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Thanks Roo, for the amazing banner! 

And more keep coming in!  Thanks to m81170 for this lovely piece of art:

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Here's another amazing pic that fits in with Dark Side of the Moon perfectly -thank you to JohannaL for ID'ing the author:  http://smirks-works.livejournal.com/ check out her (I assume) other manips - she's a genius!

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Updated November, 2009

This story is now COMPLETE!

Dark Side of the Moon is my version of New Moon from Edward’s point of view.  Witness how Edward agonized over leaving Bella, hunted for Victoria, faced the Volturi, and came to realize that with Bella was where he was meant to be. 

This tormented story has been a part of my life for about a year and a half – and what a ride it’s been!  Meant to be canon and in character, I hope you enjoy angsty Edward and his suffering during New Moon.  As unhappy as Bella was during this time, Edward suffered so much more (I think).  So be sure and crack open a fresh box of tissues before reading!

 Thank you to everyone for all the reviews, especially to those of you who reviewed each and every chapter!  Your support and loyalty have been the driving force to me getting this project finished – and I hope it’s lived up to all of your expectations.

Love you all,

blondieakarobin

PS.  As one last thank you, I’ve posted a formatted, printable copy of Dark Side of the Moon at http://bit.ly/2vLHMi, as will also post as an electronic version suitable for viewing on a kindle or MobiReader.  I’m also posting a ‘Director’s Cut’ that includes citations of all of Bella’s quotes from Twilight, research notes, and even funny comments from my betas in this version in the same directory.

blondie

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Use of the dialog from the series is just for clarity - Stephenie Meyer owns all things twilight!  I'm making absolutely nothing from this work.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 163080
[Report This] Published: May 09, 2008 Updated: February 26, 2010


Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Heaven and Hell

Holy Cow!  What an amazing and excruciating story!  I didn't think Edward's story could be more sad and tragic than Bella's, but knowing what was really going on the whole time made Edward's pain that much more devastating.  I loved how he also had delusions of Bella talking...but they only repeated things she had previously spoken to him. How clever!  Also loved the whole Victoria hunt. It was very chilling at the farmhouse woth the girl who looked like Bella.  This story is unbelievably well written and so true to Stephanie's Edward. Also completely addictive...I could get NO work done today after I discovered your story last night! Thank you for writing this, and I beg of you not to torture us with too long of a wait for an update! 

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Verdict

Wow Blondie!  Absolutely worth the wait!  Your version felt completely real, and was very compelling getting everyone's thoughts through Edward.....not a word of it felt out of character or off canon. I loved hearing Edward's thoughts about why holding Bella took effort (desire for her...not her blood   swoon!)  Also the debate going on in his head when he was considering whether he could promise Aro about Bella being changed or not.  Your Edward is amazing.  All the thoughts about Jacob felt very real and not contrived too!  Thank you so much for the update...I check every day and I was almost resigned to not seeing an update, so today was the happiest of surprises!  I can see why your updates take a while, though, because your writing is FLAWLES and HEARTWRENCHING!

Hopefully the wait won't be soooooo long for the next chapter. I've been DYING to hear Edward's POV on the last 4 chapters of NM since I originally read it. And your writing feels like the REAL version so I am beyond psyched to read it! Thank you for making my day! :)

 
Summary:

 

Bella Swan spent the first two years of her life in Forks developing a friendship with Jacob Black that finally turned into something more.  As she begins her senior year of high school, a new family moves to town and Bella slowly begins to question the path she thought her life would follow.  Sometimes there is a difference between what you think you need and what you never knew you wanted.  Takes place during the timeframe of New Moon and Eclipse.  J/B at first, but eventually E/B. 

 

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No Word count: 170230
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009


Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Tightrope

DEFINATELY an AFT moment! I loved it, and it made perfect sense with where E and B are right now.  They have a long way to go, but they needed to acknowledge and give in to the physical part of their love as well as the emotional.  My favorite was "But you won't"....."But I won't."  (swoon!)

Okay I started this story yesterday on a reccomendation from Letmesign, and was all but glued to my computer until the wee hours of the morning (stopping briefly to throw chicken nuggets at my kids and send them to bed)  Your story is absolutely beautiful, compelling and intense. I loved the build of their relationship, and although I wanted to throttle you (okay Edward) when he was so cruel to Bella in the woods, I knew that was exactly what he would have done.  I was so proud of Bella that she broke up with Jacob anyways. It was the right thing to do because she knew she had been trying to force something that wasn't there (I've been there and it's hard to choose alone rather than comforting, but incomplete)  The way you've written Bella's mindset and feelings feels very genuine. You are truly a wonderful writer. I put this on my favorites and cannot wait for more!!

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Kissed

Ohhhhhhhh! This story is so amazing and utterly intense and this chapter here was my FAVORITE! I'm so glad Bella is thawing a bit, and the kissing was realistic (for SM vampires) and just *sigh*.  Edward is so sweetly nervous, but perfect in putting some of his intentions out there, but letting Bella lead.  The porch swing story was so sad, but beautiful.  I adore this story, but I hope it's not another two months for an update.....please?  I only beg from a place of love...:)

 
Warmth by KatieBelle Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 858]
Summary:

 

A running smutline of Edward and Bella's honeymoon . . . and everything afterwards.


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 100790
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2008 Updated: March 21, 2011


Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Beautiful

Very romantic! I loved that chapter so much, I read it twice!

 
Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: June 7 - June 13, 2008

LOVE, LOVE, LOVE your story! I started it last night, and could NOT stop! It is completely compelling and plays like an awesome movie!  I love every character you've brought over.  The change in POV also works really well with this story, and I love that we get snippets of Bella's time with the Volturi instead of an entire chapter. It keeps the story's pace quick and fascinating.(Loved the idea of the Volturi as a mob family...you are a genius!)

And this chapter I REALLY love, because we can see how Edward has become so protective of her, and thank GOD he finally gave in to the sex. (SWOON!) The waiting made it that much more sweet.

Anyways, please update soon, as now I've become addicted and so it's torurous to wait! (I hope you're not one of those who updates every two weeks or some nonsense like that... are you?? Would it help if I told you I adore your story and am adding it to my favorites and giving it a ten review immediately?



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying the story! And although I do try to update quickly... these chapters take me hours to write. If I didn't have a job, a toddler, and a husband, perhaps I could churn them out every few days, but I do. :)

Thanks so much for reading!

 
A Person of Worth by tnuccio Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 457]
Summary:

Just a small town girl, livin' in a lonely world
She took the midnight train goin' anywhere
Just a city boy, born and raised in south Detroit
He took the midnight train goin' anywhere

After multiple chance encounters can two strangers find their missing pieces within each other?

Or will their past mistakes hold them back? 

 

Two strangers passing in the night, searching for nothing, but maybe finding everything. 

 

A story of learning to trust and forgive, finding a way to risk opening yourself up. 

 

Inspired by Journey's song Don't Stop Believing.

 

 

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4669815/1/A_Person_of_Worth

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 107099
[Report This] Published: November 22, 2008 Updated: July 10, 2011


Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Near To You

Oh, I'm so glad you're back! This story is so beautiful and I love that Bella is starting to see her past relationship a bit more clearly, especially when comparing it to now. And Edward? *sigh* He is sooooooooo dreamy.  I love that he doesn't really push for more than she's ready for, and seems to truly appreciate everything she does give.  It will intersting to see where they are when they re-enter the real world.  I can't wait til Hope figures out what's happened!

Thank you so much for not giving up on this utterly lovely story. I am excited to see it continue to unfold...

Katy



Author's Response:

Hi Katy!  how are you?  Thanks so much for sticking with me and the story.  I know it's been forever and I'm truly sorry for that.  Thank you so much for your kind words regarding the story.  Yeah, Edward is very swoon worthy for me.  I love that he's so patient with her, like he knows she'll get there but he can't push.  

Yeah...Hope... that's going to be interesting!

Again, I thank you so much.  

hugs!

♥ t

 
Snowed In by eclipsedawn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5321]
Summary: Bella travels to Alaska to vacation in the cabin Alice loaned her. What happens when Bella finds out she is not the only person staying in the cabin?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper
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Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 88293
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2008 Updated: January 01, 2010


Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Sweat

wOW!I just found your story today, and now I'm done and desperate for more!! Who is at the door? It's probably the "rescue" workers Bella had called the first day...will Edward tell them to go away?  Or it's Jacob....I don't know why, but whoever it is is going to be a buzzkill. Alice?

I love your Bella and Edward! I love how Edward over analyzes everything! I also love all the "Easter Eggs" so to speak...the lines or traits from the SM books thrown in here in different contexts. I smile every time I find one!

PLease don't torture us too much until the next update...I'm leaving you a nice review, rating you a 10, and adding you to my favorites...doesn't that deserve a quick update?

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Knock, Knock-Who's there?

You ARE evil!! Making us wait so long and then give us an even worse cliffhanger!  I wanted to throttle Bella...how can she even think of leaving?! I'm glad Edward called after her. Now she better not waste the courage it took him to do that in a room full of people.  She at least needs to stay a few more days and try to work it out.  I will not like her very much if she just leaves with Jacob after Edward bared his soul to her.

You are an awesome writer because I'm so completely invested in your characters and story, I was getting physically ill as that conversation between E and B started going badly.  Please don't make us wait another month and a half to find out what happens next!  Thank you and LOVE your story!

 
Summary:

A Breaking Dawn alternative story.  Edward and Bella marry and go on a very romantic honeymoon.  Complications interrupt and they return to Forks.  Decisions must be made and the family has to move quickly.  This story is an A/U from BD.  There is no pregnancy and no more love triangle.  It is about how Edward and Bella were meant to be together and then must stand together against all odds.

Canon Pairings.  Lots of romantic lemons.  AU because some story lines from Breaking Dawn were completely abandoned in place of ones that I like better! Rated NC-17 for the lemons and for possible future violence and occasional language when the characters get really stressed out and stuff!


Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Leah, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 193651
[Report This] Published: December 05, 2008 Updated: May 09, 2009


Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Carnage

Listen you evil, evil person....I enjoy me some good carnage, but at the end of the day EDWARD and BELLA better live!  Now I'm very nervous, so please please please update soon!

Why doesn't invisible Bella go take care of Aro and Caius and the lightening spewing orb???  

Great, intense chapter!



Author's Response:

LOL!  Thanks KT!  Don't you worry about Edward and Bella, I've got their backs!  Next chapter is in the works and should be out very soon. 

Thanks again!

 
Rescue me by venomousgal Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2836]
Summary:

 

 Bella Swan is accident prone and always in need of rescuing. Sexy neighbour Edward Masen is an EMT and more than willing to handle the job.

 

THANKS TO FALCONCRANELOVE FOR THE WONDERFUL BANNERS!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No Word count: 100511
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2008 Updated: November 10, 2009


Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Well, James is probably blackmailing her about something....I'm not sure what though?????  Why didn't Edward press it more? Obviously what she was saying was NOT a wrong number....He's a bit hungover and dense, I think.  It'll be interesting to see what happened from BPOV.

I love Pukeward, he made me laugh.  AWESOME chapter....please hurry for more!!

 
Out of Her Head by Blue25 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2757]
Summary:

Bella Swan moves cross country to take a teaching job, trying to escape the man who broke her heart. Edward Cullen is the school's music teacher with secrets of his own. Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together trying to work through their issues and unexpected feelings for each other.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes Word count: 272412
[Report This] Published: January 01, 2009 Updated: June 26, 2009


Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

I love your story! I discovered it yesterday and every free moment i had was spent reading your very compelling Bella and Edward story.  At first I was not happy because Bella was so pathetic about Jake and Edward was such an asshole, but as they fell in love, so did I!  You are a wonderful storyteller and developed their relationship and the story beautifully! I completely became addicted (and have the bags under my eyes to prove it!)

As far as who the mole is....my guess is either Jessica (jessica stanley--JS) or Jack.  Regardless, I can't WAIT for the proposal (and any lemony activities that may accompany it) !  I am immediately adding to my favorites!

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

Wow---my heart is pounding! I'm actually pissed at Edward. i can't believe he gave up his trust in her so easily.  When he first burst in the room, I thought he was pissed at Emmitt, but the fact that he doesn't believe in Bella makes me so sad!! He's doing to Bella exactly what he was so upset at his family for doing to him---throwing here under the bus!  I hope when this resolves itself he appropriately beats himself up over that!! Bella better make him do some quality groveling and lemony worship of her!!!

I LOVE that Charlie is to the rescue!! I don't think it's going to be Josh that betrayed her, though, it's going to be the guy that worked out by them.  Jack was not actually listening to that i-pod all that time!! And poor Alice...what is going on?? I can't wait to see what happens at the hospital and Edward better start being remorsful!!  AWESOME< AWESOME CHAPTER!!

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

Well thank God....I don't have to break up with Edward after all!  He is so clueless about communication though.  Whether it be him being a jag so she doesn't find out about the ring, or not realizing that she thinks he's pissed at her.  It all makes sense for his character after being closed off and paranoid for so long, but I still wanna smack him a little.  Well I'm glad Charlie knows better and that he trusted that Edward would help, and I do love their bonding!  Bella will get quite a kick out of that when she finds out. I imagine Rachel will give them an earful (at least I hope). And POOR ALICE!! Well, at least it gives Bella a chance to take care of her for once AND something else to focus on.  Oh, and I'm sticking by my guess that it's Jack from the workout room.  Not only was he NOT listening to an i-pod, it looks like he was actually taping Bella and Jessica! CREEP!! I hope Edward tears him up.

Another awesome chapter...I am gnawing at my nails until the next update!!

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

Ha Ha ! I was right! I knew it was Jack! Can I tell you how much I love Charlie? He and Edward are fun together.  However, Edward is making me CRAZY that he's not talking to Bella! That was a nice conversation she had with Jake, though. For once, he didn't sound like a self centered prick. Even how he guessed at Edward's true reaction was nice.  Poor Bella. I can't believe she hasn't figured out about Jack, though. She's going to be so upset! No matter what, though, I don't think Bella will be able to get her job back because she DID talk (to Jessica) and I bet "the board" won't be as forgiving as Emmit and the Cullens.

Please update again soon....I continue to adore your story!!

 
Summary:

An in canon retelling of Breaking Dawn from the perspective of the thoughtful and pensive Edward.

Time passed, and I was blissfully unaware. I existed only in this moment with her. Hope burgeoned deep within me as I gazed at the sleeping enchantress. She was my salvation… my reason for carrying on what I had once believed to be a pointless and cursed existence. Through Bella’s love, I was redeemed. Through her, I’d finally found the peace that had eluded me for so many years. And so it was here, in our bubble, that I remained for as long as time permitted. Lulled into a state of relaxation by the steady pounding of Bella’s heart, and the rhythmic crashing of the waves.

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Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 34486
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2009 Updated: March 28, 2010


Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: In Retrospect

Love,love,LOVE your version! It's perfectly in canon and I really loved all the missing conversations and "thoughts".  I am adding this immediately to my favorites...please don't torture us too terribly long waiting for the next chapter.  Knowing how perfectly you write Edward, I absolutely can't wait for your version of Isle Esme!

Hurry, please!

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Isle Esme

YES! Totally worth the wait!  That was one of the most in canon depictions of what their first time would be like that I've seen. Why do you doubt yourself? I think you are an amazing writer, and you've done a beautiful job of getting into Edward's head.  I was so psyched when you popped to the top of my favorites today. It had been so long, that I reread the whole story so far.  I really, really love your Edward...he feels real and genuine to the E in the books.  Awesome job! I;m looking forward to more!

 
Blood Lines by windchime Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2468]
Summary:

 

Edward reveals a secret from his human time which leaves Bella shocked and wondering just how well she knows the man she is about to marry.

This is very much an Edward and Bella love story.

Thank you angel-gidget for the banner!

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 256624
[Report This] Published: February 07, 2009 Updated: December 19, 2009


Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Hope, Happiness & Edward's Smile

Okay...I found your story today and I was immediately addicted!  All my laundry remains unfolded, no papers were graded and I fed the kids frozen pizza all because of you and you absolutely beautiful, believable, compelling, swoon-ariffic, KICK ASS story!!!!  The whole thing was just stunningly written and so moving.  I LOVED the whole Geaorge storyline, and the natural struggles they worked through to come to terms with it, and even embrace it.  I was so proud of how much their relationship (communication and intimacy) blossomed wihile working through it together. I am completetly in love with your Edward. and it will break my heart when your story has ended, beecause I could immerse myself in your Edward and Bella's world indefinitely. So please, please PLEASE tell me there'll be more??????? 



Author's Response:

Seriously, I don't know what to say.  Just, wow - thanks very much.  Your review makes me laugh and I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much.  There is a bit more.  Originally it was going to end around chapter twelve with the meadow and Bella becoming pregnant which would sort of bring things full circle with Edward getting to experience fatherhood and Bella being able to give him that, but then I thought it might be fun to see what Edward and Bella would be like with a happier pregnancy.  There's only a tiny bit left to go (although I've said that a few times now), still with a bit of nail biting and risk to come.  Thanks so much for reading.

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Hot Chocolate

Another excellent chapter!  Of course, Edward would say no sex when she was pregnant, but I'm glad Carlisle reassured him.  I loved the honeymoon beach sequence. And Emmet's t-shirt was a riot!  Of course, now I'm super curious about the news from Siobbhan!

Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much - I'm glad you liked it.

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Surprises and Soap Suds

OOOOHHHHHH! What will Charlie say?  I think Sue Clearwater will have a heartattack, and of course she'll tell the wolf pack. It was only a  matter of time though, as Bella's already beginning to show.  I wonder if Charlie will see through the timeline?

Very sweet and happy chapter...very warm and fuzzy!



Author's Response:

I'm working on Charlie right now and I'm wondering too, if he'll see through the timeline.  Sometimes he sees only what he wants to, but he's no fool, either.  Mmm?  Thank you for your review.

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow

Now I'm crying!  What a beautiful chapter, (and a realistic birth!) I loved Edward with the Legos----I love how sentimental your Edward is.  You write such amazing conversations for E and B, I sigh, smile and swoon the entire time I'm reading each chapter. Honestly, I'm just so happy after I read your updates...thank you!!Please tell me there's more??? I can't wait to see everyone with the baby, and what will they name her?  Also, you can't end without Bella changing, can you??I'm shameless...I actually would like this story to never be done!Anyways, BRAVO WIndchime!

Author's Response:

Thanks very much.  Bella's decision about her change, and the circumstances surrounding it, will be part of the next chapter - or maybe the one after if the next one goes on too long.  I'm glad you like the conversations between Edwrd and Bella, I enjoy writing them so it's good to know you like reading them.  And the Lego will make another appearance (yes, Edward discovers he can order on-line).  Thanks again for your review.

 
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He's a young but jaded keyboard player writing lyrics for his band, Breaking Dawn, and she's a naive and frustrated poet looking to break out of her shell; their words collide on-line.
What happens when they meet in high school, unaware of their literary connection?

OOC, canon at heart.
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 146168
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: August 26, 2009


Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Patience

Spiders that crunch when you step on them, and any religious scary movie, I'm a good catholic, but nothing ups the creep factor in a movie like the Bible!

But your story...I love!  I started reading it during nap-time today and spent every free moment glued to the computer! I liked how the action started right away and didn't have to have three or four  chapters of build up. It's an incredibly fun read!   I am dying for them to figure out who the other one really is, and I find myself trying to guess what will tip them off. My current theory is that he'll sing a song for her that's one of the ones he sent O_G. 

Regardlee, I am immediately posting to my favorites and will be eagerly checking  for updates! BTW, your poetry and lyrics are AMAZING!!!

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: The Goods

Kill Jessica, Fuck Lauren and Marry Angela.

Poor Bella...all those years of turmoil and stage fright from a childhood misunderstanding.  I hope she shares this with Edward.  I love how much they need Bella but Jasper is so right, they need to actually TELL her these things.  Thank God Edward finally flat out asked her out, instead of doing a roundabout hinting at it.  It was sweet how he explained in his own dumb way that he didn't ask about the festival because she wouldn't have said yes, but she wouldn't have said yes to performing at Aro's either and she did beautifully.  And now she has to perform with James?? Well, at least she'll learn that she can perform without Edward and maybe believe in herself a little more.  I also hope that they actually ask her to join the band officially.  Edward totally called Jasper on that!

Edward's poetry makes a gal swoon (fans herself).  I cannot wait until they find out that its each other.  And I really can't wait for the next update!

 

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Imps

OOOHHH! Tanya is so evil!  This won't be good, Edward will be sad and bitter either way he chooses.  I wonder if bella will figure everything out and then sacrifice their relationship to save his work??  Will Edward confide in Alice about the blackmail?  This cliffie is making me very sad and anxious...please update soon!

I think I would be Stephanie  Meyer for a week so I can know the rest of Midnight Sun...

 
Reviewer: KTCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Short Ended Stick

twilight.....sick addiction

 

OMG that chapter was so sad! The parallels to New Moon were clever, but heartbreaking!  It's amazing how Edward is such an amazing writer, but can't get the same words out of his mouth in a coherent manner. (Actually, my husband is exactly the same way...amazing writer, but can't get his ideas clear verbally...all our most important discussions have happened over e-mail or letters...I feel Bella's pain, except she's not even aware of it!)

Beautiful, beautiful chapter!  I am literally DYING for the next one. Please hurry.

 




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