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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

When Edward found Bella, she changed his world. What would happen if he lost her? This is the story of another vampire, Giovanni, who lost his beloved Margherita many, many years ago- and when his world collides with Forks.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 26129
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2009 Updated: December 12, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Art

MY HEART IS SAD FOR HIM

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Farewell

I REALLY LIKE IT. I FEEL SO BAD FOR HIM. MAYBE HE CAN RE-MATE WITH TANYA SO SHE CAN BACK OFF OF EDWARD.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Bonus Chapter: The Day at the Beach

Great job. I hope he finds love again or we find that his love is really alive.

 
Broken by monica1981 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

It's been three years since Edward Left Bella and her life has fallen apart. What will it take for Bella to reach her breaking point, and what will our favorite family of vampires have to do with it? Will Bella ever be able to heal?

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Phil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 3310
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2009 Updated: November 05, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start

I see Tanya is in it. Please tell me that Edward isn't with anyone else.



Author's Response:

Don't worry about Tanya. I promise this is an E/B story all the way.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

great chapter

I don't like Jacob, but I feel for him in this one



Author's Response:

I felt bad, but I felt having this happen would be good for a later part of the story.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

like the story

I don't likeJacob so you get a ten for killing him lol

I never liked Leah either so feel free to off her as well



Author's Response:

I've never really liked eah, bt I won't be killing her off, at least not yet. I promise there will be more soon!

 
Summary:

Edward over hears a very juicy secret regarding his younger sister, Alice.  The plot to blackmail Alice in order to get closer to her best friend, Bella, forms in his mind, but doesn't exactly pan out the way he wants it to.  Rated for Edward's foul mouth and the sprinkles of lemonade with the eventual lemon.

 

Thank you so much for the banner Selita!  You rock my socks!!

The Virgin Swan and the Cullen Intuition Banner

michelleab09 from ff.net made me this fantastic banner!!! 

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michelleab09 is at it again with another lovely banner for the waterfall!!

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The lovely Selita made this blinkie for me! I'm so very proud of it! :D :D

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 119037
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2009 Updated: November 11, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: And I plan on giving Bella plenty...

OAKY, I so love this. I hope in the end, after what I assume will be some angst (LOL), Edward does take her v-card.

You must update soon!

Great writting



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad you're enjoying yourself.  I can't say whether Edward does the deed or not because that would just give away the rest of the story, and really...what fun is that? 

Thanks for the reiview!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: This. Is. The. Best. Feeling. Ever.

I so love it

Hope Bella gets what she wants LOL



Author's Response:

My lips are sealed, you'll just have to stay tuned to find out.  ;D

Thanks for the review!! :D

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: He's got a knife in his hand!

daddy charlie won't be happy lol



Author's Response:

hehe...not in the least.

Thanks for reading!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: October 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Remember your window, Juliet.

great story



Author's Response:

Aweaome!  Thanks for the review!!  :D

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Lalalalalala

love the story so much

Not a Jacob fan....needs to imprint on a milkbone



Author's Response:

LMAO!  Need to imprint on a milkbone...I love that! I'm so happy that you're digging my story so much!

Thanks for reviewing!! :D :D

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Oh no...no, no, no...not good.

you doing a great job



Author's Response:

Awesome!  Thank you so much!!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: For the better or for worse?

so love this

great writting



Author's Response:

Awesome!!!  Thanks for reviewing!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: It's the best invention yet.

love it

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Okay, that's not sexy.

love it

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: I...blow your mind?

love the story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: For the love of God

cute story

 
Summary:

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

Newest fanmade banner that I thought was cool and had to add by Twilighted's ebonyy:

 

 

Outtakes Now posting on Twilighted.  This banner by yours truly :)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 71 Completed: Yes Word count: 482203
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2009 Updated: March 22, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice

love the story

a+ for fast updates

something tells me we might be seeing a jealous Edward soon



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it...thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Avoidance and Disappointment

edward needs to be slapped - love how he is feeling someone up but wait its not what u think lol

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/Brotherly Manwhores

great first chapter

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Femme Docs and Self Conscious Sluts

I'm hooked

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: The Day From Hell

I really do like this. I was a social worker assigned to a task force for a decade. Most of them are slutwards LOL



Author's Response:

LOL...you know slutward is actually based on a guy I went to H.S. with.  He was such a sweet guy, kind hearted back then.  He moved to Arizona and joined SWAT and is a total cocky self important narcisisstic slutward now.  So when I started thinking of the storyline slutward was a blaringly obvious choice.  Glad you are liking it and thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Femmes Night Out

love the story beyond words

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Be Careful What You Wish For

great job

 
All Of Me by heavenlyvixen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

A somewhat different take on Edward and Bella's 'first time'

I found myself offering him everything I had to give. All of me. To take as much or as little as he wished, all the while hoping he wanted it all. All of me.


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 672
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2009 Updated: October 07, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: All Of Me

good job

 




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