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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Eternal Damnation by zomniac Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 599]
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(Banner courtesy of miki_hearts_edward_cullen. Thank you!)

His question brought Bella back down from cloud nine. She glowered at him. “Bite me.”

A slow, wicked grin etched itself on Edward’s face. “I don’t think you’d want me to,” he whispered darkly, laughing silently at the irony of her insult.

-

“I know I smelled an open wound, Bella,” Alice said sternly. Behind her, Carlisle and Edward exchanged a look.

Bella scoffed slightly. “Believe me, I felt it,” she told her as she tried to stand.

-

“You don’t understand,” Edward said in a deadly tone.

Bella stared at him for a moment, a bitter expression overcoming her features. “There’s something for me to understand?”

 

-

 

 

“Fuck her!” she heard one of them call.

 

“Oh, I will,” the man above her answered.

 

-

 

Her smile faded after a moment when she realized something. “Oh, great,” she started grumpily, “we match.”

 

Edward grinned lopsidedly. “Indeed, we do,” he replied.

 

-

 

“You’re funny,” Edward said dryly. “I bet you wouldn’t be saying the same thing if you were the one who turned up missing.”

 

 

“Are you trying to scare me, Mr. Cullen?” Bella asked as she snapped a picture.

-
  
"Bella, listen to me,” he tried coaxing her gently.

“No!” Bella shouted, pulling her arms out of his grip. “I never want to see you again. Stay away from me,” she said through clenched teeth, and no matter what she did, she couldn’t stop the tears from falling.

 

-

He cupped her face with both hands while looking into her eyes. “If you don’t find me, who’s killed before, whose diet consists of blood, repulsive, how can I look at you in that way?” he asked her softly.

-

"What kind of man are you?!” Bella pushed and slapped his chest as she raged. She was becoming unhinged.

-
  
“Bella, don’t come,” her mother said weakly. “Whatever he says, don’t come—” 

“No! That’s not what you’re supposed to say!” a voice exclaimed in the background.

A tear escaped Bella’s eye as she listened to her mother’s cries as he hit her.

-

 

Edward nodded. “You’re safe now, Bella,” he told her tenderly as he softly massaged her cheek.

 

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It's cranky vampire Edward against angry, no shit-taking, possibly mortal Bella in the ring. Who will be the winner? Or will they both lose? Watch their journey to life full of drama, mystery, romance, and mythical creatures.

Twilight told with a strong, angry Bella, and a more controlled, bad tempered Edward. B/E, AU, canon pairings, lots of OOC

 

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Bree, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, James, Jane, Jared, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Laurent, Leah, Marcus, Mike, Phil, Quil, Renee, Riley, Rosalie, Sam, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 221838
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2009 Updated: October 09, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Dangerous Beginnings

Can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Lies Unraveled

A+

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Four Months Later

Great story



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Another Snag in the Road

Dying for more

A+++



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Bundle of Joy by lilac17 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 185]
Summary:

Married for three years and expecting their first child, Bella and Edward were ready for their happily ever after, but that seems to be threatened when someone from the past reenters their lives, holding secrets that could break the couple up.

Thanks to MintKiss for the banner!

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Bundle of Joy


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 62261
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2009 Updated: November 28, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Friends and an ex girlfriend

I want to slap Edward for meeting with her aughh

Did they have a baby together? Did she have an abortion?

Good writting



Author's Response:

Edward is stupid for meeting with Tanya, but he wanted to be sure that she would keep her mouth shut. He was kinda scared. Thanks so much!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Wild Brunch

I so want to slap Edward



Author's Response:

Edward is being a little stupid, but he didn't tell Bella because he didn't want her to get too upset. He wasn't lying when he said that. Thanks so much for your review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: The Aftermath

Edward needs to knock it off. There is no point for his ex to have his number and so forth. He needs to be slapped. He better not even think of Tanya in a sexual way...aughh!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review! I think you all want to kill Edward here!

 
Summary:

Edward is forced to leave his playboy life behind in Chicago and come home to Washington. When he is stripped of everything he knows, will he change his ways or risk losing everything? All human, cannon couples, OOC.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 27704
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2009 Updated: May 24, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: I Fought the Law

love this

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Really good. Love the look at A6 LOL. Please update soon. Going into my favorites

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Homecoming

i am one that put it in my fav's after the pro

love the story and sense of humor

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Annoyance & Amusement

love this story

 
Summary:

Vampire Bella contemplates the virtues of the living when her human singer unwittingly stumbles into her secluded haven. AU, OOC, Bella/Edward-ish


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 992
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2009 Updated: October 26, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Her Singer's Smile

love it

 
Immersion by katmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary:

...Immersion...

 

Suppose that vampires "imprint" based on smell and the connection is immediate and irresistible. What will happen when vampire Bella Swan meets her mate at Forks High?

 

 

 

Immersion: involvement in something that occupies all the time and energy available.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 37435
[Report This] Published: October 12, 2009 Updated: November 21, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

eight long months lol



Author's Response:

That would be a long time...LOL...and the evil author is going to make them wait nearly TWO YEARS!  Ah, but the epilogue will be up in a few days...

Thanks for reading, and those lovely STARS, hc4metal!  I appreciate your support!

Here's a preview:

Another burst of lightning lit the tent, immediately followed by a clap of thunder that shook the very ground that our tent was tethered to.  It was as if the elements were driving us on, pushing us towards our release.

Kathie

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

loved it



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading...and the lovely stars! Chapter two is up...and three is in the queue...

Kathie

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

love it



Author's Response:

Thank you, hc4metal...and for the stars too!

Here's your preview for Chapter Four...which is already in the queue:

My sexual experience was minimal.  I had kissed Sandi once.  We had looked at each other and wondered, briefly, if there was something more there.  Our kiss had quickly let us know that, no, there wasn’t.  The laughter that followed, on both our parts, had kept our friendship from becoming weird.  We agreed to never speak of it again.  That was my only close contact with a girl. Well, besides the time those two girls had accosted me in the hallway after school.  And that encounter had just been disgusting…nothing sexy or romantic about it at all. 

When Bella and I started kissing earlier, that helped the ache in my body and soul.  Her tongue touching mine had eased the ache even more. That’s when I started to suspect that this soul mate thing was going to get even more physically demanding before too much longer.

Thanks again for reading.

Kathie

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

LOVE IT



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, hc4metal!  I love those stars!

Preview for Chapter Five...Carlisle is speaking to Edward and Bella:

“This does present us with a dilemma, as I’m sure you both have noticed. Once a match is made, mates are compelled to consummate the relationship. It’s almost like a mating imperative.” I felt a blush start up from my neck to my cheeks.

Carlisle noticed and addressed the issue. “Please don’t be embarrassed. I can say with 100% accuracy that we have all been where you and Bella are right this minute.”

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

great job



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, hc4meetal! And for the stellar stars!

Next update soon...here's a preview:

Jasper and I had the best conversations about history. We’d sit through our class in school and he’d whisper that he’d tell me what really happened later. That was a blast. Of course, there was a drawback to being in the class with only Jasper. The girls in there hit on him, and on me, every chance they got. I guess my being with Bella had added some kind of cachet to my standing and I found girls trying to get near me all the time. Well, all the time when Bella wasn’t standing there with me. I loved her subtle vampire vibe, she didn’t scare me, but the girls were always wigged out when she was standing near them. It could have been the nearly subliminal growls she gave off when she saw them flirting with me, or worse, touching my arm.

Thanks again for reading, snowgood, I appreciate your support!

Kathie

 
Summary:

Bella does not jump off the cliff. As may have been inevitable, Edward comes back to Forks on his own accord. What will he find when he gets there?


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 12050
[Report This] Published: October 12, 2009 Updated: January 07, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

please let him be there

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Okay, more

I hope J is totally out of the picture

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

GREAT JOB

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Send Jacob packing

Love the story

 
Second Chance by christib Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 148]
Summary:

What if Edward had not returned to Forks after his first encounter with Bella in Biology? They have both finished high school and find themselves attending the same University. Bella doesn't know yet that Edward is a vampire and he wants a second chance.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 12915
[Report This] Published: October 12, 2009 Updated: December 09, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Dazzled

so dying for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 "Stalkward"

love the story and the fact he isn't freaking out regarding changing her

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- A Fateful Encounter

love it

please update soon



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'll update as soon as my beta approves!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Out on the Town

I llike the story and this chapter. But feel free to take the part where she slept with Mike out lol.

 




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