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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

Edward is a teenage boy who finds his life instantly changed when his family moves to Forks, WA.  He is intensely drawn to the mysterious girl in his biology class whose mind he discovers he can read.  It doesn’t take long for him to find the truth behind her dark and painful secret but it is already too late “ his life is forever altered by his intense physical and emotional connection to the beautiful girl.   

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 120460
[Report This] Published: September 22, 2009 Updated: December 23, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

love it



Author's Response:

thank you so much! :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

dying for more



Author's Response:

I am so glad.  But please don't kick the bucket before you read the whole story!  

 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

great story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

love the story



Author's Response:

I really do appreciate the review!  Thank you for reading!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

ready for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I CAN'T TELL U HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS STORY

GREAT JOB



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Shouty caps even!  I love them!  

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great story and very well written



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for continuing to support my story and to leave reviews!  I really do appreciate the feedback and I love to hear from you!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

NICE

Great job



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I had an especially good time writing this chapter!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Fantastic chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! :)  I appreciate your review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Please update soon!

Hope you had a great time in Yosemite - going there in Agust



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing hc4metal!  Yes, Yosemite is incredible.  We were lucky and had gorgeous weather, the waterfalls were huge, the animals were out lurking around, and the trails weren't too crowded.  It was an almost perfect experience!  Thanks for asking - and have a fantastic time while you're there!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

great as usual



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

ready for more



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!  More is coming soon!

 
Summary:

An older Bella meets Edward at her local community college. His arrival forces her to come to a crossroads in her life and discover secrets others thought well hidden. AU.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 771
[Report This] Published: September 22, 2009 Updated: October 11, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

interesting

looking forward to more

 
Summary:

Could It Be Destiny

Bella Swan opens a bookstore in Port Angeles, which happens to be located right next to the music store owned by a young man named Edward Cullen. Watch as they meet and form a relationship.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Laurent, Other Character, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Completed: Yes Word count: 167136
[Report This] Published: September 23, 2009 Updated: September 23, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I really like this. I also like the build up. I can't stand stories where the first five minutes they meet they do the deed and then are madly in love  - yeah, like that happens lol.

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Yeah, I definiitely wanted this to be a slow build-up.  They will start to spend a lot more time together, but the M rating won't come into play for awhile.  ;)  They are going to be getting to know each other for a lot more chapters yet.  *grin*

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

great job



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm glad you liked it and appreciate the review.  :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I think this is the best chapter by far.



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks!  :)  More soon!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I really do like this story- great job



Author's Response:

Thank you!!  :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

glad they finally met. love the story./



Author's Response:

Thank you!!  :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay, I like it



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)  Updates should come every Sunday.  I'm glad you like it!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

looking forward to more of this story

good writting



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :D

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

good job again



Author's Response:

Hehehe  Thank you for the reviews!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing!  :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you!  The next chapter, where Edward & Bella finally meet, should be up next Sunday.  :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

love this



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)  I'm glad you liked it and thank you for taking the time to review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

love the story



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad you are enjoying it and thank you for the review.

 




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