters: Aro
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 4030
[Report This] Published: December 14, 2009 Updated: February 19, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Taking Life

I love it

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Taking Freedom

LOVE THE STORY

 
Summary:

 

Isabella Swan was enjoying a delightful trip to Europe with her best friend Alice Brandon. But a phone call puts her back on a road she had tried to forget for four years. AU/Human, OOC.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 5378
[Report This] Published: December 14, 2009 Updated: February 03, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Oh-la-la!

looking forward to more

please tell me you are e and b all the way...after the angst of course lol

 
Summary:

To see what I have seen, see what I see…” The words flowed like honey from his lips, and in just as brief of a breath, he was gone. The bell above the Record store’s door chimed and Bella saw the flash of bronze fly past the window. “He’s a Cullen, Bella. You can never…”

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 29187
[Report This] Published: December 14, 2009 Updated: March 05, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Scene One

dyiing for more

hope you continue it



Author's Response:

dont die.

O_O

 
Killing Death by Echo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 155]
Summary:

Meet Edward, serial killer.

At only seventeen years old, he has already grown to be a killer. When a detective catches wind of his doings he will stop at nothing to destroy whoever threatens his freedom, as well as the man that made him who he is now. Enter Bella, innocent bystander.When she witnesses Edward kill, she naturally runs screaming. Can the two find love in death?

WARNING: Dark Themes. Graphic descriptions of mutilated corpses.

Banners by Deviants of the Dark!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 19379
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2009 Updated: June 27, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I know I shouldn't like this lol but I do

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Such a trainwreck lol. I know I shouldn't like this LOL. Feel free to kill Jacob.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Such a trainwreck lol. I know I shouldn't like this LOL. Feel free to kill Jacob.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

good start

I hate Jacob though so will hope Edward gets him lol



Author's Response:

Well, I guess we will have to wait. Bella does have a thing for the odler men.... *grins evily*

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I shouldn't like this...but do. Please, please kill Jacob!!!! I will give you extra points LOL



Author's Response:

=] lol I will see what I can do!  Thank you for the review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Chapter four should be up tomorrow! =]  thanks for dropping the review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I KNOW I SHOULDN'T LIKE THIS BUT JUST CAN'T HELP IT



Author's Response:

^_^  well thank you! I am glad you like it!

Sadly, the updates won't be so fast anymore =[  my doctor says all the constant typing is agravating my fracute and it isn't healing right because of it. But I promise to still get something up at least once a week! Maybe if I pace myself I can actually turn out longer chaters... =]

thanks for the reveiw!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Well, I wouldn't mind Jacob getting killed off



Author's Response:

=] lol  ouch! Thank you for dropping me a review, they make my broken wrist feel slightly better! =]

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

enjoying the story



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and dropping the review. I swear they are the reason for all the fast updates! =] hope you enjoy the rest!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I like all of it. Having an unknown is good - keeps the suspense

 
Summary:

One decision changed everyone's destiny. Will Edward be able to live with the consequences of his actions? Will he be able to forgive himself for the pain he has inflicted on the only person he has ever loved, and most importantly will she forgive him?

A story beginning with the cliff scene in New Moon and taking you on a journey through the dark side of fate. Where Edward and Bella's lives are both changed, but they react in completely different ways.

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Billy, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Chelsea, Demetri, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Paul, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 16007
[Report This] Published: December 16, 2009 Updated: April 06, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two: The Pain of Revenge

fantastic chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Next chapter will be up soon!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four: The Result of Courage

great job



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two: The Pain of Revenge

love this....now go update!



Author's Response:

lol...actually it was just updated! Chapter three just got validated! Enjoy! Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: Falling From Hope

Very good writting. Great start. My only question is I want to make sure this isn't a B and J story. I don't read those.



Author's Response:

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Thank you for the review! Don't worry! I am definitely team Edward, but Jacob is a part of the beginning of the story. Edward makes his appearance in a few chapters, but this story does have a completely different plot than the original. I don't want to give a lot away, but I am a sucker for a happy ending ;)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five: Bitter Emergence

LOVE IT



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review! New chapter should be up some time next week!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six: Ulterior Motives

CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE

NOT LIKING CHELSEA LOL



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I am so glad you are loving the story. There has to be some evil people...lol...Chesea just wants some love ;)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven: Costly Mistakes

GREAT CLIFFY



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Glad you are liking the story!

 
Summary:

Edward tries to relieve some stress prior to a very important job interview.  When he meets a lovely lady in the hotel bar, he assumes she's an escort... but is she?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 12984
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2009 Updated: January 20, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Desert Ice

DYING FOR MORE

LOL



Author's Response:

=D  I appreciate the feedback!  Glad you like it!  ha ha 

Working chapter 3 now...should be up soon!

Thanks for reading!

Karie

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Big Money

LOL

LOVE THIS

 




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