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Penname: khans [Contact]
Real name: Kathy Hansen
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Member Since: August 21, 2010
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Summary:

Bella Swan is twenty-seven years old, newly single, and mom to an adorable Kindergarten student with a knack for accidents. On a typical, fall afternoon, she experiences the shock of her life during a casual conversation with her son. When an unexpected revelation leads to the most emotional reunion imaginable, how will Bella reconcile the path her life has taken with the past she never chose? Takes place nearly ten years post New Moon. Canon - AU. ExB


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 61197
[Report This] Published: October 19, 2008 Updated: November 27, 2011


Reviewer: khans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

love this story and anxiously await more!!!!

 
Reviewer: khans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh wow!!! this is goimg to be great!!!!

 
Reviewer: khans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

***tears, full on sobs*** when she begged him to snow himslef so she could just see what love looked like again!!!!   such a tear jerking chapter

 
Reviewer: khans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

mercy you do have a way with building and telling a story and at the same time  ake the reaser feel so much emotion!!! Powerful!!!!

 
Reviewer: khans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

gosh this is so good

 
Reviewer: khans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

so sweet and wonderful but puzzled how we can have a HEA and Edward be an immortal and Bella and Chris be human....  love the story!!!!

 
Reviewer: khans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

such a good story

 
Reviewer: khans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

holy crow he has abilities!!!!

 
Reviewer: khans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

interesting... boy the possibilities here are endless

 
Summary:

Bella Swan changed her life and ideals for a guy . . . who then dumped her in the middle of a mall. Even if she's happier now and her life is back on track, she still needs to realize that the past is the past.

Enter Edward Cullen, devastatingly handsome and hopelessly in love with Bella after knowing her for only a short time. Can he prove to Bella that she's not the type who should be loved and left? Can he help her get over her past and put her self doubts behind her?

 Rated M for later chapters.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 95381
[Report This] Published: December 16, 2008 Updated: February 03, 2013


Reviewer: khans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16, 2012 Title: Love Me or Leave Me

this is really good



Author's Response:

thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: khans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16, 2012 Title: Love Me or Leave Me

here's your Grande Espresso Truffle from Starbucks!!

I am really digging the story

 
Reviewer: khans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16, 2012 Title: Love Me or Leave Me

wow  that boy (newton)  has some damn nerve

 
Reviewer: khans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16, 2012 Title: Love Me or Leave Me

love the story   

 
Reviewer: khans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16, 2012 Title: Love Me or Leave Me

ahhh this is really good

 
Reviewer: khans Signed
Date: February 16, 2012 Title: Love Me or Leave Me

Yippee!!!

 
Reviewer: khans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: To Have and Have Not

that is disgusting Mike  seriously bumb!!  Bella deserves better



Author's Response:

mike is such a scumbag! lol  thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: khans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Guys and Dolls

good for her she didn't need James anyway - she doesn't need Jake either I might add  - OMG can you tell I'm a Team E kinda woman here?  LOL!!! and hey he hasn' even popped his lovely locks into the story yet... Love the story



Author's Response:

i am most *definitely* team edward! bella should never, ever be with jake! lol  thanks for reading!

 
Aro's Heir by SubtlePen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1901]
Summary:

Aro's Heir

 

Edward, Bella and Alice are drawn into a no-win scenario in Volterra after Edward's attempted suicide-by-Volturi in the Palazzo dei Priori .  Aro confronts Edward to make an impossible choice, with Alice as Aro's unwitting accomplice.  How will Edward's choice affect his reunion with Bella, and what future can they hope to salvage in the aftermath?

Story begins in New Moon, during Chapter 21, "The Verdict," but enters the AU when Aro reads Alice's mind...

AU, but canon through New Moon, with canon pairings.

~*~ warning ~*~  story contains very dark themes, including a sexual assault in the first chapter.  if this subject is a trigger for you, please do not continue. 

If you are a survivor of sexual abuse and need assistance, please contact RAINN http://apps.rainn.org/ohl-bridge/

Disclaimer:  I do not own the Twilight series, nor any of the characters created by Stephenie Meyer. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.

Twilighted Supervisory Beta: psymom        Twilighted Validation Beta: Lion_in_the_Land

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 95553
[Report This] Published: January 28, 2009 Updated: November 25, 2012


Reviewer: khans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

yay!!!!

 
Reviewer: khans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

oh mercy I hate that vial Alec.....great chapter

 
Reviewer: khans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Geez, this is so good.  I find myself very engrossed.... so sorry I didn't find the original before the re-write...I know it's just getting better though, right?!?!   You have a great weekend, till next posting... Kathy



Author's Response:

thank you so much for sticking with me!  they have some rough times ahead, but yet, things will get better.

 

as for the story getting better from teh first go round to this one - i hope so!  *wink*

 
Reviewer: khans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

TY TY for this story and I do look forward to more....



Author's Response:

thank you thank you for reading!  more soon.  chapters should go up 2-3 times a week.

 
Reviewer: khans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

this is really good, original thats for sure...



Author's Response:

thank you!  glad you are along for the ride!

 
Reviewer: khans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

TY for this chapter, I meant to read this earlier, its just been a busy week.... oh mercy I hate Jane what a witch.....like even Aro can stop a miscarriage! Holy Cow!  So apparently we have lots, and lots more to still happen ... so excited to read more, when you have it ready.... I'm being patient!!!!  



Author's Response:

Hi Kathy!  yeah - Jane is a messed up girl.  and yes, lots more to come.  next chapter probably saturday!

 
Reviewer: khans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

TY for the chapter, I love the story and the details, like all his history you put into this story....  Aro and all his freakiness... seriously wacked, dude, Right?!?!?!

 
Reviewer: khans Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

really loving this story!!!

 




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