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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Tangled Web by m7707 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 643]
Summary:

 

Edward, Jacob, Demetri, and Felix are members of the Volturi Elite Guard. Their team tracks beings that have either violated the Volturi Code Of Silence or have knowledge of the existence of mythical beings. When the team is assigned to investigate the human Isabella Swan, Edward's unalterable world is altered.

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 110683
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2009 Updated: January 26, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Within His Little Parlour

This is a great chapter. I have really enjoyed this story. It would make a great IFIC.



Author's Response:

Thank you - never get tired of hearing what you think of the chapters! And I would have no idea how to go about making it an iFic, geez, I'd have to find a really good sexy male voice, wouldn't I?

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Dear Friend

Cockblocked by Aro lol

love this story



Author's Response:

Ha - another reason for us not to like him, right? Always causing problems for E and B... ;)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: Little Corner Sly

I JUST LOVE THIS STORY AND CAN'T BELIEVE IT IS GOING TO END SOON



Author's Response:

Thnaks - I can't believe it, either!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Evil Counsellor

I LIKED IT. I HOPE DEMETRI DOESN'T GET HURT.



Author's Response:

Glad to hear you liked - and Demetri will be just fine!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Epilogue: This Tale, of the Spider and the Fly

THIS WAS A GREAT ENDING.

GREAT STORY



Author's Response:

Thanks  - so good to know you enjoyed the story and liked the ending!

 
Another Life by ash_1212 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 209]
Summary:

After Edward left, Bella was changed by another vampire and joined his coven. 30 years later her coven meets the Cullens. Canon pairings. Disclaimer - Twilight belongs to Stephenie Meyers. I'm just playing with her world.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 19507
[Report This] Published: September 13, 2009 Updated: March 06, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Shaken

I love this story. Please update soon. Love that he can't hear the rest of the coven os he has to worry if Bella has somone else. I am pro Edward, but I do feel he needs to pay a bit.



Author's Response:

So glad you love the story. The next update will be up very soon, just waiting on my betas.

I'm pro Edward too, but I think that he deserves to pay a little too before Bella lets him back in. Not being able to hear her and her family is definatley making him worry.

Thanks for reading and reviewing :).

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Unlikely Rescue

love the story

glad you don't believe in J and B - me either!



Author's Response:

So happy that you're loving the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing :).

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Cullen Sisters

can't wait for more

You could have Jake imprint on Tanya



Author's Response:

So glad you're liking the story. The next chapter should be up very soon. I hadn't thought of having Jake imprint on someone and I would never have thought of Tanya, so thanks for commenting about that.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :).

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Change

Looking forward to more and to find out what is going on. Please, don't let E and B have been with anyone else.



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it. I don't think it's giving too much away in saying that E and B haven't been with anyone else (LOL and if it has *shrugs* ah well). More up soon :).

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - New Beginnings

dying for more



Author's Response:

More up soon. Glad you're liking it :D.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Thirty Years Later

I like the story a lot. My question is, what about people in town,,,,it has only been thirty years, won't they recognize Bella



Author's Response:

Glad you're liking the story. And your question is answered in later chapters when Bella explains how and why she was changed. Cos you're right - there would definitely be people who would recognise her (although they did have a cover story for anyone that maybe wasn't close to Bella but would maybe remember her as Chief Swans daughter). Not sure if that makes much sense - but all will be revealed later on.

Thanks for the review :D.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Warehouse

Dying for more

Can't wait to see Edwards reaction



Author's Response:

LOL. Glad you're liking it. Needless to say Edward is very shocked when he sees Bella (even though Rose tells him!). Thanks for the review, more up soon :D.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - School Yard Meetings

I love the story

I am glad she said what she did to Rosalie

I want to see Edward work for Bella.  A jealous Edward would be fun!

 



Author's Response:

Glad you're loving the story :). And happy to hear that you liked what Bella said to Rose. I was a little worried that it was too harsh - so glad to hear that you liked it.

Edward will definitely have to work for Bella. Will and George will make sure of that ;). And there will be a little jealous!Edward (after all he can't read any of their thoughts :).)

Thanks for reviewing. More up soon.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Shaken

GO UPDATE NOW



Author's Response:

LOL. Update should be very soon, it just needs to be validated :).

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Old Acquaintances

Well, can't wait to see who it is



Author's Response:

More up soon :). Just waiting for my betas to finish and then the mystery person will be revealed. Thanks for reading and reviewing :).

 
Destiny by EmeraldRain Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

My take on where twilight should have gone after breaking dawn.

Renesme has a special purpose that no-one has considered, First though she must discover who she is.

Bella and Edward have been given forever together. And the additional gift of a child. But are yet to enjoy either.

Something is coming for them all. For the whole Cullen family...

Surely the Volturi wouldnt give up that easy..

And why does Alice keep seeing visions of herself in a princess costume? ;p


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 618
[Report This] Published: September 13, 2009 Updated: October 04, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Approaching Darkness

great start

 
A Faire To Remember by Fluppy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 89]
Summary:

Bella Swan is miserable and lonely. After numerous failed relationships she doubts there are any truly worthwhile guys out there. In an attempt to relieve her unhappiness her friends, Alice and Rosalie, take her to a medieval faire, hopeful that she may truly find her knight in shining armour. Queue one time slip and enter chauvanstic 12th century knight, Edward Cullen. Will they ever find love, or will intrigue and the barbaric ways of that era force them apart?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 39717
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2009 Updated: March 12, 2013


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Tangwystl

very entertaining

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Too Much Time

enjoying the story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Too Much Time

looking forward to more

if she goes back in time, maybe she can be a virgin again



Author's Response:

he he..I'll bet she wishes the same thing =)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Another Shade Of Black

i am dying for more



Author's Response:

Thanks! I am so happy that you're enjoying it =)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Introductions

this is really really good



Author's Response:

(blushes) thanks!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: There's No Way

go bella

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: New Stories

dying for more

 
Summary:

"New Moon" EPOV. Three-shot.

The reunion.

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 9343
[Report This] Published: September 15, 2009 Updated: October 03, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Volterra

I am very impressed...beautiful writting

 
Summary:

Mid-Semester, Senior Year. Bella is escaping Arizona and starting over in Washington. An unexpected hook-up at a party in Port Angeles turns into obsession. What happens when desire becomes too much to control? Rated S for Snarling.

 ***Just a quick note, due to a previous account I could not remember the password to (epic brain fail, blame Snarlward), my log in here is VvLadyDarkenvV, my pen name is VvDeadRosesvV (as known from ff.net).  Oh, on the forums I am VvDeadRoses2vV.  Confused yet?  Me too.***

 

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 84588
[Report This] Published: September 15, 2009 Updated: December 15, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Breaking Trinity - Prologue

looking forward to more

Are there vampires in this or is a human story?



Author's Response:

Hello hello! This is an AH/AU story, no vampires at all. I have sent the next chapter to KatieBelle to add in here.  Edward shows his gorgeous face in Chapter 2.  Remember, this fic is fictionally rated S for Snarling!  Thank you for reviewing!

 




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