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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Exposure by ThePhoenixRiddle Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 125]
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When Bella meets Edward and Rosalie, they have an interesting proposition for her. It was supposed to be one night only. What happens when no one wants it to end? ExBxR, ExB, BxR, AU/AH. Part One of The Photographer's Series.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 66121
[Report This] Published: September 21, 2009 Updated: April 21, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: 4: Talk

such a great job

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: 8: The Pretender

SHe needs to make a choice. If not, she needs to be honest with them. I don't want her to try to hide it - that is just wrong.

 
Summary:

Edward is a teenage boy who finds his life instantly changed when his family moves to Forks, WA.  He is intensely drawn to the mysterious girl in his biology class whose mind he discovers he can read.  It doesn’t take long for him to find the truth behind her dark and painful secret but it is already too late “ his life is forever altered by his intense physical and emotional connection to the beautiful girl.   

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 120460
[Report This] Published: September 22, 2009 Updated: December 23, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

love the story

 



Author's Response:

Yay!  Thank you! :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

like the story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing!  I appreciate the support!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I hate Jake so I am pretending that I didn't see him naked in your story lol.

Love the story



Author's Response:

You are certainly not the only Jacob-hater out there.  Wow - so many people had a negative response to the idea of him naked. I like to think that my Jacob is different from the rest.  He will NOT be a love interest for Bella at all, but he definitely has a place in this story.  Can we just pretend that he's a sexy naked, hot, exotic man - and not the conniving character from the books??? Thanks so much for the review!!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

looking forward to more

good writting



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review - I am so happy to be on Twilighted.  I plan on updating pretty frequently so please let me know how you like the story as it progresses.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

i am really into this



Author's Response:

Excellent. Me too!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

love it



Author's Response:

thank you so much! :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

dying for more



Author's Response:

I am so glad.  But please don't kick the bucket before you read the whole story!  

 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

great story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

love the story



Author's Response:

I really do appreciate the review!  Thank you for reading!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

ready for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I CAN'T TELL U HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS STORY

GREAT JOB



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Shouty caps even!  I love them!  

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great story and very well written



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for continuing to support my story and to leave reviews!  I really do appreciate the feedback and I love to hear from you!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

NICE

Great job



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I had an especially good time writing this chapter!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Fantastic chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! :)  I appreciate your review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Please update soon!

Hope you had a great time in Yosemite - going there in Agust



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing hc4metal!  Yes, Yosemite is incredible.  We were lucky and had gorgeous weather, the waterfalls were huge, the animals were out lurking around, and the trails weren't too crowded.  It was an almost perfect experience!  Thanks for asking - and have a fantastic time while you're there!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

great as usual



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

ready for more



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!  More is coming soon!

 
Summary:

An older Bella meets Edward at her local community college. His arrival forces her to come to a crossroads in her life and discover secrets others thought well hidden. AU.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 771
[Report This] Published: September 22, 2009 Updated: October 11, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

interesting

looking forward to more

 
Summary:

Could It Be Destiny

Bella Swan opens a bookstore in Port Angeles, which happens to be located right next to the music store owned by a young man named Edward Cullen. Watch as they meet and form a relationship.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Laurent, Other Character, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Completed: Yes Word count: 167136
[Report This] Published: September 23, 2009 Updated: September 23, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I really like this. I also like the build up. I can't stand stories where the first five minutes they meet they do the deed and then are madly in love  - yeah, like that happens lol.

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Yeah, I definiitely wanted this to be a slow build-up.  They will start to spend a lot more time together, but the M rating won't come into play for awhile.  ;)  They are going to be getting to know each other for a lot more chapters yet.  *grin*

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

great job



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm glad you liked it and appreciate the review.  :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I think this is the best chapter by far.



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks!  :)  More soon!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I really do like this story- great job



Author's Response:

Thank you!!  :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

glad they finally met. love the story./



Author's Response:

Thank you!!  :)

 




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