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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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You Belong to Me by IrishLove Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 384]
Summary:

Living in the small town of Forks, Bella Swan has a normal life, boyfriend, and best friend. Everything starts to change when people mysteriously disappear. What is happening to them? Why does she have the feeling that someone is watching her? AU/OOC Dark Cullens.

 

You Belong to Me

Banner by MarianneNorthmanCullen


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 59810
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2009 Updated: April 01, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Discovering

great job with this

Feel free to kill Jacob



Author's Response:

Thank you! and I'm guessing you're not a fan of Jacob. lol. Don't worry, no one is safe in this story.

However, I have no immediate plans to bring him into the story. It's more about the Cullens, what they are doing in Forks, what's going to happen with Bella and Jasper, etc etc.

Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Luring

I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE



Author's Response:

haha thanks, I just sent in the next chapter so hopefully it will be validated soon! Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Introducing

LOVE THIS BEYOND WORDS



Author's Response:

haha I always love your reviews. they are short and to the point! Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Confronting

I JUST LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I LOVE how you always review!

I'm glad you are liking the story!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Arguing

I CAN'T WAIT



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! Hopefully the next chapter will be up sooN!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Convincing

Don't worry about the reviews - a lot of people don't review. Also, sometimes it takes time for a story to pick up.

I like this story a lot. Trust me, I am very picky.



Author's Response:

You startled me when I first saw your name and you review wasn't in all caps. lol

I don't usually worry about reviews, but the story started out getting around 12, 15, or 18 a chapter. Then, recently it had been getting 5 or 6. It made me wonder since I thought the reviews increased as a story went on. Oh well...it will do that I guess haha.

Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you are enjoying the story!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Preparing

lol love the story



Author's Response:

haha thanks! Just sent in the next chapter so hopefully it will be up soon!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Beginning

lol

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Killing

LOL THAT WAS CRUEL

LOVE DARK EDWARD

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Parting

GET TO UPDATING!



Author's Response:

LOL, I'm on it. I'll hopefully be able to submit it tonight, if not tomorrow. Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Accepting

keep it coming



Author's Response:

I'm on it. lol I think I might post the next two chapter very close together since they go with each other. Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Enlightening

love it



Author's Response:

Thanks, as always!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Comprehending

love it



Author's Response:

Thanks for the revew! I just submitted the next chapter so it may be up soon.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Belonging

I just love this so much



Author's Response:

I'm glad! And I just love your reviews!

The next chapter should be up soonish.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Starting

I really like this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Pursuing

PLEASE KILL JACOB

LOVE THE STORY



Author's Response:

haha, don't worry...Edward may have to teach a lesson to Jake, just like he did to Mike, but it won't be for a while...

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed the story and I loved your reviews. I don't know when the sequel will be up on this site, but I already have three chapters written and they are on other sites as of now.

 
Hide and Drink by Savage Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7597]
Summary:

Now Complete!

Bella’s blood was just too tempting to be ignored.  In this version of Twilight, Edward takes Bella on a sadistic journey with his monstrous side.  While Edward drags her around the world, barely keeping a step ahead of his frantic family, Bella battles the monster for possession of the gentler vampire inside her captor.  EPOV.

Winner of the Faithful Shipper Awards for best Alternate Universe.

Winner of The Vampies, Twilight Vampfic Awards for Best Dark Vamp.

Winner of the Immortal Sin Awards for Best Darkward and Hottest Dark Vamp Fic!

Thank you Lace for the Banner!

“There was no other blood like this.  Once she was gone, it would no longer be within my grasp.  But if I stopped now, she would heal.  Her body would make more.  The blood would replenish.  I could drink again.  The promise of more – it was the only incentive that could have caused me to stop.”

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 249263
[Report This] Published: December 22, 2009 Updated: August 28, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Read and Bleed

I can't tell you how much I love this

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Read and Bleed

I can't tell you how much I love this

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Lost and Found

A+

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Cry and Consume

This is one of my favorites

great writting

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Burn and Churn

VEry good as always

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Bite and Run

this is great

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Shop and Kill

Great job

Oh, well he was cheating on his wife so he got what he deserved

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Touch and Take

THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE STORIES

GREAT WRITTING

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Placate and Punish

This is such a great story

 




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