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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

What happens when you turn your back on honest pure love, for the darkest most sinful obsession there ever was?

AH/OOC.

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 26948
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Malevolent Fairy

LOVE THE STORY SO MUCH!!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Unexpected Visitor

Love the story. Ready for Jacob to die

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Episode

great chapter

hope Jacob dies or imprints on Sam or something like that

Great story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Break

Jake on his way out - I LOVE YOU

Love the story

Nobody like Edward.....sigh

 
Full Moon by seanchaidhe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

What if, instead of trying to distract Edward with kisses on page 51 of New Moon, Bella and Edward had actually talked about what was bothering him? Would Bella have been able to talk him out of questioning his place in her life? Full Moon is my AU version of Stephanie Meyer’s New Moon that answers the question: what might have happened to our star-crossed lovers if Edward had not left Forks for parts unknown?


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 3853
[Report This] Published: June 22, 2009 Updated: August 31, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Beginning

Very beautifully written. I hope they change her sooner than later.

 
Summary:

What if time itself ceased to have meaning to you? In this story Jasper must make many different decisions. Should he stay in the life he has had though it may be miserable or should he leave the known in search for something better? Rated M for future.


Categories: Pre-Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 9510
[Report This] Published: June 23, 2009 Updated: July 26, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: NewBorns

Very well writtin!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the compliment i appreciate the time you took to read and review and hope that you will continue to enjoy it.

 
Broken by Mandi1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

They had proven themselves strong in the past. Unbreakable, through change, force, and even death. But the cracks that form in the Cullens' lives are hard to ignore and even harder to repair when things start to shatter.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 6123
[Report This] Published: June 24, 2009 Updated: July 21, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Gilbert and Anne

Very good!

 
Summary:

Picks up decades from the day in the meadow of New Moon. What if it had been Victoria who showed up, not Laurent? What if Victoria's 'plans' for Bella did not include killing her, but changing her (the one thing Edward wasn't willing to do to keep Bella safe from James.).

 

Bella has been living as a member of the Volturi for decades now, not able to remember her human life. What happens when she goes searching for her past and comes face to face with her mate and his family whom she has forgotten about for the past 65 years?

Thanks to Readergoof for the amazing banner!!!

Thanks to Tellytubby101 for the other amazing banner!

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 86459
[Report This] Published: June 25, 2009 Updated: August 06, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Clearly, he was an asshole - lol

Love this story - update soon! Please!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am begging you for an update. I can't wait to see Edward's reaction!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

great story

please update soon

Hopefully Alice left some clothes!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Thirsty Thursday lol

can't wait for more

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This was a great chapter.

As much as I love the Cullens, I do want them all to feel bad for leaving her.

You must update soon! This is one of the best stories on the board.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I am flattered you think that about my little story.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

love this story. That says a lot because I don't read stories where Edward or Bella have slept with others - it hurts me lol. But, I do like this one.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Bella has pet LOL

As a veggie myself, I hope Bambi takes out a few hunters



Author's Response:

haha... those poor hunters wouldn't have a clue what hit them! Bambi may have higher moral standards than hunters, though. :) Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

so love this story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

love it

great job



Author's Response:

glad you enjoyed the chapter and thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This is the best chapter yet

crispy lol



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the rate and review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

LOVE THE STORY

I KNOW HE WAS AN ASS FOR LEAVING, BUT I FEEL SORRY FOR HIM



Author's Response:

Thanks for the rate and review! I kinda feel sorry for him, too, but he deserves it. :)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

LOVE THIS TALE

HAVE TO GO KILL SOMEONE LOL



Author's Response:

haha, glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for the rating and review!

 
Summary:

Stephenie Meyer owns the sandbox that I play in.

 

A single wish from Bella to Edward on her birthday will change their lives forever.

 

Bella/Edward


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 9681
[Report This] Published: June 26, 2009 Updated: July 14, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Wishes

I like this. I do hope whoever she was married to was just a sham - maybe Edward got her pregnant and someone was just helping her out.

 
Light of Day by heathcliff Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 199]
Summary:

 

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Edward and Bella finally got what they always wanted: to spend eternity together. Now, their relationship is free to thrive and flourish.  A very canon, very in-character, very romantic exploration of the depth of E&B's relationship as they adjust to their new life-- both Bella's new life as a vampire and Edward's as a husband. Lots of light, fluffy moments balanced by more serious ones.

It's just E&B in the first several chapters, but the rest of the Cullens show up later. The time frame is set during the summer following BD up to Edward and Bella's second wedding anniversary.

If you like canon and in-character, please have a read.

**Nominated for two Moonlight Awards** (Thank you, Serendipitous and None!)

Please vote!  http://themoonlightawards.yolasite.com/

 

 

 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 51645
[Report This] Published: June 26, 2009 Updated: October 03, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Black Sands Beach

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Strictly Ballroom

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thank you, metal! I'm so glad to still have you as a reader!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Call of the Wild

you get a ten



Author's Response:

Thank you for letting me know. :-) Glad you enjoyed it.

 
Encounter by Shadowrelm Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 37]
Summary:

The Cullen's come into contact with someone, or something, they never thought could exist. Is he friend or foe?


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 6862
[Report This] Published: June 26, 2009 Updated: September 20, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Preface

Great start

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

This is very interesting

update soon

 




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