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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

Edward plans something beautiful for Bella just as her human frailty begins to rear its ugly head...


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 17325
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2009 Updated: July 08, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 (N.)

Great story. Edward is just so perfect! Why can't he be real!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, he is quite dreamy, and so devoted to Bella.  He's such fun to write!  Thanks for reviewing!

 
Sanctum by ernzo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 38]
Summary:

After 100 years, Edward's gift is beginning to be more of a curse. He finds it difficult to be around his family and is nearly always alone. What happens when he meets a mysterious, sad, and broken vampire named Bella, whose thoughts he cannot hear. AU


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 8673
[Report This] Published: June 06, 2009 Updated: December 09, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOVE THIS

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

DYING FOR MORE

GREAT WRITTING

SORRY ABOUT YOUR ACCIDENT

 
Summary:

Emmett has teased Edward and Bella about their quiet sex life and framkly they have had enough. What do they young couple do to get Emmett to cringe and run screaming for the hills?

Bella is a vampire...Nessie does not exist.

 

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Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2179
[Report This] Published: June 06, 2009 Updated: June 08, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was so freaking funny!

 

Great job

 
Summary:

Twilight in Alice's POV. My first piece of fanfic.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Angela, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Laurent, Mike, Phil, Renee, Rosalie, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 1256
[Report This] Published: June 07, 2009 Updated: July 05, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1: The New Girl

Updat sooN!

 
Summary:

Edward has to help Bella through her transformation. LEMONY ONE SHOT. AU after the "vote" scene in New Moon. BxE.

Before The Change by SassenachWench


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5205
[Report This] Published: June 07, 2009 Updated: June 13, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Before the Change

Great job. I really enjoyed it. Now, for the 1,000 time...why can't I be Bella!!!



Author's Response:

No freakin' kidding!  Although...honestly, I wouldn't mind being Esme either.  I have a thing for Carlisle, I must admit.

Speaking of having a thing for ... well ... pretty much all the Cullens ... I have an upcoming series of smut-filled lemony chapters called "Just One Day".  Chapter one is in beta now.  Keep an eye out for it!  It's lemonicious.

 
The Memory of Trees by Ledybug Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

When Bella has lost all hope and purpose, she finds out she is meant for bigger things. Can she find the strength to be her own person? The world is in peril and finding Edward is the only way she can fulfill her destiny. Will this new independent Bella able to forgive?

Memory

Set after Edward leaves Bella in NM. AU, Canon pairings, with some new characters. Rated NC-17 for sexual content, violence, and language. Somewhat OOC.

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Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 7168
[Report This] Published: June 08, 2009 Updated: July 07, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Flesh & Blood

I am so into this now!

 
Summary:

 

       

 

In all honesty, I knew that Jacob was better for me.

At least while I was human, anyway.

When Edward left me desolate and despairing, Jake found me.

He put me back together again. He resurrected me.

I should have been thankful. If nothing else, I should have obediently

fallen in love with him directly after, even if it was only a twisted sort

of hero worshipping love. He was my savior, my sun, my fresh air.

But Edward had always been the drug that pulled me under.

Even fresh from addiction, I can't help but be sucked in again.

One taste of Edward Cullen is never enough.

 

     Three years have passed since Edward left Bella broken in the woods. Edward never came back, and Bella never sought him near a fountain in a crowd in Italy. A friendship between Bella and Jacob has blossomed into something more, though not quite to the degree--at least for Bella--as what was between her and Edward. However, things have gone on and the passing of time has cemented new relationships and altered a different reality. But will everything crumble when Edward breaks his vow to stay away? A 21-year-old woman, Bella feels a lot like an 18-year-old girl when her past returns to claim her. With two super human men vying for her heart, Bella must find a way to make the decision that has apparently been put on hold the past several years--a decision that could change the fate of more than the three people involved. And that could very well be the least of her problems.

 

All characters and related material belong to Stephenie Meyer.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: Chosen
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 38622
[Report This] Published: June 08, 2009 Updated: July 15, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Choosing Sides

This is great. Thank you for not letting her have slept with the mutt! I love Edward, but I think it is great he has to work for it.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Less Than Welcome Home

Just leave the mutt already! Please, don't let her have slept with Jacob. Let me know if this is a E and B story ( I can't stand reading pro Jacob stories - they break my heart - lol)

Good writting. I am glad to see Edward showing that he has grown a pair and is willing to fight.



Author's Response:

Lol. I don't want to give anything away, but I will say that I'm team Edward, so you shouldn't have much to fear. ;)

 
Summary:

 

This story follows Alice and Jasper through the story arc of Breaking Dawn.  It explores their relationship with each other, and with those they come in contact with.  I hope for it to be funny, touching and a realistic portrayal of what their interactions are like.  There will be lemons and adult content!

 

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Thanks to Readergoof for the awesome banner!

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 32377
[Report This] Published: June 08, 2009 Updated: September 12, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 The Box


“Something tells me that Tanya’s feminine goods were not in the pristine condition that yours were when you were changed, my love.  Maybe it isn’t as big an effort for her as it would be for you,” he said, with a wide smile on his face.  “Tanya is well, kind of loose, Alice.  You know that.”

I hate Tanya and loved this part - lol!

Love the story - you get a 10.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, reviewing and rating!  I am so glad you liked Jasper's view of Tanya. :)  Please continue to let me know what you think.  I really appreciate it!

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The White Hat by desespoir Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

"The true work of art is but a shadow of the divine perfection." Bella unravels the mystery that is Edward Cullen. A world of art, lies, and a white hat. Edward/Bella. AU.

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 2808
[Report This] Published: June 08, 2009 Updated: September 03, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: His Golden Eyes

love the story

 
Summary: Feature

All Human AU – Shy, overprotected Bella Swan lives an unassuming life with her religiously zealous mother, Renée. When she has a chance meeting with town hellion Edward Cullen, Bella begins to realize that perhaps the sheltered life she’s been leading isn’t so much a comfort as it is a cage.


 



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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: No Word count: 112575
[Report This] Published: June 09, 2009 Updated: December 14, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - Calypsos

I just started reading this - IT IS BEYOND GREAT

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Prelude IV

Her mother reminds me of the mother from the movie Carrie

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 - XXIV

great chapter

wonder if Edward is regreting his past about now

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 - Nothing From Nothing

such a great story

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - Blue Bird

you get a ten as always

 
Summary:



Once upon a time... for that is how all good stories begin...


In a time when legends are more than just stories, and monsters are more than just figments of the imagination, can love truly conquer all?  Amidst curses, monsters, pain, betrayal, and a mysterious legend of a once noble family, two souls will find each other in the dark of Swan Forest...

And nothing will be the same again.

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 36150
[Report This] Published: June 09, 2009 Updated: October 04, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Once Upon a Time

Great job. Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  New chapter should be up soon.  =)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Bella

Oh, this is so good! Can't wait for an update.

Please...must update soon!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it!  =)  Next chapter shouldn't be too far from being up now.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Disbelief

I am so into this!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  =)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Be Our Guest?

I have to say it agan- so love this story. And you get an A + for fast updating - please keep it up!



Author's Response:

Absolutely!  Thank you for reading and reviewing so faithfully!  =)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: The Deal

Again, so good! Love that you update fast - please continue SOON!!!



Author's Response:

I'm working on the next few chapters now!  =)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: A Strange Kind of Captivity

This is very well done

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Apologies

I basically jumped for joy when I saw this was updated

Love it = one of my favorites

great writting



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Sorry I kept y'all waiting for so long.  =)

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Books and Flowers

another great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you.  =)  Hope you enjoy the next one as well.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Crushing Cold

can't wait for more



Author's Response:

I'll be updating in the next day or two!  =)

 




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