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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Beautiful Lies by tmr Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1081]
Summary:

Emily Haines, Our Hell, Dir. Jaron Albertin

In her incoherent state after Edward leaves her in the forest, Bella's sleeping lips betray her: "Edward is a vampire and I will be one too."  Although the story opens in a mental hospital, it quickly leaves after the first chapter and never looks back...  AU/Dark:  This is not your typical AU-New-Moon story line.  The first few chapters are somewhat normal, but the story then takes a quick and hard turn into a very AU.

 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Alistair, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Chelsea, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Gianna, Irina, Jacob, James, Jane, Jasper, Laurent, Leah, Makenna, Renata, Renee, Rosalie, Sulpicia, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 4291
[Report This] Published: July 13, 2009 Updated: September 15, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Beautiful Lies

love the story



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 05, 2009 Title: Beautiful Lies

I am so into this



Author's Response:

Yea!!  Thank you so much. :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Beautiful Lies

Great chapter

Please update as soon as possible



Author's Response:

Thank you!   I will be updating soon.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 24, 2009 Title: Beautiful Lies

such a intense story

great writting

you get another 10

update soon



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks very much.  I appreciate your kind feedback.  :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 23, 2009 Title: Beautiful Lies

dying for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19, 2009 Title: Beautiful Lies

I really do love this story



Author's Response:

Thank you!  It is so great to read such a nice comment.  Makes posting here worth it.  

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Beautiful Lies

This was excellant.

Hope everything gets better for you. Life has ups and downs - sadly!

Great story



Author's Response:

Hi hc4metal,  Thank you!

 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 03, 2010 Title: Beautiful Lies

Great job - love the story



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 11, 2010 Title: Beautiful Lies

amazing story



Author's Response:

Thanks, hc4metal.  I appreciate you sticking with my story. :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 18, 2010 Title: Beautiful Lies

Another great job

Fantastic story



Author's Response:

Thank you for your continued support.  I truly appreciate it.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 25, 2010 Title: Beautiful Lies

great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks, hc4metal!  :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 02, 2010 Title: Beautiful Lies

It keeps getting better and better

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 21, 2010 Title: Beautiful Lies

Glad to see the update

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 16, 2010 Title: Beautiful Lies

looking forward to more

 
Summary:

What if there is more then one way to be a singer? Something's going on in the Twilight world that no one seems to know about. What will happen when  it all comes out into the open, and how will everyone cope?

 A different version of Twilight, loosly linked on the original story with variations. Including some very important flashbacks from a mystery family member.

 

Many thanks to kaghanyou for the fabulous banner!!


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 22376
[Report This] Published: July 13, 2009 Updated: June 01, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The Importance Of Being Edward

Enjoying the story and looking forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

glad your liking it. the next update shoulld hopefully be in next week. its all written up but need to pace it a little. thanks for your review, its made me really happy

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Big City Fish In A Small Town Pond

I really like it. Please update soon!



Author's Response:

i will as soon as possible :-)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Musings Of The Modern Vampire

love it

update soon



Author's Response:

thankyou, I'm glad you like it. I'll update asap. The next chapter is already written.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Edward's Blood Boils

Edward sure is acting like a baby.

Love the story



Author's Response:

your right, he is. but dont worry he'll grow a pair soon. thanks for the review. I'm really happy you love the story.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Emmett Helps........In His Own Way

great chapter



Author's Response:

thanks, Im glad you liked it

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Flashback #1

good flashback



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Flashback #1

good flashback



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chances With Wolves

dying for more



Author's Response:

next chapter has been sent for validation. keep an eye out for it. youve really made me smile

 
Second Chances by Angelinasway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 221]
Summary:

Life in Forks Washington is about to change forever. Two warriors who have lost their world to a great evil are being sent to the Cullen's to protect them and most importantly Bella Swan.

SPIKE does not stay dead!

Crossover with Btvs. Post NFA, Spoilers for Eclipse and possibly Breaking Dawn.

 


Categories: Eclipse, Crossover Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 27015
[Report This] Published: July 13, 2009 Updated: August 16, 2011


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The End

Great start. I so miss this show



Author's Response:

Me too. *sighs* Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Visions

I really like this and look forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thanks more will be up soon, I promise.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: More Questions Than Answers

THIS IS GREAT



Author's Response:

Thanks.

 




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