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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Antithesis by gkkstitch Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 65]
Summary:

What if you lost your heart's perfect match? Edward knows someone who is living his worst nightmare, who has vowed that Edward and Bella will never suffer that heartache, even if the Volturi may be the source of that threat.

 

"In the province of the mind, what one believes to be true either is true or becomes true."


 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alec
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 50985
[Report This] Published: July 12, 2009 Updated: October 09, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Declarations

Great writting and chapter. Love the ending of this chapter.



Author's Response:

You'll love what's coming next then!  Stay tuned...  :-)  And thanks for reviewing.

-gkk

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Remediations

poor guy



Author's Response:

Aww, you're so sweet to feel so much for Rolle.  Keep reading!  There's a lot more to him than even HE knows about!

Thanks for reviewing!

 
Beautiful Lies by tmr Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1081]
Summary:

Emily Haines, Our Hell, Dir. Jaron Albertin

In her incoherent state after Edward leaves her in the forest, Bella's sleeping lips betray her: "Edward is a vampire and I will be one too."  Although the story opens in a mental hospital, it quickly leaves after the first chapter and never looks back...  AU/Dark:  This is not your typical AU-New-Moon story line.  The first few chapters are somewhat normal, but the story then takes a quick and hard turn into a very AU.

 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Alistair, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Chelsea, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Gianna, Irina, Jacob, James, Jane, Jasper, Laurent, Leah, Makenna, Renata, Renee, Rosalie, Sulpicia, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 4291
[Report This] Published: July 13, 2009 Updated: September 15, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Beautiful Lies

dying for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Beautiful Lies

Okay, this is very good. Please update VERY soon!!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  I am grinning like a fool to know that someone likes my story so far.  

I swear, I will never read a story again without reviewing (I ususally do review, but I have to admit I've skipped a few chapters here and there).  I had no idea how freakin' exciting it is to receive reviews and feedback.  It's ridiclously fun. :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Tiffany Pens and Other Torture

This is soooooooooooooooo good! I am ready for you to update...NOW!!!



Author's Response:

Hi, thanks a lot for your feedback.  I'm glad you're liking it so far.  Chapter three is in the queue, so I'll be looking for your review on it soon.   

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 19, 2009 Title: Beautiful Lies

I like this a lot. Please tell me it will have a happy B and E ending!!!



Author's Response:

Hi again!  Thanks very much for reading and reviewing.  Frankly, I have been a little nervous about the reaction to this chapter, so I'm happy I didn't scare you away yet.  

Not to be cryptic, but happy endings are subjective...  Will Bella and Edward be reunited?  Eventually, yes.  

 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 23, 2009 Title: Beautiful Lies

Beaches.  Warm sand.  Bermuda, Bahamas, come on pretty-“ lol

I am so into this. You must update SOON@@@@



Author's Response:

YEA!  I am so happy that you commented about the Beach Boys' quote!  I figured some people on here are too young to know the Beach Boys, nevermind Kokomo.  

Thanks very much for reading.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 26, 2009 Title: Beautiful Lies

please update soon!



Author's Response:

It's in the queue! :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Beautiful Lies

Great chapter. I am pissed at him for leaving her in the hospital. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Beautiful Lies

love the story



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 05, 2009 Title: Beautiful Lies

I am so into this



Author's Response:

Yea!!  Thank you so much. :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Beautiful Lies

Great chapter

Please update as soon as possible



Author's Response:

Thank you!   I will be updating soon.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 24, 2009 Title: Beautiful Lies

such a intense story

great writting

you get another 10

update soon



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks very much.  I appreciate your kind feedback.  :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 23, 2009 Title: Beautiful Lies

dying for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19, 2009 Title: Beautiful Lies

I really do love this story



Author's Response:

Thank you!  It is so great to read such a nice comment.  Makes posting here worth it.  

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Beautiful Lies

This was excellant.

Hope everything gets better for you. Life has ups and downs - sadly!

Great story



Author's Response:

Hi hc4metal,  Thank you!

 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 03, 2010 Title: Beautiful Lies

Great job - love the story



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 11, 2010 Title: Beautiful Lies

amazing story



Author's Response:

Thanks, hc4metal.  I appreciate you sticking with my story. :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 18, 2010 Title: Beautiful Lies

Another great job

Fantastic story



Author's Response:

Thank you for your continued support.  I truly appreciate it.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 25, 2010 Title: Beautiful Lies

great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks, hc4metal!  :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 02, 2010 Title: Beautiful Lies

It keeps getting better and better

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 21, 2010 Title: Beautiful Lies

Glad to see the update

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 16, 2010 Title: Beautiful Lies

looking forward to more

 
Summary:

What if there is more then one way to be a singer? Something's going on in the Twilight world that no one seems to know about. What will happen when  it all comes out into the open, and how will everyone cope?

 A different version of Twilight, loosly linked on the original story with variations. Including some very important flashbacks from a mystery family member.

 

Many thanks to kaghanyou for the fabulous banner!!


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 22376
[Report This] Published: July 13, 2009 Updated: June 01, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The Importance Of Being Edward

Enjoying the story and looking forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

glad your liking it. the next update shoulld hopefully be in next week. its all written up but need to pace it a little. thanks for your review, its made me really happy

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Big City Fish In A Small Town Pond

I really like it. Please update soon!



Author's Response:

i will as soon as possible :-)

 




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