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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

100 years have passed since Bella was changed. What happens when Bella finds herself in a dream like trance and finds herself transported back to 1918.....

 

 

Thanks to Jules for the awesome banner!!!


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 6393
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2009 Updated: November 21, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Welcome Back to Forks

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

thanks I have the first four chapters done, just have to go back and work with the beta's here to make them better.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Edward Cullen, Is that You?

great story and plot



Author's Response:

thank you, stay tuned for more.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Where the Hell Am I?

can't wait for more



Author's Response:

stay tuned i have chapters 3-5 written and ready to upload

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: The Invitation

ENJOYING THE STORY



Author's Response:

thank you for the continued support

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: The Realization

looking forward t omroe

 
Seventeen Cakes by vanessarae Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 164]
Summary:

 

Bella tries to keep her distance from Edward, thinking that she
can't be hurt if he is never more than a pretty face. Too bad she doesn't let
Edward in on her plan.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Kate, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 71604
[Report This] Published: September 30, 2009 Updated: March 30, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - The Rules

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

 

V

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Jiffy Pop, Sit-Ups, and Lady Liberty

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

V

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: In Times Like These, We Eat Frosted Delights

keep it coming

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Maneaters, Football, and Crazy Bitches (ninapolitan)

love it

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Boners, The Claw, and Doris Day

another great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Failure, Sloth, and Fools

 

NICE CHAPTER AND SOUNDTRACK



Author's Response:

Thank you!

V

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Jealousy, Federlines, and GnR

i am really enjoying this

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Confessions, Heart, and Swiftness

still enjoying the story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Queens, Heroes, but Not the One

another great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Try It Again, With Britches

BELLA NEEDS TO BE SLAPPED LOL

 
Summary:

 

 

 

 

 

We all believe that Edward and Bella are meant to be together...but what if there’s more to that than meets the eye?

 

What if there are forces at work that they don’t understand? How will they cope with events that have no discernable meaning?

 

This story starts out two weeks before Bella and Edward’s wedding. But, right away, things go wrong. They struggle with mishap after mishap, all the while wondering if they’re destined to be at the center of conflict and angst.

 

All the major characters of Twilight appear. Canon couples. Lemons in various chapters. This is a more realistic view of Edward and Bella’s relationship before the wedding. He certainly wouldn’t carry her off to a desert island alone, having never even touched her. They would have experimented a bit.

 

Eventually all characters get their Happily Ever After. I just drag them through hell before we get there. No characters die before their time.

 

And I’ve adhered to canon up until the story starts—Post Eclipse. After that, it diverges from SM’s version. So...no Renesmee. No pregnancy.

 

I’ve poured my heart and soul into this story. It took me over a year to complete. I thought about it constantly. For that hard work and diligence to form, grammar and style, I’d like just one tiny thing from you, the reader.

 

I’d like a review. If you love it, if you hate it, if you’re just indifferent and will never look at it again, I’d like to hear that. It’s not a lot to ask. So...I’ll say thanks in advance for the wonderful reviews you’ll leave after you read each chapter!

 

Maria

twilight gypsy

 

  


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Paul, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes Word count: 178339
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2009 Updated: November 29, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Help!

great job



Author's Response:

Thank you for coming back! I see that you reviewed prev. chapters. I am so thankful that you came back to read more. What about the chapter captivated you? What were your favorite lines? Do you want me to post the tasting blood chapter, or no?

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Run For Your Life

great chapter

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Danger Zone

Well, he could bite me lol



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for continuing to read and review! He could bite me too!

Maria

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: A Hard Day's Night

great start

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and for reviewing! I am posting ch. 2 tonight for validation!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Human Touch

great chapter

some cliffy



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for your review! I will post ch 3 when it gets back from the Beta Group! This is my first fanfic attempt, and I really need the reviews to let me know if I am proceeding in a way that is interesting to the reader. After 1 day I have over 900 hits but only 24 reviews!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: With a Little Help From My Friends

I liked it

Hope he changes her



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for your great review. I am glad you liked it, which part did you like? And please tell me your favorite line! I hope he changes her, too. Haven't gotten that far yet!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Tell Me Why

love this



Author's Response:

I love your reviews! Brief and to the point! Thanks!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Brilliant Disguise

10



Author's Response:

Dearest hc4metal, is this a positive review? I am so hoping that it is a 10, like in gymnastics, which is the perfect, or like Be Derek in the movie with the same name. Can you elabortate a bit? Give me just one favorite line? I LOVE YOU hc4metal!

Maria

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Fantasy

lol busted

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Bring on the Wonder

10



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your excellent review and stars! Thank you for continuing to read and follow the story!

Maria

 




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