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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Chances by AmoreBella88 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 251]
Summary:

Bella meets Edward in the ER. One funny internal monologue later and she's reduced to a bumbling baboon who's panties are drenched. Her life turns for the better, but can a random chance turn it gruesomely wrong?

 

 

 

(AU-AH, OOC for Bella’s vocabulary)

 

 

 

Rated NC-17 for language, mature sexual content, and later violence.

 

On temporary hiatus. 12/19/11

 

Thanks to Sarah_Elizabeth for the artwork!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 100289
[Report This] Published: September 24, 2009 Updated: January 19, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Concentration

SO LOVE IT



Author's Response: Hehe, I am so glad that you so love it! Teasers for chapter 5 are up on the thread! Thank you for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Detonation

dying for more



Author's Response: It's a comin', it's a comin'! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

 
Bubblegum Pop by AzureEyedI Rated: PG-13 starstar [Reviews - 37]
Summary:

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Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 19107
[Report This] Published: September 24, 2009 Updated: June 12, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: September 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Bubblegum Pop

your serious...Edward cheating with Tanya! That ruined it for me.



Author's Response:

Hi, thanks for taking the time to read and review Bubblegum Pop!

Never said he's cheating with Tanya, just that Nessie thought that...remember how sly vamps can be? He knows she can see thoughts through touch, and he's no dummy.

You'll just have to read the continuation of this in December, once the Les Femmes Noires competition that this piece is entered in is complete!

Thanks!

AZI

 
First Night by annasense Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

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Stephenie Meyer created two beautiful characters that fell in love and got married.  This is the story of their wedding night.  Resurrection is Edward's story, written by me.  Breathless is Bella's story, written by my friend, JT.  

All characters and the preface in Breathless are the propery Stephenie Meyer...

 

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8281
[Report This] Published: September 24, 2009 Updated: October 15, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Resurrection

great writting



Author's Response:

Thanks!!!  I hope you enjoyed it!

 
Twisted Fates by shelle87 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 74]
Summary:

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One decision can change everything...

Renee never left Charlie, instead choosing to raise Bella in Forks. As a consequence - Bella's life isn't as it should be. In the midst of dating Mike, failing classes and dealing with the breakdown of her parents marriage she barely notices her handsome lab partner, even though he is the key to putting her life back on the right course, as fate intended.

 


Categories: AU Characters: Angela, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 16867
[Report This] Published: September 25, 2009 Updated: May 08, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

LOVE IT



Author's Response:

Yey! :-) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 

Shelle

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Please tell me she dumps him in the next chapter so I can respect her. I have never understood why a girl /woman would stay with a cheater. I know I have seen some of my friends be idiots and do it (suprise when the get cheated on again - rolling eyes).



Author's Response:

Hi, thanks for the review :-)

The end is very near for their relationship so please stick with me for one more chapter ;-).

 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

She should have told him it was over last night - I wanna slap her

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Glad she dumped him.

 
Hot Dish by diamondheart Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 37]
Summary:

 

Chef Bella Swan has spent her life pursuing her dream and passion - owning her own restaurant. Which has left her love life in the soup. What love life?

 Enter suave, sexy, unapproachable headwaiter Edward Masen...

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"...Previously, the combination of ambition and exhaustion had put my libido into a sort of hibernation. No more. Not only did Edward's efforts at the Swan's Nest give me more time to myself than I'd had in years, there was the E-Factor, the Edward-factor, itself.

 I was quickly finding that all work and no play makes Bella a dull, frustrated, HORNY girl!"

 A lemony frolic! Rated for vulgar language, lewd behavior and shockingly graphic descriptions of food.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 8461
[Report This] Published: September 27, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The Mid-course

this is great

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Appetizer

love the story



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Summer of Salt by lola_pop Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 776]
Summary:

The heat wave lingers. Sweet, savory and slick.  Jasper, Rose and I wade through the humid days, content in our relative isolation. We spend June through August at our family lake property, and this summer is like any other.

Until it's not.

An unexpected guest, new neighbors and a few stiff drinks collide to make the year we turn 19 sometimes better, often worse, but infinitely more interesting.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 84353
[Report This] Published: September 27, 2009 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Wherever you go, there you are.

I have been dying for an update. Great chapter. He has alot of making up to do because of that skank Tanya.



Author's Response:

Word.  Skank!  Hee.  More coming...

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: The Snap

Great job as always! Fantastic.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Stranger Danger

please say it isn't so@



Author's Response:

I wish I could!  Alas, he is an ass.  

Hey, that rhymed!

Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Crush

Auggh, please right this wrong!!!



Author's Response:

I'm trying, but these rich kids have a mind of their own!  Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Cannoli and Chianti

I thought it was a great chapter. Edward better decide to change. Hopefully while at the lake Bella can go out dancing with the girls and Edward can get a bit jealous - might be good for him.

 

Great writting.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I think Edward will get what's coming to him, one way or another!  Thanks for reading.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Fried Chicken and Chainsaws

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Coming soon!!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Shenanigans

I have been dying for this update. Now I am dying for the next one.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Sorry for the wait.  Check the forums for a teaser in the next day or two...

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Catharsis

I JUMPED FOR JOY WHEN I SAW THIS WAS UPDATED.

EVEN THOUGH I DON'T WANT HER TO SLEEP WITH MIKE, I HOPE MIKE DRIVES EDWARD CRAZY WITH JEALOUS RAGE LOL.



Author's Response:

Oooh I think we can get some of that going!  I love a jealous Edward, myself.  Thanks, as always, for reading.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: The Reel

I can't wait for more.

I want Edward to suffer but I don't want her to sleep with Mike.



Author's Response:

Noted!  Definitely got readers on both sides of that fence.  Ha.  

Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: It Could Be Sweet

I HOPE E HEARD EVERY MOAN LOL

I DO WANT THEM BACK TOGETHER...BUT SUFFERING E IS GOOD

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Lotions and Potions and Lists

LOVE IT



Author's Response:

LOVE YOU!  Thanks for reviewing.  xo

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Juicy Fruit

I just love this story



Author's Response:

Thanks for sticking with me!  I love you for loving it.  xo

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The truth is all there is

I can't wait for the next chapter

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Little Bastard

good chapter ending

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: One More Time, With Feeling

I hope she moves for him

 




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