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Summary:

Edward Cullen is Big Man on Campus at his high school in Port Angeles. Bella Swan is a quiet, sarcastic, marches-to-the-beat-of-her-own-drummer girl at Forks High. A part-time job brings them together, and an unlikely friendship and surprising feelings develop. Neither is brave enough to do anything about it, however, and they part ways when Edward heads off to college. Their paths cross again after a year of no contact, and Edward is determined to not only rekindle their friendship, but to man up and actually do something about his ever-present feelings for Bella.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 144739
[Report This] Published: April 02, 2009 Updated: October 08, 2009


Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Short but sweet and HOT! I love that Edward knows how hard it's going to be to get her to fully trust him, but he's willing to work for it and wait. That's exactly what Bella needed to hear, and i'm glad she's letting herself go a little bit....letting the walls down a bit. Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you! And yeah, he's going to work his cute little butt off for her. :)

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Thank you!!!!!!! That was a MUCH happier chapter....I'm glad Bella finally opened up to him, even if it was by force. And...ahem...thank you for that lovely bit at the end...I will be retreating to a cold shower now. As frustrating as the last chapter was, I appreciate the fact that it's not storybook simple for these two being together...I like that you acknowledge both of their weaknesses and show them working through it. It makes it much more satisfying when a chapter like today happens.

Let's hope they continue with the actual communicating with each other. LOVE LOVE LOVE this story! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

hahaha Glad this one was better for you! 

 
Off Limits by lexiecullen17 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3311]
Summary:

Womanizing Edward is in a cover band with his brother and best friend, who are pissed that Edward has managed to send their last three lead singers heading for the hills with his tendency to fool around carelessly.  Emmett and Jasper decide to create a "no intra-band dating" rule. 

But what happens when a gorgeous, talented brunette walks into the audition?  Will Edward adhere to his bandmates' new rule, or will he pursue what's now off limits?  OOC Edward/Bella.  Rated for DIRTY HUMOR and lots of future LEMONY GOODNESS. Canon pairings.

(thanks to Evilangel6714 for the banner!!!)

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 171702
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2009 Updated: April 11, 2010


Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Wow, girl...you write some QUALITY lemons! (fans herself) I just discovered your story today and ignored my hubby and kids all night to plow through it.  I love it so much.  Dirty Carlisle completely cracks me up, and the set lists reflecting where they're at in their relationship is so cool and completely HOT! Speaking of hot, this last intense lemon in particular left me a little "eager" and I'm currently thinking of molesting  my sleeping husband. Before I go though, I wanted to tell you how much I LOVE your Edward and Bella...from friends, to secret amores to full out couple, they have had a very healthy and FUN relationship.  I love spending time with them.  Can't wait for more!! I'm adding you immediately to my favorites!!



Author's Response:

haha, well apologize to your family for me...but thank you!  i'm so impressed that you read through it in one night :)  and thank you for all of your kind words--i'm glad you enjoyed it! ...and i guess say you're welcome to your husband for me, hahaha.  hope you enjoy what's to come, too :)

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Hmmmmmmm....I'm not sure what the problem would be. Maybe one of their old lead singers (Tanya?) are bitter and want to get back at Edward (nee Slutward) and are telling the managers about sexual harrassment or something along those lines.  Or else they found something out about Balle that would mean she can't sing with them. 

Great chapter! I loved Edward telling off Jacob...such sweet satisfaction.  I'm glad Edward didn't panic and get distant after he blurted the wife thing....I get a little nervous and keep thinking at some point he's going to panic...but then I get rewarded with Swoonward  (*sigh*) I lurrrrrrrve him!

LOVE this story! Please hurry with more!



Author's Response:

haha, your predictions are on the right track, although not all together correct...but, thanks!  i'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter :)  edward hasn't panicked yet becasue i don't think it's actually sunk in yet, but...there's a little bit of panic coming, haha.  just to prepare you ;)

anyway, thanks so much for reviewing!  more is on the way :)

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

DAMN! Bella is quite the frisky one!! Well she was....but now they might have embarrassed the frisky right out of her.  How pissed is she gonna be? Jasper is definately in the dog house. Maybe this will lead to a "We should get our own place" discussion???

I'm glad Edward is not freaking out about Bella's wedding dream....as I was afraid he would. I am not sure why his dad freaked out though...does he think they're too young, or that Edward won't be able to  do it?

Annother awesome chapter!!! Congrats on the real job!!



Author's Response:

right?  and OH YEAH jasper's in the dog house.  who follows someone into a dark house and doesn't say anything?  seriously.  also, carlisle didn't freak out - he was seriously just in a rush and figured that the answer to that question wouldn't have enough time to be discussed at that moment -- nothing more, i promise :)

thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Uh oh! Looks like they ran into Lauren,,,

 

Another AWESOME chapter!!! Seriously, what will make me laugh this hard when your done??

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Epilogue

BEST FUCKING EPILOGUE IN THE HISTORY OF EPILOGUES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I LOVED every moment. The song lists were  with the snippets of their lives for each song was pure and unadulterated GENIUS!  Edward's acceptance speech made me pee myself with all the swearing, and i loved Penny.  What a great name!!

Oh, I am going to miss the highjinx of this E and B and crew.  I am going to hang on to this story to reread from start to finish.  LOVE you, and I will read ANYTHING you write.  I'll keep my eye out for the new Longest Summer story. Campward?? I am soooo in!

Thank you again for sharing this. I can't tell you how much it made me smile and laugh!

Katy

 
Summary:

Edward leaves Bella, much like the beginning of 'New Moon', however, this time, they are all human and there is quite the twist.  Why did Edward leave Bella?  And what secret is Bella keeping when he leaves?

Can they make a nightmare turn into a dream?

THANKS TO EMERALD_ROSALIE FOR THE ABOVE BANNER AND ATHENALOVE FOR THE BELOW.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes Word count: 155064
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: August 05, 2010


Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

Honest to God...I sobbed my way through that entire chapter...both times I read it.  The emotions you write that pour out these characters is intense and absolutely heartbreaking.  I find myself chanting with Edward..."Please let her be okay....please let her be there."  I know you can't see it, but i am giving you a standing ovation while furiously wiping my eyes and nodding!  YES!

 

Pleeeeeeeeeaaaase hurry with more. I just reads through this whole thing straight through and now I'm hooked! I love it!!!



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you so much!  It was so exhausting to write as getting into his head was just... terrifying and wonderful.  I'm so glad that it had the impact that I meant it to.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32 - Classics

MUCH better than Renesmee! lol

Very sweet chapter. I love getting everybody's perspective on things. It would be a little too much to have all the angst of only Edward all the time, plus I love the personalities you've fleshed out especially Angela and Jasper (whom I don't normally love).  Excellent job!  Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response: I am really glad you like my characters and hearing their thoughts! Also, thanks for approving of the name! I appreciate the review!

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 57: Epilogue the Sixth - World of Magic

These epilogues make me SO, SO, SO happy...ESPECIALLY after the intense heartfail you inflicted on a regular basis before!!!!!  I'm LOVING Elizabeth, the snarky little princess she is, so I think she'll be our next POV...



Author's Response:

You will soon find out:)

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Summary: Feature

AU version of the "New Moon" reunion scene. Bella is not quite as quick to accept Edward's explanation for his actions in leaving her.

 
Banner credit goes to addicttwilight2, who is the most awesome person on the planet!!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 45075
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2009 Updated: June 30, 2009


Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Fragility

I'm glad we got both POVs this chapter...I hope Bella is ready to be forgiving even after the drugs wear off.  I wonder who it was who attacked?? I'll guess Paul.  Really nice job expressing what Bella see's as she becomes semi-conscious.  I knew Edward would be there, and I hope they can have a rational heart to heart now that her anger has subsided.  I can't wait for the complete make-up scene!! :)

Awesome story...can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the lovely review!! Hope you continue to enjoy :) And yes, it was Paul who attacked. x

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Alive

W-O-W!!  Soooo worth being so pissed at Bella two chapters ago.  I'm so glad she's come to her senses.  And this reunion was phenominal!  I'm still swooning. Thank God you're not done, because we need afew more chapters after this of happy and in love...maybe some quality passion, too, hmmmmm?

Awesome job!



Author's Response:

Thank you so so much, so glad you enjoyed!!! Keep your eyes open for some of that passion in the next chapter ;)

 
The Tutor by itzmegan73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1657]
Summary:

School is in session and there are lots of lessons to be learned. Bella Swan, the newest student at Forks High School, needs to amend her shy and introverted ways and her guidance counselor has just the thing: tutoring! Besides, newbie Bella is probably the only student naïve enough to tackle Edward Cullen, a juvenile delinquent in training. Edward’s main pastimes include avoiding school and hanging out with his lovelorn, best friend Jasper Hale. In Edward’s opinion, Jasper needs a tutoring session of own in order to get over his ex- Alice. However Alice is too busy trying to console her friend Rosalie –who is only interested in one lesson: how to win the affections of Edward Cullen.  


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 162183
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2009 Updated: December 28, 2010


Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Disclosures

OOOOOOOH! WHat's Edward going to say now?  I feel sorry for Bella. He's so closed off, and he does act a little like a scumbag some times.  I wonder if he'll deny it, or if all the walls will finally come down. 

I just started your story today, and I love it! Please hurry with an update...(you're not one of those who only updates every two weeks or some nonsense like that, are you?) I really can't wait to see what happens next!

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Crash & Burn

Yikes! Edward is pretty brutal right now....This is the first time I've really believed Bella is better off without him.  Please tell me that this is rock bottom for him, because I want him to begin the redemption soon and be worthy of Bella.  This is really sad to see the point of view of a teenager so lost and angry, and you've written it brilliantly (if not terrifying).. I hope Carlyse can reach him, because that boy needs to take responsibility for his own misery (and everyone's around him!)

Disturbing, but excellent chapter!

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Run-Ins

Yay, he's trying!! I wonder what step three of Jasper's plan will be?? Also, I'm glad he's got Brian...it's important for him to have someone he'll respect and look up to, who expects good things from him.

Great chapter! I was so excited that it came so soon....it totally made my day!

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Breakin' Me

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww! That actually was so sweet. The song is beautiful...I'll be downloading that baby.  I loved the idea that Bella wrote him a note, and it was so cute when he asked esme what the words were, but not to read anything else!:)  And his text was very sigh worthy! Awesome chapter!  Can't wait to see what happens next!

 
Summary: Feature

All-Human AU. I've been desperately eager to write one of these. Still canon-couplings and basic canon scenarios.

Bella is struggling grad student in her mid-twenties--living in a college town in the South, trying to make sense of her life. Her world is small, sharing a little bungalow with her friend Jasper as she navigates writing a dissertation and making a list of her hopes and dreams. Jasper's girlfriend Alice (oh, Alice!) shows up with a surprise, and Bella's world is knocked a little upside down. Who's her surprise? Well...her handsome med-student, jazz-band fronting brother Edward, of course. Crazy lovin' and deep reflections ensue.


Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 37270
[Report This] Published: April 20, 2009 Updated: July 01, 2009


Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Does This Chair Have Four Legs?

Okay, you've done it! Now I'm addicted, so you better hurry up and get that next chapter -ahem, and lemon- out ASAP! Seriously, I really like the canon parts you've added in (like Edward being adopted, the allusions to their "gifts", etc...) and you've created some massive electric chemistry between your Bella and Edward.  I am adding this story to my favorites, and I'm REALLY looking forward to your next update! PLEASE tell me you're not one of those who do the update every two weeks or some nonsense like that...because that may drive me mad to have to wait. 

Regardless, I love your story!!! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response: Thanks dearie! Nope, I'm not a sporadic updater. I'm actually sending the new chapter in for validation this afternoon!

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Did You Want a Lemon, or a Lime?

Phew! I definately need a moment to cool down after that one! Yikes!  I loved finding all the inside stuff too...claire de lune..."dazzle"...Bella's truck (the "tank" needed to protect her...) Bella's clumsiness...Tyler and prom...I don't dance...

Anyways, it was a very fun read....I wonder what Edward's phone call was?  How will things be in the morning?  They'll need to get to know each other...I can't wait to find out what happens next! Hurry please!

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Would Thoreau Picnic on a Porch?

HOORAY! I Love fun, sexy times with your Bella and Edward! The way you've written their conversations, the early intensity in their relationship feels fitting and natural...how they acknowledge that it's quick, but that they're both kind of swept up, so why fight it.  LOVES IT!   I know problems will come (phone call???) but I dig these guys so much, I want to see it play out.  Awesome job, and I can't wait for the update!! 

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Would you call that Newton's Law?

Awesome chapter!  It seems something more happened with Tanya than he's letting on...maybe a one night stand or something.  Maybe that was her on the phone at the bar?  Hmmmmm...we'll see.  Can't wait for the trip to Colunbia, and perhaps more lemons??

 
Summary:

Edward's perspective of his wedding day (and maybe a little more) - all in-canon.  Written for the "Support Stacie" author auction winner. 

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Thank you to Icrodriguez for the awesome banner!!


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 6455
[Report This] Published: April 28, 2009 Updated: April 28, 2009


Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nicely done!  *Swoon!*  I would love to see the Honeymoon please!



Author's Response:

Thank you - I plan to continue shortly through at least part of the honeymoon!

 
Summary:

Bella meets Edward at the annual Cullen Family Independence Day Picnic. Both are recovering from broken hearts, so what will happen when they feel an instant attraction? How will Edward deal with Bella's past coming back to haunt her?

AU, AH, Some OOC.  Rated NC17 for language and possible future lemony goodness!

Lots of thanks to Anne Cullen for the fabulous banner!!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 113916
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2009 Updated: September 22, 2010


Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Ooooohh, Pretty Woman

Awwwwwwwwwww! Very sweet first date, and who doesn't love a growling Edward losing a little control??  I liked how Edward thwarted the sleezy waitress..."molesting her hand" LOL!

I have to say, I really like your format of going back and forth POVs. When some stories do that, it gets boring because it literally just repeats the same things exactly, but yours always feel like a completely different part of the story, and I quite like being in your Edward's head--especially after hearing Bella's first.

I really like this story and am adding to my favorites. Please update soon. thanks, you're nice. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I have had different opinions about the POV's.  I really do try not to be too repetitive.  I know the first few chapters were, but I am working on it, so be patient with me.  Thanks for adding me to your faves!  I'm so happy you are enjoying the story.

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: I want you to want me

GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!  Wasn't expecting this! Please make it better soon!



Author's Response:

I know.  I'm sorry.  Just a little angst.  I won't drag it out long, though.  I'll make it all better soon.  Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Are you strong enough?

Awwww Edward, the flowers were a NICE touch. And the cards...*swoon*  Seriously, thank you for making Bella be reasonable about the whole thing, and hearing him out.  I couldn't take it if that biyatch Tanya did any lasting damage.  Their talk was awesome and the makeup/first sex was so sweet.  I love me some Sweet-and-sorryward.

Can't wait to see what else is in store for these two...



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the great review!!

 
Serendipity by FanpireMama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1215]
Summary:

Bella's life is turned upside down when her best friend's family moves away and her parents are killed in a car accident. What happens when Bella's life is again intertwined with the Cullen's?

 

Thanks to LoisBlue for the AMAZING banner!

Nominated for an Indie TwiFic Award in the category of: Most Romantic Moment !!!!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Phil, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 85507
[Report This] Published: May 20, 2009 Updated: August 15, 2009


Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Confessions

You are a mean torturous person. But I have to admit, that last line....OMG...*SWOON* 

I LOVE that Edward found her in the museum, and I love how he noticed the scar right away.  His reaction was not a disappointment either...How much do we love enraged protective pottymouth Edward?  LOTS!   I read through the whole story tonight, and I'm quite hooked now! BTW...I liked that Jacob was a psycho, it's completely different than anything I've read.  Really cool story. I hope you are a frequent updater, I'm adding you to my favorites.

Now, I'm off to find the edward POV...

 




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